Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCYJ2CV650DHXKKQ9EWXDH9

Run Details

Duration:
16.0s
Cost:
$0.016675
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above the door hummed with a low, wet buzz, bleeding emerald light across the greasy Soho cobblestones. Rory pushed the heavy oak door open and stepped inside, letting the ambient roar of a rainy Tuesday night sweep over her. The Raven’s Nest smelled off tonight—less like the usual stale gin and old floorboards, and more like damp wool and ozone from the storm outside. Behind the long mahogany counter, Silas moved with his usual measured, heavy rhythm. His left leg hitched slightly on the turn between the draft taps and the glass washer, a subtle hitch that only someone who had watched him work for months would notice. His grey-streaked auburn beard was trimmed to precise, sharp edges, catching the amber glow of the Edison bulbs overhead. He caught her eye, gave a microscopic nod, and turned back to polish a highball glass with a microfiber cloth, the silver signet ring on his right hand glinting against the dark wood. Rory shook the rain from her hair, brushing straight black strands away from her face, and made her way toward the corner booth. Her wrist twitched under her sleeve—a habit whenever the weather turned sharp—and her thumb automatically traced the tiny, crescent-shaped scar on her left arm. She hadn't intended to stay. She had a morning shift at Golden Empress, and Yu-Fei was relentless about punctuality, but the flat upstairs was quiet in a way that made her teeth ache. "Evening, Carter," a voice said from the shadowy end of the bar. It wasn't Silas. The voice was smooth, stripped of the soft, lilting Cardiff vowels that usually haunted Rory’s memories, polished into something flat and expensive. Rory froze, her hand hovering over the back of a leather stool. She turned slowly. Sitting on the high-backed stool near the ancient brass cash register was a man in a tailored charcoal overcoat. His hair was cropped close, sharp at the temples, revealing the clean line of a jaw she used to know intimately. But the posture was wrong. The Evan she remembered had been slouched, soft around the edges, reeking of cheap lager and bitter resentment, perpetually coiled to lash out at whatever small indignity the world had dealt him that afternoon. This man sat like a monument. His fingernails were clean. His hands, rested flat on the polished mahogany, were still—no nervous drumming, no trembling knuckles. "Rory," he said again. "Evan." The name felt heavy, like a mouthful of silt. Silas didn't look up from his glass, but the rhythm of his cloth slowed. The old spymaster’s hazel eyes flicked toward them in the mirror behind the whiskey bottles, registering every inch of space between them. "I didn't think you drank in places like this," Rory said. She didn't sit down. She kept her feet planted, her height—five-foot-six—feeling entirely inadequate against the height of the room, though she knew she could run if she needed to. "I don't, usually," Evan said. He looked at his drink—a single measure of clear liquor over a square cube of ice. "I had a meeting in Mayfair. My driver got turned around by the roadworks on Regent Street. I saw the green light and thought I'd wait out the downpour." He looked at her then, bright, cold blue eyes tracking up from her scuffed boots to her shoulder-length hair. "You look different." "I look older," she said flatly. "It's been four years." "You look..." He paused, searching for a word that wouldn't betray him. "Sharper. Less afraid." A bitter spark lit in her chest, but she smothered it. Cool-headed. That was what Silas had spent two years teaching her to be. Keep the pulse down. Keep the voice in the middle register. "Fear was expensive. I stopped paying for it." Evan winced, a tiny, fractured movement around his eyes—the only sign that the man who used to scream at her in a cramped kitchen in Roath was still somewhere beneath the expensive cloth. "I deserve that," he murmured. "You don't get to hand out marks for my answers, Evan. Not anymore." He took a slow sip of his drink. "Your father told me you went into the law. He said you were at Cardiff." "I left." "I know. He said you just vanished one weekend. Left the flat, left the course. He thought..." Evan closed his eyes for a fraction of a second. "He thought I'd done something to you. He came to my office. He threatened to go to the Law Society." Rory felt a cold phantom pain in her left wrist. "Brendan always did love a grand gesture. Pity he never managed one when it actually mattered." "He was worried, Rory. We all were." "You weren't worried," she said, her voice dropping into a register so low it barely carried over the low blues music seeping from the speakers. "You were furious because you lost your favorite target." Evan didn't yell. A year ago, five years ago, he would have slammed his glass down. He would have leaned into her space until she could smell the sour heat of his breath. Instead, he just took a breath, letting his shoulders fall an inch. The stillness was far more unnerving than the old rage. It was the quiet of someone who had hired people to handle his rages for him. "I went to therapy, Rory," he said quietly. "After you left. My father took me off the partnership track until I got help. I did two years in London, actually. A private clinic in Hampstead." "How nice for you," she said, her bright blue eyes locking onto his without a flicker of softness. "A clean bill of health bought and paid for." "I'm not asking for forgiveness," he said, though the slight tremble in his lower lip betrayed the lie. "I know what I was. I was... sick. I was vile to you. I think about the night in the hallway—" "Don't." The word hit the air like a dropped pane of glass. Silas set the highball glass down on the wooden rack with a sharp *clack*. He reached for a bottle of dark amber rum, his hazel eyes fixing entirely on Evan's profile. He didn't speak, but the threat was an atmosphere, heavy and unmistakable. Evan felt it. He shifted on his stool, his expensive coat rustling. He looked at Silas, then back at Rory, noticing for the first time the way she stood—balanced on the balls of her feet, her elbows loose, her eyes constantly calculating the distance between him, the door, and the heavy brass candlestick on the end of the bar. "You're different," Evan repeated, a strange, hollow wonder in his voice. "The Rory I knew would have been crying by now. Or apologizing for leaving." "The Rory you knew didn't exist," she said. "She was just the shape I made myself into so I wouldn't get hit." Evan closed his eyes again. When he opened them, the smooth mask was back, but the edge was gone. He looked smaller now, despite the dark gray wool and the polished leather shoes. He reached into his breast pocket, pulled out a leather card case, and set a pristine white rectangle on the mahogany surface between them. "I live in Kensington now," he said. "If you ever... if you ever need anything. A lawyer. Money. A way back into the university. I have contacts in the admissions department at UCL." Rory looked down at the card. The embossed silver lettering caught the green glare from the window outside. *Evan Vaughan. Senior Associate.* She picked it up. For a second, Evan’s eyes brightened with a terrible, desperate hope—the hope that time could be smoothed over, that a bad decade could be resolved with an offer of help from a man who had made himself respectable. Rory dropped the card into the half-empty ash bucket Silas used for clearing the outdoor tables. "I deliver spring rolls for a woman who would cut my head off if I was five minutes late," Rory said, her voice smooth and entirely devoid of malice. "I live in a room upstairs where the radiator pipes knock all night. And I have never, not for a single second, slept as well as I do now." Evan stared at the paper soaking up the gray sludge at the bottom of the bucket. The silence stretched between them, long and terrible, filled only by the rain drumming against the glass and the hum of the green neon outside. "I see," he whispered. "No, you don't," she said, turning her back on him completely. She walked up to the bar and leaned against the mahogany, catching Silas' eye. "G&T, Si. Make it a double." "Coming up, Carter," Silas said, his voice a low rumble. He reached for a bottle on the top shelf, his silver signet ring catching the light as he poured, never once looking at the man at the end of the counter. Behind her, Rory heard the soft rustle of a heavy coat being pulled on, the scrape of leather soles against the floorboards, and the heavy chime of the front door opening into the rainy night. Cold air rushed in for a moment, smelling of exhaust and wet asphalt, and then the door clicked shut, leaving only the warmth, the quiet, and the slow, steady rhythm of Silas pouring her drink.
created_at"2026-07-25T15:33:34.251Z" 7/25/2026, 3:33:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
69.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said again [again]"
1"she said flatly [flatly]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.561
leniency1
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.13
90.50% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1579
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1579
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"pristine"
count1
9
word"resolved"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"glinting"
2"traced"
3"flicked"
4"pulse"
5"fractured"
6"flicker"
7"calculating"
8"pristine"
9"resolved"
10"silence"
11"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1568
ratio0.003
matches
0"clack"
1"Evan Vaughan. Senior Associate."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1192
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Evan"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Tuesday1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas9
Edison1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Cardiff1
Rory11
Evan12
Roath1
Vaughan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Edison"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Vaughan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"Cardiff"
3"Roath"
globalScore0.997
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1568
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean34.84
std21.86
cv0.627
sampleLengths
068
196
247
333
412
525
615
779
825
94
1010
1136
1240
1372
1410
1515
1643
1738
1813
1923
202
2147
2226
237
2434
2571
2635
2727
2839
2912
3043
3159
3225
3322
3457
3533
3622
3742
3816
3958
4041
414
4231
4341
4470
84.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences86
matches
0"was trimmed"
1"was cropped"
2"been slouched"
3"was gone"
4"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs185
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences105
ratio0.076
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest smelled off tonight—less like the usual stale gin and old floorboards, and more like damp wool and ozone from the storm outside."
1"Her wrist twitched under her sleeve—a habit whenever the weather turned sharp—and her thumb automatically traced the tiny, crescent-shaped scar on her left arm."
2"His hands, rested flat on the polished mahogany, were still—no nervous drumming, no trembling knuckles."
3"She kept her feet planted, her height—five-foot-six—feeling entirely inadequate against the height of the room, though she knew she could run if she needed to."
4"He looked at his drink—a single measure of clear liquor over a square cube of ice."
5"Evan winced, a tiny, fractured movement around his eyes—the only sign that the man who used to scream at her in a cramped kitchen in Roath was still somewhere beneath the expensive cloth."
6"He looked at Silas, then back at Rory, noticing for the first time the way she stood—balanced on the balls of her feet, her elbows loose, her eyes constantly calculating the distance between him, the door, and the heavy brass candlestick on the end of the bar."
7"For a second, Evan’s eyes brightened with a terrible, desperate hope—the hope that time could be smoothed over, that a bad decade could be resolved with an offer of help from a man who had made himself respectable."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1107
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"usual measured, heavy rhythm."
1"tiny, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03342366757000903
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.015356820234869015
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean14.93
std10.18
cv0.682
sampleLengths
021
122
225
313
431
519
633
723
824
95
1028
1112
123
1322
1412
153
1619
1721
185
1934
206
214
2215
234
2410
2514
2622
2711
284
2925
305
3116
3248
333
346
354
3612
373
3811
391
4012
414
427
438
4433
455
4613
478
4815
492
44.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.34285714285714286
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners36
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Instead, he just took a"
ratio0.013
38.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences77
matches
0"His left leg hitched slightly"
1"His grey-streaked auburn beard was"
2"He caught her eye, gave"
3"Her wrist twitched under her"
4"She hadn't intended to stay."
5"She had a morning shift"
6"It wasn't Silas."
7"She turned slowly."
8"His hair was cropped close,"
9"His fingernails were clean."
10"His hands, rested flat on"
11"he said again"
12"She didn't sit down."
13"She kept her feet planted,"
14"He looked at his drink—a"
15"He looked at her then,"
16"she said flatly"
17"He paused, searching for a"
18"He took a slow sip"
19"she said, her voice dropping"
ratio0.455
24.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences77
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory pushed the heavy oak"
2"The Raven’s Nest smelled off"
3"His left leg hitched slightly"
4"His grey-streaked auburn beard was"
5"He caught her eye, gave"
6"Rory shook the rain from"
7"Her wrist twitched under her"
8"She hadn't intended to stay."
9"She had a morning shift"
10"a voice said from the"
11"It wasn't Silas."
12"The voice was smooth, stripped"
13"Rory froze, her hand hovering"
14"She turned slowly."
15"His hair was cropped close,"
16"The Evan she remembered had"
17"This man sat like a"
18"His fingernails were clean."
19"His hands, rested flat on"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She had a morning shift at Golden Empress, and Yu-Fei was relentless about punctuality, but the flat upstairs was quiet in a way that made her teeth ache."
1"Evan winced, a tiny, fractured movement around his eyes—the only sign that the man who used to scream at her in a cramped kitchen in Roath was still somewhere b…"
2"For a second, Evan’s eyes brightened with a terrible, desperate hope—the hope that time could be smoothed over, that a bad decade could be resolved with an offe…"
81.52% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory said, her voice smooth and entirely devoid of malice"
1"Silas said, his voice a low rumble"
76.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Evan repeated (repeat)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.829
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.146
78.8424%