| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "it said gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 80.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1561 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1561 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "racing" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "beacon" | | 7 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 149 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 22 | | totalWords | 1583 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "Midnight. The grove. Don't bring anyone. — I." | | 1 | "stopped" | | 2 | "there" | | 3 | "Glowing" | | 4 | "near a Hel portal" | | 5 | "her" | | 6 | "ringed" | | 7 | "Footfalls." | | 8 | "thicker" | | 9 | "Don't bring anyone." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Her phone said 11:47, and then, when she looked again a moment later, it said 12:23, and then the screen went black and …" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1549 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.45 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Watching" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Aurora | 7 | | Eva | 7 | | Roehampton | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | October | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Two | 3 | | Watching | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Roehampton" | | 2 | "October" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1583 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 33.68 | | std | 27.37 | | cv | 0.813 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 96 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 46 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 62 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 83 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 80 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 46 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 75 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 68 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 76 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 49 | | 35 | 86 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 62 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 77 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 32 |
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| 92.99% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "were frightened" | | 1 | "been shown" | | 2 | "been shut" | | 3 | "been warned" | | 4 | "was *ringed" |
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| 51.85% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 270 | | matches | | 0 | "were holding" | | 1 | "wasn't blowing" | | 2 | "was slamming" | | 3 | "were circling" | | 4 | "was making" | | 5 | "was racing " |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 23 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 149 | | ratio | 0.121 | | matches | | 0 | "— I.* The handwriting was Eva's, or close enough to fool her, except for the slant of the k's, which leaned the wrong way." | | 1 | "It had been cold all evening, which should have reassured her — it only warmed near the portals, the thin places, the doors that shouldn't exist." | | 2 | "Not faded — *stopped*, like a door had been shut." | | 3 | "The warmth was faint — barely a flush, a coal breathing under ash — but it was *there*, and it hadn't been there a moment ago." | | 4 | "Time moved strangely here; she knew that, had been warned of it in a half-whispered conversation she still wasn't sure she believed." | | 5 | "She'd been watching them without really watching them, letting her eyes go soft the way she did on long delivery runs, and she realized — slowly, the way you realize a room has gone quiet — that they were all facing her." | | 6 | "She'd been sitting still too long in the dark and her tired brain had started assigning intention to randomness; she knew how that worked, she'd read about it, pareidolia, the mind's hunger for patterns—" | | 7 | "But her body had already decided; her heart was slamming, her palms were wet, the scar on her left wrist tingling the way it did before storms." | | 8 | "She'd noted it when she arrived — branches wove together overhead, she'd thought, she'd literally thought the words — and now, when she looked up, she saw the canopy was there but the trunks were wrong." | | 9 | "From somewhere in the dark beyond the stones — close, closer than the boundary should have allowed — a twig snapped." | | 10 | "A rhythm like a heartbeat, and not in time with hers, which was racing — slower than hers, steadier, patient." | | 11 | "It had a listening quality, as though the entire clearing — the stones, the flowers, the woven branches — had leaned in." | | 12 | "It stood the height of a person, roughly, though the proportions kept slipping when she tried to fix them — shoulders too wide, or too high, or the head set wrong on the neck." | | 13 | "Aurora's mind, cool-headed even now, even with terror pouring through her like ice water, began to move the way it did under pressure — fast, lateral, ruthless." | | 14 | "All of them, all at once, a soft rustling ripple across the clearing, away from her — toward the stones, toward the thing in the doorway, like sunflowers greeting the sun." | | 15 | "Behind her, the clearing's far edge was dark and unmarked — no second boundary, no stones, just a wall of oak and shadow that she suddenly could not remember seeing from outside." | | 16 | "The thing between the stones raised one arm — too long, she saw now, unmistakably too long, the hand hanging level with its knee — and beckoned." | | 17 | "The pendant beat against her chest, hotter and hotter, and out in the dark beyond the clearing — beyond the boundary, beyond the world — something vast shifted its weight, and waited." |
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| 97.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1534 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 65 | | adverbRatio | 0.0423728813559322 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011734028683181226 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 149 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 149 | | mean | 10.62 | | std | 10.32 | | cv | 0.971 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 44.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.3624161073825503 | | totalSentences | 149 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course they didn't move." | | 1 | "Just the bracken slope, silver-edged," | | 2 | "Just the name, flat, into" | | 3 | "Then, horribly, a third." |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "— I.* The handwriting was" | | 1 | "She'd noticed that on the" | | 2 | "She'd slipped through a gap" | | 3 | "She kept thinking she heard" | | 4 | "She kept telling herself it" | | 5 | "It had been cold all" | | 6 | "She found the standing stones" | | 7 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 8 | "It should have been pitch" | | 9 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 10 | "She lifted the stone away" | | 11 | "She let it fall back" | | 12 | "She did not say *near" | | 13 | "Her phone said 11:47, and" | | 14 | "She pressed the power button" | | 15 | "She put it away." | | 16 | "She tried not to think" | | 17 | "She sat down on a" | | 18 | "It was the flowers first." | | 19 | "She'd been watching them without" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 90.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The bus had dropped her" | | 1 | "Eva's note had been specific." | | 2 | "— I.* The handwriting was" | | 3 | "She'd noticed that on the" | | 4 | "People wrote differently when they" | | 5 | "People wrote differently when they" | | 6 | "The park closed at dusk." | | 7 | "She'd slipped through a gap" | | 8 | "The park was vast and" | | 9 | "She kept thinking she heard" | | 10 | "She kept telling herself it" | | 11 | "The pendant hung cold against" | | 12 | "It had been cold all" | | 13 | "She found the standing stones" | | 14 | "A whole drift of them," | | 15 | "Aurora stopped at the boundary." | | 16 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 17 | "The clearing was perhaps twenty" | | 18 | "It should have been pitch" | | 19 | "A faint silvery light lay" |
| | ratio | 0.739 | |
| 45.05% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the thrill had curdled" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 55.39% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd slipped through a gap in the fence near Roehampton Gate that Eva had shown her once, years ago, back when sneaking into Richmond after dark was the kind o…" | | 1 | "It had been cold all evening, which should have reassured her — it only warmed near the portals, the thin places, the doors that shouldn't exist." | | 2 | "A whole drift of them, pale and open-faced in the dark, as though someone had scattered summer across the clearing and forgotten to take it back." | | 3 | "The silence had a texture to it, a pressure, as though the clearing were holding its breath around her." | | 4 | "She tracked them by sound, her whole body pivoting in small increments, and she understood, with a cold that had nothing to do with the October air, that whatev…" | | 5 | "A rhythm like a heartbeat, and not in time with hers, which was racing — slower than hers, steadier, patient." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |