Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWF9K793AT88N7AQ6AEB4J

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.019526
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign outside the window hummed, casting a faint, sickly aura across the dark oak counter where Silas Blackwood was polishing a highball glass. Rory sat three stools down, her fingers tracing the rim of a lukewarm pint of cider. The Raven’s Nest was quiet for a Thursday midnight—just the low murmur of a couple in the far booth, the soft scuffle of rain against the glass, and the smell of stale gin and wet wool. When the brass bell above the heavy front door chimed, Rory didn't look up. Soho drew all sorts at this hour, and after an eight-hour shift delivering grease-spotted paper bags for Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress, her legs throbbed and her mind was dull. "Rory?" The voice hit her like a bucket of icy river water. It wasn't the accented bar-talk of London. It was the soft, rolling cadences of South Wales, carrying a phantom smell of coal dust, salt air, and cheap cider spilled on grassy riverbanks. Rory froze, her thumb resting directly over the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. She turned slowly on her swivel stool. Standing in the doorway, shedding a damp trench coat, was a ghost in tailored charcoal wool. "Eva?" Rory said, the name dry in her throat. For a long second, neither of them moved. The last time Rory had seen Eva Vance was six years ago on the damp platform at Cardiff Central. Eva had handed her a train ticket to Paddington, a rolled-up hundred-pound note, and a bruised cheek courtesy of Evan’s quick, furious knuckles when he’d realized Rory was running. Eva had stood there in a oversized vintage cardigan, eyes wide and panicked, promising she’d follow in a month once the dust settled. She had never come. The text messages had thinned, turned brittle, and finally stopped altogether. Now, Eva stepped into the bar’s dim light. She didn't look like a girl who belonged on a Cardiff platform anymore. Her once-unruly auburn curls were straightened into a sleek, dark chocolate bob that brushed the sharp line of her collarbone. She wore understated gold hoops, a silk blouse, and carried a leather briefcase that looked like it cost a month of Rory’s rent. "I don't believe it," Eva whispered, stepping closer. "Rory. It’s really you." "What are you doing here?" Rory asked. It came out flatter than she intended, stripped of warmth by the sudden, heavy thump of her heart. "Meeting a client. Or trying to—he blew me off half an hour ago." Eva offered a small, tentative smile that didn't quite reach her dark eyes. She gestured to the empty stool next to Rory. "May I?" "Sure." Behind the bar, Silas paused his polishing. His hazel eyes slid over Eva with a practiced, razor-sharp assessment—taking in the cut of her coat, the tense set of her shoulders, the way her gaze darted toward the exit. He caught Rory’s eye, a silent question in his heavy brows. Rory gave a barely perceptible nod, and Silas stepped back, twisting the silver signet ring on his right hand as he dragged a slight limp toward the far end of the counter to give them space. Eva sat, resting her hands neatly on the mahogany. "You look..." She trailed off, scanning Rory’s straight, shoulder-length black hair, the faded denim jacket, the faint shadows under her bright blue eyes. "You look different." "Older," Rory said. "Working class. Pick one." Eva winced, a tiny crack in her polished veneer. "I deserved that." "What are you drinking?" Silas asked, appearing smoothly beside them, dropping two coaster mats onto the wood. "A dry martini, please. Gin," Eva said, not looking at him. "Right." Silas moved away, his footfalls heavy on the floorboards. "So," Rory said, propping her chin on her hand, her blue eyes fixed on Eva’s pristine manicured nails. "A dry martini. You used to drink Warm Apple Blackthorn out of a two-liter plastic bottle behind the rugby club." "People change, Rory." "Some do," Rory said. "Some just buy better clothes." The words hung between them, sharp and jagged. Eva didn't recoil. Instead, she leaned back, letting out a long, slow breath that seemed to drain the strict posture out of her spine. For a brief instant, in the dim green ambient light, Rory caught a glimpse of the nineteen-year-old girl who used to laugh until she choked on cheap cigarettes in Roath Park. "I tried to find you," Eva said softly. "After... after Evan." Rory’s jaw tightened at the name. The phantom ache of an old fear hummed beneath her ribs, though Evan was three hundred miles away and years in her past. "Did you? Because my number didn't change for two years." "I stayed in Cardiff," Eva said, looking down at her hands. "You don't know what it was like after you left. Evan was... unstable. He came looking for me. He thought I knew where you were living in London. He came to my parents' house, Rory. He smashed the front window." Rory felt the sting of a sudden, hot guilt, instantly weaponized by six years of buried resentment. "I’m sorry. You know I am. But you gave me the ticket, Eva. You told me to run." "And I don't regret it," Eva said fiercely, turning to face her. "Look at you. You’re free. You escaped him. You escaped your dad’s insane expectations, that suffocating pre-law track, all of it." "Free?" Rory gestured to herself with a bitter laugh. "I deliver Chinese food on a bicycle, Eva. I live in a flat above a Soho bar that smells like sour draft beer and floor wax. I’m twenty-five, broke, and I sleep with a baseball bat next to my radiator." Silas set the martini down with a subtle *clink*, followed by a fresh cider for Rory. He didn't say a word, disappearing back into the shadows near the kitchen door, but his presence remained a quiet, grounding anchor in the corner of the room. Eva picked up her glass, took a small sip, and set it back down precisely on the coaster. "I finished my degree," she said flatly. "I moved to London three years ago. I’m a junior partner at a firm in Mayfair. I bought a flat in Kensington." "Congratulations," Rory said. The word tasted like ash. "Don't do that," Eva whispered. "Don't look at me like I betrayed you by surviving." "You didn't betray me by surviving, Eva! You betrayed me by vanishing!" Rory’s voice cracked, cutting through the quiet bar. She lowered her voice, leaning in, her knuckles white against the dark wood. "I sat in a damp room in Whitechapel for six months waiting for you to call. I thought he’d done something to you. I thought you were dead. And then I heard through my mum that you were interning at a corporate firm in Bristol, wearing pantyhose and going to dinner parties. You didn't leave because of Evan. You just moved on." Eva held her gaze, but the coldness in her posture had entirely dissolved, replaced by a deep, weary sorrow. "I had to," Eva said, her voice barely audible over the hum of the neon sign outside. "If I kept talking to you, Rory, I was always going to be the girl standing on the platform. I was always going to be the girl whose window got smashed. I was so tired of being afraid. I was so tired of being broken." She reached out, her hand hovering an inch above Rory’s wrist, just shy of touching the crescent scar. "I couldn't fix you, and you couldn't fix me. We were toxic together. We were just two kids drowning in the same dark water, holding onto each other so tight we were pulling each other under." Rory looked at Eva’s hovering hand. The space between them felt vast, stretched wide by years of silence, by corporate ladders and greasy paper bags, by who they had been in the damp Welsh rain and who they were now in a Soho bar. "I missed my best friend," Rory confessed quietly, her anger deflating, leaving only a hollow ache in her chest. "I needed you." "I missed you too," Eva said. A single tear slipped down her cheek, destroying the immaculate perfection of her makeup. She didn't wipe it away. "Every single day. When I passed the Cardiff law building. When I got my first big bonus. When I walked through Hyde Park last autumn. I wanted to tell you everything." "Why didn't you?" "Because look at us," Eva said, gesturing between them. "We’re ghosts to each other now. The second I saw you sitting here, my stomach dropped. Not because I don't love you, Rory. But because seeing you brings it all back. The fear. The rain. Evan’s voice. Your dad yelling at you in the driveway." Rory swallowed hard. She looked at the old maps pinned to the dark walls of the bar, at the black-and-white photographs of places she had never been. Silas was right; the past had a way of quartering a person, tearing them between what was lost and what survived. "So where does that leave us?" Rory asked. Eva looked down at her martini, then at Rory. She took a slow, shuddering breath and pulled a crisp white business card from her leather bag, placing it gently beside Rory’s glass. "It means I’m in the phone book now," Eva said softly. "It means if you ever want to build something new—not go back to who we were, but start somewhere else—you know where I am." Eva reached over and briefly, tightly, squeezed Rory’s fingers. Her hand was warm, smelling faintly of expensive jasmine perfume, completely foreign yet unmistakably Eva. She slid off the stool, put her trench coat back on, and dropped a twenty-pound note onto the counter. She paused at the door, turning back once to look at Rory—really look at her—with an expression of profound, aching nostalgia. "Take care of yourself, Rory," she said. "You too, Evie," Rory used the old nickname, just once. The brass bell chimed, the door swung shut, and the cool rain-scented night air swept into the pub, whisking away the faint smell of jasmine. Rory sat alone for a long time, listening to the hum of the green neon sign. Silas limped back down the counter, silently picked up the twenty-pound note, and slid it back into Rory’s jacket pocket. He picked up the empty martini glass, glanced at the business card sitting on the bar, and gave Rory a gentle, knowing nod before walking away. Rory reached out, picked up the card, and traced the embossed lettering of Eva's name with her scarred wrist, holding the weight of time right there in the palm of her hand.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:57:06.162Z" 7/25/2026, 2:57:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
21.43% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
1"Eva said fiercely [fiercely]"
2"she said flatly [flatly]"
3"Rory confessed quietly [quietly]"
4"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.528
leniency1
rawRatio0.179
effectiveRatio0.179
75.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1805
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"gently"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
6
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
2"softly"
3"precisely"
4"gently"
5"tightly"
6"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1805
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"pristine"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"single tear"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"profound"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"throbbed"
2"silk"
3"warmth"
4"scanning"
5"pristine"
6"silence"
7"single tear"
8"stomach"
9"profound"
10"traced"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences88
matches
0"felt the sting"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1798
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions93
wordCount1227
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity2.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Silas8
Blackwood1
Raven1
Nest1
Thursday1
Rory36
Yu-Fei1
Golden1
Empress1
London1
South1
Wales1
Eva27
Vance1
Cardiff2
Central1
Paddington1
Evan2
Roath1
Park1
Welsh1
Soho2
persons
0"Silas"
1"Blackwood"
2"Raven"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Eva"
6"Vance"
7"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"South"
2"Wales"
3"Cardiff"
4"Paddington"
5"Roath"
6"Park"
7"Soho"
globalScore0.033
windowScore0
42.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like it cost a month of Rory’s ren"
1"quite reach her dark eyes"
2"breath that seemed to drain the strict posture out of her spine"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.556
wordCount1798
matches
0"not go back to who we were, but start somewhere else"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean33.3
std25.52
cv0.766
sampleLengths
078
142
21
343
422
516
69
779
815
964
1012
1125
1237
131
1485
1535
167
1712
1817
1911
2010
2138
223
239
2463
2511
2639
2751
2835
2933
3049
3144
3247
338
3415
3595
3619
37116
3844
3922
4056
413
4254
4348
448
4532
4635
4724
4840
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"were straightened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was running"
41.72% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences113
ratio0.035
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest was quiet for a Thursday midnight—just the low murmur of a couple in the far booth, the soft scuffle of rain against the glass, and the smell of stale gin and wet wool."
1"His hazel eyes slid over Eva with a practiced, razor-sharp assessment—taking in the cut of her coat, the tense set of her shoulders, the way her gaze darted toward the exit."
2"Silas was right; the past had a way of quartering a person, tearing them between what was lost and what survived."
3"She paused at the door, turning back once to look at Rory—really look at her—with an expression of profound, aching nostalgia."
86.55% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1248
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"cool rain-scented night"
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.040865384615384616
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.020833333333333332
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean15.91
std11.82
cv0.743
sampleLengths
026
116
236
314
428
51
611
77
825
915
107
1116
129
138
1419
1529
1623
174
1811
198
2013
2120
2223
238
244
257
2618
2726
289
292
301
317
3231
3311
3436
359
3623
373
383
394
409
413
4217
4311
4410
4518
4620
473
484
495
53.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.37168141592920356
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners42
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Instead, she leaned back, letting"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences80
matches
0"It wasn't the accented bar-talk"
1"It was the soft, rolling"
2"She turned slowly on her"
3"She had never come."
4"She didn't look like a"
5"Her once-unruly auburn curls were"
6"She wore understated gold hoops,"
7"It came out flatter than"
8"She gestured to the empty"
9"His hazel eyes slid over"
10"He caught Rory’s eye, a"
11"She trailed off, scanning Rory’s"
12"He didn't say a word,"
13"she said flatly"
14"She lowered her voice, leaning"
15"She reached out, her hand"
16"She didn't wipe it away."
17"She looked at the old"
18"She took a slow, shuddering"
19"Her hand was warm, smelling"
ratio0.288
3.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences80
matches
0"The neon green sign outside"
1"Rory sat three stools down,"
2"The Raven’s Nest was quiet"
3"Soho drew all sorts at"
4"The voice hit her like"
5"It wasn't the accented bar-talk"
6"It was the soft, rolling"
7"Rory froze, her thumb resting"
8"She turned slowly on her"
9"Rory said, the name dry"
10"The last time Rory had"
11"Eva had handed her a"
12"Eva had stood there in"
13"She had never come."
14"The text messages had thinned,"
15"She didn't look like a"
16"Her once-unruly auburn curls were"
17"She wore understated gold hoops,"
18"Eva whispered, stepping closer"
19"It came out flatter than"
ratio0.913
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now, Eva stepped into the"
ratio0.013
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her once-unruly auburn curls were straightened into a sleek, dark chocolate bob that brushed the sharp line of her collarbone."
1"She wore understated gold hoops, a silk blouse, and carried a leather briefcase that looked like it cost a month of Rory’s rent."
2"Instead, she leaned back, letting out a long, slow breath that seemed to drain the strict posture out of her spine."
3"For a brief instant, in the dim green ambient light, Rory caught a glimpse of the nineteen-year-old girl who used to laugh until she choked on cheap cigarettes …"
71.43% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva said, not looking at him"
1"Silas moved away, his footfalls heavy on the floorboards"
2"Eva said fiercely, turning to face her"
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
2"Rory confessed quietly (confess)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.396
leniency0.792
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.113
77.8350%