| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.7 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 83.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1228 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1228 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.67% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 81 | | totalWords | 1243 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "“When the stone burns, follow where the oaks guard the threshold.”" | | 1 | "Come closer. You’re safe here. We’ve been waiting." | | 2 | "Not yet. Not yet. Give us time." | | 3 | "We know what you’ve seen," | | 4 | "We know what he did." | | 5 | "You gave it willingly," | | 6 | "You wore it to the Grove that night, and you bled for us. The stone remembers." | | 7 | "Not yet," | | 8 | "But soon. The veil grows thin, and you are ours by blood and by choice. When the time comes, you will remember everything." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1198 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.58 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Aurora | 7 | | English | 1 | | Time | 1 | | Eva | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Time" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like lavender and old books" | | 1 | "felt like minutes" | | 2 | "quite remember making, but somehow knew she would keep" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.218 | | wordCount | 1243 | | matches | | 0 | "not English, not any language she knew, but she understood them anyway" | | 1 | "not any language she knew, but she understood them anyway" | | 2 | "Not the crunch of leaves or the soft pad of paws, but actual footsteps" | | 3 | "not physically, but in the space between her thoughts, in the hollows of her bon" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 33.59 | | std | 23.42 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 54 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 64 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 39 | | 26 | 62 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 50 | | 36 | 25 |
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| 83.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been interrupted" | | 2 | "been gone" | | 3 | "been seven" | | 4 | "was etched" | | 5 | "been gone" |
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| 66.67% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was barely touching" | | 2 | "was standing" | | 3 | "were beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 99 | | ratio | 0.131 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter around her shoulders, though the night air carried an unexpected warmth — too warm for late October." | | 1 | "The note from the unknown benefactor had been cryptic — *“When the stone burns, follow where the oaks guard the threshold.”* She’d thought it metaphorical until tonight, until the silver chain had grown hot against her skin and tugged her toward this part of the park like a compass needle finding north." | | 2 | "The park was supposed to be quiet at night — foxes, maybe a stray cat, the rustle of small creatures in the undergrowth." | | 3 | "The whispering came again, closer this time, and she could make out words — not English, not any language she knew, but she understood them anyway." | | 4 | "The path — if it had ever been a path — had vanished." | | 5 | "Not the crunch of leaves or the soft pad of paws, but actual footsteps — human-sized, human-shaped, but wrong somehow." | | 6 | "The whispering returned, but now it was different — angry, frustrated, like children whose game had been interrupted." | | 7 | "Evan had been gone for three months now, and the nightmares had started again — waking up with the taste of copper in her mouth and her hands shaking." | | 8 | "Shapes moved in her peripheral vision — tall and thin, impossibly graceful, their limbs bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 9 | "*You gave it willingly,* came the reply, and now she could hear it clearly — a chorus of voices, all speaking as one." | | 10 | "The glass, the blood, the way she’d clutched at her wounded wrist and prayed for someone — anyone — to help her." | | 11 | "The whispering grew louder, more insistent, and she could feel them pressing closer — not physically, but in the space between her thoughts, in the hollows of her bones." | | 12 | "Her phone showed seven missed calls from Eva, and the timestamp indicated she’d been gone for six hours — though it had felt like minutes." |
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| 86.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1187 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.04886267902274642 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016849199663016005 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 99 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 99 | | mean | 12.56 | | std | 9.24 | | cv | 0.736 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 52 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 44.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 99 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 78.43% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Just her own heartbeat, loud" | | 1 | "Too light, too quick, as" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 88.24% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come to the Fae" | | 1 | "It hung against her chest," | | 2 | "She stopped walking and listened." | | 3 | "She turned her head sharply," | | 4 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 5 | "You’re safe here." | | 6 | "We’ve been waiting.*" | | 7 | "She’d had that checked once," | | 8 | "It didn’t usually react to" | | 9 | "She took a step forward," | | 10 | "She spun around, heart hammering," | | 11 | "Her breath came faster now," | | 12 | "She stood perfectly still, listening" | | 13 | "They circled her, staying just" | | 14 | "she said, trying to keep" | | 15 | "She’d read about places like" | | 16 | "She’d come because she needed" | | 17 | "*We know what you’ve seen,*" | | 18 | "*We know what he did.*" | | 19 | "She could feel dozens of" |
| | ratio | 0.329 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 68 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled her jacket tighter" | | 2 | "The trees stood close together" | | 3 | "She’d come to the Fae" | | 4 | "It hung against her chest," | | 5 | "The note from the unknown" | | 6 | "The standing stones should have" | | 7 | "She stopped walking and listened." | | 8 | "The park was supposed to" | | 9 | "A sound like whispering, barely" | | 10 | "She turned her head sharply," | | 11 | "Her voice sounded too loud" | | 12 | "The whispering came again, closer" | | 13 | "You’re safe here." | | 14 | "We’ve been waiting.*" | | 15 | "Aurora’s hand moved instinctively to" | | 16 | "She’d had that checked once," | | 17 | "It didn’t usually react to" | | 18 | "The pendant pulsed brighter." | | 19 | "She took a step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she walked on instinct," |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 46.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "It hung against her chest, its deep crimson stone pulsing with a faint warmth that traveled up her sternum and settled in her ribs." | | 1 | "A sound like whispering, barely audible beneath the wind, speaking in a language that made her teeth ache." | | 2 | "Too light, too quick, as if whoever was walking was barely touching the ground." | | 3 | "Evan had been gone for three months now, and the nightmares had started again — waking up with the taste of copper in her mouth and her hands shaking." | | 4 | "Shapes moved in her peripheral vision — tall and thin, impossibly graceful, their limbs bending in ways that made her stomach clench." | | 5 | "The ground beneath her feet shifted, becoming spongy, and when she looked down, she saw that she was standing in a circle of mushrooms, their caps glowing with …" | | 6 | "She walked home in silence, the scar on her wrist throbbing with a promise she couldn’t quite remember making, but somehow knew she would keep." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, trying to keep her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the voices sighed (sigh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.3 | | leniency | 0.6 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |