| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1409 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1409 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "pounding" | | 12 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 47 | | totalWords | 1400 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Leave," | | 1 | "There is nothing here for you tonight." | | 2 | "An hour inside can be minutes or days outside. Or a straight line can become an endless loop." | | 3 | "Near a portal," | | 4 | "It pulses near a portal." | | 5 | "Don't run. If you run, you trip. If you trip, you die." | | 6 | "Tick-tick-tick-tick." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1387 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | November | 1 | | Brendan | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Wales | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "November" | | 1 | "Brendan" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Grove" | | 6 | "Wales" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.14% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.429 | | wordCount | 1400 | | matches | | 0 | "not earth, not stone, but something" | | 1 | "not stone, but something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 30.43 | | std | 18.58 | | cv | 0.611 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 90 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 40 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 45 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 58 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 42 |
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| 92.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was draped" | | 2 | "been, stretched" | | 3 | "was tilted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 228 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't pulsing" | | 1 | "was like stepping" | | 2 | "wasn't looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "The mist in Richmond Park didn't rise from the grass; it leaked from the soil like cold breath." | | 1 | "She knew the path—or she thought she did." | | 2 | "The distant thrum of London traffic—the faint, comforting whine of the A3—vanished instantly." | | 3 | "She let her hand drop from her chest, her fingers brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a reflex born of panic, a habit from a life she’d left behind in Wales." | | 4 | "The standing stones—massive, petrified trunks of oak that had turned to stone over centuries—ringed the perimeter like decaying teeth." | | 5 | "The blooms didn't crush; they bent effortlessly, springing back into place the moment her weight lifted, unblemished and unnaturally stiff." | | 6 | "It didn't burn, but it throbbed—one, two, three steady beats." | | 7 | "It didn't walk or crawl; it simply stretched, extending along the ground like ink spilled across parchment, moving against the light of her pendant." | | 8 | "It wasn't an earthquake; it was a rhythmic, tiny ticking, like a hundred small fingernails tapping on dry wood." | | 9 | "Not blooming, not closing—vibrating in place." | | 10 | "Her boot struck something soft and dense—not earth, not stone, but something that yielded with a dull, wet sound like a waterlogged sponge." | | 11 | "\"You're in my way,\" she said, her voice dropping into a low, deadly register—the quiet tone she used when she was entirely out of options and refused to let the fear show." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1402 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cross-referencing local lore," | | 1 | "same cool, tactical mind" | | 2 | "heavy, heat-syncopated rhythm" | | 3 | "revealing faint, dark veins" |
| | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.028530670470756064 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012838801711840228 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 12.5 | | std | 7.72 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 40.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.32142857142857145 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 63.49% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Just at the edge of" | | 1 | "Then, the damp ground near" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 60.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her watch." | | 1 | "She knew the path—or she" | | 2 | "She’d spent three days tracing" | | 3 | "Her father, Brendan, would have" | | 4 | "It was like stepping into" | | 5 | "She let her hand drop" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 7 | "She took three paces into" | | 8 | "She came here for answers" | | 9 | "It was too quiet." | | 10 | "She turned a slow circle," | | 11 | "They looked taller than they" | | 12 | "It was a wet, dragging" | | 13 | "It came from behind the" | | 14 | "She backed up a step," | | 15 | "It was the same cool," | | 16 | "She turned toward the gap" | | 17 | "It didn't burn, but it" | | 18 | "*It pulses near a portal.*" | | 19 | "It didn't walk or crawl;" |
| | ratio | 0.4 | |
| 50.48% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "The mist in Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory kept her hand flat" | | 2 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 3 | "She checked her watch." | | 4 | "The digital face read 9:14" | | 5 | "Rory swallowed down the sour" | | 6 | "She knew the path—or she" | | 7 | "She’d spent three days tracing" | | 8 | "Her father, Brendan, would have" | | 9 | "The air shifted as she" | | 10 | "It was like stepping into" | | 11 | "The distant thrum of London" | | 12 | "The Fae Grove opened before" | | 13 | "Flowers bloomed in the gloom." | | 14 | "Bluebells, foxgloves, and pale anemones" | | 15 | "She let her hand drop" | | 16 | "Her voice sounded flat, swallowed" | | 17 | "She took three paces into" | | 18 | "The grass gave under her" | | 19 | "She came here for answers" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in winter, there were" | | 1 | "If you run, you trip." | | 2 | "If you trip, you die.*" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones—massive, petrified trunks of oak that had turned to stone over centuries—ringed the perimeter like decaying teeth." | | 1 | "It was the same cool, tactical mind that had saved her from Evan, the part of her that evaluated threats and mapped exits before taking a seat in a room." | | 2 | "They were long, translucent threads, fine as spun glass, reaching upward toward her boots, sniffing the cold air like blind tendrils." | | 3 | "Her boot struck something soft and dense—not earth, not stone, but something that yielded with a dull, wet sound like a waterlogged sponge." | | 4 | "It was the sound of two dry stones rubbing together, forming syllables that made her teeth ache." | | 5 | "The pendant throbbed violently now, a heavy, heat-syncopated rhythm that matched the frantic pounding of her own heart." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she asked, her voice tight, authoritative" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |