| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 834 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 834 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 85 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 18 | | totalWords | 825 | | ratio | 0.022 | | matches | | 0 | "Hel portal" | | 1 | "but the Grove isn’t a portal." | | 2 | "Fae boundaries," | | 3 | "Don’t cross unless you’re invited." | | 4 | "Rabbit." | | 5 | "Fox." | | 6 | "Waiting." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 802 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Unless | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Eva | 3 | | Aurora | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly at them" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 825 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 24.26 | | std | 20.76 | | cv | 0.856 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 51 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 55 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 5 |
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| 92.88% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "was locked" | | 2 | "been buried" |
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| 18.59% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t looking" | | 1 | "was remembering" | | 2 | "was tasting" | | 3 | "was warning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers—impossible blooms of blue and silver—tossed in a wind that carried no chill." | | 1 | "Of something else, too—ozone and old blood." | | 2 | "Standing stones—rough-hewn, moss-slicked—rose at the grove’s edge, their surfaces carved with symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly at them." | | 3 | "A sound threaded through the silence—something scratching at earth, rapid and deliberate." | | 4 | "In the sudden silence, she heard it first as a sigh—then a voice, low and wrong, calling her name." | | 5 | "The stones weren’t stones anymore—they were spears, planted to guard something sacred or terrible." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 757 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.02774108322324967 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002642007926023778 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 9.59 | | std | 6.1 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 60.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.4235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the twisted flowers and" | | 1 | "Instead, she followed the sound." | | 2 | "Then she saw them." | | 3 | "Only that the Grove was" |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "They led inward, deeper into" | | 1 | "Their petals brushed her cheeks" | | 2 | "She should have turned back." | | 3 | "It had only ever hummed" | | 4 | "She stepped past the gate." | | 5 | "She’d seen these marks before," | | 6 | "She’d followed the pendant." | | 7 | "It had led her here," | | 8 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 9 | "She’d read about Fae fauna" | | 10 | "Her pulse thrummed in her" | | 11 | "She fumbled for her phone," | | 12 | "She’d forgotten she’d torn her" | | 13 | "She should run." | | 14 | "It led her deeper, past" | | 15 | "She knelt, pressing her palm" | | 16 | "it said, voice like roots" | | 17 | "She ran, but the trees" | | 18 | "They didn’t move as she" | | 19 | "Its fingers ended in roots." |
| | ratio | 0.275 | |
| 91.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The path ended where it" | | 1 | "Aurora paused, hand hovering over" | | 2 | "They led inward, deeper into" | | 3 | "Wildflowers—impossible blooms of blue and" | | 4 | "Their petals brushed her cheeks" | | 5 | "She should have turned back." | | 6 | "The gate was locked, the" | | 7 | "The Heartstone Pendant at her" | | 8 | "*Hel portal*, she thought, *but" | | 9 | "The pendant hadn’t reacted to" | | 10 | "It had only ever hummed" | | 11 | "She stepped past the gate." | | 12 | "The path narrowed, flanked by" | | 13 | "She’d seen these marks before," | | 14 | "*Fae boundaries,* Eva had called" | | 15 | "She’d followed the pendant." | | 16 | "It had led her here," | | 17 | "The wind died." | | 18 | "The flowers stopped moving." | | 19 | "A sound threaded through the" |
| | ratio | 0.738 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the stones pressed closer," | | 1 | "Now it itched, as if" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers—impossible blooms of blue and silver—tossed in a wind that carried no chill." | | 1 | "Standing stones—rough-hewn, moss-slicked—rose at the grove’s edge, their surfaces carved with symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly at t…" | | 2 | "It had led her here, through the park’s overgrown maintenance trails, past the deer that froze mid-step as she passed." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |