Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD6C751YM7504CH0Z9P4BA2

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.027614
Provider:
Moonshot AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of the Raven's Nest hummed against the November drizzle as Aurora shouldered through the door, still smelling of ginger oil and rain from her last delivery run. Silas was behind the bar polishing a glass that was already clean, which she knew by now meant his mind was somewhere else entirely. He glanced up, nodded once, and tilted his head toward the far corner. "You've got a visitor," he said. "Been asking about you for twenty minutes. Bought a glass of the good Rioja and hasn't touched it." Aurora followed his gaze, and her stomach did something complicated. Eva. Seven years collapsed like a bad scaffold. Eva sitting under a black-and-white photograph of some bombed-out street, coat draped over her shoulders like she'd been styled for the chair itself. Eva, who had once eaten cold beans from a tin on the floor of Rory's student flat, now wearing a watch that probably cost more than the rent on the room above the bar. Her hair was shorter, sculpted. There was a ring on her left hand that caught the low light every time she turned her wine glass, which she kept doing without drinking from it. She saw Rory, and her face did the thing it used to do — the whole face opening, a smile that started somewhere genuine and older than everything else between them. "Oh my God. Look at you." Rory slid into the seat opposite, suddenly aware of her damp jacket, the Yu-Fei Cheung's logo stitched small at the collar, the grease under one fingernail. "Look at *you*," she said, and it came out warmer than she'd planned. "You look like a magazine." "I look like a liability," Eva said, laughing. "Financial services. Canary Wharf. I own three identical blazers, Rory. Three. I've become a spreadsheet with a pulse." "And the ring?" Eva's hand stilled on the glass. "Marcus. He manages a fund. He's — " she seemed to search for the right word and chose a safe one " — kind. You'd like him. Everyone likes him." "That's a lot of qualifying for someone who's kind." Silas appeared at the table's edge without seeming to have crossed the room, set a whisky down in front of Rory, and withdrew with a look that said he'd clocked everything and would say nothing. His limp carried him back to the bar. Rory turned the glass once, the way Eva was turning hers. Two women not drinking. "How did you find me?" Rory asked. "Your mum. I still call her at Christmas." Eva said it simply, like it cost nothing, and Rory felt the small hot shame of how rarely she herself called Cardiff. "She said you were in Soho. Deliveries for a restaurant. I couldn't — " Eva stopped. Started again. "After Evan, after you just vanished, I thought you'd gone to ground somewhere. I thought you'd be — I don't know. A barrister in some provincial town. Wig and everything. I didn't picture the delivery bit." "Well." Rory rubbed the crescent scar on her left wrist, an old nervous habit. "The wig didn't take." "You always said that about everything and then did it brilliantly anyway." The conversation found its old rhythm for a while — stories with the edges worn smooth, the time they'd gotten stranded in Barry Island, Jennifer Carter's legendary Sunday roasts, the lecturer Eva had nearly married at twenty-one. Laughter came easily, and that was almost worse. It made the other thing stand out in sharper relief: the seven years of silence, the unanswered calls after Rory had finally left Evan and taken the train to London with one bag and a split lip, because Eva's number had been the one she couldn't bear to ring. "You called me that night," Eva said suddenly. The bar's noise seemed to drop away around the table. "Three in the morning. I saw it in the morning and I called back six times and you'd changed your number by Friday. Why didn't you leave a message?" Rory stared at the maps on the far wall. Prague. Trieste. Places Silas had bled in and wouldn't discuss. "I was ashamed," she said. "There was this voice in my head — his voice, honestly, still renting space — telling me I'd been warned, that you'd said from the start what he was, and I'd called you jealous for it. I couldn't ring you up and prove you right." "You daft woman." Eva's voice cracked straight down the middle, and the polished Wharf exterior went with it, and for a second she was nineteen again, cross-legged on that floor with the beans. "I didn't want to be *right*. I wanted you on my sofa. I had the sofa ready. I told Marcus once — this is before he was Marcus — I said, there's a girl who might turn up one day needing the spare room, and he looked at me like I was planning for an imaginary refugee." "I'm sorry." "I know you are. I'm sorry too. I should have come looking. I told myself you'd surface when you were ready, but honestly?" Eva finally drank, a real mouthful. "It was easier to be hurt. Hurt is tidy. You can file it." Rory reached across the table and took Eva's hand — the watch, the ring, the familiar bones underneath. "I deliver dumplings and I live above a bar owned by the most suspicious man in London, and I read case law for fun at two in the morning, which I know is tragic. But I'm mine, now. Every stupid part of the day is mine." Eva squeezed back. "Marcus thinks I'm in Winchester at a conference." "Eva." "I know. I'll tell him tonight. I'll tell him I went looking for my oldest friend and found her pouring whisky with a spy." "He's not — " Rory glanced at the bar. Silas was very deliberately not looking at them, which confirmed it. "Retired. Allegedly." They stayed until the bottles on the back shelf caught the streetlight like a second, smaller bar, and when Eva finally stood to go, she shrugged the expensive coat back on and looked, absurdly, like a girl borrowing her mother's clothes. "Sunday," Eva said. "Your mum does a roast. I'll drive. We can ambush her together, it'll take years off her life and add them to ours." "I'll text you my address. It's the one with the green sign. Can't miss it." At the door, Eva paused under the neon, half in, half out of the rain. "You know what the worst of it was? Not the silence. It was that I got engaged, promoted, all of it, and every time something good happened I reached for my phone and you weren't there. Good news has a shelf life, Rory. It went off in my hand for years." Then she was gone into the drizzle, and Rory sat with the two glasses and the shape of the evening, and Silas came over and took the seat Eva had warmed, which he never did with customers. "Old friend?" he said. "The oldest." Rory turned her whisky once more and, at last, drank it. "Silas. How long do you carry a thing before you put it down?" He considered, turning his signet ring on his right hand, slow as a dial. "In my experience, lass, you don't put them down. Someone comes along and takes the other end of the weight. You just have to let them." He gathered the glasses and stood, favoring the bad knee. "She'll be back. That's the kind who always comes back." Upstairs later, Rory texted her mother for the first time in a month: *Sundays. I'm coming home for Sundays. Bringing Eva.* Then she lay in the dark above the bar and listened to the city, lighter by exactly one silence, and slept like someone half forgiven.
created_at"2026-07-25T17:50:11.113Z" 7/25/2026, 5:50:11 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.39
leniency0.78
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.049
84.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"deliberately"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1305
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"familiar"
4"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords10
totalWords1321
ratio0.008
matches
0"you"
1"right"
2"Sundays. I'm coming home for Sundays. Bringing Eva."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
15.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount744
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity2.69
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
November1
Aurora2
Rory15
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Eva20
Silas5
Cardiff1
Started1
Barry1
Island1
Jennifer1
Carter1
Sunday1
Evan1
London1
Wharf1
Upstairs1
Sundays2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Eva"
7"Silas"
8"Jennifer"
9"Carter"
10"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Barry"
2"Island"
3"London"
globalScore0.156
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1321
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean35.7
std28.07
cv0.786
sampleLengths
068
124
210
31
497
531
66
744
826
93
1036
119
1258
137
1484
1518
1612
1794
1847
1969
2090
212
2242
2364
2411
251
2624
2722
2841
2926
3015
3166
3237
334
3426
3560
3646
92.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences53
matches
0"been styled"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs131
matches
0"was turning"
31.54% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences77
ratio0.039
matches
0"She saw Rory, and her face did the thing it used to do — the whole face opening, a smile that started somewhere genuine and older than everything else between them."
1"The conversation found its old rhythm for a while — stories with the edges worn smooth, the time they'd gotten stranded in Barry Island, Jennifer Carter's legendary Sunday roasts, the lecturer Eva had nearly married at twenty-one."
2"Rory reached across the table and took Eva's hand — the watch, the ring, the familiar bones underneath."
95.17% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount747
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04551539491298527
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.018741633199464525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean17.16
std13.88
cv0.809
sampleLengths
031
124
213
36
418
510
61
77
823
934
105
1128
1231
136
1426
1513
165
178
1818
193
206
2130
229
2335
248
2511
264
277
2830
2916
302
3136
3214
334
3412
3537
368
3749
388
3910
4029
419
421
431
448
455
4645
4733
4857
492
84.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.5324675324675324
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners41
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Then she was gone into"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences43
matches
0"He glanced up, nodded once,"
1"Her hair was shorter, sculpted."
2"She saw Rory, and her"
3"she said, and it came"
4"she seemed to search for"
5"His limp carried him back"
6"It made the other thing"
7"They stayed until the bottles"
8"He considered, turning his signet"
9"He gathered the glasses and"
10"I'm coming home for Sundays."
ratio0.256
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences43
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Silas was behind the bar"
2"He glanced up, nodded once,"
3"Aurora followed his gaze, and"
4"Eva sitting under a black-and-white"
5"Eva, who had once eaten"
6"Her hair was shorter, sculpted."
7"She saw Rory, and her"
8"Rory slid into the seat"
9"she said, and it came"
10"Eva said, laughing"
11"Eva's hand stilled on the"
12"she seemed to search for"
13"Silas appeared at the table's"
14"His limp carried him back"
15"Rory turned the glass once,"
16"Eva said it simply, like"
17"Rory rubbed the crescent scar"
18"The conversation found its old"
19"Laughter came easily, and that"
ratio0.837
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Silas was behind the bar polishing a glass that was already clean, which she knew by now meant his mind was somewhere else entirely."
1"Eva, who had once eaten cold beans from a tin on the floor of Rory's student flat, now wearing a watch that probably cost more than the rent on the room above t…"
2"She saw Rory, and her face did the thing it used to do — the whole face opening, a smile that started somewhere genuine and older than everything else between t…"
3"Silas appeared at the table's edge without seeming to have crossed the room, set a whisky down in front of Rory, and withdrew with a look that said he'd clocked…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.439
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.5960%