Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWYXGFDGRQVYCDYP5MKQ5T

Run Details

Duration:
7m 6s
Cost:
$0.012377
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory Carter did not believe in fairytales, but she believed in debt. Eva had pulled her from the wreckage of Evan’s apartment two years prior, had given her the spare key to a life she barely deserved, and when Eva’s last message mentioned standing stones in Richmond Park and a grove that wasn’t on any map, Rory came. Not out of superstition. Out of obligation. The Heartstone Pendant—deep crimson, silver-chained, no larger than her thumbnail—had begun to pulse with a low, insistent warmth three nights ago, a heat that felt like a heartbeat borrowed from somewhere else. She followed it the way a barrister’s daughter followed logic: straight through the gap in the world where logic frayed. The standing stones waited at the edge of the park’s northern wood, ancient oak blackened by centuries and carved with spirals worn down to whispers. Rory rested her palm against one. The bark was dry as bone, yet it seemed to drink the chill from her fingers. She stepped between them. The air changed at once. Inside the Fae Grove—Isolde’s grove, the locals called it in the few stories that survived—wildflowers bloomed in reckless abundance despite the November dark. Foxgloves, bluebells, and something paler, almost silver, twisted through grass that never yellowed. The scent was wrong: honey thickened by rot, sweet enough to make her teeth ache. Rory’s straight black hair stuck to her neck as the temperature climbed, inexplicable and sudden. She pulled her sleeve up to check her watch, and the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—leftover from a childhood fall in Cardiff—caught the moonlight like a pale smile. Midnight, the face read, though the moon sat low and unmoving, a silver coin nailed to the sky. She was alone. She had come alone. “Eva,” she said quietly. Her voice sounded smaller here, swallowed not by distance but by something patient. The Heartstone rested against her collarbone beneath her jacket. Its faint inner glow, usually hidden, now pulsed in slow rhythm with the warmth against her skin. Given to her by an unknown benefactor shortly after she had fled to London, she had worn it like a question she refused to ask aloud. Tonight it burned like an answer she did not want. Rory moved deeper. Her delivery boots—scuffed from a thousand runs for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress—cracked softly on ground that felt less like soil and more like woven root. She kept her hands free, her posture calm, the cool-headed rationality her mother, the Welsh teacher, had instilled in her fighting against the rising certainty that the grove was listening. Her father, Brendan Carter, had taught her to cross-examine reality. She did so now. The flowers bloomed year-round here, yes, but they faced north, away from the moon, as if tracking a light she could not see. The shadows between the trees did not align with the branches that cast them. Then the sound came. Not wind. The grove had no wind that moved leaves in ordinary ways. This was silk tearing slowly, wet and deliberate, followed by a breath drawn through something not quite human. Rory stopped. Her bright blue eyes scanned the tree line. At the edge of her vision, between a silver-barked birch and a knot of wildflowers, something shifted—tall, wrong-angled, there and then not there, like a glitch in the dark. Her heart did not race. She was not Eva’s friend for nothing if she panicked easily. Instead, Rory catalogued: the absence of insects, the stillness of air thick enough to taste, the way her breath came back to her a half-second late, as if echoed by another set of lungs hiding in the dark. She had come for a reason, but the reason was slipping. The note—Eva’s handwriting, urgent, smelling of the lavender Eva always kept—said only: The stones remember. Come alone. Rory should have known better. She had left Evan because she recognized a trap by the way it made her feel small. Now she felt vast instead, exposed, a single point of consciousness in a place that treated consciousness as food. The Heartstone pulsed faster. She turned slowly, her quick mind searching for exits, for patterns, for the out-of-the-box angle that always saved her. The standing stones stood behind her, closer than they should be, their spirals seeming to deepen in the dark. The boundary had tightened. Another sound—footsteps, matching her own rhythm exactly, delayed by the space between heartbeats. She walked faster. The steps followed. She stopped abruptly, her boots grinding on root and stone. Silence. Then, behind her, a whisper: “Rory.” Not Eva’s voice. Her own, but stretched, pulled through water and wood, spoken by lips she had never seen. She turned. The grove had not changed, yet everything was wrong. The wildflowers had turned their faces—not toward the hidden sun, but toward her. Their silver petals trembled without wind. And in the space between the nearest oak and the stone boundary, something stood that was not shadow and not tree, but a silhouette assembled from the wrong parts of both—limbs too long, head tilted at an angle that suggested curiosity older than human. The Heartstone pendant flared crimson against her chest, its warmth spiking into a searing, warning heat. The faint inner glow burned bright enough to illuminate the crescent of her wrist, the black of her hair, the blue of her eyes wide with understanding rather than fear. She was not alone. She had never been alone. The breath on her neck was cold, ancient, and patient. Rory did not scream. She held still, her mind already racing past panic into strategy, searching for the door that did not exist, the lie that would let her leave. The standing stones watched. The flowers listened. And in the pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, time stretched like silk—an hour inside becoming a lifetime outside—while Rory Carter, delivery girl and survivor, finally understood why Eva had begged her to come.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:05:38.093Z" 7/25/2026, 3:05:38 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
85.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1007
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1007
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"silk"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"race"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"chill"
3"pulsed"
4"silk"
5"scanned"
6"race"
7"echoed"
8"footsteps"
9"silence"
10"whisper"
11"trembled"
12"searing"
13"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords991
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount989
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Carter3
Evan2
Eva7
Richmond1
Park1
Rory10
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Fae2
Grove1
Isolde1
November1
Cardiff1
London1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Welsh1
Brendan1
Earth1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Heartstone"
5"Pendant"
6"Isolde"
7"Yu-Fei"
8"Cheung"
9"Empress"
10"Brendan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
globalScore0.994
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a heartbeat borrowed from som"
1"as if tracking a light she could not see"
2"not quite human"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords4.036
wordCount991
matches
0"not by distance but by something patient"
1"not toward the hidden sun, but toward her"
2"not shadow and not tree, but a silhouette assembled from the wrong parts of both"
3"not tree, but a silhouette assembled from the wrong parts of both"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean39.64
std34.77
cv0.877
sampleLengths
0117
151
25
3114
47
517
662
7109
84
970
1054
1128
1241
134
1442
1529
161
176
1819
192
2072
2146
229
2347
2435
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was listening"
1"was slipping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences75
ratio0.133
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant—deep crimson, silver-chained, no larger than her thumbnail—had begun to pulse with a low, insistent warmth three nights ago, a heat that felt like a heartbeat borrowed from somewhere else."
1"Inside the Fae Grove—Isolde’s grove, the locals called it in the few stories that survived—wildflowers bloomed in reckless abundance despite the November dark."
2"She pulled her sleeve up to check her watch, and the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—leftover from a childhood fall in Cardiff—caught the moonlight like a pale smile."
3"Her delivery boots—scuffed from a thousand runs for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress—cracked softly on ground that felt less like soil and more like woven root."
4"At the edge of her vision, between a silver-barked birch and a knot of wildflowers, something shifted—tall, wrong-angled, there and then not there, like a glitch in the dark."
5"The note—Eva’s handwriting, urgent, smelling of the lavender Eva always kept—said only: The stones remember."
6"Another sound—footsteps, matching her own rhythm exactly, delayed by the space between heartbeats."
7"The wildflowers had turned their faces—not toward the hidden sun, but toward her."
8"And in the space between the nearest oak and the stone boundary, something stood that was not shadow and not tree, but a silhouette assembled from the wrong parts of both—limbs too long, head tilted at an angle that suggested curiosity older than human."
9"And in the pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, time stretched like silk—an hour inside becoming a lifetime outside—while Rory Carter, delivery girl and survivor, finally understood why Eva had begged her to come."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1014
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03944773175542406
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011834319526627219
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean13.21
std10.63
cv0.804
sampleLengths
012
146
24
33
432
520
625
76
816
94
105
1123
1213
1315
1415
1530
1618
173
184
194
2013
219
2217
2326
2410
253
2625
2730
2810
294
3023
3114
324
332
3411
3518
362
378
3829
395
4011
4138
4211
4315
442
455
4617
4719
484
4919
41.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.30666666666666664
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then the sound came."
1"Instead, Rory catalogued: the absence"
2"Then, behind her, a whisper:"
ratio0.043
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences70
matches
0"She followed it the way"
1"She stepped between them."
2"She pulled her sleeve up"
3"She was alone."
4"She had come alone."
5"she said quietly"
6"Her voice sounded smaller here,"
7"Its faint inner glow, usually"
8"Her delivery boots—scuffed from a"
9"She kept her hands free,"
10"Her father, Brendan Carter, had"
11"She did so now."
12"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
13"Her heart did not race."
14"She was not Eva’s friend"
15"She had come for a"
16"She had left Evan because"
17"She turned slowly, her quick"
18"She walked faster."
19"She stopped abruptly, her boots"
ratio0.357
45.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences70
matches
0"Rory Carter did not believe"
1"Eva had pulled her from"
2"The Heartstone Pendant—deep crimson, silver-chained,"
3"She followed it the way"
4"The standing stones waited at"
5"Rory rested her palm against"
6"The bark was dry as"
7"She stepped between them."
8"The air changed at once."
9"Foxgloves, bluebells, and something paler,"
10"The scent was wrong: honey"
11"Rory’s straight black hair stuck"
12"She pulled her sleeve up"
13"Midnight, the face read, though"
14"She was alone."
15"She had come alone."
16"she said quietly"
17"Her voice sounded smaller here,"
18"The Heartstone rested against her"
19"Its faint inner glow, usually"
ratio0.829
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Now she felt vast instead,"
ratio0.014
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Eva had pulled her from the wreckage of Evan’s apartment two years prior, had given her the spare key to a life she barely deserved, and when Eva’s last message…"
1"The Heartstone Pendant—deep crimson, silver-chained, no larger than her thumbnail—had begun to pulse with a low, insistent warmth three nights ago, a heat that …"
2"Inside the Fae Grove—Isolde’s grove, the locals called it in the few stories that survived—wildflowers bloomed in reckless abundance despite the November dark."
3"Her delivery boots—scuffed from a thousand runs for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress—cracked softly on ground that felt less like soil and more like woven root."
4"The flowers bloomed year-round here, yes, but they faced north, away from the moon, as if tracking a light she could not see."
5"Instead, Rory catalogued: the absence of insects, the stillness of air thick enough to taste, the way her breath came back to her a half-second late, as if echo…"
6"Now she felt vast instead, exposed, a single point of consciousness in a place that treated consciousness as food."
7"The Heartstone pendant flared crimson against her chest, its warmth spiking into a searing, warning heat."
8"She held still, her mind already racing past panic into strategy, searching for the door that did not exist, the lie that would let her leave."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
73.6984%