Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWN630S30TFNX9D2W9XP8Z

Run Details

Duration:
17.6s
Cost:
$0.019255
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The neon green sign outside the window cast a sickly hue across the rain-slicked glass of the booth, bleeding into the dark mahogany wood. It was a slow Tuesday night at The Raven’s Nest. Rory sat near the back, her fingers tracing the condensation on her glass of pale ale, watching Silas favor his left leg as he wiped down the zinc countertop. The old man moved with the measured, economical grace of a shadow, his silver signet ring catching the low amber light of the bar every time he turned the rag. The front door opened with a heavy thud, dragging in a gust of damp London air and the smell of exhaust. Rory didn't look up immediately—she had learned in the last three years to let the room settle around a newcomer before taking their measure. But then came the sharp, unmistakable click of cheap leather heels on the scuffed floorboards, followed by a sudden, suspended pause. "Rory?" The voice hit her like a drop into freezing water. It was pitched a half-octave higher than she remembered, laced with a practiced, bright breathlessness, but underneath lay the familiar cadence of a Cardiff childhood. Rory looked up. Eva stood at the edge of the booth, clutching a dripping umbrella and a designer handbag that looked crisp, expensive, and entirely out of place against the dim, yellowing maps lining the bar's plaster walls. "Eva," Rory said. The name felt heavy on her tongue, dry as dust. "God, it *is* you." Eva took a step closer, her eyes scanning Rory’s face with a rapid, hungry intensity. "I saw you through the window—or, well, I saw the hair, and then the profile, and I thought, *no, it can't be*, but..." "It’s me," Rory said. She gestured toward the empty bench across from her. "Sit down. You’re soaked." Eva slid into the booth, her motions carefully tailored, her camel-hair coat rustling softly. She set her bag down between them like a barricade. Five years ago, in the cramped, tea-stained kitchen off Roath Park, Eva had worn oversized paint-splattered cardigans and bitten her fingernails down to the quick while ranting about gallery rejections. The woman sitting here now had nails dipped in immaculate burgundy enamel, her blonde hair cut into an unyielding, angular bob that framed a face set with quiet, vigilant artifice. "What are you doing in Soho?" Eva asked, her gaze flicking past Rory toward the bar, where Silas was quietly setting down a fresh coaster. "I live here," Rory said simply. "Above the bar." Eva paused, her penciled brows arching just enough to register surprise without disturbing her forehead. "You live above a pub? What about... I thought you were back in Wales? Your dad told my mum back in January that you’d dropped off the map. He said—" "My father doesn't know where I am," Rory interrupted, her voice flat, cool, and entirely unbothered. She tucked a strand of her straight, shoulder-length black hair behind her ear, her sleeve slipping back just enough to reveal the small, crescent-shaped scar resting near her left wrist. Eva’s eyes snagged on the mark. A faint ripple of discomfort crossed her polished features, a brief crack in the enamel. "He was worried, Rory. We all were. After... after you left Evan." "Evan was a mistake I unmade," Rory said. "There’s nothing to worry about." Silas limped over, his grey-streaked auburn beard catching the overhead light. He gave Eva a polite, inscrutable look before glancing at Rory, his hazel eyes offering a silent query. "A gin and tonic for my friend, Si," Rory said. "And another ale for me." "Right away, Carter," Silas said softly. He gave the table a single, firm tap with his thumb and turned back toward the bar. Eva watched him walk away, leaning in slightly across the sticky table. "He calls you Carter? And who is 'Si'? Rory, what is this place? You were supposed to be at university. You were going to do the bar exams. You had that place lined up in Chambers." "I hated the law," Rory said. "My father loved the law. I just happened to be the one taking the exams." "So you run away to London to... what?" Eva looked around the dimly lit room, taking in the faded black-and-white photographs of forgotten docks and silent European streets that Silas had framed along the dark paneling. "To sit in dark bars?" "I work," Rory said. "For Yu-Fei over at Golden Empress. Deliveries, mostly. It keeps me moving." "A delivery driver," Eva repeated. She spoke the word as if it were an exotic currency she didn't know how to spend. "Rory, you were the smartest person in our year. You used to read cross-examinations for fun. You memorized the entire precedent history for the Ellis estate dispute just to prove your Dad wrong at dinner." "Smart doesn't mean suited," Rory said, taking a slow sip from her glass. The beer was bitter, cold, and familiar. "You've changed, Ev. The coat. The hair. You sound like you were born in Chelsea." Eva drew back slightly, her hands smoothing the lapels of her coat. "I adjusted. I got a job at a consultancy firm in Mayfair. I had to learn how to present myself if I wanted anyone to listen to me. London isn't Cardiff, Rory. Nobody cares who your father is down here. You either build something, or you get pushed to the margins." "And you built this?" Rory glanced at the sleek handbag, the razor-sharp nails, the slight, perpetual tightness around Eva’s mouth that hadn't been there when they were nineteen, drinking three-pound cider on the grass by the Taff. "I survived," Eva said, her tone dropping its bright edge, suddenly cold and sharp. "I didn't run. When things got hard, I didn't just burn my life down and hide in a cellar." The silence settled heavy between them, thick with the years they had missed and the shared history they were both trying to rewrite. Behind the bar, the clink of glass against glass sounded like distant ice cracking. Silas returned, placing the fresh drinks on the table with a nod before retreating into the shadowy corner near the register, returning to his ledger. Eva stared down at her glass, watching the bubbles rise through the clear liquid. "He came looking for me, you know." Rory’s hands stayed completely still on the table. "Who?" "Evan. A month after you vanished." Eva’s voice was barely a whisper now, stripped of its corporate varnish. "He came to my flat in Cathays. It was midnight. He knocked until the neighbors threatened to call the police. He thought I was hiding you." "I didn't tell you where I was going because I didn't want him asking you," Rory said smoothly, her bright blue eyes fixing on Eva’s face without a flicker of doubt. "I protected you." "You abandoned me," Eva corrected, looking up, her hazel-green eyes brimming with a sudden, hot fury that tore straight through her carefully crafted exterior. "You left me in that city with him, with your father, with everyone asking me where Rory went, why Rory broke, what happened to Rory. I didn't know if you were dead in a ditch or living in a penthouse. You just erased yourself." "I had to leave," Rory said, her cool demeanor holding firm, though her thumb unconsciously brushed the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit from a childhood fall that had become a silent anchor whenever the ground shifted beneath her. "If I had stayed, he would have broken what was left." "And what's left now?" Eva gestured broadly at Rory—her plain black sweater, her practical shoes, the complete absence of jewelry or pretense. "Look at you. You're a ghost. You're twenty-five years old and you're living like a fugitive. Was it worth it? Leaving everything behind just to end up invisible?" Rory looked at her old friend—at the crisp lines, the expensive armor, the exhaustion lingering deep within the shadows under Eva’s eyes. She saw the cost of staying, written in the stiff posture and the white-knuckled grip on the gin glass. Eva had fought her way into the world by letting it shape her into something hard and shiny. Rory had escaped the world by letting it think she had ceased to exist at all. "I sleep through the night," Rory said quieted. "Nobody dictates my hours. Nobody sits at the bottom of the stairs waiting for me to make a mistake." Eva closed her eyes for a brief second, the tightness in her face giving way to a profound, hollow weariness. The Mayfair consultant vanished; for a fleeting moment, the girl who used to cry over ruined watercolors was back in the booth. "I missed you," Eva whispered. "I was so angry at you, Rory. I hated you for leaving. But I missed you every day." Rory reached across the dark table. For a second, her hand hovered, uncertain, before she laid her fingers over Eva’s manicured knuckles. "I know." They sat in silence while the neon light outside hummed its low, electric tune against the rain. They drank their drinks, caught in the narrow space between who they had been in the damp green valley of their youth and who they were now in the soot and neon of London. When Eva finally drained her glass, she checked her phone—a automatic, practiced motion. "I have to go. I have a morning brief at eight." "Of course," Rory said, pulling her hand back. Eva stood up, buttoning her coat, pulling the armor back into place piece by piece. She smoothed her hair, checked her reflection in the dark glass of the booth, and looked down at Rory one last time. "Will you be here?" Eva asked. "If I come back?" Rory looked up at her, her face calm, unreadable, and entirely her own. "I’m always here, Ev." Eva lingered for a moment, as if waiting for something else—an apology, a promise, a tear—but Rory simply offered a faint, tired smile. Eva turned and walked out, the door letting in one final slap of wet city air before clicking shut. Rory watched her go through the rain-streaked window until the camel-hair coat was swallowed by the Soho night. From the end of the bar, Silas limped over with a damp rag, wiping down the empty space where Eva had sat. He picked up the empty gin glass, his grey-streaked auburn brows raised in quiet inquiry. "An old friend?" Silas asked softly. Rory looked down at her ale, tracing the wet circle it had left on the dark wood. "A stranger I used to know," she said, and took another drink.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:00:19.176Z" 7/25/2026, 3:00:19 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"Rory said simply [simply]"
1"Silas said softly [softly]"
2"Eva looked around [around]"
3"Rory said smoothly [smoothly]"
4"Eva gestured broadly [broadly]"
5"Silas asked softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.464
leniency0.929
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.214
74.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count3
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"tracing"
count2
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"intensity"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"profound"
count1
9
word"fleeting"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"measured"
2"familiar"
3"scanning"
4"intensity"
5"silence"
6"whisper"
7"flicker"
8"profound"
9"fleeting"
10"electric"
11"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a flicker of doubt"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences80
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1786
ratio0.003
matches
0"is"
1"no, it can't be"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
26.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1215
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas8
London2
Cardiff1
Rory30
Roath1
Park1
Eva30
European1
Taff1
Mayfair1
Soho1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"Taff"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Roath"
4"Park"
5"Soho"
globalScore0.265
windowScore0.333
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like distant ice cracking"
1"as if waiting for something else—an apology, a promise, a tear—but Rory simply offered a faint, tired smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1786
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean33.7
std20.82
cv0.618
sampleLengths
093
166
21
335
43
535
613
742
817
984
1025
119
1245
1346
1421
1512
1613
1729
1815
1923
2048
2121
2241
2316
2457
2535
2663
2737
2833
2962
3021
319
3244
3334
3468
3550
3650
3775
3827
3942
4023
4124
4251
4324
448
4537
4610
4717
4842
4918
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"was pitched"
1"was swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was quietly setting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences109
ratio0.064
matches
0"Rory didn't look up immediately—she had learned in the last three years to let the room settle around a newcomer before taking their measure."
1"\"I had to leave,\" Rory said, her cool demeanor holding firm, though her thumb unconsciously brushed the crescent scar on her wrist—a habit from a childhood fall that had become a silent anchor whenever the ground shifted beneath her."
2"\"And what's left now?\" Eva gestured broadly at Rory—her plain black sweater, her practical shoes, the complete absence of jewelry or pretense."
3"Rory looked at her old friend—at the crisp lines, the expensive armor, the exhaustion lingering deep within the shadows under Eva’s eyes."
4"The Mayfair consultant vanished; for a fleeting moment, the girl who used to cry over ruined watercolors was back in the booth."
5"When Eva finally drained her glass, she checked her phone—a automatic, practiced motion."
6"Eva lingered for a moment, as if waiting for something else—an apology, a promise, a tear—but Rory simply offered a faint, tired smile."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1239
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"cramped, tea-stained kitchen"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.0258272800645682
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.018563357546408393
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean16.39
std10.28
cv0.627
sampleLengths
024
110
229
330
421
524
621
71
810
925
103
1135
123
1310
1419
1523
164
179
184
1914
2010
2130
2230
2325
246
253
2615
2730
2816
2930
306
3115
3212
338
345
3511
3618
3710
385
396
4017
4112
4236
436
4415
4536
465
474
4812
495
47.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3302752293577982
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences71
matches
0"It was a slow Tuesday"
1"It was pitched a half-octave"
2"She gestured toward the empty"
3"She set her bag down"
4"She tucked a strand of"
5"He gave Eva a polite,"
6"He gave the table a"
7"She spoke the word as"
8"She saw the cost of"
9"They sat in silence while"
10"They drank their drinks, caught"
11"She smoothed her hair, checked"
12"He picked up the empty"
13"she said, and took another"
ratio0.197
2.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences71
matches
0"The neon green sign outside"
1"It was a slow Tuesday"
2"Rory sat near the back,"
3"The old man moved with"
4"The front door opened with"
5"Rory didn't look up immediately—she"
6"The voice hit her like"
7"It was pitched a half-octave"
8"Rory looked up."
9"Eva stood at the edge"
10"The name felt heavy on"
11"Eva took a step closer,"
12"She gestured toward the empty"
13"Eva slid into the booth,"
14"She set her bag down"
15"The woman sitting here now"
16"Eva asked, her gaze flicking"
17"Rory said simply"
18"Eva paused, her penciled brows"
19"Rory interrupted, her voice flat,"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory sat near the back, her fingers tracing the condensation on her glass of pale ale, watching Silas favor his left leg as he wiped down the zinc countertop."
1"Eva stood at the edge of the booth, clutching a dripping umbrella and a designer handbag that looked crisp, expensive, and entirely out of place against the dim…"
2"Eva stood up, buttoning her coat, pulling the armor back into place piece by piece."
3"Eva lingered for a moment, as if waiting for something else—an apology, a promise, a tear—but Rory simply offered a faint, tired smile."
67.31% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva took, her eyes scanning Rory’s face with a rapid, hungry intensity"
1"Rory interrupted, her voice flat, cool, and entirely unbothered"
2"Eva said, her tone dropping its bright edge, suddenly cold and sharp"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory interrupted (interrupt)"
1"Eva repeated (repeat)"
2"Eva corrected (correct)"
3"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.143
73.2098%