| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.636 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1276 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1276 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "quickened" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "fleeting" | | 7 | "searing" | | 8 | "familiar" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "shattered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "d in horror" | | 1 | "r with terror" |
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| 55.39% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 98 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "managed to" | | 3 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1263 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "Thump. Thump. Thump." | | 1 | "E.V." | | 2 | "Come closer. Give it back. She lied to you. She always lies." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 1224 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Aurora | 11 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Eva | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Whitechapel" | | 3 | "Road" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as though trying to claw free from whatever bound them to the soil" | | 1 | "sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once" | | 2 | "smelled like copper and decay" |
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| 41.65% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.584 | | wordCount | 1263 | | matches | | 0 | "Not words, not exactly, but the impression of voices murmuring just beyond comprehension" | | 1 | "not exactly, but the impression of voices murmuring just beyond comprehension" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "earlier that evening" | | 1 | "saw that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 34.14 | | std | 24.89 | | cv | 0.729 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 87 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 54 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 55 | | 12 | 76 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 67 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 73 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 55 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 63 |
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| 87.36% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "been tired" | | 2 | "were layered" | | 3 | "been torn" | | 4 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "was calling" | | 1 | "was spreading" | | 2 | "was breaking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "It had been doing that since she’d left the pub—slow, insistent thumps like a second heartbeat." | | 1 | "She’d checked it ten minutes ago—full charge, four bars." | | 2 | "She could hear her own heartbeat now, loud and ragged, and beneath it something else—a low, rhythmic sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once." | | 3 | "She pulled her jacket tighter around herself and stepped forward, her boots crunching over dead leaves and something else—something that crunched with a wetness that made her stomach turn." | | 4 | "She stopped and pressed her palm flat against one of the standing stones, feeling the bark beneath her fingers—rough, alive, pulsing with a slow heat that traveled up her arm and settled in her bones." | | 5 | "She opened her eyes again and saw movement—fleeting, darting shapes between the trees." | | 6 | "Eva had texted her earlier that evening—something about needing to talk, about knowing where Aurora had gone." | | 7 | "The whispering coalesced into something resembling speech, though the words were layered over one another, speaking in different voices—some familiar, some not." | | 8 | "She squeezed her eyes shut, but the images were already burned behind her eyelids—faces, distorted and screaming, reaching toward her from some impossible distance." | | 9 | "Instead, she watched in horror as the creature reached out a hand—pale and translucent, fingers stretching impossibly long—and touched the pendant." | | 10 | "“The price of crossing,” the thing said, its face shifting now, morphing into features she almost recognized—Eva’s smile, her father’s eyes, her own reflection staring back at her with terror." | | 11 | "And in her hand, clutched so tightly that her knuckles were white, was a single black feather—and the lingering certainty that she was no longer alone." |
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| 87.65% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1238 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 67 | | adverbRatio | 0.05411954765751212 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012116316639741519 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 12.38 | | std | 8.28 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 42.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3431372549019608 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a black rectangle staring" | | 1 | "Only shadows shifting between the" | | 2 | "Just the sound of leaves" | | 3 | "Too fast to be birds." | | 4 | "Too deliberate to be chance." | | 5 | "Even the wind held its" | | 6 | "Instead, she watched in horror" |
| | ratio | 0.08 | |
| 92.73% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept glancing at the" | | 1 | "It had been doing that" | | 2 | "She’d told herself it was" | | 3 | "They stood in a rough" | | 4 | "she whispered, though the sound" | | 5 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 6 | "She’d checked it ten minutes" | | 7 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 8 | "She could hear her own" | | 9 | "she called out, her voice" | | 10 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 11 | "She quickened her pace, moving" | | 12 | "She stopped and pressed her" | | 13 | "she muttered, but even as" | | 14 | "She opened her eyes again" | | 15 | "She took a step backward," | | 16 | "She recoiled instantly, scrambling to" | | 17 | "Her breath caught." | | 18 | "She’d been tired, stressed, ready" | | 19 | "She pulled her hand away" |
| | ratio | 0.318 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "The path into Richmond Park" | | 1 | "She kept glancing at the" | | 2 | "It had been doing that" | | 3 | "She’d told herself it was" | | 4 | "The standing stones appeared without" | | 5 | "Aurora stopped short, her hand" | | 6 | "They stood in a rough" | | 7 | "she whispered, though the sound" | | 8 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 9 | "She’d checked it ten minutes" | | 10 | "A twig snapped somewhere beyond" | | 11 | "Aurora turned sharply, but saw" | | 12 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 13 | "She could hear her own" | | 14 | "The pendant burned against her" | | 15 | "she called out, her voice" | | 16 | "The air had grown colder" | | 17 | "She pulled her jacket tighter" | | 18 | "She quickened her pace, moving" | | 19 | "The Heartstone pulsed brighter now," |
| | ratio | 0.682 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it might as well" | | 1 | "Now she wondered if that" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "But now, beneath a moon that seemed too large and too pale, Aurora Carter found herself blinking at darkness that pressed in from all sides like a held breath." | | 1 | "She could hear her own heartbeat now, loud and ragged, and beneath it something else—a low, rhythmic sound that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at on…" | | 2 | "She pulled her jacket tighter around herself and stepped forward, her boots crunching over dead leaves and something else—something that crunched with a wetness…" | | 3 | "She stopped and pressed her palm flat against one of the standing stones, feeling the bark beneath her fingers—rough, alive, pulsing with a slow heat that trave…" | | 4 | "The pendant blazed against her chest, and she could feel tendrils of heat spreading through her body, wrapping around her organs, her nerves, her very soul." | | 5 | "Pain exploded through Aurora’s chest, white-hot and absolute, and when she finally managed to tear her gaze away, she saw that the crack was spreading, spiderwe…" | | 6 | "Aurora felt hollow, as though something essential had been torn from her chest and left behind in the dirt." | | 7 | "Around her, the standing stones began to hum, their voices joining in a single, terrible chord that made the stars above spin and blur." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice cracking slightly" | | 1 | "she breathed, but her voice was barely audible" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "the thing continued (continue)" | | 5 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.636 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.857 | | effectiveRatio | 0.857 | |