Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD5CRVPYQ4094XCB2CCPZ7S

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.028113
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest was quiet for a Thursday, the green neon sign outside bleeding its color through the frosted glass in thin veins. Rory had come down the back stairs from her flat still smelling of Szechuan oil from the evening's deliveries, wanting nothing more than a ginger ale and twenty minutes of not talking to anyone. Silas poured it without asking, the way he always did, and set it on the bar with a nod that meant *stay as long as you like, ask nothing of me.* She was three sips in when the door opened and the cold came in wearing a camel coat. The woman who shook off the rain was tall, polished, her blonde hair cut into something architectural that probably cost more than Rory's rent. She scanned the bar with the practiced sweep of someone used to reading rooms — the maps on the walls, the photographs, the exits. Then her eyes found Rory, and stopped. "Oh my God." The voice came out unguarded, Welsh, twenty years old inside a thirty-year-old mouth. "Rory Carter." Rory's stomach dropped somewhere near her shoes. "Meg." Megan Price. Pre-Law, Cardiff University. Third-floor corridor, same halls. They'd shared a kettle, a statistics module, and one memorable night throwing up in shifts after Megan's twenty-first. Megan had been the loudest laugh in any room, crop tops and fake ID, determined to become a barrister mostly to spite her father, who'd told her girls from Merthyr became secretaries. This Megan crossed the bar in heels that clicked like punctuation. "I don't believe it. What are you — are you here for work? What are you doing in London?" "I live here," Rory said. "Upstairs, actually." "Above a bar." Megan laughed, and it was almost the old laugh, but sanded down. "That's very you." Rory couldn't tell if it was meant kindly. Megan flagged Silas, ordered a Negroni without looking at the menu, and slid onto the next stool like she'd been doing it all her life. Close up, the changes compounded. The brows were shaped. The nails were perfect. There was a watch on her wrist that Rory recognized from magazine adverts she couldn't afford to read. But under the jaw, half-hidden by the collar of the coat, there was a scar Rory didn't remember — thin, pale, deliberate-looking. "So," Megan said. "You vanished. Everyone said so. One day you were there, the next — gone. Evan said you'd had some kind of breakdown." The name landed in Rory's chest like a swallowed stone. "Evan would know, wouldn't he." Megan's smile faltered. "I didn't mean—" "I didn't have a breakdown." Rory turned her glass in a slow circle on the bar top, watching the fizz rise. "I had an exit strategy. There's a difference. Eva helped me pack a bag while he was at his mother's. I was on the coach to Victoria by noon." Silas moved down the bar to polish glasses, unhurried, present in the way of furniture. Rory was grateful for him. "God." Megan exhaled through her nose. "I'm sorry. He made it sound — well. He made everything sound like whatever he wanted, didn't he. I never liked him. I want it on record that I never liked him." "You went to his birthday." "I went to *your* birthday that he happened to be at." Megan's Negroni arrived and she wrapped both hands around it. "There were forty people in that pub and he spent the whole night correcting your stories. I remember thinking, she's shrinking. Right in front of us. And none of us did anything." The bar hummed with low music, something vinyl and crackling. Outside, rain stippled the window. Rory found she didn't know what to do with her hands, so she pressed the crescent scar on her left wrist flat against the cold glass and felt the old familiar shape of it, the one thing on her body that had never changed. "What about you?" she said. "You look like a magistrate's Christmas card. Did you do it? Did you get called?" "Bar. Three years now. Criminal defense, ironically." Megan said it like a confession. "Dad's furious. He wanted me prosecuting. He wanted — well." She turned the glass, and Rory noticed she hadn't drunk from it. "I defend people now. Mostly men, mostly guilty, mostly the kind who talk the way Evan talked. I sit across a table from them and I think, I know you. I know exactly what you do to the women who love you, and I'm going to get you the shortest sentence I can anyway, because that's the job." She finally sipped. "So. Yes. I became exactly what I said I'd become, and it turns out I hate it." "Meg." "Don't." A quick shake of the head. "Don't be kind about it. I've been awful to myself for four years, I'm not letting you be kind for me." Silas set a small dish of olives between them without a word. Megan looked up at him — really looked, the room-reading sweep again — and Rory watched her take in the limp as he moved away, the signet ring, the stillness of him, and file it all somewhere. "Your friend," Megan said quietly, "has the saddest eyes I've ever seen on a man who's listening to everything." "He's my landlord," Rory said. "And my boss, sort of. And the closest thing I've got to—" She stopped. The sentence had been going somewhere she hadn't authorized. "To family," Megan finished. "Yeah. I know that look." She turned an olive on its toothpick. "I googled you, you know. Couple of years ago. Found nothing. No LinkedIn, no socials, nothing. I told myself you'd gone off-grid on purpose and that meant you were okay. That's what I told myself." "Was I wrong to?" "No." Megan's voice went thin. "But I could have looked harder. I could have asked Eva. I knew how to find you if I'd wanted to, and I didn't want to, because finding you meant admitting I'd watched it happen and done nothing, and I was twenty-two and a coward, and I've been paying barristers' fees to absolve myself ever since." The rain thickened against the glass. Somewhere behind them a chair scraped, and Silas said something low to the only other patron, and the record flipped over into its second side. Rory thought about all the versions of this conversation she'd imagined on night buses and delivery runs — the ones where she was magnificent and cutting, the ones where Megan wept. In none of them did she reach out, but she reached out now, and put her hand over Megan's on the bar. "I didn't need you to save me," Rory said. "I needed you to remember me correctly. You just did." Megan's eyes shone. She turned her hand over and gripped Rory's fingers, and her thumb found the crescent scar and traced it once, the old accident, the thing from before everything. "Same scar," she whispered. "Thank God. Something's the same." "Not much is," Rory said. "No." Megan picked up her Negroni and held it up, waiting, until Rory lifted her ginger ale and touched it to the rim. "Not much is. Drink to that anyway?" They drank. The neon hummed. Behind the bar, Silas turned the music up by one small degree, giving them the mercy of noise, and the years sat down between them like a third old friend — uninvited, unchangeable, and, at last, acknowledged.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:33:00.669Z" 7/25/2026, 5:33:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Megan said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.045
91.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"determined"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"stomach"
2"determined"
3"perfect"
4"familiar"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords11
totalWords1252
ratio0.009
matches
0"stay as long as you like, ask nothing of me."
1"your"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
19.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount768
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.6
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Thursday1
Szechuan1
Rory20
Welsh1
Price1
Cardiff1
University1
Megan19
Merthyr1
Silas6
Negroni3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Price"
3"Megan"
4"Silas"
5"Negroni"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.198
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1252
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean33.84
std25.74
cv0.761
sampleLengths
088
118
255
318
48
559
630
77
818
986
1025
1115
126
1350
1420
1538
165
1753
1859
1920
20113
211
2228
2349
2419
2528
2651
274
2861
2931
3053
3119
3231
339
345
3530
3642
93.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"was meant"
1"were shaped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences84
ratio0.06
matches
0"She scanned the bar with the practiced sweep of someone used to reading rooms — the maps on the walls, the photographs, the exits."
1"But under the jaw, half-hidden by the collar of the coat, there was a scar Rory didn't remember — thin, pale, deliberate-looking."
2"Megan looked up at him — really looked, the room-reading sweep again — and Rory watched her take in the limp as he moved away, the signet ring, the stillness of him, and file it all somewhere."
3"Rory thought about all the versions of this conversation she'd imagined on night buses and delivery runs — the ones where she was magnificent and cutting, the ones where Megan wept."
4"Behind the bar, Silas turned the music up by one small degree, giving them the mercy of noise, and the years sat down between them like a third old friend — uninvited, unchangeable, and, at last, acknowledged."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount770
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02987012987012987
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00909090909090909
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean14.9
std12.69
cv0.851
sampleLengths
023
134
231
318
424
524
67
716
82
97
101
112
123
134
1418
1532
1611
1719
185
192
2015
213
228
2325
245
254
264
2718
2822
293
3022
3110
325
333
343
3521
3629
3715
385
396
4032
415
4221
4332
4410
455
4644
475
4815
4913
73.02% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4880952380952381
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences51
matches
0"Then her eyes found Rory,"
1"Somewhere behind them a chair"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences51
matches
0"She was three sips in"
1"She scanned the bar with"
2"They'd shared a kettle, a"
3"She turned the glass, and"
4"She finally sipped"
5"She turned an olive on"
6"She turned her hand over"
ratio0.137
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences51
matches
0"The Raven's Nest was quiet"
1"Rory had come down the"
2"Silas poured it without asking,"
3"She was three sips in"
4"The woman who shook off"
5"She scanned the bar with"
6"The voice came out unguarded,"
7"Rory's stomach dropped somewhere near"
8"Pre-Law, Cardiff University."
9"They'd shared a kettle, a"
10"Megan had been the loudest"
11"This Megan crossed the bar"
12"Megan laughed, and it was"
13"Rory couldn't tell if it"
14"Megan flagged Silas, ordered a"
15"The brows were shaped."
16"The nails were perfect."
17"The name landed in Rory's"
18"Megan's smile faltered."
19"Rory turned her glass in"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory had come down the back stairs from her flat still smelling of Szechuan oil from the evening's deliveries, wanting nothing more than a ginger ale and twenty…"
1"The woman who shook off the rain was tall, polished, her blonde hair cut into something architectural that probably cost more than Rory's rent."
2"Megan had been the loudest laugh in any room, crop tops and fake ID, determined to become a barrister mostly to spite her father, who'd told her girls from Mert…"
3"Rory found she didn't know what to do with her hands, so she pressed the crescent scar on her left wrist flat against the cold glass and felt the old familiar s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Megan laughed (laugh)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.091
84.0472%