Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCW0DVYWSDFBX6381H8EX7E

Run Details

Duration:
31.5s
Cost:
$0.032883
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign outside printed a emerald smear across the rain-beaded window of The Raven’s Nest, casting a cool, medicinal light over the polished dark oak of the bar. It was a slow Tuesday night in Soho. The air inside smelled of wet wool, stale ale, and the sharp, citrusy sting of the floor polish Silas used every afternoon at four sharp. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with his usual deliberate economy, his left leg dragging just a fraction of an inch behind his right—a quiet reminder of a cold night in Prague thirty years past. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked softly against a crystal tumbler as he polished it with a dry linen cloth. His hazel eyes, framed by grey-streaked auburn brows, tracked the door before the chime even registered. Rory sat on the third stool from the end, close enough to the wall to keep her back protected, far enough from the entrance to avoid the draft every time the door swung wide. Her shoulder-length black hair was damp at the ends, smelling faintly of sesame oil and cold rain from her final delivery run for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress. She traced the lip of her gin glass with her thumb, her cuff pulled back just far enough to expose the small, pale crescent scar on her left wrist—a childhood souvenir from a jagged glass greenhouse pane in Cardiff that she had never quite managed to forget. The door opened, letting in a gust of London damp and the distant rumble of a black cab on the cobblestones. Rory didn't look up immediately. She had learned long ago that looking up too fast made people think you were waiting for them, or worse, afraid of them. But the footsteps were wrong for a Soho regular. They were stiff, heavy-heeled, the crisp leather soles of someone who spent his days walking on marble foyers and thick office carpets. "Rory?" The voice hit her like a bucket of well water. It belonged to the past—not the dark, immediate past of Evan and the bruised doors in Cardiff, but the older, softer past. The past of university libraries, cheap cider, and cold morning walks through Roath Park. She turned slowly. Rhys Vaughan stood just inside the threshold, dripping onto the worn floorboards. He was holding a collapsed umbrella, a charcoal cashmere overcoat draped over his arm. The last time she had seen him, he was twenty-one, wearing a thrifted corduroy jacket with frayed cuffs, his fair hair falling into his eyes as they argued over contract law over lukewarm tea in the Cathays student union. Now, at twenty-five, he looked older than fifty-eight-year-old Silas. His hair was slicked back, thinned slightly at the temples, and his face had lost the soft, unformed roundness of youth. There were sharp, grey lines carved around his mouth, and his dark suit was tailored so tightly it seemed to bind his shoulders. "Rhys," she said. Her voice was flat, balanced, the tone she used when a delivery was late or a customer was surly. "My God," he breathed, taking two steps toward her before hesitating, his eyes darting to Silas, who had paused his polishing to deliver a long, unblinking look. "It is you. I—I saw you through the window. I thought I was losing my mind." "You're soaking the floor," Silas noted from behind the bar, his voice a low, gravelly baritone that carried no particular malice, only total authority. "Right. Sorry." Rhys stepped off the rug, setting his umbrella in the brass stand by the door. He looked around the dimly lit room, taking in the yellowed nautical maps, the cracked black-and-white photographs of forgotten men, and the heavy bookshelf tucked into the far corner. "Interesting place. I was just on my way back from a dinner with some partners near Leicester Square." "Silas makes a good drink," Rory said, gesturing loosely to the empty stool beside her. "Sit down before you look any more out of place." Rhys sat, his movements rigid. He placed his hands on the mahogany, then immediately pulled them back, as if worried the varnish might rub off on his clean French cuffs. "I didn't know you were in London. Nobody knew where you went, Rory. After... after you dropped out." "I moved," she said simply. "Your dad didn't even know," Rhys said, his voice dropping an octave, leaning in. "Brendan was beside himself for months. He came down to the union twice, asking if anyone had heard from you. He thought—we all thought—" "My father knew enough," Rory cut in, her bright blue eyes narrowing slightly. The mention of Brendan Carter flicked a raw nerve, but her face remained a mask. She took a slow sip of her gin. "He knew I wasn't coming back to law school. That was all that concerned him." Silas slid a coaster in front of Rhys without being asked and set down a glass of neat bourbon. "On the house," Silas murmured, his hazel eyes lingering on Rhys's face for a second too long before he limped back toward the beer taps at the far end of the bar. Rhys blinked at the glass, then at Rory. "You don't talk to him?" "I don't talk to a lot of people from Cardiff." "And Evan?" Rhys asked carefully, testing the name like a man stepping onto thin ice. Rory’s hand stayed completely still on her glass. Not a twitch. "What about him?" "He told everyone you just left one night. Packed your bag and vanished. He made himself out to be the broken-hearted survivor for a good six months before he moved to Bristol." Rhys looked at her, searching her face for something—a crack, a tear, a confession. "Some of us didn't buy it, Rory. Eva said—" "Eva was right," Rory said softly. "Whatever she told you, she was right. And I don't talk about Evan." Rhys took a heavy drink of the bourbon, wincing slightly as it hit his throat. He set the glass down with a dull *thud*. "You were supposed to be the one who made it out, Rory. First in the class. Brendan’s daughter. You had the moot court championship wrapped up before second term even started. And now you're... what are you doing here?" He looked at her worn denim jacket, the faded canvas sneakers, the slight smudge of dark newsprint on her index finger. "I deliver food," she said evenly. "For Yu-Fei at the Golden Empress. And I live upstairs." Rhys stared at her, genuine bewilderment washing over his lined face. "You're delivering takeaway? Rory, you were brilliant. You had a place lined up at Inns of Court. You could be sitting where I am." "And where are you, Rhys?" She turned her head fully to face him, her blue eyes sharp enough to cut glass. "You look like you haven't slept a full six hours since 2021. Your knuckles are red from clenching your fists, and you just drank four-pound bourbon like it was medicine." Rhys went quiet. His mouth opened to offer a canned retort—the kind junior associates kept in their back pockets for small talk at corporate mixers—but the words died in his throat. He looked down at his own reflection in the dark, wet wood of the bar. "It’s seventy hours a week," he murmured, his posture slumping for the first time since he had walked through the door. The crisp, powerful solicitor vanished, leaving behind the exhausted boy who used to cram for finals on cold kitchen floors. "Eighty, sometimes. I spend my days reviewing commercial leases for property developers who don't even know my name. I bought a flat in Clapham. It’s quiet. Too quiet." "Do you like it?" "It’s what we were supposed to do," he said, as if that were an answer. He looked at her wrist, at the crescent scar catching the green neon light. "Do you remember when we sat on the wall behind the law library and swore we’d open a practice together? Just us and Eva. We were going to take all the pro-bono cases your dad turned down." "I remember," Rory said. "We were nineteen and we didn't know anything about how heavy things could get." "I missed you," Rhys said quietly. The admission hung in the warm, dark air between them, heavy and useless, like an unopened letter sent to an old address. "When you left, it felt like someone took the air out of the room. Everything just got... gray. We all just fell into the grooves that were laid out for us." Rory reached out and touched the base of her glass. She felt a phantom ache in her left wrist, an old memory of broken glass and sharp edges, of realization striking too late. "The grooves aren't mandatory, Rhys," she said softly. "You can step out of them whenever you want. It just costs a lot to do it." "What did it cost you?" "Everything I was," she said. "And nothing I miss." Silas came back up the line, wiping the counter down with his rag, his quiet presence acting as a natural buffer. "Closing in ten minutes, folks," he said, though the neon sign outside was still glowing and the clock behind him read barely eleven. Rhys pulled a leather wallet from his breast pocket, slipping out a crisp twenty-pound note, but Silas waved it away with a flick of his silver-ringed hand. "Tuesdays are quiet. Keep it." Rhys stood up, smoothing his tie, the armor slipping back into place piece by piece. He looked at Rory, hesitation lingering in the tense line of his jaw. "Can I call you? Eva would love to know you're alright. I'd... I'd like to catch up properly. Without the rain." Rory looked at him—really looked at him. She saw the boy who used to lend her his highlighters, buried beneath three thousand pounds of worsted wool and six years of professional cynicism. She liked that boy. But that boy lived in Cardiff, in a life that had almost killed her. "No, Rhys," she said, her voice gentle, but final. "It's better if you just remember me from the library." Rhys swallowed hard. He nodded once, a slow, painful gesture of understanding. "Right. Yeah. Maybe it is." He picked up his umbrella, turned, and walked out into the Soho night. The chime above the door gave a single, bright strike as it swung shut behind him. Rory sat in silence for a long time, watching the green neon reflection ripple in the cold coffee ring left on the bar. Silas picked up Rhys's untouched glass of bourbon, poured it down the sink, and rinsed the crystal under the tap. "Good kid," Silas observed quietly, his hazel eyes fixed on the street outside. "Needs a holiday." "He won't take one," Rory said, pulling her cuffed sleeves back down over her wrists. "No," Silas agreed, pulling a heavy brass key from his pocket and laying it on the wood between them. "They rarely do."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:48:59.015Z" 7/25/2026, 2:48:59 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount8
adverbTags
0"she said simply [simply]"
1"blue eyes narrowing slightly [slightly]"
2"Rhys asked carefully [carefully]"
3"Rory said softly [softly]"
4"she said evenly [evenly]"
5"Rhys said quietly [quietly]"
6"she said softly [softly]"
7"Silas observed quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.32
effectiveRatio0.291
67.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1854
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"softly"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count3
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"loosely"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
6
adverb"completely"
count1
7
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"tightly"
4"loosely"
5"carefully"
6"completely"
7"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1854
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"marble"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"clenching"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"crystal"
2"traced"
3"footsteps"
4"marble"
5"flicked"
6"clenching"
7"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
75.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"think"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1846
ratio0.001
matches
0"thud"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1302
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Rhys"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rhys"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Tuesday1
Soho3
Silas12
Blackwood1
Prague1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff3
London1
Evan1
Roath1
Park1
Vaughan1
Cathays1
Rhys17
French1
Rory13
Brendan1
Carter1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Evan"
7"Vaughan"
8"Rhys"
9"Rory"
10"Brendan"
11"Carter"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Roath"
5"Park"
6"Cathays"
globalScore0.847
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.542
wordCount1846
matches
0"not the dark, immediate past of Evan and the bruised doors in Cardiff, but the older, softer past"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"liked that boy"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean35.5
std22.61
cv0.637
sampleLengths
063
174
2108
321
459
51
646
73
865
953
1022
1143
1224
1364
1425
1548
165
1738
1851
1951
2013
2110
2215
2314
2455
2519
2663
2721
2816
2935
3051
3146
3269
334
3466
3518
3659
3733
3825
395
409
4144
4232
4349
4450
4519
4617
4729
4823
4936
92.88% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences85
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was tailored"
2"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs203
matches
0"were waiting"
1"was holding"
2"was still glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences115
ratio0.052
matches
0"Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood moved with his usual deliberate economy, his left leg dragging just a fraction of an inch behind his right—a quiet reminder of a cold night in Prague thirty years past."
1"She traced the lip of her gin glass with her thumb, her cuff pulled back just far enough to expose the small, pale crescent scar on her left wrist—a childhood souvenir from a jagged glass greenhouse pane in Cardiff that she had never quite managed to forget."
2"It belonged to the past—not the dark, immediate past of Evan and the bruised doors in Cardiff, but the older, softer past."
3"\"He told everyone you just left one night. Packed your bag and vanished. He made himself out to be the broken-hearted survivor for a good six months before he moved to Bristol.\" Rhys looked at her, searching her face for something—a crack, a tear, a confession."
4"His mouth opened to offer a canned retort—the kind junior associates kept in their back pockets for small talk at corporate mixers—but the words died in his throat."
5"Rory looked at him—really looked at him."
98.62% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1323
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.04157218442932729
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.01889644746787604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean16.05
std9.9
cv0.617
sampleLengths
030
18
225
335
423
516
634
727
847
921
105
1123
129
1322
141
1510
1622
1714
183
1912
2014
2139
229
2321
2423
253
2619
2727
2816
2924
3017
3129
3218
3315
3410
355
3625
3718
385
3914
4024
4113
4215
438
4415
4519
4632
478
485
4910
57.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3565217391304348
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences82
matches
0"It was a slow Tuesday"
1"His hazel eyes, framed by"
2"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
3"She traced the lip of"
4"She had learned long ago"
5"They were stiff, heavy-heeled, the"
6"It belonged to the past—not"
7"She turned slowly."
8"He was holding a collapsed"
9"His hair was slicked back,"
10"Her voice was flat, balanced,"
11"he breathed, taking two steps"
12"He looked around the dimly"
13"He placed his hands on"
14"she said simply"
15"She took a slow sip"
16"He set the glass down"
17"He looked at her worn"
18"she said evenly"
19"She turned her head fully"
ratio0.415
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences82
matches
0"The green neon sign outside"
1"It was a slow Tuesday"
2"The air inside smelled of"
3"The silver signet ring on"
4"His hazel eyes, framed by"
5"Rory sat on the third"
6"Her shoulder-length black hair was"
7"She traced the lip of"
8"The door opened, letting in"
9"Rory didn't look up immediately."
10"She had learned long ago"
11"They were stiff, heavy-heeled, the"
12"The voice hit her like"
13"It belonged to the past—not"
14"The past of university libraries,"
15"She turned slowly."
16"Rhys Vaughan stood just inside"
17"He was holding a collapsed"
18"The last time she had"
19"His hair was slicked back,"
ratio0.927
60.98% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"Now, at twenty-five, he looked"
ratio0.012
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"They were stiff, heavy-heeled, the crisp leather soles of someone who spent his days walking on marble foyers and thick office carpets."
1"The crisp, powerful solicitor vanished, leaving behind the exhausted boy who used to cram for finals on cold kitchen floors."
2"She saw the boy who used to lend her his highlighters, buried beneath three thousand pounds of worsted wool and six years of professional cynicism."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Rhys said, his voice dropping an octave, leaning in"
1"She turned, her blue eyes sharp enough to cut glass"
2"he said, as if that were an answer"
3"she said, her voice gentle, but final"
4"Silas observed quietly, his hazel eyes fixed on the street outside"
40.91% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"Silas noted (note)"
2"Silas murmured (murmur)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
4"Silas observed quietly (observe)"
5"Silas agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.764
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.218
72.5928%