| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |
| 85.10% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1007 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1007 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "race" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "searing" | | 13 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 991 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.44% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 989 | | uniqueNames | 21 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 3 | | Evan | 2 | | Eva | 7 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | November | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Earth | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Heartstone" | | 5 | "Pendant" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Yu-Fei" | | 8 | "Cheung" | | 9 | "Empress" | | 10 | "Brendan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.994 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a heartbeat borrowed from som" | | 1 | "as if tracking a light she could not see" | | 2 | "not quite human" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 4.036 | | wordCount | 991 | | matches | | 0 | "not by distance but by something patient" | | 1 | "not toward the hidden sun, but toward her" | | 2 | "not shadow and not tree, but a silhouette assembled from the wrong parts of both" | | 3 | "not tree, but a silhouette assembled from the wrong parts of both" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 39.64 | | std | 34.77 | | cv | 0.877 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 117 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 114 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 109 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 42 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 72 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "was listening" | | 1 | "was slipping" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.133 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant—deep crimson, silver-chained, no larger than her thumbnail—had begun to pulse with a low, insistent warmth three nights ago, a heat that felt like a heartbeat borrowed from somewhere else." | | 1 | "Inside the Fae Grove—Isolde’s grove, the locals called it in the few stories that survived—wildflowers bloomed in reckless abundance despite the November dark." | | 2 | "She pulled her sleeve up to check her watch, and the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—leftover from a childhood fall in Cardiff—caught the moonlight like a pale smile." | | 3 | "Her delivery boots—scuffed from a thousand runs for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress—cracked softly on ground that felt less like soil and more like woven root." | | 4 | "At the edge of her vision, between a silver-barked birch and a knot of wildflowers, something shifted—tall, wrong-angled, there and then not there, like a glitch in the dark." | | 5 | "The note—Eva’s handwriting, urgent, smelling of the lavender Eva always kept—said only: The stones remember." | | 6 | "Another sound—footsteps, matching her own rhythm exactly, delayed by the space between heartbeats." | | 7 | "The wildflowers had turned their faces—not toward the hidden sun, but toward her." | | 8 | "And in the space between the nearest oak and the stone boundary, something stood that was not shadow and not tree, but a silhouette assembled from the wrong parts of both—limbs too long, head tilted at an angle that suggested curiosity older than human." | | 9 | "And in the pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, time stretched like silk—an hour inside becoming a lifetime outside—while Rory Carter, delivery girl and survivor, finally understood why Eva had begged her to come." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1014 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.03944773175542406 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011834319526627219 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 13.21 | | std | 10.63 | | cv | 0.804 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 41.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.30666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the sound came." | | 1 | "Instead, Rory catalogued: the absence" | | 2 | "Then, behind her, a whisper:" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 77.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She followed it the way" | | 1 | "She stepped between them." | | 2 | "She pulled her sleeve up" | | 3 | "She was alone." | | 4 | "She had come alone." | | 5 | "she said quietly" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded smaller here," | | 7 | "Its faint inner glow, usually" | | 8 | "Her delivery boots—scuffed from a" | | 9 | "She kept her hands free," | | 10 | "Her father, Brendan Carter, had" | | 11 | "She did so now." | | 12 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 13 | "Her heart did not race." | | 14 | "She was not Eva’s friend" | | 15 | "She had come for a" | | 16 | "She had left Evan because" | | 17 | "She turned slowly, her quick" | | 18 | "She walked faster." | | 19 | "She stopped abruptly, her boots" |
| | ratio | 0.357 | |
| 45.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory Carter did not believe" | | 1 | "Eva had pulled her from" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant—deep crimson, silver-chained," | | 3 | "She followed it the way" | | 4 | "The standing stones waited at" | | 5 | "Rory rested her palm against" | | 6 | "The bark was dry as" | | 7 | "She stepped between them." | | 8 | "The air changed at once." | | 9 | "Foxgloves, bluebells, and something paler," | | 10 | "The scent was wrong: honey" | | 11 | "Rory’s straight black hair stuck" | | 12 | "She pulled her sleeve up" | | 13 | "Midnight, the face read, though" | | 14 | "She was alone." | | 15 | "She had come alone." | | 16 | "she said quietly" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded smaller here," | | 18 | "The Heartstone rested against her" | | 19 | "Its faint inner glow, usually" |
| | ratio | 0.829 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she felt vast instead," |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had pulled her from the wreckage of Evan’s apartment two years prior, had given her the spare key to a life she barely deserved, and when Eva’s last message…" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant—deep crimson, silver-chained, no larger than her thumbnail—had begun to pulse with a low, insistent warmth three nights ago, a heat that …" | | 2 | "Inside the Fae Grove—Isolde’s grove, the locals called it in the few stories that survived—wildflowers bloomed in reckless abundance despite the November dark." | | 3 | "Her delivery boots—scuffed from a thousand runs for Yu-Fei Cheung’s Golden Empress—cracked softly on ground that felt less like soil and more like woven root." | | 4 | "The flowers bloomed year-round here, yes, but they faced north, away from the moon, as if tracking a light she could not see." | | 5 | "Instead, Rory catalogued: the absence of insects, the stillness of air thick enough to taste, the way her breath came back to her a half-second late, as if echo…" | | 6 | "Now she felt vast instead, exposed, a single point of consciousness in a place that treated consciousness as food." | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant flared crimson against her chest, its warmth spiking into a searing, warning heat." | | 8 | "She held still, her mind already racing past panic into strategy, searching for the door that did not exist, the lie that would let her leave." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |