Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD50QQE6F3B4ZS1X6JJNMS1

Run Details

Duration:
12.4s
Cost:
$0.000268
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The path had been there when she turned off Wimbledon Common, a narrow deer trail that shouldn't have existed, marked only by the faintest suggestion of disturbed earth. Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant catching the last sliver of dusk. It pulsed once, a warm throb against her chest, and she pressed a palm flat against the cool metal. *Not yet*, she thought. *Too soon.* Richmond Park stretched before her, but the trees here grew wrong—taller, their bark threaded with veins of silver that caught the light like circuitry. The oak standing stones stood in a circle at the grove’s heart, their faces weathered but unmistakably ancient, carved with symbols she didn’t recognize. Even at this hour, the clearing blazed with unnatural light. Wildflowers bloomed in shades that had no names, petals shifting as she watched them, colors bleeding into one another like oil on water. She’d meant to be here by noon. The pendant had grown warm an hour ago, its pulse quickening with each step through the undergrowth. Now, standing at the grove’s edge, she realized the sun hung too low in the sky—too red, too still, as if the sky itself had forgotten how to move. "Hello?" Her voice cracked in the stillness. The flowers trembled, but not from the air. From something *behind* them. She took another step forward, then another. The path curved, but it led nowhere. Instead of the grove, she found herself back at the stones, the same circle of oaks, the same impossible light. Her breath fogged in the chill that wasn’t supposed to exist so close to midnight. The pendant flared crimson against her skin, and she stumbled back, fingers clawing at her throat as if she could silence the warmth spreading through her veins. *Time moves differently here*, she remembered reading somewhere. *An hour inside can be minutes or days outside.* But the pendant pulsed faster now, urgent, and she couldn’t tell if she’d been walking for minutes or hours. The flowers swayed again, and this time she saw themnot moving with the wind, but *with purpose*, heads turning toward her on stems that bent impossibly, like arthropod legs. A sound came then. Not a rustle or a whisper, but a *dragging*, as if something heavy was being pulled across the moss. She pressed herself against the nearest standing stone, its surface cool despite the heat radiating from the pendant. Carved into the bark were more symbols—spirals and eyes, mouths with no teeth. One of them seemed to *breathe*, its lines deepening and shallowing as if the tree itself were alive. "Rory?" Eva’s voice, distant and wrong, called from somewhere beyond the grove. But Eva was in London, safe in her flat above the bar, probably asleep. Or dead. The pendant flared again, and Rory’s knees buckled. She fumbled for her phone, thumb fumbling over the screen, but the battery was dead. Always was since she’d crossed the threshold. The dragging sound came again, closer now, accompanied by a low hum that made her teeth ache. It wasn’t a sound so much as a *pressure*, a vibration in the marrow. The flowers were all facing her now, their faces blurred and beautiful and utterly alien. She could see her reflection in the pendant’s gemstone, but it wasn’t *her* face looking back. It was older, scarred in places that didn’t exist, eyes black as the space between stars. *Malphora*, she breathed, the name surfacing from a dream she hadn’t had since childhood. The name her father used when he was angry, the name the police used when they found Evan’s body. The name the Fae used when they wanted to break you. The stones began to *sing*, their voices weaving together in a harmony that made her head spin. The ground beneath her feet softened, becoming spongy, alive. Roots snaked up through the soil, coiling around her ankles, and she realized with a choked gasp that they weren’t roots at all—they were fingers, pale and elongated, pulling her deeper into the earth. She tried to run, but her legs wouldn’t obey. The pendant burned hot against her chest, its crimson light flaring so bright it blinded her. And then she saw *them*, standing just beyond the circle of stones: figures draped in shadows that moved when no wind blew, faces hidden but unmistakably *there*, watching, *waiting*. One stepped forward, and Rory saw that its shadow didn’t match its shape—a man’s height with the proportions of something that had never walked upright. Its mouth opened, but no sound came out. Instead, the pendant’s light dimmed, its pulse slowing to match the rhythm of some unseen heart. The figure raised a hand, and the flowers froze, their colors leaching away to grays and blacks. The stones went silent. Even the air held its breath. "You should not have come here," the shadow said, and Rory knew, with absolute certainty, that it was speaking inside her skull, inside the place where time and memory and fear all bled together. The pendant went dark. And in that moment, she understood that she’d never been lost in the grove. She’d been found.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount871
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount871
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"throb"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"throb"
2"pulse"
3"trembled"
4"chill"
5"silence"
6"warmth"
7"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences58
matches
0"was angry"
68.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences58
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans15
markdownWords29
totalWords865
ratio0.034
matches
0"Not yet"
1"Too soon."
2"behind"
3"Time moves differently here"
4"An hour inside can be minutes or days outside."
5"with purpose"
6"dragging"
7"breathe"
8"pressure"
9"her"
10"Malphora"
11"sing"
12"them"
13"there"
14"waiting"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount857
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Wimbledon1
Common1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Richmond1
Park1
Eva2
London1
Rory4
Evan1
Fae1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
4"Fae"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.312
wordCount865
matches
0"not moving with the wind, but *with purpose*, heads turning toward her on stems"
1"Not a rustle or a whisper, but a *dragging*, as if something heavy was being pulled across"
51.72% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"saw that its"
1"understood that she’d"
85.40% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean50.88
std22.84
cv0.449
sampleLengths
074
181
253
319
476
565
672
758
878
944
1060
1154
1249
1327
1434
154
1617
87.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences58
matches
0"being pulled"
1"been lost"
2"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was speaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences58
ratio0.103
matches
0"Richmond Park stretched before her, but the trees here grew wrong—taller, their bark threaded with veins of silver that caught the light like circuitry."
1"Now, standing at the grove’s edge, she realized the sun hung too low in the sky—too red, too still, as if the sky itself had forgotten how to move."
2"The flowers swayed again, and this time she saw them—not moving with the wind, but *with purpose*, heads turning toward her on stems that bent impossibly, like arthropod legs."
3"Carved into the bark were more symbols—spirals and eyes, mouths with no teeth."
4"Roots snaked up through the soil, coiling around her ankles, and she realized with a choked gasp that they weren’t roots at all—they were fingers, pale and elongated, pulling her deeper into the earth."
5"One stepped forward, and Rory saw that its shadow didn’t match its shape—a man’s height with the proportions of something that had never walked upright."
97.49% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount863
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04287369640787949
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008111239860950173
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences58
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences58
mean14.91
std8.39
cv0.562
sampleLengths
028
121
219
34
42
524
624
710
823
97
1017
1129
127
138
144
157
167
1720
1815
1927
208
2128
2229
234
2419
2518
2613
2718
2812
2914
302
318
3215
337
3417
3514
3615
3716
3816
3914
4019
4111
4217
439
4434
459
4616
4729
4825
498
70.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.46551724137931033
totalSentences58
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences56
matches
0"Instead of the grove, she"
1"Always was since she’d crossed"
2"Instead, the pendant’s light dimmed,"
3"Even the air held its"
ratio0.071
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences56
matches
0"It pulsed once, a warm"
1"She’d meant to be here"
2"Her voice cracked in the"
3"She took another step forward,"
4"Her breath fogged in the"
5"She pressed herself against the"
6"She fumbled for her phone,"
7"It wasn’t a sound so"
8"She could see her reflection"
9"It was older, scarred in"
10"She tried to run, but"
11"Its mouth opened, but no"
12"She’d been found."
ratio0.232
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences56
matches
0"The path had been there"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"It pulsed once, a warm"
3"Richmond Park stretched before her,"
4"The oak standing stones stood"
5"Wildflowers bloomed in shades that"
6"She’d meant to be here"
7"The pendant had grown warm"
8"Her voice cracked in the"
9"The flowers trembled, but not"
10"She took another step forward,"
11"The path curved, but it"
12"Her breath fogged in the"
13"The pendant flared crimson against"
14"*An hour inside can be"
15"The flowers swayed again, and"
16"A sound came then."
17"She pressed herself against the"
18"Eva’s voice, distant and wrong,"
19"The pendant flared again, and"
ratio0.714
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"Even at this hour, the"
1"Now, standing at the grove’s"
ratio0.036
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The path had been there when she turned off Wimbledon Common, a narrow deer trail that shouldn't have existed, marked only by the faintest suggestion of disturb…"
1"Richmond Park stretched before her, but the trees here grew wrong—taller, their bark threaded with veins of silver that caught the light like circuitry."
2"Now, standing at the grove’s edge, she realized the sun hung too low in the sky—too red, too still, as if the sky itself had forgotten how to move."
3"The pendant flared crimson against her skin, and she stumbled back, fingers clawing at her throat as if she could silence the warmth spreading through her veins…"
4"One of them seemed to *breathe*, its lines deepening and shallowing as if the tree itself were alive."
5"The dragging sound came again, closer now, accompanied by a low hum that made her teeth ache."
6"And then she saw *them*, standing just beyond the circle of stones: figures draped in shadows that moved when no wind blew, faces hidden but unmistakably *there…"
7"One stepped forward, and Rory saw that its shadow didn’t match its shape—a man’s height with the proportions of something that had never walked upright."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.2746%