| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.579 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.70% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1399 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 24 | | totalWords | 1391 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park, past the second oak, follow the standing stones." | | 1 | "Wind," | | 2 | "Just the wind." | | 3 | "Not real," | | 4 | "Come in, little sparrow. Come in and rest." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 1260 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.03 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Silas | 2 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.984 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "roots that seemed to shift beneath her feet" | | 1 | "roots that seemed to reach for her ankles" | | 2 | "felt like water" |
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| 56.22% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.438 | | wordCount | 1391 | | matches | | 0 | "Not real,* she whispered, but her voice sounded foreign in the still air" | | 1 | "Not behind her this time, but beside" |
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| 53.67% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "needed that kind" | | 1 | "learned that lesson" | | 2 | "knew that sound" | | 3 | "fear, that fed" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 27.27 | | std | 21.65 | | cv | 0.794 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 67 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 63 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 48 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 41 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 34 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 95.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "was layered" |
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| 78.79% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 220 | | matches | | 0 | "were blooming" | | 1 | "wasn’t protecting" | | 2 | "was marking" | | 3 | "was already fading" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant around her neck—cool silver against her skin—had pulsed once when she’d crossed the park boundary, a faint warmth that traveled up her collarbone like a whisper." | | 1 | "She’d learned that lesson from Evan—turning around gave them power." | | 2 | "She’d read about this—artifacts that responded to fear, that fed on the electrical storms of human emotion." | | 3 | "Not a real door—there were no buildings in the grove—but the sound was unmistakable." | | 4 | "“You came,” the figure said, and the voice was layered—child and woman and something older, something that had learned to speak by watching humans learn to speak." | | 5 | "The pendant warmed again, just slightly, and Aurora felt a tug—a pull toward the figure, toward the space between the standing stones where reality thinned like gauze." |
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| 96.42% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1270 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.04409448818897638 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011023622047244094 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 11.79 | | std | 8.04 | | cv | 0.682 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 43.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3389830508474576 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just the wind.*" | | 1 | "Instead, she walked faster, her" | | 2 | "Just more flowers, more trees," | | 3 | "Somewhere ahead, a door opened." |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the tree" | | 1 | "She’d found the directions scrawled" | | 2 | "She told herself it was" | | 3 | "She’d been delivery work all" | | 4 | "She needed that kind of" | | 5 | "She kept her eyes fixed" | | 6 | "She quickened her pace." | | 7 | "It pulsed in response, a" | | 8 | "She’d dismissed most of it" | | 9 | "She didn’t turn around." | | 10 | "She’d learned that lesson from" | | 11 | "It was childish, almost melodic," | | 12 | "She knew that sound." | | 13 | "She’d heard it before, in" | | 14 | "She could feel them watching" | | 15 | "She’d read about this—artifacts that" | | 16 | "She slowed, and they slowed" | | 17 | "She stopped, and after a" | | 18 | "Her heart was a drum" | | 19 | "she called out, her voice" |
| | ratio | 0.283 | |
| 66.06% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The crunch of gravel under" | | 1 | "She paused at the tree" | | 2 | "The last bus had rattled" | | 3 | "She’d found the directions scrawled" | | 4 | "*Richmond Park, past the second" | | 5 | "The pendant around her neck—cool" | | 6 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 7 | "Aurora blinked, and it was" | | 8 | "She told herself it was" | | 9 | "She’d been delivery work all" | | 10 | "The grove was supposed to" | | 11 | "An hour inside could be" | | 12 | "She needed that kind of" | | 13 | "The path between the stones" | | 14 | "Wildflowers pressed close on either" | | 15 | "She kept her eyes fixed" | | 16 | "Something rustled in the undergrowth." | | 17 | "Something that shouldn’t rustle." | | 18 | "The air hung still and" | | 19 | "She quickened her pace." |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 50.51% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 8.09% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The last bus had rattled away twenty minutes ago, its headlights swallowed by the darkness, and now she stood alone in the mouth of a path that didn’t appear on…" | | 1 | "The pendant around her neck—cool silver against her skin—had pulsed once when she’d crossed the park boundary, a faint warmth that traveled up her collarbone li…" | | 2 | "Sweet with the scent of night-blooming flowers that shouldn’t exist in October." | | 3 | "Wildflowers pressed close on either side, their petals glowing with an inner light that cast shifting shadows on the ground." | | 4 | "Instead, she walked faster, her boots finding purchase on roots that seemed to shift beneath her feet." | | 5 | "Oak after oak, their bark etched with symbols that made her eyes water if she looked too long." | | 6 | "The path beneath her feet seemed to stretch impossibly long, the trees leaning in closer, their branches clawing at the fabric of reality itself." | | 7 | "A figure standing between two of the ancient oaks, tall and impossibly thin, its outline blurred as if seen through water." | | 8 | "The flowers were blooming around her now, their stems wrapping gently around her wrists, her ankles, pulling her toward the space between worlds." | | 9 | "Aurora tried to pull away, but the flowers held her gently, lovingly, and the path that had brought her here was already fading behind her, swallowed by the dar…" |
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| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice cracking slightly" | | 1 | "the figure said, and the voice was layered—child and woman and something older, something that had learned to speak by watching humans learn to speak" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "the voice repeated (repeat)" | | 3 | "it breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "it continued (continue)" | | 5 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "the figure continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.778 | | effectiveRatio | 0.737 | |