| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 0 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 75.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1242 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1242 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "whimsical" | | 6 | "charm" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "echoing" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "lurched" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "measured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1236 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "Schlock. Schlock. Schlock." | | 1 | "pop" | | 2 | "Rory." | | 3 | "Aurora. Laila. Carter. Rory." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1234 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.81 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 3 | | November | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.19% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.618 | | wordCount | 1236 | | matches | | 0 | "not just the lingering heat of her body, but a steady, thrumming pulse against her sternum" | | 1 | "not one thing, but three, four, a dozen of them slithering" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 32.53 | | std | 23.76 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 35 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 74 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 59 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 36 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 63 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 76 | | 37 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 60.38% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was making" | | 2 | "wasn't walking" | | 3 | "was dragging" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 89 | | ratio | 0.09 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm—not just the lingering heat of her body, but a steady, thrumming pulse against her sternum." | | 1 | "It wasn't just the silence—though the absolute absence of nocturnal birds or scurrying foxes was heavy enough to press against her eardrums." | | 2 | "Aurora froze, her hand sliding out of her pocket to hover near the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit from childhood she hadn't indulged in years." | | 3 | "It didn't cast a shadow of its own; rather, it seemed to swallow the moonlight around it, a silhouette of absolute absence gliding along the periphery of the clearing." | | 4 | "It wasn't just warm now; it was hot, searing against her skin like a coin left on a radiator." | | 5 | "Where a face should have been, there was only a smooth, pale oval of skin, devoid of eyes, nose, or mouth—just a vertical seam that twitched and began to part." | | 6 | "A smell rolled over her then, rich and sickeningly sweet—the stench of rotting autumn leaves and old, stagnant pond water." | | 7 | "Behind her, the wet sliding sound multiplied—not one thing, but three, four, a dozen of them slithering and dragging themselves through the grass, converging on the spot she had just abandoned." |
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| 93.08% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 609 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.041050903119868636 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0180623973727422 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 89 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 89 | | mean | 13.89 | | std | 9.71 | | cv | 0.699 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 49.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.36363636363636365 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Just walk back the way" | | 1 | "Then the pendant against her" | | 2 | "Only a single minute had" | | 3 | "Slowly, shakily, Aurora pushed herself" |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 50.77% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, catching her breath." | | 1 | "Her fingers, tucked deep in" | | 2 | "It was the only reason" | | 3 | "It wasn't just the silence—though" | | 4 | "It was the air itself," | | 5 | "She took a slow breath" | | 6 | "She had come here looking" | | 7 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 8 | "She had left the edge" | | 9 | "They burned down with unnatural" | | 10 | "It was a wet, rhythmic" | | 11 | "She didn't breathe." | | 12 | "She strained her ears, tracking" | | 13 | "It was dragging itself, heavy" | | 14 | "It was long, impossibly tall," | | 15 | "It didn't cast a shadow" | | 16 | "It moved with a jerky," | | 17 | "She told herself to turn" | | 18 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 19 | "It wasn't just warm now;" |
| | ratio | 0.423 | |
| 56.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy wool of her" | | 1 | "Richmond Park after midnight was" | | 2 | "She paused, catching her breath." | | 3 | "Her fingers, tucked deep in" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm—not" | | 5 | "It was the only reason" | | 6 | "The hair on her arms" | | 7 | "Something was fundamentally wrong with" | | 8 | "It wasn't just the silence—though" | | 9 | "It was the air itself," | | 10 | "She took a slow breath" | | 11 | "She had come here looking" | | 12 | "The stones loomed pale against" | | 13 | "They formed a rough circle," | | 14 | "Aurora checked her watch." | | 15 | "The luminous hands read 12:14." | | 16 | "She had left the edge" | | 17 | "They burned down with unnatural" | | 18 | "The old warning from the" | | 19 | "Minutes outside could be hours" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, looking up through the" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 55.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was the only reason she was here, stepping past the invisible threshold into the Fae Grove, chasing a rumor that felt increasingly like a trap." | | 1 | "She had come here looking for answers about the strange burns scorching the city's perimeter, but standing at the edge of the ancient oak standing stones, she f…" | | 2 | "In the center, the grass was disturbingly flat, pressed down in a wide, circular depression as if something massive had recently rested there." | | 3 | "Where a face should have been, there was only a smooth, pale oval of skin, devoid of eyes, nose, or mouth—just a vertical seam that twitched and began to part." | | 4 | "She tore past the ancient oaks, her breath tearing raggedly from her throat, burning her lungs with the cold air." | | 5 | "She rolled onto her back, gasping, her chest heaving as she stared up at the sky." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |