Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTS71EPXYH67T5X5CST8FP

Run Details

Duration:
18.0s
Cost:
$0.020261
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside bled a stale, jade light through the rain-slicked window of The Raven’s Nest, cutting across the scarred mahogany of the bar. It was a slow Tuesday night in Soho. The air smelled of damp wool, spilled gin, and the faint, sweet trace of lemon pledge. Rory sat on her usual high-backed stool near the end of the counter, nursing a pint of dark draft that had gone flat twenty minutes ago. She turned her left hand over, her thumb tracing the pale, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a jagged little crescent from a fallen jar when she was nine, long before her life had split into sharp, unmanageable pieces. Behind the bar, Silas moved with his slow, deliberate gait, favoring his right side to spare his ruined left knee. He was wiping down a highball glass with a clean linen rag, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the low glow of the overhead lamps. He didn't speak, and Rory was grateful for it. Silas understood the utility of silence better than anyone she had ever met; he treated quiet like an asset to be banked, not a hole that needed filling. The brass bell above the heavy front door chimed, bringing with it a gust of chilled London rain and the muffled roar of wet traffic from the street. Rory didn't look up immediately. People came into the Nest to disappear or to find things they shouldn't; looking too closely at a late-arrival was bad manners. But the footfalls were wrong for a Soho local. They were heavy, crisp, the leather soles of expensive brogues striking the floorboards with a measured, deliberate weight. "I’ll be right with you," Silas said, his voice a low, gravelly baritone that barely carried over the murmur of the radio. "Just a scotch, thanks. Whatever's close to the top shelf." Rory froze. The voice was deeper than it used to be, stripped of the soft, lyrical cadence of the Taff Valley, replaced by something smooth, clipped, and carefully scrubbed of an origin. But the rhythm of it—the slight pause before the last word—belonged to one person. She turned her head slowly. He hadn't seen her yet. He was shaking the water from a dark charcoal umbrella, slipping a tailor-made wool coat from his shoulders and draping it over the back of a stool two paces down from hers. Evan. Except the boy who had dragged her down through three agonizing years in Cardiff was gone. The Evan she remembered had soft, restless eyes, grease under his fingernails from trying to fix his broken-down Peugeot, and a volatile, erratic heat that burned through every room he entered. The man standing at the bar was pristine. His dark hair was immaculately cut, styled back from a forehead that looked smooth and entirely untroubled by memory. He wore a crisp white shirt beneath a tailored suit that cost more than Rory made in six months delivering takeout for Yu-Fei. Rory felt her breath catch in her throat, a sharp, cold knot forming beneath her ribs. Her fingers instinctively closed around her glass, her knuckles turning white. Evan straightened, catching his reflection in the mirror behind the rows of liquor bottles—and then his hazel eyes shifted, landing on her reflection. He turned around slowly. The air between them suddenly felt dense, thick with the unsaid weight of two years, three hundred miles, and a dozen police reports her father had buried. "Rory?" he said. The name hit her like a strike to the chest. He hadn't called her Laila—the theatrical nickname he’d invented during their final, terrible months together when he wanted her to be someone else, someone quieter, someone who didn't fight back. He used the name her father called her. "Evan," she said, her voice flat, devoid of the tremor running through her legs. He stared at her, his brow furrowing in genuine, unvarnished astonishment. For a fraction of a second, the polished facade slipped, and she saw the shadow of the boy from the Roath Park flat. Then the mask snapped back into place, tighter and smoother than before. He smiled—a polite, measured expression meant for business acquaintances at a dinner party. "God, it is you," he said, stepping closer. He didn't offer a hand, nor did he reach out to touch her, for which she was foolishly thankful. "I barely recognized you. The hair." "It's dark," she said. "It suits you," he lied softly. He pulled out the stool next to hers and sat, adjusting the cuffs of his shirt. Up close, she could smell him: sandalwood, expensive leather, and the faint, bitter scent of rain. There was no trace of the cheap lager or stale tobacco that used to cling to his skin like a second coat. "What on earth are you doing in Soho?" "I live here," she said. "In London?" He tilted his head, watching her with a sharp, analytical curiosity that felt entirely foreign. "Your dad told my mother you were still at Cardiff. Finished the Pre-Law degree." "My father says a lot of things to keep up appearances," Rory said, taking a slow sip of her flat beer. It tasted like copper and vinegar. "I left." Silas set a heavy crystal tumbler of single malt on the counter in front of Evan. His hazel eyes lingered on Evan for a beat too long—a quiet, imperceptible assessment that only a man who had spent thirty years watching threats would make. "Anything else?" Silas asked Rory, his voice smooth as oil. "I'm fine, Silas. Thanks." Silas gave a single, curt nod and moved down to the far end of the bar, picking up a brass polish rag, though his attention remained tethered to the quiet space between them. Evan picked up his glass, swirling the golden liquid against the ice. "You just... walked away from it all? The university? Your family?" "I walked away from you, Evan," she said quietly. She didn't look at him; she looked at his hands. They were clean now. No scars, no raw knuckles from punching plaster walls when the world didn't bend to his liking. "It was a package deal." Evan took a slow sip of his scotch, wincing slightly as it hit his throat. He set the glass down with a soft *clink* against the wood. "I was a mess, Rory," he said, his tone shockingly even. There was no defense in it, no sudden burst of temper. That was the most terrifying thing. The violent, predictable storm had been replaced by an icy, impenetrable calm. "I know that. I think about those years and I barely recognize the person I was." "Is that what you call it?" Rory turned her head to look him dead in the eye. Her bright blue eyes locked onto his. "A mess?" "I was twenty-two, bitter, and terrified of drowning in Wales," Evan said, meeting her stare without flinching. "It doesn't excuse how I treated you. It doesn't excuse any of it. But I grew up. I got help. I moved to the city, got into finance, and I built something real." He gestured vaguely toward his chest, toward the bespoke suit, the silver cufflinks, the quiet confidence that oozed from every pore. "I paid my debts." "You didn't pay mine," Rory said. The word hung in the air, heavy and sharp. Evan looked down at his glass, his thumb tracing the rim. For a moment, the silence of the bar seemed to contract around them, swallowing the faint jazz playing from the corner speaker, swallowing the sound of the rain outside. "I looked for you," Evan said softly. "For six months after you left. I went to your father’s house in Cardiff. I knocked on Eva's door in Bristol. Nobody would tell me where you were." "Because they knew I’d die if you found me." Evan didn't flinch. He just nodded, a terrible, calculated acceptance in his eyes. "Maybe back then. Maybe you were right to run. But look at us now, Rory. Look at you." He looked at her faded denim jacket, the faint yellow stain on the cuff from a spilled container of Golden Empress sweet-and-sour sauce, the dark circles carved under her eyes from sleepless nights in the cramped flat upstairs. "You were the smartest person in our year," Evan continued, his voice dropping to a near-whisper. "You could have been anything. A barrister like your old man, a judge, a politician. And you're sitting in a dive bar in Soho at ten o'clock on a Tuesday, looking at me like I’m a ghost." "You are a ghost," Rory said. Her voice didn't shake. She had spent two years learning how to lock her jaw, how to keep the cold from creeping into her hands. "The difference is, you get to put on a fifty-thousand-pound suit and pretend you never bled on anyone. You got to leave the wreck behind and call it 'growing up.'" "And what did you do?" Evan asked. There was a genuine, tragic pity in his voice that made Rory’s stomach turn. "You let the wreck define you. You stayed in the ruins." "I survived you," she said. Evan stared at her for a long time. The polished corporate exterior seemed to fracture, just around the edges, revealing the hollow, hollow thing inside—a man who had traded his soul for a seamless exterior, who had buried his sins so deep under success that he almost believed he was clean. But they both knew the truth. They were bound together by a terrible, invisible thread: the boy who had broken a life, and the girl who had gathered the pieces and built a fortress out of them. Evan reached into his inner jacket pocket, pulled out a sleek leather card case, and extracted a heavy, cream-colored business card. He set it on the bar beside her flat beer. "I'm at Sterling & Cross in Mayfair," he said smoothly, standing up and buttoning his jacket with effortless grace. "If you ever... if you ever want to actually talk. Without the shadow of who we used to be." Rory didn't touch the card. She didn't even look at it. "Goodbye, Evan," she said. He hesitated for a second, his hazel eyes lingering on the side of her face, searching for a crack, a tremor, a single sign that the girl who used to cry in his passenger seat was still in there. He found nothing. "Take care of yourself, Rory," he said quietly. He picked up his umbrella, turned, and walked out into the London rain. The brass bell chimed once, sharp and final, as the door swung shut behind him. Rory sat unmoving. The green neon light caught the sleek white card on the bar, casting a pale, sickly glow over his name printed in raised black ink. Silas limped down the counter, stopping across from her. Without a word, he picked up Evan's unfinished scotch, poured it down the drain, and set a fresh, full pint of dark draft in front of Rory. Then, with his right hand, his silver signet ring catching the light, Silas picked up the business card, folded it neatly in half, and dropped it into the small brass ash bucket beneath the bar. "Rain's turning to sleet," Silas said quietly, picking up his linen rag again. Rory looked at the fresh pint, then up at Silas. The cold knot in her chest began, very slowly, to thaw. "Let it," she said.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:27:34.073Z" 7/25/2026, 2:27:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"he lied softly [softly]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"Evan said softly [softly]"
4"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
5"he said quietly [quietly]"
6"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.591
leniency1
rawRatio0.269
effectiveRatio0.269
76.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1929
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
3"softly"
4"slightly"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1929
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"tracing"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"chilled"
count1
3
word"measured"
count2
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"furrowing"
count1
7
word"facade"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"predictable"
count1
10
word"calculated"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"effortless"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"silence"
2"chilled"
3"measured"
4"weight"
5"pristine"
6"furrowing"
7"facade"
8"crystal"
9"predictable"
10"calculated"
11"whisper"
12"stomach"
13"effortless"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences110
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences128
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1921
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1545
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Tuesday1
Soho2
Silas10
Rory16
London2
Taff1
Valley1
Cardiff1
Evan16
Peugeot1
Yu-Fei1
Laila1
Roath1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Laila"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Taff"
3"Valley"
4"Cardiff"
5"Roath"
6"Park"
globalScore0.982
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like copper and vinegar"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1921
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean32.02
std22.86
cv0.714
sampleLengths
076
137
285
328
454
522
610
72
844
95
1038
1197
1227
1323
1431
153
1648
1714
1859
1933
204
2168
225
2331
2429
2543
2610
274
2833
2923
3045
3127
3256
3326
3475
356
369
3740
3835
399
4031
4138
4253
4361
4432
455
4688
4731
4838
4911
98.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"was gone"
1"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs248
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences128
ratio0.078
matches
0"She turned her left hand over, her thumb tracing the pale, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist—a jagged little crescent from a fallen jar when she was nine, long before her life had split into sharp, unmanageable pieces."
1"Silas understood the utility of silence better than anyone she had ever met; he treated quiet like an asset to be banked, not a hole that needed filling."
2"People came into the Nest to disappear or to find things they shouldn't; looking too closely at a late-arrival was bad manners."
3"But the rhythm of it—the slight pause before the last word—belonged to one person."
4"Evan straightened, catching his reflection in the mirror behind the rows of liquor bottles—and then his hazel eyes shifted, landing on her reflection."
5"He hadn't called her Laila—the theatrical nickname he’d invented during their final, terrible months together when he wanted her to be someone else, someone quieter, someone who didn't fight back."
6"He smiled—a polite, measured expression meant for business acquaintances at a dinner party."
7"His hazel eyes lingered on Evan for a beat too long—a quiet, imperceptible assessment that only a man who had spent thirty years watching threats would make."
8"She didn't look at him; she looked at his hands."
9"The polished corporate exterior seemed to fracture, just around the edges, revealing the hollow, hollow thing inside—a man who had traded his soul for a seamless exterior, who had buried his sins so deep under success that he almost believed he was clean."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1564
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"usual high-backed stool"
1"pale, crescent-shaped scar"
2"heavy, cream-colored business"
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.03580562659846547
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.016624040920716114
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences128
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences128
mean15.01
std10.27
cv0.684
sampleLengths
026
18
216
326
437
520
628
79
828
928
105
1122
129
1318
1422
1510
162
1730
1814
195
205
2132
221
2316
2431
258
2619
2723
2816
2911
3023
314
3227
333
3410
3530
368
3714
3811
3923
4012
4113
428
4319
446
454
466
4716
4816
4922
45.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences128
uniqueOpeners40
67.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"Then the mask snapped back"
1"Then, with his right hand,"
ratio0.02
46.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences99
matches
0"It was a slow Tuesday"
1"She turned her left hand"
2"He was wiping down a"
3"He didn't speak, and Rory"
4"They were heavy, crisp, the"
5"She turned her head slowly."
6"He hadn't seen her yet."
7"He was shaking the water"
8"His dark hair was immaculately"
9"He wore a crisp white"
10"Her fingers instinctively closed around"
11"He turned around slowly."
12"He hadn't called her Laila—the"
13"He used the name her"
14"she said, her voice flat,"
15"He stared at her, his"
16"He smiled—a polite, measured expression"
17"he said, stepping closer"
18"He didn't offer a hand,"
19"he lied softly"
ratio0.434
35.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences99
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"It was a slow Tuesday"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"Rory sat on her usual"
4"She turned her left hand"
5"He was wiping down a"
6"He didn't speak, and Rory"
7"Silas understood the utility of"
8"The brass bell above the"
9"Rory didn't look up immediately."
10"People came into the Nest"
11"They were heavy, crisp, the"
12"Silas said, his voice a"
13"The voice was deeper than"
14"She turned her head slowly."
15"He hadn't seen her yet."
16"He was shaking the water"
17"The Evan she remembered had"
18"The man standing at the"
19"His dark hair was immaculately"
ratio0.848
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Rory sat on her usual high-backed stool near the end of the counter, nursing a pint of dark draft that had gone flat twenty minutes ago."
1"He wore a crisp white shirt beneath a tailored suit that cost more than Rory made in six months delivering takeout for Yu-Fei."
2"He hadn't called her Laila—the theatrical nickname he’d invented during their final, terrible months together when he wanted her to be someone else, someone qui…"
3"His hazel eyes lingered on Evan for a beat too long—a quiet, imperceptible assessment that only a man who had spent thirty years watching threats would make."
4"There was a genuine, tragic pity in his voice that made Rory’s stomach turn."
5"The polished corporate exterior seemed to fracture, just around the edges, revealing the hollow, hollow thing inside—a man who had traded his soul for a seamles…"
6"They were bound together by a terrible, invisible thread: the boy who had broken a life, and the girl who had gathered the pieces and built a fortress out of th…"
7"He hesitated for a second, his hazel eyes lingering on the side of her face, searching for a crack, a tremor, a single sign that the girl who used to cry in his…"
67.31% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Silas asked, his voice smooth as oil"
1"he said, his tone shockingly even"
2"Evan continued, his voice dropping to a near-whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he lied softly (lie)"
1"Evan continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.523
leniency1
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.087
75.6468%