Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7SD73FZA9T3KHXSSK0C1N

Run Details

Duration:
20.2s
Cost:
$0.000483
Provider:
Poolside

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest breathed in low amber light, the kind that pooled in the corners and clung to the edges of old photographs. The green neon sign above the entrance hummed its familiar thrum, casting a sickly glow across the worn wooden floorboards. Maps of forgotten territories and black-and-white portraits of faces that had long since gone quiet lined the walls, their eyes seeming to follow anyone who passed. Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, her bright blue eyes scanning the room with the practiced efficiency of someone who’d learned to read spaces quickly. She’d been working the evening shift for Golden Empress for three months now, delivering meals to the odd clientele who lingered in the bar after closing time, and she knew every shadowed corner of Silas’ domain. She was halfway toward the bar when she saw her. Eva. Standing near the back wall, where a cluster of vintage bottles caught the light in a way that made them look like soldiers standing guard. Her hair was pulled back in a loose bun, strands escaping to frame a face that was both familiar and strange. Aurora’s scar, a small crescent on her left wrist, tingled as if responding to the memory of childhood summers spent in Cardiff, when they’d been inseparable. But this woman was older—taller, somehow, with a quiet strength in the set of her shoulders that Aurora hadn’t recognized before. She wore a tailored navy coat over a silk blouse, her hands wrapped around a paper cup that bore the logo of a law firm. Aurora hesitated. The door chimed as another patron entered, and she stepped back, her heel catching on the edge of a worn rug. She straightened quickly, smoothing her black hair back from her face, the scar on her wrist flashing briefly under the dim light. “Aurora,” Eva said, her voice catching something like surprise, or maybe recognition. “What are you doing here?” The question hung between them, heavy with unspoken years. Aurora had left Cardiff three years ago, fleeing the wreckage of a relationship that had nearly broken her, following Eva’s insistence that London would be good for her. They’d spoken occasionally—texts, emails, a few hurried phone calls when the distance between them felt too vast to bridge—but she hadn’t expected this. “I deliver for Golden Empress,” Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt. “Yu-Fei asked me to drop off some leftovers to someone in the building. Silas let me use the back entrance.” She gestured toward the bookshelf that concealed the secret room, its presence a quiet reminder of the bar’s layered secrets. “You didn’t move to Prague, did you?” Eva’s lips twitched, almost a smile. “Not yet. I’m here for a conference. A friend of mine is presenting on urban development in Eastern Europe. It’s… ironic, isn’t it? I’m supposed to be somewhere else, but here I am.” She took a sip of her coffee, the cup warm in her hands. “How long have you been working this job?” “Since October.” Aurora moved to the counter, her boots clicking against the floor. “Silas figured I could use the extra hours. The flat above the bar is convenient, and—” She paused, glancing at Eva. “And I needed something stable after… after everything.” “Everything.” Eva’s laugh was soft, edged with something like pity. “I remember when you used to say you’d never let anything break you. That was before Evan, wasn’t it?” Aurora’s fingers twitched toward the scar on her wrist, the ghost of a memory pressing against her skin. “He wasn’t—” She stopped, the words tasting like ash. “He wasn’t like that before. I thought I could fix it. Or he could.” “I know.” Eva set her cup down, the sound sharp in the quiet bar. “I remember how you used to argue with your father about it. How you’d say he didn’t understand, that no one did.” Aurora looked away, focusing on the grain of the wooden counter. “He did understand, eventually.” “Did he?” Eva stepped closer, her perfume faint but distinct—something floral with a hint of sandalwood. “Did he ever ask what you wanted? Really ask?” The question unsettled something in Aurora. She had a habit of shrinking back when faced with the weight of truth, of letting others speak for her when the words got too tangled. “I wanted to be a lawyer,” she said, almost to herself. “Like him.” “And now?” Aurora glanced at her delivery bag, then at the photographs on the wall—her parents, beaming in front of a university building, her father in his barrister’s robes, her mother with a stack of textbooks. “Now I deliver food.” She shrugged, but her voice wavered. “I’m not sure what that means.” Eva studied her, really looked at her, and Aurora felt exposed. The scar on her wrist, the way her hair had grown out in uneven strands, the slight tension in her jaw—none of it was the same as when they’d been teenagers sneaking out to the docks or racing through the streets of Cardiff. “You look tired,” she said. “I haven’t slept well lately.” Aurora rubbed her temples, then caught herself. “Is that so surprising?” “No,” Eva said quietly. “Not really.” She turned toward the bar, where Silas was wiping down bottles with methodical strokes. “I came here to find you, actually. To tell you something.” “About what?” Eva’s gaze drifted to the bookshelf, half-expecting it to swing open and reveal another world entirely. “About Cardiff. About the firm. About the things we left unsaid.” Aurora felt her pulse quicken. “We’re not—we don’t have to—” “We don’t have to talk about Evan.” Eva’s voice was gentle but firm. “But we should talk about us. About the things we both carried away when we said goodbye.” The bar seemed to hold its breath. Outside, the city hummed with late-night traffic, but inside, the only sound was the soft clink of glass and the distant thrum of the neon sign. Aurora thought of the scar on her wrist, of the accident that had left her with a mark she’d never quite learned to hide, of the way her mother had cried when she stitched it closed. She thought of Eva, of the way she’d looked at her that night when they’d last spoken, the way she’d pressed that letter into Aurora’s hands and said, *You deserve better than this.* “What did you want to say?” Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper. Eva reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a photograph—faded, creased at the edges. In it, two girls grinned at the camera, arms slung around each other’s shoulders, their teeth wide and unselfconscious in the sunlight. They were standing in front of a red phone box, the kind that no longer existed in Cardiff’s rebuilt streets. “I wanted to tell you that I’m sorry,” Eva said. “For leaving you behind. For not fighting harder when you tried to come back. For not being the friend you thought you needed.” Aurora stared at the photograph, at the girl in the background who was now standing in front of her, changed but unmistakably the same. “You didn’t have to apologize,” she said. “You went where you had to go.” “But I came back,” Eva said. “And I found you here, delivering food to strangers, pretending you don’t think about the things you used to love. That’s not fair to you.” “I don’t think about them anymore,” Aurora lied. “Liar.” Eva smiled, and it lit up her face in a way that made Aurora’s chest ache. “You think about them every day. You just don’t want to admit it.” The words settled between them like snow. Aurora’s shoulders slumped, just slightly, and she let her gaze drift to the photographs on the wall again. Her parents, younger, happier, before the world had begun to press too hard against their edges. Before Evan. Before the letter. Before the choice. “I’m sorry,” she said, the words rough. “I’m sorry I left.” Eva nodded, as if this had all along been expected. “Me too. For making you choose.” They stood there for a long moment, two women who had once been inseparable, now strangers who had stumbled into each other by chance. The weight of time pressed down on them, unspoken regrets and roads not taken, and somewhere in the distance, a bell chimed, marking the hour. “I have to go back,” Eva said finally. “The conference ends at midnight.” Aurora nodded, tucking the photograph into her coat pocket. “I’ll see you next time, then.” “Next time,” Eva agreed, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw something flicker in her eyes—not just recognition, but hope. Or maybe it was just the green neon light playing tricks. When Eva left, the bar settled back into its quiet rhythm. Silas glanced up from his bottles, giving Aurora a knowing smile. She didn’t ask him about it. She didn’t need to. Some things were too heavy to explain.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
1"Eva said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.962
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.077
76.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count3
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"really"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1510
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count2
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"unsettled"
count1
6
word"weight"
count2
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"methodical"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanning"
2"silk"
3"unspoken"
4"reminder"
5"unsettled"
6"weight"
7"wavered"
8"tension"
9"racing"
10"methodical"
11"pulse"
12"whisper"
13"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of truth"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1501
ratio0.003
matches
0"You deserve better than this."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
41.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1103
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff4
Aurora24
Eva21
London1
Silas2
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Aurora"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.412
windowScore0.5
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if responding to the memory of childhood summers spent in Cardiff, when they’d been inseparable"
1"something like surprise, or maybe recognitio"
2"something like pity"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.666
wordCount1501
matches
0"not just recognition, but hope"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"pressed that letter"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean36.61
std28.67
cv0.783
sampleLengths
0133
110
21
3118
445
517
660
760
860
942
1029
1141
1236
1315
1425
1545
162
1750
1859
1916
2031
212
2227
2310
2430
25102
2614
2757
2833
2938
3031
318
3230
3349
3411
3516
3649
3713
3815
3932
4039
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"was pulled"
1"been expected"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was wiping"
1"were standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences104
ratio0.067
matches
0"But this woman was older—taller, somehow, with a quiet strength in the set of her shoulders that Aurora hadn’t recognized before."
1"They’d spoken occasionally—texts, emails, a few hurried phone calls when the distance between them felt too vast to bridge—but she hadn’t expected this."
2"“Did he?” Eva stepped closer, her perfume faint but distinct—something floral with a hint of sandalwood."
3"Aurora glanced at her delivery bag, then at the photographs on the wall—her parents, beaming in front of a university building, her father in his barrister’s robes, her mother with a stack of textbooks."
4"The scar on her wrist, the way her hair had grown out in uneven strands, the slight tension in her jaw—none of it was the same as when they’d been teenagers sneaking out to the docks or racing through the streets of Cardiff."
5"Eva reached into her coat pocket and pulled out a photograph—faded, creased at the edges."
6"“Next time,” Eva agreed, and for a moment, Aurora thought she saw something flicker in her eyes—not just recognition, but hope."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount430
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.027906976744186046
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.009302325581395349
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean14.43
std9.8
cv0.679
sampleLengths
023
120
226
328
436
510
61
725
821
926
1021
1125
122
1321
1422
1512
165
179
1828
1923
2013
2140
227
236
2446
258
2613
2721
288
2910
3019
3118
329
3314
3414
3522
3611
374
3816
399
406
4126
4211
432
442
4534
4610
476
4811
4943
48.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3557692307692308
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences70
matches
0"She’d been working the evening"
1"She was halfway toward the"
2"Her hair was pulled back"
3"She wore a tailored navy"
4"She straightened quickly, smoothing her"
5"They’d spoken occasionally—texts, emails, a"
6"She gestured toward the bookshelf"
7"She took a sip of"
8"She paused, glancing at Eva"
9"She stopped, the words tasting"
10"She had a habit of"
11"she said, almost to herself"
12"She shrugged, but her voice"
13"She turned toward the bar,"
14"She thought of Eva, of"
15"They were standing in front"
16"Her parents, younger, happier, before"
17"she said, the words rough"
18"They stood there for a"
19"She didn’t ask him about"
ratio0.3
17.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences70
matches
0"The Raven's Nest breathed in"
1"The green neon sign above"
2"Maps of forgotten territories and"
3"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap"
4"She’d been working the evening"
5"She was halfway toward the"
6"Her hair was pulled back"
7"Aurora’s scar, a small crescent"
8"She wore a tailored navy"
9"The door chimed as another"
10"She straightened quickly, smoothing her"
11"Eva said, her voice catching"
12"The question hung between them,"
13"Aurora had left Cardiff three"
14"They’d spoken occasionally—texts, emails, a"
15"Aurora said, her voice steadier"
16"She gestured toward the bookshelf"
17"Eva’s lips twitched, almost a"
18"She took a sip of"
19"Aurora moved to the counter,"
ratio0.886
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Before the letter."
1"Before the choice."
ratio0.029
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Maps of forgotten territories and black-and-white portraits of faces that had long since gone quiet lined the walls, their eyes seeming to follow anyone who pas…"
1"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, her bright blue eyes scanning the room with the practiced efficiency of someone who’d learned to read spac…"
2"Standing near the back wall, where a cluster of vintage bottles caught the light in a way that made them look like soldiers standing guard."
3"Her hair was pulled back in a loose bun, strands escaping to frame a face that was both familiar and strange."
4"Aurora’s scar, a small crescent on her left wrist, tingled as if responding to the memory of childhood summers spent in Cardiff, when they’d been inseparable."
5"She wore a tailored navy coat over a silk blouse, her hands wrapped around a paper cup that bore the logo of a law firm."
6"She straightened quickly, smoothing her black hair back from her face, the scar on her wrist flashing briefly under the dim light."
7"Aurora had left Cardiff three years ago, fleeing the wreckage of a relationship that had nearly broken her, following Eva’s insistence that London would be good…"
8"Aurora stared at the photograph, at the girl in the background who was now standing in front of her, changed but unmistakably the same."
9"They stood there for a long moment, two women who had once been inseparable, now strangers who had stumbled into each other by chance."
5.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Eva said, her voice catching something like surprise, or maybe recognition"
1"Aurora said, her voice steadier than she felt"
2"Aurora moved, her boots clicking against the floor"
3"she said, almost to herself"
4"She shrugged, but her voice wavered"
5"Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora lied (lie)"
1"Eva agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.077
75.1971%