Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5123FC53TVGSJKABSTX3A

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Duration:
34.4s
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$0.017589
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Meta

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The green neon came on at five and bled down Frith Street even in the rain. Rory watched it from the street door for a second before she pushed inside, the sign above the entrance buzzing faint against traffic — THE RAVEN'S NEST in that distinctive green that made the wet pavement look deeper. It was too early for a crowd. The Nest held its usual dusk gloom even at mid-afternoon, dimly lit by low pendants over the bar and the amber wash from the bottle shelves. The walls were covered the way Silas always kept them, old maps soft at the corners and black-and-white photographs of streets that didn't exist anymore, Soho in the sixties, a young woman with a beehive outside what was now a vape shop. The radiators clicked. Silas was behind the bar. He didn't turn immediately when the bell jingled, just lifted his chin a fraction, enough for Rory to catch his profile. At fifty-eight the grey had won more of his auburn than when she'd first taken the flat upstairs, streaked through at the temples and in his neatly trimmed beard. He was tall, six-one in his sock feet, but he favored his left side the way he always did since Prague, the old knee injury giving him that slight limp as he moved from the till to the optics. "Yu-Fei work you that hard?" he said. "She sent me to Battersea in this," Rory said. She shook out her anorak, straight black hair sticking to her shoulders, shoulder-length and blunt where she'd cut it herself over the sink. Water spotted the crescent scar on her left wrist, small and white and ridged. She'd gotten it at eight, reaching into a dishwasher. She was twenty-five but felt older in the shoulders. Five-six in her trainers, blue eyes bright even when she was tired. She draped the delivery bag for the Golden Empress over a stool. The residual smell of chilli oil followed her. Silas made a noise and poured her tap water without asking. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light. "Evan call again?" "No." She said it quickly, cool-headed. That was the trick she'd learned after Cardiff, after leaving — keep the answer clean, don't give it room. "New phone." He didn't press. That was why she'd stayed. When she'd fled to London at Eva's behest two years ago, Brendan Carter the Irish barrister father back home fielding calls, Jennifer Carter née Ellis calling every hour from her classroom, Silas had offered the room above the bar without asking for the details of the ex-boyfriend with the soft voice. He carried himself with a quiet authority that didn't need your biography. The bell jingled again and cold came in with it. Rory didn't look at first. She was trying to get the lid off her thermal, fingers clumsy. The person who entered laughed at the weather, said sorry to no one in particular, and Rory's head came up on that second syllable because she knew the cadence. Eva stood just inside the door with rain on her coat. For a beat neither of them moved. Eva Parry — Eva from Year Three, from Cardiff Academy, from the terraced house two streets over from Brendan and Jennifer's, who had sent the long, unsparing texts that got Rory on the National Express: *Come. My sofa. No questions. Now.* Eva had always been soft-faced, all cheeks, hair curled with cheap straighteners that never quite worked. Now her hair was cut into a severe bob that ended at her jaw, dyed a flat chestnut. She wore a wool coat that cost more than Rory's month at the Nest, belted tight, and a cream silk shirt beneath. Her make-up was sharp. Her eyes found Rory and widened. "Oh my God," Eva said. Rory felt her own breath snag, which was unusual. She was quick, adaptable, the one who thought out-of-the-box when things went wrong on a drop or when Silas' till jammed or when a customer got handsy. Now her mind went blank and then flooded. "Eve." Eva came forward fast, heels loud, and then stopped a foot away, hands hovering like she wasn't sure Rory wanted to be touched. The last time they'd seen each other, Rory had been crying on that same coat when it had been from Zara. "You're — you're still here," Eva said, and then winced at how it sounded. "I mean, at Silas' place? This is Silas' place, right? The Nest?" Silas watched from behind the bar, hazel eyes steady, wiping a glass although it was already dry. He gave Rory space. "I live upstairs," Rory said. "Still. Always will, at this rate." Eva laughed too loudly. "You look exactly — you look good, Ror. Really." Rory heard the lie for what it was. She looked tired. She was in leggings and the restaurant's black polo with the oil stain. Eva looked like someone else entirely. Not just the clothes. It was a posture thing, a new stillness in her shoulders. The Eva she remembered bounced on the balls of her feet, talked with her hands, wanted to be a drama teacher. This Eva held herself contained. "You don't," Rory said, then caught herself. "You look different. In a good way. Grown up." "Corporate," Eva said, and there was a self-deprecating twist. "I got pupillaged last month. In London. I moved in March." It hit Rory with a little delay. Pupillaged. Law. "You did law?" "Finished. Like you were supposed to," Eva said. The smile thinned. "I remembered you always saying Pre-Law at Cardiff was your father's idea and I thought — well, I liked arguing, didn't I? Turns out I like winning more." Rory felt the familiar press at the base of her throat. Eva had been the one waiting outside the moot courtrooms with coffee while Rory pretended she cared about contract law. She'd been the one who said, run. "I stopped replying," Rory said quietly. It wasn't an apology. It was a fact, stated coolly because if she warmed it it would crack. Eva's eyes flicked down to the scar on Rory's wrist, then away. "I know," Eva said. "After three months I thought — you know. Evan. Or London swallowing you. I didn't know which." "He didn't. It didn't." "I sent you that article about tenancy rights," Eva said suddenly, as if that explained anything. "You did." "You never —" "I read it." They stood there in the dim bar with the maps around them, and the space between their old shorthand and their present selves felt incredibly wide. Silas set two whiskies down without being asked, pushing one toward Eva, one toward Rory. Eva took it with both hands like a student. Silas said, to make it easier, "You two need the back?" "No," Rory said quickly. She didn't want the hidden room today, the bookshelf that swung open to the space where Silas took calls in low voices. She wanted the maps and the rain. Eva sat. Rory sat opposite. Their knees almost touched. "What happened to Laila?" Eva asked, and the use of the old nickname — from when they'd been eleven and decided Aurora Carter needed an alias for spying on teachers — made Rory's chest hurt. "Rory's fine," she said. "Malphora's retired." Eva's laugh was real this time, short. "Christ. Malphora. We were so weird." "We were honest weird." Another pause. Eva turned the whisky glass, studying it. "I thought you'd come back," she said, softer. "After... after you left him. I thought you'd finish your degree. Mum and Dad kept asking about you — my mum, not yours — and I'd say, Rory's figuring it out, and then you just fell off. I sent you the barrister stuff thinking maybe — I don't know. I shouldn't have." Rory watched her. Bright blue eyes, unwavering when she chose to be. She thought about the flat upstairs, the delivery bag that still needed to be logged, Yu-Fei shouting in Cantonese at the wok, the way Silas had taught her to check sight lines when she walked home late. She thought about Cardiff and the cold house and Brendan saying law was the only solid thing and Jennifer, her Welsh teacher mother, saying well if you must go then go. "I didn't want to be saved and then owe you," Rory said. The honesty surprised her with its precision. "You got me out. It was the most important thing anyone's ever done. And then I couldn't look at you without remembering how bad it was. And how you were doing better. You always did empathy better than me." Eva's eyes shone. She didn't let the tears drop; that was new too. "I'm not doing better," Eva said. "I'm doing lawyer. Which is different. I hate most of it. I'm good at it, but I hate it." Rory reached forward then. Her hand, small scar showing, covered Eva's. The bench creaked. "You could have texted," Eva said, but without edge. "You could have kicked the door down," Rory answered. "You knew where I was." "You're right." Eva exhaled. "I liked the story where you were brave and gone. I didn't like the story where you were just upstairs and not calling. It made me feel..." "Abandoned?" Rory supplied. "Yeah." "Yeah, me too," Rory said. "But differently." Silas limped around the bar then, deliberate, to give them an out. He picked up the empty water glass and his ring tapped against it. The neon outside flickered green against the window, on Rory's wet hair, on Eva's expensive coat. "You both staying for dinner?" he asked. "Yu-Fei owes me dumplings. Says she'll bring them over if I promise not to tell HMRC about the till." Eva looked at Rory, asking a question she didn't voice. Rory's quick brain, the one that solved routes and diffused arguments before they started, saw the easy deflection and chose not to take it. "Stay," Rory told Eva. "We can be weird again for an hour." Eva nodded, once, and took off her coat, and the rain kept falling on Soho.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory said quietly [quietly]"
1"Eva said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"Rory said quickly [quickly]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.509
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
85.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1680
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"coolly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
2"coolly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1680
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"unwavering"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"silk"
2"familiar"
3"flicked"
4"unwavering"
5"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences117
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences144
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1692
ratio0.004
matches
0"Come. My sofa. No questions. Now."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions33
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions112
wordCount1286
uniqueNames28
maxNameDensity2.64
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Frith1
Street1
Nest2
Silas10
Soho2
Rory34
Prague1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff3
London1
Eva33
Brendan3
Carter3
Irish1
Jennifer3
Ellis1
Parry1
Year1
Three1
Academy1
National1
Express1
Zara1
Aurora1
Yu-Fei1
Cantonese1
Welsh1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Brendan"
5"Carter"
6"Jennifer"
7"Ellis"
8"Parry"
9"Zara"
10"Aurora"
places
0"Frith"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"Prague"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
6"Year"
7"Cantonese"
globalScore0.178
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like someone else entirely"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1692
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean26.86
std24.48
cv0.911
sampleLengths
054
178
294
37
455
541
625
727
871
910
1046
1111
127
13107
145
1544
161
1744
1826
1921
2011
2113
2271
2316
2420
259
263
2739
2838
2924
3012
3121
324
3316
342
353
363
3750
3811
3933
409
4135
426
4313
444
459
4660
4780
4858
4913
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences117
matches
0"were covered"
1"being asked"
2"been eleven"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs237
matches
0"was trying"
43.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences144
ratio0.035
matches
0"Rory watched it from the street door for a second before she pushed inside, the sign above the entrance buzzing faint against traffic — THE RAVEN'S NEST in that distinctive green that made the wet pavement look deeper."
1"That was the trick she'd learned after Cardiff, after leaving — keep the answer clean, don't give it room."
2"Eva Parry — Eva from Year Three, from Cardiff Academy, from the terraced house two streets over from Brendan and Jennifer's, who had sent the long, unsparing texts that got Rory on the National Express: *Come."
3"\"What happened to Laila?\" Eva asked, and the use of the old nickname — from when they'd been eleven and decided Aurora Carter needed an alias for spying on teachers — made Rory's chest hurt."
4"She didn't let the tears drop; that was new too."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1052
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.0370722433460076
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009505703422053232
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences144
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences144
mean11.75
std10.39
cv0.884
sampleLengths
016
138
27
326
442
53
65
721
829
939
107
119
1223
1314
149
159
1612
1712
188
1911
2011
213
226
2319
242
253
265
2751
2812
2910
305
3112
3229
3311
347
3536
362
372
3817
3918
4022
414
426
435
449
4527
468
471
4823
4921
39.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3055555555555556
totalSentences144
uniqueOpeners44
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Bright blue eyes, unwavering when"
ratio0.01
83.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences97
matches
0"It was too early for"
1"He didn't turn immediately when"
2"He was tall, six-one in"
3"She shook out her anorak,"
4"She'd gotten it at eight,"
5"She was twenty-five but felt"
6"She draped the delivery bag"
7"She said it quickly, cool-headed"
8"He didn't press."
9"He carried himself with a"
10"She was trying to get"
11"She wore a wool coat"
12"Her make-up was sharp."
13"Her eyes found Rory and"
14"She was quick, adaptable, the"
15"He gave Rory space."
16"She looked tired."
17"She was in leggings and"
18"It was a posture thing,"
19"It hit Rory with a"
ratio0.34
6.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences97
matches
0"The green neon came on"
1"Rory watched it from the"
2"It was too early for"
3"The Nest held its usual"
4"The walls were covered the"
5"The radiators clicked."
6"Silas was behind the bar."
7"He didn't turn immediately when"
8"He was tall, six-one in"
9"She shook out her anorak,"
10"Water spotted the crescent scar"
11"She'd gotten it at eight,"
12"She was twenty-five but felt"
13"She draped the delivery bag"
14"The residual smell of chilli"
15"Silas made a noise and"
16"The silver signet ring on"
17"She said it quickly, cool-headed"
18"That was the trick she'd"
19"He didn't press."
ratio0.907
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Now.* Eva had always been"
1"Now her hair was cut"
2"Now her mind went blank"
ratio0.031
97.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The walls were covered the way Silas always kept them, old maps soft at the corners and black-and-white photographs of streets that didn't exist anymore, Soho i…"
1"Eva Parry — Eva from Year Three, from Cardiff Academy, from the terraced house two streets over from Brendan and Jennifer's, who had sent the long, unsparing te…"
2"She didn't want the hidden room today, the bookshelf that swung open to the space where Silas took calls in low voices."
87.96% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva said suddenly, as if that explained anything"
1"she said, softer"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.453
leniency0.906
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.8363%