| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "it said warmly [warmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 71.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1048 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "warmly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 52.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1048 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "could feel" | | 5 | "resolved" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1073 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 992 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.4 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "London" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | London | 2 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1073 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 35.77 | | std | 24.98 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 63 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 51 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 90 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 24 |
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| 87.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "were lit" | | 2 | "being looked" | | 3 | "been occupied" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.159 | | matches | | 0 | "That should have been her first warning, but the note had been specific — midnight, the eastern edge of Richmond Park, where the ancient oaks stand like stones — and the note had come with the pendant, wrapped in brown paper, no return address." | | 1 | "But the oaks ahead of her — seven of them, maybe eight, older than anything had a right to be — swayed in a rhythm too slow for wind, too deliberate." | | 2 | "Every reasonable part of her brain — the part that had dragged her through two years of Pre-Law she hadn't wanted, the part that had gotten her out of Evan's flat and onto a train to London — said leave." | | 3 | "Richmond at night had a texture — distant traffic, foxes, the rustle of dry bracken — and all of it cut out like a door closing." | | 4 | "It was November, and the wildflowers — cowslips, campion, things she couldn't name — bloomed thick and white and faintly luminous in the dark, as if the clearing were lit from beneath the soil." | | 5 | "In the center stood a single stone — taller than her, grey, rough-hewn — and it was to the stone that the pendant pulled." | | 6 | "Movement, there and gone — a folding of shadow between the oaks that resolved into nothing when she turned her head." | | 7 | "Her own heartbeat was the loudest thing in the world, and under it — under it, felt more than heard — the pendant kept its slower, steadier time." | | 8 | "The pendant went cold against her chest — so suddenly, so completely, that she gasped — and in the same instant, something moved behind the standing stone." | | 9 | "A tallness rearranged itself against the grey flank of the rock, and though she could see nothing — no figure, no face — she knew with the absolute, animal certainty of prey that she was being looked at." | | 10 | "Low and pleased, and it came from everywhere — from the oaks, from the flowers, from the ground beneath her feet, vibrating up through the soles of her boots." | | 11 | "The pendant flared hot again — hot enough to sting — and glowed through her jacket, a deep crimson light, and by that light she finally saw it: the space behind the stone was occupied." | | 12 | "Behind her — she heard this, and it was the only sound in the whole dead clearing — the oaks closed like a door." |
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| 98.08% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 237 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 10 | | adverbRatio | 0.04219409282700422 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004219409282700422 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 13.09 | | std | 11.23 | | cv | 0.858 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 68.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4567901234567901 | | totalSentences | 81 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she stepped between the" | | 1 | "Of course nothing answered." | | 2 | "Then came the singing." |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 88.57% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone." | | 1 | "It had been warm since" | | 2 | "She should leave." | | 3 | "Her footsteps stopped making noise." | | 4 | "She stamped once, hard, on" | | 5 | "It was November, and the" | | 6 | "she said, and her voice" | | 7 | "She could feel it, a" | | 8 | "She walked toward it, and" | | 9 | "It started at the edges." | | 10 | "She told herself it was" | | 11 | "She told herself it was" | | 12 | "They stood utterly still in" | | 13 | "Her own heartbeat was the" | | 14 | "It was so faint at" | | 15 | "It had no words, but" | | 16 | "It was the sound of" | | 17 | "she called out, and the" | | 18 | "It was the silence of" | | 19 | "She did not run." |
| | ratio | 0.329 | |
| 81.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 53 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been told to" | | 1 | "That should have been her" | | 2 | "The name only her friends" | | 3 | "That was the wrong word." | | 4 | "Trees didn't breathe." | | 5 | "The night air lay flat" | | 6 | "She checked her phone." | | 7 | "The pendant sat warm against" | | 8 | "It had been warm since" | | 9 | "She should leave." | | 10 | "Every reasonable part of her" | | 11 | "The change was immediate." | | 12 | "Sound went first." | | 13 | "Richmond at night had a" | | 14 | "Her footsteps stopped making noise." | | 15 | "She stamped once, hard, on" | | 16 | "The clearing ahead of her" | | 17 | "That was wrong." | | 18 | "It was November, and the" | | 19 | "The grass under them was" |
| | ratio | 0.757 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Whoever had sent it knew" | | 1 | "Now she stood at the" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Every reasonable part of her brain — the part that had dragged her through two years of Pre-Law she hadn't wanted, the part that had gotten her out of Evan's fl…" | | 1 | "It was November, and the wildflowers — cowslips, campion, things she couldn't name — bloomed thick and white and faintly luminous in the dark, as if the clearin…" | | 2 | "Movement, there and gone — a folding of shadow between the oaks that resolved into nothing when she turned her head." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |