| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1166 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.39% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1166 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "synthetic" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "beacon" | | 14 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1158 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1155 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.78 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Eva | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | July | 1 | | October | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "July" | | 5 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 32.81% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite line up, where the air tasted like copper and old iron" | | 1 | "tasted like copper and old iron" | | 2 | "as if trying to warn her away" | | 3 | "limbs that seemed to bend and stretch at unnatural angles, draped in clothing that looked like shredded birch bark and dried vines" | | 4 | "looked like shredded birch bark and dried" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1158 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 30.47 | | std | 21.24 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 87.64% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "were shedding" | | 1 | "was practically burning" | | 2 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "Her out-of-the-box thinking—or stubbornness, as Eva called it—had dragged her past the locked perimeter and deep into the park's sprawling interior long after closing time." | | 1 | "Wildflowers—pale, luminescent bells—dotted the mossy roots, glowing with a sickly, bruised violet hue." | | 2 | "Just the wind, carrying a scent she recognized with a jolt of primal dread—ozone and wet iron, the exact smell of a storm about to break." | | 3 | "Rory didn't run—running meant panic, and panic meant mistakes." | | 4 | "It was tall—impossibly tall—with limbs that seemed to bend and stretch at unnatural angles, draped in clothing that looked like shredded birch bark and dried vines." | | 5 | "It didn't walk; it simply occupied a new space, closing the distance instantly." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1171 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "heavy, summer-green foliage," |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.029888983774551667 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012809564474807857 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 13.95 | | std | 8.87 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 60.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.42168674698795183 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she felt it." | | 1 | "Only the wind rustling through" | | 2 | "Just the wind, carrying a" | | 3 | "Directly behind the second oak" | | 4 | "Then, with a sound like" |
| | ratio | 0.064 | |
| 71.28% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone." | | 1 | "She turned her wrist, the" | | 2 | "She had come here chasing" | | 3 | "Her out-of-the-box thinking—or stubbornness, as" | | 4 | "It started as a dull" | | 5 | "It was a pleasant warmth" | | 6 | "She stopped, letting out a" | | 7 | "She shined her phone's dead" | | 8 | "She had crossed the boundary." | | 9 | "She knew it before she" | | 10 | "She had lived in London" | | 11 | "She had laughed them off." | | 12 | "She stepped through the gap" | | 13 | "Her skin pebbled with goosebumps." | | 14 | "It was a sharp, hollow" | | 15 | "She turned slowly, her bright" | | 16 | "It wasn't a shadow cast" | | 17 | "It was an absence of" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 19 | "She took a cautious step" |
| | ratio | 0.372 | |
| 49.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter," | | 2 | "She checked her phone." | | 3 | "The screen flickered, the battery" | | 4 | "She turned her wrist, the" | | 5 | "She had come here chasing" | | 6 | "Yu-Fei had shrugged it off," | | 7 | "Her out-of-the-box thinking—or stubbornness, as" | | 8 | "The path beneath her trainers" | | 9 | "Trees loomed on either side," | | 10 | "It started as a dull" | | 11 | "Rory reached down, her fingers" | | 12 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm," | | 13 | "It was a pleasant warmth" | | 14 | "She stopped, letting out a" | | 15 | "The silence here was wrong." | | 16 | "London was never silent." | | 17 | "She shined her phone's dead" | | 18 | "The trees overhead were shedding" | | 19 | "Wildflowers—pale, luminescent bells—dotted the mossy" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 64.10% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gate of Richmond Park groaned against the wind, a long, rusty complaint that died away into the damp autumn air." | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter, the synthetic shell offering little defense against the mist that clung to the London suburbs like a wet wool blanket." | | 2 | "Trees loomed on either side, their branches twisted into grotesque, arthritic claws that swallowed the moonlight." | | 3 | "The Heartstone Pendant was warm, its deep crimson facet radiating a steady, feverish heat that seeped straight through her clothes." | | 4 | "The trees overhead were shedding heavy, summer-green foliage, crunching under her feet with a damp, rotting density that belonged to July, not October." | | 5 | "Massive pillars of ancient oak rose from the earth in a wide, imperfect circle, their trunks wider than a delivery van, their gnarled crowns interlacing to form…" | | 6 | "Beneath her sweater, the Heartstone gave a sharp, violent throb, as if trying to warn her away." | | 7 | "The mud beneath her shoes vanished, replaced by an expanse of velvet-short grass that felt entirely too soft, too manicured, like a plush carpet laid out in the…" | | 8 | "It was an absence of light, a localized vacuum that swallowed the pale glow of the wildflowers." | | 9 | "Her cool-headed instincts kicked in, the same sharp logic that kept her alive through the worst of Cardiff and the lingering ghosts of her past." | | 10 | "It was tall—impossibly tall—with limbs that seemed to bend and stretch at unnatural angles, draped in clothing that looked like shredded birch bark and dried vi…" | | 11 | "The tall figure glided forward, moving with a fluid, boneless grace that defied the laws of physics." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice steady despite the terror clawing at her throat" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |