| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 95.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1211 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.07% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1211 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "could feel" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "racing" | | 9 | "searing" | | 10 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.19% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1199 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 1175 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.34 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 4 | | November | 2 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "quite see" | | 1 | "Something like whispering, but the words wer" | | 2 | "path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet" | | 3 | "quite her own heartbeat" | | 4 | "steps that seemed to come from a place that existed between dimensions" | | 5 | "fabric that seemed to be made of twilight and starlight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.834 | | wordCount | 1199 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the light crunch of her own boots, but heavy, deliberate steps" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 36.33 | | std | 26.59 | | cv | 0.732 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 77 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 45 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 60 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 67 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 72 | | 29 | 47 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 35 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "been scrawled" | | 1 | "was locked" |
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| 44.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't imagining" | | 1 | "was calling" | | 2 | "were listening" | | 3 | "was walking" | | 4 | "was burning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't be here—not really." | | 1 | "Rory—Aurora—whatever she was calling herself tonight—took a breath through her nose, noting the scent that hit her first: damp earth and something sweeter, floral, impossibly out of season." | | 2 | "Where there should have been dirt and grass and the familiar markers of a London park, there was only more trees—taller, stranger, their bark silver and smooth as though they'd never known weather." | | 3 | "Something like whispering, but the words were wrong—sibilant consonants that caught in her throat before she could identify them." | | 4 | "In the half-light, shapes moved at the edge of her vision—tall figures, just beyond where the trees grew thick." | | 5 | "The light that filtered through them wasn't green anymore—it shifted through colors she couldn't name, colors that hurt to look at directly." | | 6 | "She could feel her pulse hammering now, could feel it racing in time with something else—something that wasn't quite her own heartbeat." | | 7 | "She felt the press of a hand—warm, but not human warm—and the slight drag of nails against her cheek." | | 8 | "But the smile that spread across its features was all wrong—too wide, too knowing, filled with understanding that made Aurora's skin crawl." |
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| 96.62% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 114 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.043859649122807015 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017543859649122806 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 13.63 | | std | 8.84 | | cv | 0.649 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 38 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 45.45% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course she was alone." | | 1 | "Of course this was her" | | 2 | "Just the swaying of flowers," |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 81.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't be here—not really." | | 1 | "She'd heard whispers about places" | | 2 | "They shouldn't be blooming in" | | 3 | "Her footsteps crunched through fallen" | | 4 | "She stopped short when she" | | 5 | "They marked the boundary, she" | | 6 | "She spun around." | | 7 | "It wound away from her" | | 8 | "She wasn't sure which direction" | | 9 | "Her heartbeat thudded in her" | | 10 | "She took another step forward," | | 11 | "It wasn't close." | | 12 | "It wasn't far." | | 13 | "It was everywhere and nowhere," | | 14 | "She stopped walking and pressed" | | 15 | "She could feel her pulse" | | 16 | "She didn't turn." | | 17 | "Her entire body was locked" | | 18 | "She felt the press of" | | 19 | "she whispered, her voice cracking" |
| | ratio | 0.346 | |
| 62.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate clicked shut behind" | | 1 | "Aurora pressed her palm against" | | 2 | "The Richmond Park sign was" | | 3 | "She shouldn't be here—not really." | | 4 | "The address on the note" | | 5 | "She'd heard whispers about places" | | 6 | "Fae folklore, old" | | 7 | "The artifact had guided her" | | 8 | "Rory—Aurora—whatever she was calling herself" | | 9 | "They shouldn't be blooming in" | | 10 | "Her footsteps crunched through fallen" | | 11 | "She stopped short when she" | | 12 | "The standing oaks stood taller" | | 13 | "They marked the boundary, she" | | 14 | "A sound drifted on the" | | 15 | "Something like whispering, but the" | | 16 | "She spun around." | | 17 | "The path was back." | | 18 | "It wound away from her" | | 19 | "She wasn't sure which direction" |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "The gate clicked shut behind her with a sound that seemed too deliberate, too final." | | 1 | "The address on the note had been scrawled in hurried ink, but the landmarks were precise enough: the oak standing stones, the way the path curved left after the…" | | 2 | "Rory—Aurora—whatever she was calling herself tonight—took a breath through her nose, noting the scent that hit her first: damp earth and something sweeter, flor…" | | 3 | "Where there should have been dirt and grass and the familiar markers of a London park, there was only more trees—taller, stranger, their bark silver and smooth …" | | 4 | "Something like whispering, but the words were wrong—sibilant consonants that caught in her throat before she could identify them." | | 5 | "The pendant grew warmer against her chest, its crimson gemstone throwing off a faint light that did nothing to illuminate the clearing." | | 6 | "She took another step forward, then another, following the path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet." | | 7 | "The wildflowers grew thicker now, carpeted the ground in a riot of petals that whispered against her shoes with each step." | | 8 | "She could feel her pulse hammering now, could feel it racing in time with something else—something that wasn't quite her own heartbeat." | | 9 | "The crimson stone dimmed, then flared, casting long shadows that stretched across the floral carpet like grasping fingers." | | 10 | "Not the light crunch of her own boots, but heavy, deliberate steps that seemed to come from a place that existed between dimensions." | | 11 | "The spacing was wrong, too wide, as though whoever was walking had legs that bent in directions human legs never did." | | 12 | "Its face was a beautiful thing, too beautiful, with eyes that held the color of the pendant's gemstone and hair that flowed like liquid silver." | | 13 | "The pendant flared to life, blazing crimson and throwing her into those shadows that had been trying so desperately to be seen." | | 14 | "The breathing started again, closer now, filling her lungs with air that tasted of copper and old regrets." | | 15 | "The flowers grew faster, taller, their stems thickening until they blocked her vision and forced her to the ground where she writhed, trying to break free from …" | | 16 | "The last thing she remembered before the darkness took her was the taste of flowers, and the certainty that somewhere in the distance, a gate was closing with a…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The word came out, uncertain" | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice cracking" | | 2 | "it said, and the voice was harmony and discord all at once, like multiple people speaking in unison but each with their own pitch" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |