Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVT3DCMWG74KMA2M5DRA65

Run Details

Duration:
11.1s
Cost:
$0.005343
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the entrance humred a low, electric C-flat against the damp London pavement, casting an emerald smear across the asphalt. Inside The Raven’s Nest, the air smelled of stale malt, polish on dark mahogany, and the sharp, clean bite of melting ice. Aurora wiped down the corner of the zinc bar with a damp rag, her mind drifting to the stack of deliveries waiting in the back and the quiet sanctuary of the flat upstairs. At twenty-five, she had mastered the art of making herself invisible in plain sight, her straight black hair falling in a sharp curtain around a face made steady by necessity. The heavy oak door swung open, dragging a sharp draught of street air across the floorboards. Silas didn’t look up from the glass he was drying, but Aurora’s eyes flicked instinctively toward the threshold, cataloging the new arrival out of old habit. The man who stepped out of the drizzle and into the amber gloom of the bar didn't belong in Soho. He wore an expensive charcoal overcoat, unbuttoned to reveal a tailored suit that had likely never brushed against the side of a crowded tube carriage. But it wasn't the clothes that made Aurora’s hand freeze on the bar rag. It was the way he carried his shoulders—stiff, guarded, yet unmistakably familiar. Evan. The name formed like cold lead in her chest. Not her Evan—not the frantic, heavy-handed ghost she had fled across county lines to escape three years ago, leaving Cardiff behind with nothing but a duffel bag and Eva’s frantic text messages echoing in her ears. No, this was someone else, yet the architecture of the jaw and the sharp slant of the cheekbones were carved from the exact same block of stone. Evan stopped just inside the door, shaking a few glittering drops of rain from his dark hair. He scanned the dim room, his gaze sliding past the old maps and black-and-white photographs on the walls, until his eyes landed squarely on Aurora. For a terrifying second, the years between them evaporated. Aurora felt the phantom weight of a hand gripping her left wrist too tightly, right over the small crescent-shaped scar she had earned falling off a stone wall when she was eight. Her fingers twitched, her thumb automatically pressing against the pale crescent as if to hide it. Then Evan smiled. It was a careful, measured thing, devoid of the volatile edges she remembered. "Rory?" he said. His voice was lower now, richer, stripped of the jagged panic that used to fill the small rooms they rented in Wales. She didn't move. She kept the damp rag pressed flat against the zinc, anchoring herself to the physical world. "Evan." He walked slowly toward the bar, his shoes clicking rhythmically against the worn floorboards. He looked older—fine, dry lines fanned out from the corners of his eyes, and his skin had the pale, indoor translucence of a man who spent his life under fluorescent office lights rather than lecture halls. Pre-Law had been a shared prison once; she wondered if he had actually finished the sentence. "I didn't expect to find you here," Evan said, stopping a couple of feet away from the bar. He kept his hands in his pockets, a deliberate display of harmlessness that didn't quite reach his eyes. "Or anywhere, really. People said you went to ground." "People talk too much," Aurora said, her voice remarkably steady. She tossed the rag into a plastic bucket beneath the counter and straightened up, squaring her shoulders. She was five-foot-six, but standing behind the high bar, she felt taller. "What are you doing in London, Evan?" "Meetings. Corporate salvage, mostly." He offered a brief, self-deprecating shrug that didn't quite reach his mouth. "I travel south a lot these days. A colleague mentioned a quiet place in Soho with decent whiskey and a bartender who doesn't ask questions. They didn't mention her name." "Silas runs a tight ship," Aurora said, gesturing vaguely toward the shadowy back rooms where the spymaster kept his secrets. "He doesn't care who you were before you walked through that door. Only whether you can pay for your drink." Evan let out a dry, humorless breath that might have been a laugh. He looked around the bar again, his gaze lingering on a framed photograph of a bombed-out London street from the Blitz. "You look... different, Rory. Quieter. Sharper." "Survival of the fittest," she replied evenly. "You look like you swallowed a ledger." He winced, just a fraction, but she caught it. It was the kind of micro-expression she had spent years learning to read in Cardiff—the slight tightening of the jaw before a defensive retort. But the retort didn't come. Evan just pulled out a barstool and sat down, resting his forearms on the dark wood. "I looked for you, you know," he said softly, staring down at the grain of the bar. "After you left. I went to the flat. The clothes were gone. Your books were gone. Even the kettle was cold." Aurora felt a cold knot tighten in her stomach. She hadn't thought about that morning in a long time—the desperate, silent packing while he was still asleep, the frantic ride to the station, the absolute terror that he would wake up and catch her reaching for the door handle. "I wasn't hiding from a search party, Evan. I was leaving." "I know." He looked up, and for the first time, she saw the tired humanity behind his expensive exterior. The anger that used to live behind his eyes—the hot, unpredictable spark that made her heart race for all the wrong reasons—was entirely gone, replaced by a dull, grey weight. "I deserved that. God knows I wasn't... I wasn't well back then. The pressure of the firm, the exams, my own head—it wasn't an excuse, but it was the reality. I spent a long time being angry at you for walking out. Then I spent a longer time being angry at myself for giving you a reason to." Aurora leaned back against the shelves of liquor bottles, her arms crossed tightly over her chest. The hostility she had braced herself for had evaporated, leaving behind something far more difficult to navigate: pity, complicated by the ghost of an old, broken affection. "You broke my wrist, Evan," she said quietly, the words dropping between them like stones in a well. He flinched. His eyes dropped instinctively to her left hand, where her thumb was still worrying the small crescent scar on her wrist. He didn't deny it. He didn't offer a pathetic excuse about alcohol or stress or bad days at the university. He just closed his eyes for a long, slow beat, absorbing the heavy truth of it. "I know," he whispered. "And I carry that. Every single day. I look at my hands now and I still see the exact moment I realized I had become everything I swore I wouldn't be." He opened his eyes, looking up at her with a raw, unprotected vulnerability that terrified her more than his anger ever had. "I'm sorry, Rory. Not for the sake of an argument. Just... because you deserved so much better than the version of me you were stuck with." Silence stretched between them, heavy and resonant, broken only by the low hum of the neon sign outside and the faint clinking of ice from the back room where Silas was likely listening to every word through the thick timber frame. Aurora uncrossed her arms. The anger inside her hadn't vanished, but it had softened, weathered down by the passing years like stone in a river. She realized, with a sudden, startling clarity, that she was no longer the terrified girl who had run away to London with a single suitcase. She was Aurora Carter—smart, resourceful, running packages through the city by day and learning the darker arts of survival by night under Silas' watchful eye. She didn't need Evan's apology to validate her escape, but hearing it felt like closing the final chapter of a book she had stopped reading years ago. "Water under the bridge, Evan," she said, though the words tasted faintly of ash. "We were kids playing at being adults. We broke each other." "You survived," he said, offering a faint, melancholic smile. "I just grew old." He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a leather wallet, tossing a crisp twenty-pound note onto the bar. He didn't wait for change. "Keep the rest," he said, standing up from the stool. He lingered for a moment, his hand resting on the back of the chair, as if waiting for some final permission, some signal that he could undo the past. When Aurora remained silent, her expression neutral and unyielding, he gave a slow, respectful nod. "Take care of yourself, Rory." "You too, Evan," she said softly. He turned and walked back toward the door, pushing it open into the rainy London night. The bell chimed once, a high, lonely sound, before the heavy oak slammed shut behind him, cutting off the noise of the street. Aurora stood still for a long moment, listening to the hum of the neon sign. Slowly, she looked down at her left hand, her thumb tracing the familiar crescent scar one last time. Then she picked up the damp rag, wiped down the spot where he had been sitting, and went back to work.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:45:31.7Z" 7/25/2026, 2:45:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she replied evenly [evenly]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
3"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.552
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
77.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1587
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1587
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"weight"
count2
8
word"measured"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"race"
count1
11
word"navigate"
count1
12
word"affection"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"sanctuary"
2"flicked"
3"gloom"
4"familiar"
5"echoing"
6"scanned"
7"weight"
8"measured"
9"stomach"
10"race"
11"navigate"
12"affection"
13"silence"
14"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1578
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.02% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1275
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
London4
Raven1
Nest1
Aurora13
Soho1
Evan8
Cardiff2
Eva1
Wales1
Blitz1
Silence1
Silas2
Carter1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Evan"
2"Eva"
3"Silence"
4"Silas"
5"Carter"
places
0"London"
1"Raven"
2"Soho"
3"Cardiff"
4"Wales"
5"Blitz"
globalScore0.99
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"quite reach his mouth"
2"felt like closing the final chapter of"
3"as if waiting for some final permission, some signal that he could undo the past"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1578
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean45.09
std26.92
cv0.597
sampleLengths
0109
142
271
31
472
542
657
716
825
920
1066
1145
1246
1346
1440
1540
1614
1754
1838
1949
2011
21107
2243
2318
2459
2583
2641
27102
2825
2913
3025
3159
326
3339
3454
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"were carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was drying"
1"was still worrying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences90
ratio0.089
matches
0"It was the way he carried his shoulders—stiff, guarded, yet unmistakably familiar."
1"Not her Evan—not the frantic, heavy-handed ghost she had fled across county lines to escape three years ago, leaving Cardiff behind with nothing but a duffel bag and Eva’s frantic text messages echoing in her ears."
2"He looked older—fine, dry lines fanned out from the corners of his eyes, and his skin had the pale, indoor translucence of a man who spent his life under fluorescent office lights rather than lecture halls."
3"Pre-Law had been a shared prison once; she wondered if he had actually finished the sentence."
4"It was the kind of micro-expression she had spent years learning to read in Cardiff—the slight tightening of the jaw before a defensive retort."
5"She hadn't thought about that morning in a long time—the desperate, silent packing while he was still asleep, the frantic ride to the station, the absolute terror that he would wake up and catch her reaching for the door handle."
6"The anger that used to live behind his eyes—the hot, unpredictable spark that made her heart race for all the wrong reasons—was entirely gone, replaced by a dull, grey weight."
7"She was Aurora Carter—smart, resourceful, running packages through the city by day and learning the darker arts of survival by night under Silas' watchful eye."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1097
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"frantic, heavy-handed ghost"
1"small crescent-shaped scar"
2"brief, self-deprecating shrug"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03919781221513218
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01731996353691887
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean17.53
std10.85
cv0.619
sampleLengths
024
122
233
330
416
526
620
725
814
912
101
119
1236
1327
1417
1525
169
1732
1816
193
2013
213
2222
233
2416
251
2614
2736
2816
2918
3018
319
3210
3317
3412
357
3616
3730
3820
3920
4013
4121
426
437
447
459
4624
475
4816
4917
52.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37777777777777777
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then Evan smiled."
1"Slowly, she looked down at"
2"Then she picked up the"
ratio0.042
8.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences72
matches
0"He wore an expensive charcoal"
1"It was the way he"
2"He scanned the dim room,"
3"Her fingers twitched, her thumb"
4"It was a careful, measured"
5"His voice was lower now,"
6"She didn't move."
7"She kept the damp rag"
8"He walked slowly toward the"
9"He looked older—fine, dry lines"
10"He kept his hands in"
11"She tossed the rag into"
12"She was five-foot-six, but standing"
13"He offered a brief, self-deprecating"
14"He looked around the bar"
15"she replied evenly"
16"He winced, just a fraction,"
17"It was the kind of"
18"he said softly, staring down"
19"She hadn't thought about that"
ratio0.528
36.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences72
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Aurora wiped down the corner"
2"The heavy oak door swung"
3"Silas didn’t look up from"
4"The man who stepped out"
5"He wore an expensive charcoal"
6"It was the way he"
7"The name formed like cold"
8"Evan stopped just inside the"
9"He scanned the dim room,"
10"Aurora felt the phantom weight"
11"Her fingers twitched, her thumb"
12"It was a careful, measured"
13"His voice was lower now,"
14"She didn't move."
15"She kept the damp rag"
16"He walked slowly toward the"
17"He looked older—fine, dry lines"
18"Pre-Law had been a shared"
19"Evan said, stopping a couple"
ratio0.847
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"He wore an expensive charcoal overcoat, unbuttoned to reveal a tailored suit that had likely never brushed against the side of a crowded tube carriage."
1"But it wasn't the clothes that made Aurora’s hand freeze on the bar rag."
2"Her fingers twitched, her thumb automatically pressing against the pale crescent as if to hide it."
3"His voice was lower now, richer, stripped of the jagged panic that used to fill the small rooms they rented in Wales."
4"He looked older—fine, dry lines fanned out from the corners of his eyes, and his skin had the pale, indoor translucence of a man who spent his life under fluore…"
5"He kept his hands in his pockets, a deliberate display of harmlessness that didn't quite reach his eyes."
6"The anger that used to live behind his eyes—the hot, unpredictable spark that made her heart race for all the wrong reasons—was entirely gone, replaced by a dul…"
7"She realized, with a sudden, startling clarity, that she was no longer the terrified girl who had run away to London with a single suitcase."
8"He lingered for a moment, his hand resting on the back of the chair, as if waiting for some final permission, some signal that he could undo the past."
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice remarkably steady"
1"she said quietly, the words dropping between them like stones in a well"
2"she said, though the words tasted faintly of ash"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.414
leniency0.828
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.069
71.4608%