| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1619 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1619 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "chilled" | | 6 | "depths" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "pounding" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "scanning" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "tinged" | | 16 | "velvet" | | 17 | "pristine" | | 18 | "echoed" | | 19 | "weight" | | 20 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.56% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 142 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "started to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 54 | | totalWords | 1609 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "It’s just a pocket," | | 1 | "An anomaly. A place where thin boundaries overlap." | | 2 | "Scratch. Drag. Scratch." | | 3 | "Restraint," | | 4 | "Stay calm. Think it through." | | 5 | "Time moves differently," | | 6 | "You spend ten minutes in a grove, you might come out to find an hour’s gone. Or three days. Or nothing at all." | | 7 | "Tick. Tick. Tick." | | 8 | "Click-clack. Click-clack." | | 9 | "thump" | | 10 | "Malphora..." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1605 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | River | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Rory | 15 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | November | 1 | | London | 3 | | Silas | 1 | | Except | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Earth | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Earth" |
| | places | | 0 | "River" | | 1 | "Thames" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed subtly different now" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1609 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 30.36 | | std | 22.23 | | cv | 0.732 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 46 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 71 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 64 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 44 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 75 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 47 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 37 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 90.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "were gnarled" | | 2 | "being dragged" | | 3 | "was tilted" | | 4 | "were gone" | | 5 | "been made" |
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| 16.27% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 254 | | matches | | 0 | "was warning" | | 1 | "was like walking" | | 2 | "wasn't coming" | | 3 | "was coming" | | 4 | "was hanging" | | 5 | "was watching" | | 6 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "London was supposed to be hummed over by the low, distant rumble of late-night traffic—the red double-deckers rolling down A307, the occasional muffled roar of an engine—but the moment her boots cleared the grass, the city soundscape vanished." | | 1 | "It didn't fade; it was cut, sharp and clean, like a severed wire." | | 2 | "Inside its dark depths, a faint red light throbbed—a slow, rhythmic pulse that matched the frantic pounding of her own blood." | | 3 | "It wasn't a shape, exactly—more like a distortion in the air, a shadow that stretched half a second after the moonlit branch above it had stopped moving." | | 4 | "Beneath the cloying scent of lilies came something else—a sharp, metallic tang, like copper left out in the rain, mixed with the damp chill of basement earth." | | 5 | "The tree she had entered between—the twin oak sentinels—seemed subtly different now." | | 6 | "Panic was a luxury Evan had taught her never to afford; scream, and you lose your breath, and once you lose your breath, you lose your footing." | | 7 | "A high, thin whistle—a sound that was almost a voice, almost a name—echoed through the trees, vibrating through the bones of her skull." | | 8 | "It was a footprint, deep and narrow, pointing out from the gap between the trees—as if whatever had been standing behind her had taken one step forward, right onto Earth, before letting her go." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1625 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "smooth, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "empty, grey-tinged moss." | | 2 | "single, long-fingered track." |
| | adverbCount | 62 | | adverbRatio | 0.038153846153846156 | | lyAdverbCount | 24 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014769230769230769 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 11.33 | | std | 8.72 | | cv | 0.77 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 52.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.3732394366197183 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the grey moss." | | 1 | "Just the unmoving stems of" | | 2 | "Only the Heartstone pulsed again," | | 3 | "Then she smelled it." | | 4 | "Instead, her intelligence flared into" | | 5 | "Slowly, she looked back over" | | 6 | "Just a quiet stretch of" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 65.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "It had the thick, rotting" | | 1 | "She pulled the collar of" | | 2 | "It was half-past eleven." | | 3 | "It didn't fade; it was" | | 4 | "It was a nervous habit," | | 5 | "She stepped between two massive," | | 6 | "Their trunks were gnarled, twisted" | | 7 | "*It’s just a pocket,* she" | | 8 | "She took another step into" | | 9 | "She held her breath, listening." | | 10 | "She froze, her eyes scanning" | | 11 | "Her bright blue eyes, sharp" | | 12 | "Her voice sounded small, thin," | | 13 | "It didn't echo." | | 14 | "It simply fell to the" | | 15 | "It was warning her." | | 16 | "She swung her gaze to" | | 17 | "It wasn't a shape, exactly—more" | | 18 | "She turned her head fully," | | 19 | "She took three slow paces" |
| | ratio | 0.386 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "The wind off the River" | | 1 | "It had the thick, rotting" | | 2 | "She pulled the collar of" | | 3 | "It was half-past eleven." | | 4 | "London was supposed to be" | | 5 | "It didn't fade; it was" | | 6 | "The silence that replaced it" | | 7 | "Rory reached instinctively for her" | | 8 | "It was a nervous habit," | | 9 | "Cardiff felt a lifetime away." | | 10 | "Evan felt a lifetime away." | | 11 | "She stepped between two massive," | | 12 | "Their trunks were gnarled, twisted" | | 13 | "The moss clinging to their" | | 14 | "This was the place." | | 15 | "The Fae Grove." | | 16 | "Rory reached into her collar" | | 17 | "The deep crimson gemstone, no" | | 18 | "*It’s just a pocket,* she" | | 19 | "A place where thin boundaries" |
| | ratio | 0.709 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 28.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "It had the thick, rotting perfume of overripe lilies left in a warm parlor, a cloying heaviness that caught in the back of Rory’s throat and stayed there." | | 1 | "Their trunks were gnarled, twisted into unnatural, agonizing curves that looked less like trees and more like figures reaching for something they would never to…" | | 2 | "Inside its dark depths, a faint red light throbbed—a slow, rhythmic pulse that matched the frantic pounding of her own blood." | | 3 | "It wasn't a shape, exactly—more like a distortion in the air, a shadow that stretched half a second after the moonlit branch above it had stopped moving." | | 4 | "It moved with too much weight, bowing the thick, ancient branches downward one by one, releasing them with a dull *thump* that rattled the soil beneath her feet…" | | 5 | "Unblinking, unmoving, set too far apart on a head that was tilted at a sharp, broken angle." | | 6 | "She knew, with a sudden and absolute certainty that sank into her marrow, that if she turned her head to face whatever was standing an inch behind her heel, the…" | | 7 | "And its arms ended in long, slender fingers that were slowly, deliberately reaching down toward her shoulders." | | 8 | "A high, thin whistle—a sound that was almost a voice, almost a name—echoed through the trees, vibrating through the bones of her skull." | | 9 | "Rory hit the cold, damp grass of Richmond Park hard, rolling onto her side, her lungs gasping for air that felt thin and cold and blessedly real." | | 10 | "It was a footprint, deep and narrow, pointing out from the gap between the trees—as if whatever had been standing behind her had taken one step forward, right o…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |