| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1261 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1261 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "sanctuary" | | 4 | "echo" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "sentinels" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "beacon" | | 10 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 1258 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "It’s just the grove," | | 1 | "Time dilates here. Space stretches." | | 2 | "Thump." | | 3 | "Shhh-shhh-shhh." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1252 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 2 | | November | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Rory | 12 | | Isolde | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "November" | | 5 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a bundle of unwashed wool, ex" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1258 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 26.77 | | std | 20.65 | | cv | 0.771 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 85 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 65 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 58 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 50 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 54 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 41 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 46 | | 46 | 22 |
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| 95.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "was meant" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 202 | | matches | | |
| 14.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.045 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't fade out; it cut off like a severed wire." | | 1 | "She had come to the grove looking for answers—or at least a thread to pull." | | 2 | "A face peeled itself out of the pale mass—or the suggestion of a face." | | 3 | "The standing stones were no longer a ring; they had clustered together, closing ranks, their thick trunks weaving into an impenetrable wall of bark and ancient moss." | | 4 | "It was something native to the deep, forgotten dark of the Fae—something that had been waiting in the grove long before Isolde ever claimed it." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1264 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tiny crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "wide, wet horizontal slit" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.03481012658227848 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010284810126582278 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 11.33 | | std | 7.47 | | cv | 0.659 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 30.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.3063063063063063 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the ancient oaks, standing" | | 1 | "Slowly, agonizingly, she tilted her" | | 2 | "Then it shifted." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 52.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn't fade out; it" | | 1 | "She reached up automatically, her" | | 2 | "She had come to the" | | 3 | "She picked her way over" | | 4 | "They slanted at odd, jagged" | | 5 | "she called out" | | 6 | "She stared into the thicket" | | 7 | "*It’s just the grove,* she" | | 8 | "She turned back toward the" | | 9 | "She took three steps before" | | 10 | "It wasn't a snap this" | | 11 | "It was a drag." | | 12 | "It was coming from right" | | 13 | "It had detached from the" | | 14 | "It lay pool-like on the" | | 15 | "She looked up at the" | | 16 | "She began to back away," | | 17 | "She just needed to cross" | | 18 | "She backed up three steps," | | 19 | "It looked like a bundle" |
| | ratio | 0.42 | |
| 25.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The autumn air in Richmond" | | 1 | "The low, distant rumble of" | | 2 | "It didn't fade out; it" | | 3 | "Rory paused, her breath blooming" | | 4 | "She reached up automatically, her" | | 5 | "The deep crimson gem was" | | 6 | "The Hel portals were quiet," | | 7 | "She had come to the" | | 8 | "Isolde had promised her that" | | 9 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 10 | "She picked her way over" | | 11 | "The grove was meant to" | | 12 | "The shadows were wrong." | | 13 | "The moon sat high and" | | 14 | "They slanted at odd, jagged" | | 15 | "A fallen branch snapped twenty" | | 16 | "Rory whirled around, her hands" | | 17 | "she called out" | | 18 | "The sound of her own" | | 19 | "Nothing moved in the silver-and-black" |
| | ratio | 0.87 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached up automatically, her fingers brushing the thumb-sized Heartstone pendant hanging against her collarbone." | | 1 | "The Hel portals were quiet, but the silence that took their place felt far heavier, dense enough to press against her eardrums." | | 2 | "She picked her way over a tangle of exposed roots, her boots sinking into a carpet of bluebells and star-shaped anemones that had no business blooming in Novemb…" | | 3 | "It had no eyes, no nose, only a wide, wet horizontal slit that parted with the sound of tearing parchment." | | 4 | "It was something native to the deep, forgotten dark of the Fae—something that had been waiting in the grove long before Isolde ever claimed it." | | 5 | "She pulled a iron-tipped stylus from her satchel, holding it out before her, her knuckles white, her left wrist trembling despite her best efforts to lock her m…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory muttered, her voice tight" | | 1 | "she demanded, her voice cutting through the dry cold" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |