| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1051 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1051 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "footfall" | | 6 | "gloom" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "symphony" | | 9 | "tapestry" | | 10 | "raced" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "measured" | | 14 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.71% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 94.37% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a footfall or a creak of wood, but a whispering—like wind through grass, yet somehow closer, more deliberate." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1045 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "Focus," | | 1 | "The pendant will guide you." | | 2 | "They're watching." | | 3 | "You should not be here," | | 4 | "The stones remember." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 1041 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Grove" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Grove | 6 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if bowing" | | 1 | "felt like it had been split in two" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.828 | | wordCount | 1045 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a footfall or a creak of wood, but a whispering" | | 1 | "not on her body but in her mind, like fingers pressing against the soft spot beh" | | 2 | "not in words but in pure understanding" | | 3 | "Not the soft padding of something large, but the precise, measured tread of something small" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 41.8 | | std | 22.66 | | cv | 0.542 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 68 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 51 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 59 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 53 | | 21 | 64 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 12 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | |
| 43.14% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was responding" | | 2 | "wasn't just responding" | | 3 | "was trespassing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed immediately—cooler, thicker, tasting of something sweet and metallic, like blood and honeysuckle." | | 1 | "Not a footfall or a creak of wood, but a whispering—like wind through grass, yet somehow closer, more deliberate." | | 2 | "Somewhere ahead, the grass gave way to something softer—moss, perhaps, or fur." | | 3 | "Just the continuing whispering, now clearly words—though in a language she couldn't name, and yet somehow understood." | | 4 | "Then she felt it—a pressure, not on her body but in her mind, like fingers pressing against the soft spot behind her eyes." | | 5 | "The pendant flared crimson, and she realized with sudden clarity that it wasn't just responding to her proximity to a portal—it was responding to her presence in the Grove itself." | | 6 | "They circled her now, coming from all directions at once, and she could smell it then—the scent of wet earth and something sweeter, like crushed violets mixed with copper." |
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| 94.13% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1049 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04671115347950429 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010486177311725452 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 13.75 | | std | 8.14 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 69.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4473684210526316 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, the grass gave" | | 1 | "Just the continuing whispering, now" | | 2 | "Too many branches, all reaching" | | 3 | "Then she felt it—a pressure," | | 4 | "Only the wildflowers, blooming defiantly" |
| | ratio | 0.069 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She should have been afraid." | | 1 | "It was the calm before" | | 2 | "Her phone showed 11:47 PM." | | 3 | "She'd left Silas's flat an" | | 4 | "She'd learned that lesson early," | | 5 | "She froze, hand drifting to" | | 6 | "She pressed forward." | | 7 | "She couldn't tell anymore." | | 8 | "Her breath hitched, but she" | | 9 | "she called out, her voice" | | 10 | "Their bark was smooth and" | | 11 | "She tried to pull her" | | 12 | "They bled into places, yes," | | 13 | "She needed to move, to" | | 14 | "*You should not be here,*" | | 15 | "She was trespassing in a" | | 16 | "They circled her now, coming" | | 17 | "Her skin prickled where it" | | 18 | "She tried to run, but" | | 19 | "She was back at the" |
| | ratio | 0.278 | |
| 91.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung low and" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped at the boundary" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant at her" | | 3 | "She should have been afraid." | | 4 | "It was the calm before" | | 5 | "The Grove revealed itself as" | | 6 | "The air changed immediately—cooler, thicker," | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion" | | 8 | "Rory had seen stranger things" | | 9 | "Her phone showed 11:47 PM." | | 10 | "She'd left Silas's flat an" | | 11 | "Time moved differently in places" | | 12 | "She'd learned that lesson early," | | 13 | "A sound made her start." | | 14 | "She froze, hand drifting to" | | 15 | "The whispering came again, a" | | 16 | "*The pendant will guide you.*" | | 17 | "She pressed forward." | | 18 | "The stones seemed to lean" | | 19 | "The wildflowers bent away, petals" |
| | ratio | 0.736 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Should have felt the familiar prickling of adrenaline that had kept her alive through too many nights in this city." | | 1 | "Too many branches, all reaching in the same direction, as if bowing." | | 2 | "The whispering grew louder, forming a symphony of voices now, speaking in that impossible tongue, their words weaving together like threads in a tapestry of dre…" | | 3 | "She was trespassing in a space that remembered more than it should, that held memories of things that had never been born and creatures that had never been name…" | | 4 | "Her skin prickled where it touched the grass, which was now clearly a carpet of interwoven roots, alive and moving beneath her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |