| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "utterly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | word | "moth to a flame" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "navigating" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "hulking" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "input" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "echo" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "moth to a flame" | | 14 | "echoing" | | 15 | "pounding" | | 16 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.75% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1383 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Thump. Thump-thump." | | 1 | "Scratch. Scratch. Pause." | | 2 | "pop" | | 3 | "thump" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1381 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.8 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 3 | | Rory | 11 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sound that seemed to swallow all ambient noise from the city" | | 1 | "seemed wrong" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.723 | | wordCount | 1383 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just with the place, but with the sensory input her brain was trying to process" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 41.91 | | std | 23.9 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 104 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 115 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 57 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 50 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 51 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 70.55% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 206 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "was blowing" | | 2 | "were leaning" | | 3 | "was anchoring" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, beneath the rustle of the leaves, there was a wet, rhythmic pulsing—like the sound of a massive heart beating underwater, muffled by miles of stone and heavy clay." | | 1 | "But as she turned back, she caught movement again—this time out of the corner of her right eye." | | 2 | "If she ran, she might not find the gate; space inside the pocket realm warped as easily as time." | | 3 | "For a fraction of a second, the glowing gem illuminated the brush—and then the creature whipped around in mid-motion, its momentum shifting instantly as it abandoned her and scrambled frantically toward the light, emitting a low, wet clicking sound of pure, ravenous hunger." | | 4 | "But as she reached up to touch her bare neck, feeling only the cold night air against her skin, she could still hear it—the faint, rhythmic *thump* of the heart beating beneath the earth, waiting for her to come back." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1395 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, vacuum-sealed silence" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "grey, moss-covered granite" |
| | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.03799283154121864 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015770609318996417 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 15.03 | | std | 10.27 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 51.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.391304347826087 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, beneath the rustle of" | | 1 | "Just the ancient stones, the" | | 2 | "Instead, her mind cleared, cold" | | 3 | "Slowly, she straightened up." |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 97.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood for a moment" | | 1 | "It was a subtle, reassuring" | | 2 | "She had come for answers." | | 3 | "It was not merely a" | | 4 | "It was a sudden, absolute" | | 5 | "Her cool-headed pragmatism, the sharp," | | 6 | "She checked her watch." | | 7 | "They were too bright, too" | | 8 | "She pushed deeper into the" | | 9 | "She slid the dead phone" | | 10 | "She whipped her head around," | | 11 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 12 | "She backed up against the" | | 13 | "It was pale, stretched taut" | | 14 | "It had no nose, only" | | 15 | "It didn't speak." | | 16 | "It didn't rush her." | | 17 | "It merely watched her with" | | 18 | "It was something native to" | | 19 | "She reached up, her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate of Richmond" | | 1 | "She stood for a moment" | | 2 | "The silver chain of the" | | 3 | "It was a subtle, reassuring" | | 4 | "She had come for answers." | | 5 | "The stranger who had left" | | 6 | "It was not merely a" | | 7 | "It was a sudden, absolute" | | 8 | "The distant hum of the" | | 9 | "Rory paused, her hand hovering" | | 10 | "Her cool-headed pragmatism, the sharp," | | 11 | "She checked her watch." | | 12 | "The luminous hands read 11:14." | | 13 | "They were too bright, too" | | 14 | "An hour inside could mean" | | 15 | "She pushed deeper into the" | | 16 | "She slid the dead phone" | | 17 | "The Fae Grove appeared suddenly," | | 18 | "Rory stopped at the perimeter," | | 19 | "Something was wrong." |
| | ratio | 0.682 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, as she looked up" | | 1 | "If she ran, she might" | | 2 | "If she stayed, she was" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate of Richmond Park clicked shut behind Aurora with a flat, final sound that seemed to swallow all ambient noise from the city." | | 1 | "The stranger who had left the pendant in her flat had scrawled a single coordinate on a grease-stained napkin, pointing her toward the old grove deep within the…" | | 2 | "The distant hum of the A307 vanished entirely, replaced by a heavy, vacuum-sealed silence that made her ears pop." | | 3 | "Rory paused, her hand hovering over the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, rubbing the pale skin out of pure habit." | | 4 | "She slid the dead phone into her pocket and kept moving, her boots sinking silently into the spongy earth." | | 5 | "The wind was blowing from the north, rustling the high canopy of the oaks, yet the wildflowers on the ground were leaning violently to the south, their stems st…" | | 6 | "No response came, but the temperature plummeted further, the moisture in the air instantly crystallizing into a fine, glittering frost that coated her eyelashes…" | | 7 | "The rhythmic pulsing grew louder, faster, transitioning from a slow heartbeat to a frantic, skittering scuttle that sounded uncomfortably like hundreds of dry l…" | | 8 | "The grey, moss-covered granite was expanding and contracting in slow, rhythmic undulations, as if the rock had turned to flesh." | | 9 | "And standing just behind it, peering around the edge with an anatomical impossibility that made her stomach turn, was a face." | | 10 | "It was pale, stretched taut over a skull that was far too wide, with eyes that caught the crimson light of her pendant and reflected it back as two dead, flat d…" | | 11 | "It merely watched her with a terrible, consuming curiosity, its long, grey fingers gripping the living stone with enough pressure to sink deep into the granite …" | | 12 | "It pushed off the stone, its body unfolding with terrifying speed, limbs unspooling like spider legs as it lunged across the clearing." | | 13 | "For a fraction of a second, the glowing gem illuminated the brush—and then the creature whipped around in mid-motion, its momentum shifting instantly as it aban…" | | 14 | "She ran blind through the freezing dark, her lungs burning, her boots pounding against the moss until her shoulder collided violently with cold iron." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |