| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1043 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "shattered" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "profound" | | 12 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.63% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 70 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1036 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "Thump. Thump-thump." | | 1 | "schlock" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 1019 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.59 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | November | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "trees that seemed to lean inward, crowding the trail" |
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| 6.95% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.931 | | wordCount | 1036 | | matches | | 0 | "not the familiar, orange-tinted haze of London, but something ancient" | | 1 | "not a voice, but a dry, clicking chatter like a nest of beetles shifting bene" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 43.17 | | std | 26.39 | | cv | 0.611 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 94 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 44 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 73 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 42 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 68 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "been, canted" | | 1 | "was rooted" |
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| 61.11% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "were thinning" | | 1 | "was glowing" | | 2 | "were wading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "Beneath the whistling of the wind through the high canopy came a low, rhythmic thrum—like a heartbeat pressed against a wet pillow." | | 1 | "But as she exhaled, a plume of white vapor pluming into the freezing air, she saw it—a subtle displacement of the shadows, a fluid ripple in the dark as if something tall and impossibly thin had just slipped behind the tree." | | 2 | "The stone was warm—no, burning hot—thrumming against her ribs like a trapped bird." | | 3 | "It did not have a face—only a smooth, pale oval of skin where features should have been, canted toward her in an attitude of profound, rapt attention." | | 4 | "A sound rose from it—not a voice, but a dry, clicking chatter like a nest of beetles shifting beneath bark." | | 5 | "Cool-headed, intelligent, out-of-the-box thinking—the traits that had kept her alive in Cardiff, that had carried her through the wreckage of her old life—flared in the dark like a match struck in a gas-filled room." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 268 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "familiar, orange-tinted haze" | | 2 | "pale, ghost-white trunks" |
| | adverbCount | 9 | | adverbRatio | 0.033582089552238806 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007462686567164179 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 14.8 | | std | 9.09 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 55.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.38571428571428573 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pale trunk of" | | 1 | "Only the wind, which seemed" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked with her hands" | | 1 | "She checked her watch." | | 2 | "She had left her flat" | | 3 | "She held her breath, straining." | | 4 | "She forced herself forward, pushing" | | 5 | "Her shoulders locked, her gaze" | | 6 | "Her voice came out thin," | | 7 | "She kept walking, her boots" | | 8 | "They loomed like broken teeth" | | 9 | "She pulled her hand from" | | 10 | "It was not behind a" | | 11 | "It was inside the ring." | | 12 | "It was tall, impossibly tall," | | 13 | "It did not have a" | | 14 | "She was rooted to the" | | 15 | "She watched, detached and horrified," | | 16 | "Its foot hit the moss" | | 17 | "She didn't run away from" | | 18 | "She backed slowly toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 85.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy iron gate of" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter," | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 3 | "She walked with her hands" | | 4 | "The scar always itched when" | | 5 | "The path dissolved beneath her" | | 6 | "The darkness here was not" | | 7 | "She checked her watch." | | 8 | "The luminous hands read 11:42." | | 9 | "She had left her flat" | | 10 | "A five-minute walk to the" | | 11 | "She held her breath, straining." | | 12 | "Thump-thump.* It syncopated with her" | | 13 | "She forced herself forward, pushing" | | 14 | "The codex had been clear," | | 15 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 16 | "A sharp snap, loud as" | | 17 | "Her shoulders locked, her gaze" | | 18 | "Nothing was there." | | 19 | "Her voice came out thin," |
| | ratio | 0.75 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "The heavy iron gate of Richmond Park groaned against the wind, a long, rusted shriek that died too quickly in the damp London air." | | 1 | "But the air here tasted of ozone and crushed pine needles, a sharp, metallic tang that had nothing to do with the city she had left behind an hour ago." | | 2 | "The path dissolved beneath her boots, the gravel turning first to damp moss, then to a thick, unyielding peat that swallowed the sound of her steps." | | 3 | "Around her, the great oaks of the park twisted into shapes that defied botany, their heavy boughs arching overhead to block out the slate-gray bellies of the cl…" | | 4 | "The darkness here was not the familiar, orange-tinted haze of London, but something ancient and absolute, broken only by the pale, ghost-white trunks of birch t…" | | 5 | "She forced herself forward, pushing past a cluster of ferns that uncurled in the gloom despite the November frost." | | 6 | "But as she exhaled, a plume of white vapor pluming into the freezing air, she saw it—a subtle displacement of the shadows, a fluid ripple in the dark as if some…" | | 7 | "Only the wind, which seemed to change direction, carrying with it the unmistakable scent of copper and old, wet wool." | | 8 | "She kept walking, her boots making a wet *schlock* sound in the peat." | | 9 | "It was tall, impossibly tall, its limbs too long for the torso, jointed in ways that made the stomach turn." | | 10 | "The Heartstone in her hand pulsed again, a frantic, blinding flash that painted the entire grove in shades of arterial red." | | 11 | "Cool-headed, intelligent, out-of-the-box thinking—the traits that had kept her alive in Cardiff, that had carried her through the wreckage of her old life—flare…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |