| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 871 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 871 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 68.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "tried to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 15 | | markdownWords | 29 | | totalWords | 865 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Not yet" | | 1 | "Too soon." | | 2 | "behind" | | 3 | "Time moves differently here" | | 4 | "An hour inside can be minutes or days outside." | | 5 | "with purpose" | | 6 | "dragging" | | 7 | "breathe" | | 8 | "pressure" | | 9 | "her" | | 10 | "Malphora" | | 11 | "sing" | | 12 | "them" | | 13 | "there" | | 14 | "waiting" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 857 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Wimbledon | 1 | | Common | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 4 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.312 | | wordCount | 865 | | matches | | 0 | "not moving with the wind, but *with purpose*, heads turning toward her on stems" | | 1 | "Not a rustle or a whisper, but a *dragging*, as if something heavy was being pulled across" |
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| 51.72% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "saw that its" | | 1 | "understood that she’d" |
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| 85.40% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 50.88 | | std | 22.84 | | cv | 0.449 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 76 | | 5 | 65 | | 6 | 72 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 78 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 54 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 17 |
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| 87.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "being pulled" | | 1 | "been lost" | | 2 | "been found" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 58 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park stretched before her, but the trees here grew wrong—taller, their bark threaded with veins of silver that caught the light like circuitry." | | 1 | "Now, standing at the grove’s edge, she realized the sun hung too low in the sky—too red, too still, as if the sky itself had forgotten how to move." | | 2 | "The flowers swayed again, and this time she saw them—not moving with the wind, but *with purpose*, heads turning toward her on stems that bent impossibly, like arthropod legs." | | 3 | "Carved into the bark were more symbols—spirals and eyes, mouths with no teeth." | | 4 | "Roots snaked up through the soil, coiling around her ankles, and she realized with a choked gasp that they weren’t roots at all—they were fingers, pale and elongated, pulling her deeper into the earth." | | 5 | "One stepped forward, and Rory saw that its shadow didn’t match its shape—a man’s height with the proportions of something that had never walked upright." |
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| 97.49% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 863 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.04287369640787949 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008111239860950173 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 58 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 58 | | mean | 14.91 | | std | 8.39 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 70.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.46551724137931033 | | totalSentences | 58 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of the grove, she" | | 1 | "Always was since she’d crossed" | | 2 | "Instead, the pendant’s light dimmed," | | 3 | "Even the air held its" |
| | ratio | 0.071 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed once, a warm" | | 1 | "She’d meant to be here" | | 2 | "Her voice cracked in the" | | 3 | "She took another step forward," | | 4 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 5 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 6 | "She fumbled for her phone," | | 7 | "It wasn’t a sound so" | | 8 | "She could see her reflection" | | 9 | "It was older, scarred in" | | 10 | "She tried to run, but" | | 11 | "Its mouth opened, but no" | | 12 | "She’d been found." |
| | ratio | 0.232 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The path had been there" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "It pulsed once, a warm" | | 3 | "Richmond Park stretched before her," | | 4 | "The oak standing stones stood" | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in shades that" | | 6 | "She’d meant to be here" | | 7 | "The pendant had grown warm" | | 8 | "Her voice cracked in the" | | 9 | "The flowers trembled, but not" | | 10 | "She took another step forward," | | 11 | "The path curved, but it" | | 12 | "Her breath fogged in the" | | 13 | "The pendant flared crimson against" | | 14 | "*An hour inside can be" | | 15 | "The flowers swayed again, and" | | 16 | "A sound came then." | | 17 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 18 | "Eva’s voice, distant and wrong," | | 19 | "The pendant flared again, and" |
| | ratio | 0.714 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Even at this hour, the" | | 1 | "Now, standing at the grove’s" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The path had been there when she turned off Wimbledon Common, a narrow deer trail that shouldn't have existed, marked only by the faintest suggestion of disturb…" | | 1 | "Richmond Park stretched before her, but the trees here grew wrong—taller, their bark threaded with veins of silver that caught the light like circuitry." | | 2 | "Now, standing at the grove’s edge, she realized the sun hung too low in the sky—too red, too still, as if the sky itself had forgotten how to move." | | 3 | "The pendant flared crimson against her skin, and she stumbled back, fingers clawing at her throat as if she could silence the warmth spreading through her veins…" | | 4 | "One of them seemed to *breathe*, its lines deepening and shallowing as if the tree itself were alive." | | 5 | "The dragging sound came again, closer now, accompanied by a low hum that made her teeth ache." | | 6 | "And then she saw *them*, standing just beyond the circle of stones: figures draped in shadows that moved when no wind blew, faces hidden but unmistakably *there…" | | 7 | "One stepped forward, and Rory saw that its shadow didn’t match its shape—a man’s height with the proportions of something that had never walked upright." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |