Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD4RY2B8NQVKNATMZKF92VX

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Duration:
25.8s
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$0.013915
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Meta

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green buzzed before she heard it. Rory was coming down the back stairs from her flat with a plastic container of leftover rice from Golden Empress in one hand and her keys in the other, and the light from the Nest's sign bled through the narrow stairwell window in a flat, chemical wash. Green neon. It painted the damp brick and the railing in short pulses. She'd lived above Silas' bar for eight months now and she still hadn't gotten used to how it made everything look a little sick at night. The bar was in that in-between hour. Too late for the after-work crowd, too early for the midnight regulars. When she pushed through the service door by the kitchen, the place was dim the way it always was, low warm bulbs catching the edges of the old maps and the black-and-white photographs that covered every inch of wall. It smelled like lemon polish and spilt bitter. Silas was behind the bar. He moved with that slight hitch in his left leg, the one that got worse when it rained, stacking clean glasses with his big hands. His hair had gone more grey than auburn in the last year, pulled back, his beard trimmed close. The silver signet on his right hand caught the light whenever he turned a glass. He looked up when she came in. "You didn't have to come down," he said. "Yu-Fei gave me rice," she said, lifting the container. "It's going to grow legs if I leave it in the flat." He smiled a little. "Put it behind the bar. Save you from yourself." She was halfway across the room when she saw there was someone else at the bar. One person, sitting two stools down from where Silas kept his own stool for nights he wanted to sit and watch the place instead of working it. A woman in a charcoal wool coat even though it was warm in here, hair cut blunt at the jaw. The woman turned. Rory stopped. It was such a specific kind of stop, her body did it before her brain could authorize it. One foot in front of the other, keys biting into her palm. The woman's face opened in exactly the same delayed way, mouth parting, eyes widening. "Rory?" It was Eva. Not the Eva from Cardiff, who had worn the same battered Converse for three years straight and kept her hair dyed with cheap manic-panic that bled onto Rory's pillowcases. Eva Parry, who'd sat with her on the cold floor of her dorm bathroom at Cardiff Uni while Rory tried to figure out how to say out loud what Evan had done, who'd finally said, I have a cousin with a couch in London, just come, will you. This Eva wore a tailored coat. Her dark blonde hair was cut sharp and expensive. Her makeup was done. She looked - Rory fumbled for the word and disliked it as soon as she found it - finished. Put together in a way that made Rory suddenly, acutely aware of her own straight black hair pulled back messily at her shoulders, the faded delivery t-shirt for Golden Empress, the rice container sweating in her hand. "Holy shit," Eva said, and she actually laughed, a bright, incredulous sound that cracked in the middle. She slid off the barstool. "Aurora Carter. No fucking way." Rory set the rice down on the nearest table too carefully. "Ev." They collided halfway. Eva hugged hard and smelled like something clean and sandalwood that didn't belong to the girl Rory remembered, who'd smelled like roll-ups and cheap vanilla body spray. Over Eva's shoulder, Rory could see Silas watching with his quiet, assessing hazel eyes, saying nothing. He was good at that. "You live here now?" Eva pulled back and held her at arm's length. Her gaze snagged and held for a second too long on Rory's face, then dropped, flickered away. "I mean, obviously, you're here - Silas said someone lived upstairs but - " "You know Silas?" Rory asked. "Just tonight. I had a client dinner that went long and I was walking. I saw the sign." Eva gestured vaguely toward the street, toward the green neon. "I didn't know you still - I mean. That you were here." Time did a funny thing. Rory could feel it gathering in the space between them, thickening the air. She felt twenty again, then twelve, then twenty-five again and too old for all of it. "I've been here almost a year," she said. "In Soho. Above the bar. I work days." She touched automatically at her left wrist, thumb finding the small ridge of the crescent scar there. "How long has it been? Two years?" "Three," Eva said quickly. "Since you left." Since you left. Not since I saw you last. Rory had left Cardiff the week after final exams, on a National Express she'd paid for with tips from Golden Empress. Eva had been the one who'd bought her ticket, actually. Rory remembered it now. She'd wired her eighty quid and said pay me back never. "You look different," Rory said, because she couldn't find anything else to say that wouldn't open a trapdoor. Eva's smile tightened. "I should hope so. I bill three hundred an hour now. They make you look different." "You went ahead with the training contract." "I went ahead with everything." Eva said it lightly, but something flat slid behind her eyes. She looked Rory up and down, not unkindly, but appraising. "You're - you look the same. Exactly the same. Your eyes - God, I forgot how blue. Like freaky blue." Rory felt her shoulders come up. "Still five six in boots." "No, but - " Eva waved a hand. "You know. Still you. Cool as hell. Still solving a cold case in your head even when someone's talking to you." Silas, as if sensing the snag, set a glass down in front of Eva without her asking and a glass of water in front of Rory's usual spot. His limp was more pronounced tonight. He gave Rory a small look, the barest lift of his chin that meant I'm here, and then he retreated to the far end of the bar and started very deliberately wiping down the row of old photographs there, giving them room. Eva sat back down. Rory sat next to her because it would have been stranger not to. The barstool was warm from Eva's body. "So," Eva said, wrapping both hands around her glass. "Are you - did you go back to law? Are you at LSE or something?" "No," Rory said. "I didn't go back. I'm delivering food. Part-time. It's - it's good. It's quiet." Eva's face did something she tried to hide. A flicker. Pity, or surprise. "Oh." "I like it," Rory said, and it sounded defensive even to her. "I get to ride around all day. No one asks me anything." "That's good. That's - yeah, that sounds good." Eva nodded too fast. "I always thought you'd be the one. You were always smarter than all of us. Professor Davies said that paper you wrote on human rights - " "Eva." Eva stopped. Her fingers tightened on the glass. For a second she looked exactly like she had at eighteen, when she'd gotten drunk at a house party and cried about not getting into Cardiff on her first try. "I didn't mean - " Eva started. "It's fine." They sat with it. The bar hummed. Someone out on the street shouted. "What about you?" Rory asked, because it was easier to ask than to sit inside the regret that was already pooling. "Firm in London?" "Legal consultancy, near St. Paul's. Very grown up. Very boring. I wear blazers now." Eva plucked at her coat. "Mum's thrilled. She tells everyone my Welsh is paying off." She attempted a laugh. It didn't land. "I broke up with Tom." "Oh. I'm sorry." "No, you're not. You hated Tom." "I hated how he talked over you." "Same thing." Eva took a long drink. "I should have come to see you. When you moved. I - I was going to. I meant to. And then work - " "Don't," Rory said quietly. She wasn't angry, which was almost worse. Anger would have been a straight line. This was something messier. "You got me out. You called him and told him if he came near the house again you'd have your brother hit him with his car. Which, by the way, very illegal. The barrister's daughter." Eva let out a wet laugh. "It worked, though, didn't it?" "It did." Rory looked down at her own hands, at the chipped black polish, at the faint white crescent on her wrist. "I just - I thought you'd be the one person who didn't look at me like I'd thrown everything away." "I don't," Eva said, too fast, too loud. Then softer. "I don't, Rory. I swear. I just - God, I spent three years grinding for that contract, and every day I'm in that office feeling like I'm going to throw up from how much I hate it. And then I see you just... living. Above a bar. And you're calm. You've always been fucking calm. And I feel like shit because I'm jealous of you. That's sick, right? I'm jealous of you delivering noodles." Rory stared at her. The sharp blazer. The expensive haircut. The dark circles under her eyes that the makeup couldn't quite hide. It came together all at once. Eva hadn't changed into someone polished. She'd changed into someone armored. "They're really good noodles," Rory said eventually. That broke it. Eva snorted, then covered her mouth, then laughed for real this time, shoulders shaking. "Christ. You absolute dick." "You absolute dick," Rory echoed, and felt her own throat get tight. Eva knocked her knee against Rory's under the bar. Her eyes were bright. "Are you staying down here? Do you have to - can we get properly drunk? Like old times? Like that night before your interview when we stole that bottle of Brendan's whiskey?" Rory thought about the rice getting warm. Thought about the flat upstairs with its single window that looked out onto the fire escape and the green sign that buzzed all night. Thought about how she'd imagined this reunion a dozen times, always with some better version of herself. She reached over and picked up her water glass and clinked it against Eva's. "I'm here," she said. "I'm not going anywhere." Behind them, Silas turned up the music just a fraction, low jazz that filled the corners of the room where the maps curled at the edges, and left the bookshelf that hid his back room firmly closed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"Eva pulled back [back]"
1"Eva gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"She touched automatically [automatically]"
3"Eva said quickly [quickly]"
4"Eva nodded too [too]"
5"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
6"Rory said eventually [eventually]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.459
leniency0.918
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.23
71.86% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count4
5
adverb"deliberately"
count1
6
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"carefully"
2"quickly"
3"lightly"
4"very"
5"deliberately"
6"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"could feel"
2"flicker"
3"echoed"
4"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences114
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen74
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1800
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions85
wordCount1225
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Golden3
Empress3
Nest1
Silas5
Eva30
Cardiff4
Converse1
Rory30
Parry1
Uni1
Evan1
London1
Time1
Since1
National1
Express1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Parry"
4"Evan"
5"Time"
places
0"Golden"
1"Nest"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore0.276
windowScore0
5.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"smelled like lemon polish and spilt bitter"
1"smelled like something clean and sandalwoo"
2"smelled like roll-ups and cheap vanilla bo"
3"as if sensing the snag, set a glass down in front of Eva without her asking and a glass of water in front of Rory's usual spot"
4"quite hide"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.556
wordCount1800
matches
0"not unkindly, but appraising"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean28.57
std23.24
cv0.813
sampleLengths
07
186
266
363
47
58
621
713
863
93
102
1144
121
133
1477
1575
1627
1712
1851
1944
205
2140
2234
2340
247
2555
2618
2719
287
2946
3011
3129
3276
3324
3424
3517
3614
3724
3839
391
4038
417
422
4313
4424
4541
463
476
487
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was coming"
1"was already pooling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences148
ratio0.007
matches
0"She looked - Rory fumbled for the word and disliked it as soon as she found it - finished."
92.06% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount489
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.049079754601226995
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0081799591002045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean12.16
std11.09
cv0.912
sampleLengths
07
147
22
311
426
57
612
739
88
95
1025
1118
1215
137
148
159
1612
174
189
1916
2027
2120
223
232
2418
2512
2614
271
283
2929
3048
316
329
334
3419
3537
3617
375
385
3911
401
413
4227
4316
445
4513
4617
4714
485
4928
50.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.34459459459459457
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners51
32.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Too late for the after-work"
ratio0.01
91.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences103
matches
0"It painted the damp brick"
1"She'd lived above"
2"It smelled like lemon polish"
3"He moved with that slight"
4"His hair had gone more"
5"He looked up when she"
6"she said, lifting the container"
7"He smiled a little."
8"She was halfway across the"
9"It was such a specific"
10"It was Eva."
11"Her dark blonde hair was"
12"Her makeup was done."
13"She looked - Rory fumbled"
14"She slid off the barstool."
15"They collided halfway."
16"He was good at that."
17"Her gaze snagged and held"
18"She felt twenty again, then"
19"She touched automatically at her"
ratio0.32
27.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences103
matches
0"The green buzzed before she"
1"Rory was coming down the"
2"It painted the damp brick"
3"She'd lived above"
4"The bar was in that"
5"It smelled like lemon polish"
6"Silas was behind the bar."
7"He moved with that slight"
8"His hair had gone more"
9"The silver signet on his"
10"He looked up when she"
11"she said, lifting the container"
12"He smiled a little."
13"She was halfway across the"
14"A woman in a charcoal"
15"The woman turned."
16"It was such a specific"
17"The woman's face opened in"
18"It was Eva."
19"Eva Parry, who'd sat with"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.03% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Not the Eva from Cardiff, who had worn the same battered Converse for three years straight and kept her hair dyed with cheap manic-panic that bled onto Rory's p…"
1"Put together in a way that made Rory suddenly, acutely aware of her own straight black hair pulled back messily at her shoulders, the faded delivery t-shirt for…"
2"Eva hugged hard and smelled like something clean and sandalwood that didn't belong to the girl Rory remembered, who'd smelled like roll-ups and cheap vanilla bo…"
3"Silas, as if sensing the snag, set a glass down in front of Eva without her asking and a glass of water in front of Rory's usual spot."
4"He gave Rory a small look, the barest lift of his chin that meant I'm here, and then he retreated to the far end of the bar and started very deliberately wiping…"
5"Thought about the flat upstairs with its single window that looked out onto the fire escape and the green sign that buzzed all night."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She touched automatically, thumb finding the small ridge of the crescent scar there"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.262
leniency0.525
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.1598%