Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD7V1SZ152N8WTPX7G2DVAC

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27.6s
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$0.014144
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The bell over the door at The Raven's Nest jingled just after nine, letting in a gust of January air and the needle hiss of rain against Frith Street. Rory didn't look up at first. She was perched on the far end of the bar on a stool that wobbled, her delivery bag dumped at her feet, the red Golden Empress logo smeared with rain. Her shift was over, her hair was wet at the ends, straight and black and cut blunt at her shoulders, and her knuckles were white around a chipped mug of tea that Silas made for her when she came in like this — not because she asked, but because he knew she wouldn't ask for anything stronger on a work night. The Nest was quiet for a Thursday. The green neon outside buzzed and bled its color across the wet pavement, and inside, its reflection swam in the lacquered bar top. The maps on the walls were dark with age, their edges curling. Someone had turned the old radiator up too high and the air smelled like damp wool and lemon cleaner and old beer. Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades. His auburn hair was more grey than she remembered from when she'd first moved in upstairs, pulled back low, his beard trimmed to a neat point. He favored his left leg tonight; the cold always got to it. The silver signet on his right hand caught the light when he turned the glass. "You're going to wear a hole through that mug," he said without looking at her. Rory lifted the mug slightly, found it empty, set it back down. The small crescent-shaped mark on her left wrist showed pale against her skin when her sleeve rode up. "It's my grounding technique." "Mm. Very zen." The bell jingled again, and this time she did look up, because the draft hit the back of her neck and because Silas's shoulders tightened, just a fraction, the way they always did when someone new came in — old habit. A woman stood in the doorway, shaking out an umbrella, rain dripping from the shoulders of a good black coat. Not a good coat in the thrifted sense. A good coat in the real sense. Wool, cut clean, belted. It took Rory a full three seconds. Eva's hair had been long in school, half the time in a messy ponytail leaking yellow highlighter ink. Now it was cropped short, bleached nearly white on top and dark underneath, swept to one side. Her face was thinner. Same mouth, though, wide and quick, and the same way of taking up a room without appearing to try. Eva saw her at the exact same second Rory placed her. "Oh, fuck," Eva said. Rory slid off her stool. Too fast. The stool scraped loud against the floor. "Evie?" Eva laughed, a sharp, startled sound, and crossed the three steps between them and then stopped, as if she couldn't decide whether she was allowed to touch her. Her eyes, lined dark, went bright blue to bright blue. "Rory? Holy shit. Rory Carter, living in a bar." "It's above the bar," Rory said automatically, and then, hearing how stupid that sounded, opened her arms. Eva smelled like expensive perfume and rain. Her coat was damp. Under it she wore a soft grey jumper and trousers that looked pressed despite the weather. Her hug was hard and brief and warm. When she pulled back her hands stayed on Rory's forearms. "You cut your hair," Eva said. "You bleached yours." "I mean — look at you." Eva's grin was the same. It made her whole face untidy. "London suits you. You look — you look grown up." That was the word for it, Rory thought. Eva had always looked like she was about to be sent out of class. Now she looked like someone who sat on the other side of a desk and decided things. There was a thin, fine line at the corner of her left eye, not a wrinkle, a scar from something. A little silver hoop in her cartilage. Her nails were short and unpainted. Silas had gone very still behind the bar. He watched them with his quiet, hazel-eyed watchfulness, not interrupting. "You never said you were coming back to Soho," Rory said. "I wasn't. I'm — I'm here for work, actually. Dinner fell through, I was just walking, I saw the sign." Eva glanced over her shoulder at the green neon bleeding down the glass. "I didn't know this was yours." "It's not," Rory said. "It's Silas's. I live upstairs." Eva turned. Silas inclined his head. "Silas Blackwood," he said. "Welcome to the Nest." "Eva Hughes," she said, and offered a hand. His signet flashed as he shook it. "You two know each other," Silas said, not a question. "We were inseparable," Eva said, still looking at Rory. "Year seven to year — God, until you left Cardiff. Missed your entire uni career, you cow." "I sent you pictures of the campus," Rory said. "You sent me one picture of a pigeon sitting on a law textbook. With the caption 'peer.'" A laugh cracked out of Rory before she could stop it, loud in the quiet bar. A couple near the maps looked over. Rory felt her face go hot. Silas, with the perfect, invisible tact of a former spy, set two glasses down. Whisky for Eva without asking, tea topped up for Rory. Then he limped, slight and deliberate, toward the back, where the bookshelf hid the false wall, giving them the bar to themselves under the pretense of inventory. Eva perched on the stool next to Rory's, unwound her scarf. She ordered edamame once, Rory thought, at a Nando's in town and pronounced it like it was a dare. "So," Eva said, cradling the whisky. "Pre-law's worst nightmare, delivery driver by day, barfly by night. Is this what you had planned?" Rory bristled out of old reflex. "Part-time. And I'm saving. I'm — I like it here. It's quiet." "It's fucking tiny," Eva said, affectionate. "How's Brentford? No — Brendan? Your dad still being —" "Brendan, yeah." Rory pulled her sleeve down over her wrist. "He's fine. Mum's retired. They visit. Sometimes." Eva nodded. Sipped. Her eyes flicked to the stairs at the back that led up to Rory's flat. "Do you remember when you said you were never, ever going to live in London?" she said, quieter. "You said London was where people went to pretend they were someone else." "I was seventeen." "You were very convincing at seventeen." Rory stared at her tea. The radiator ticked. Outside, a bus hissed past. "What about you?" she said. "You were going to do art foundation and move to Berlin and never wear matching socks again. You look — you look very corporate." "I am very corporate," Eva said, and there was a flash of something hard, amused, unapologetic. "Brand strategy. Clients like the hair. Edgy but employable. I have a flat in Clapham with a dishwasher that talks to me. And a girlfriend. Her name's Priya." Rory's head snapped up. "You have a girlfriend?" "Two years. She hates it when I smoke, so I only do it when she's away." Eva smiled, but it didn't quite reach. "I was going to tell you. I wrote it like four times. Then deleted it." The weight of it landed all at once, not dramatic, just heavy. The two years of messages that had gotten shorter. The last Christmas where Rory had video-called and Eva had been busy, then busy again, then had sent a text — sorry, mad week x. "You could have just told me," Rory said. Her voice was even. Cool-headed, people had always called her. It was a different thing from being calm. "I know," Eva said. She looked down at her drink. "I know. It's just — after Evan — after everything, you left and you were finally out, and I was still there, and I felt like —" "Like what?" "Like I'd told you to jump and then got annoyed you landed somewhere else." Rory felt the old familiar click of an argument slotting into place, the way it used to in their kitchen in Cardiff when Jennifer Carter would put biscuits out and they'd fight about something stupid and then eat the whole pack in apology. Her jaw tightened. "You did tell me to jump," she said. "You told me to get on the Megabus with one bag and you said Brendan would understand later. And you were right." "I know I was right." Eva's fingers tightened around her glass. "Do you know how terrifying it is to be right about that kind of thing? You were my best friend and you were disappearing and I was — I couldn't do anything else." "You did everything." "And then you stopped answering properly." "You moved on," Rory said. "We both did," Eva shot back, and then immediately looked sorry. The scar at the corner of her eye caught the low light. Silas had returned, soundless on the old floor, and set down a small bowl of peanuts he knew Rory didn't like but put out anyway. He caught Rory's eye over Eva's shoulder. Is this okay? His expression asked. She gave a tiny nod. Eva exhaled. "I missed you. Properly. Not in a, oh, I miss the old days way. In a, I still have that stupid mix CD you made me in my car, and it doesn't even play anymore." "I have that photo of you with green hair from the school play still taped to my mirror," Rory said before she could think better of it. "You do not." "I do. You're doing Lady Macbeth with a Guitar Hero controller." Eva barked a laugh, wet this time. "God." The bell rang again, two men coming in loud and cold, shaking snow that wasn't there yet off their shoulders. Silas moved to serve them, his limp more pronounced as he went. Eva leaned in, elbows on the bar, closer now. "Are you happy?" she asked, low, like it was a secret. Rory considered the question. She thought about Yu-Fei counting the till and tucking the extra spring rolls in for her. About the flat upstairs that was too cold in winter and had a view of the fire escape where pigeons held endless, pointless meetings. About the bookshelf door that led to a room where Silas sometimes let her sit while he talked on a phone that wasn't supposed to exist, and how safe that had felt, once. She thought about the fact that she didn't wake up braced anymore. "I'm getting there," she said. "Most days. Yeah. Are you?" Eva's bright eyes held hers. Grown-up eyes now, lined and tired and steady. "Most days," she said, and it was the most honest thing either of them had said all night. She finished her whisky. "Don't be a stranger, yeah? Again. For real this time. I'm still in your phone." "You never changed your number," Rory said. "Neither did you." Eva stood, pulled her good coat around her, left a ten note under her glass that Silas would pretend not to see and then give back to Rory later. She hugged her again, longer this time, and when she pulled away her hand brushed Rory's left wrist, over the sleeve, over the crescent scar, without noticing. "I'll text you," Eva said. "You better," Rory said, and meant it. The green neon flared as Eva pushed out into the rain again, umbrella snapping open, white-blonde hair disappearing under it. The door shivered shut. Rory sat back down on her wobbly stool. Her tea had gone cold. Silas came back, picked up Eva's glass, polished it with his cloth. The silver ring on his right hand turned, turned. "Old friend?" he asked, mild. "Oldest," Rory said. The word felt warm in her mouth now, not bruised. Outside, the rain kept falling on Frith Street, turning the pavement to a river of green light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory said automatically [automatically]"
1"Eva's fingers tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.479
leniency0.958
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.056
85.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2014
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count5
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2014
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"flicked"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences136
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2027
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions37
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions96
wordCount1447
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity2.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
January1
Frith2
Street2
Golden1
Empress1
Silas12
Thursday1
Rory36
Eva31
Nando1
Christmas1
Cardiff1
Jennifer1
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
persons
0"Nest"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Nando"
5"Jennifer"
6"Carter"
7"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Raven"
1"Frith"
2"Street"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.256
windowScore0
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"smelled like damp wool and lemon cleaner a"
1"smelled like expensive perfume and rain"
2"looked like she was about to be sent out"
3"looked like someone who sat on the other"
4"quite reach"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2027
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean23.85
std20.14
cv0.845
sampleLengths
035
191
264
369
415
534
63
780
87
958
1011
114
1214
131
1438
159
1617
1745
186
193
2027
2172
2218
2311
2439
259
266
278
2815
2910
3026
319
3217
3329
3451
3530
3622
3718
3816
3917
4018
4131
423
436
4413
4529
4644
478
4838
4946
97.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences136
matches
0"was perched"
1"was cropped"
2"was allowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs277
matches(empty)
76.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences172
ratio0.023
matches
0"Her shift was over, her hair was wet at the ends, straight and black and cut blunt at her shoulders, and her knuckles were white around a chipped mug of tea that Silas made for her when she came in like this — not because she asked, but because he knew she wouldn't ask for anything stronger on a work night."
1"He favored his left leg tonight; the cold always got to it."
2"The bell jingled again, and this time she did look up, because the draft hit the back of her neck and because Silas's shoulders tightened, just a fraction, the way they always did when someone new came in — old habit."
3"The last Christmas where Rory had video-called and Eva had been busy, then busy again, then had sent a text — sorry, mad week x."
87.40% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1450
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped mark"
1"quiet, hazel-eyed watchfulness,"
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.04068965517241379
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004827586206896552
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean11.78
std9.31
cv0.79
sampleLengths
029
16
230
361
47
523
612
722
816
926
1012
1115
1215
1312
1418
154
163
1741
1820
198
207
214
227
2318
2417
254
2619
2711
284
295
302
317
321
3328
3410
359
3617
377
384
3916
408
4110
426
433
4411
456
4610
478
4814
4917
45.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.31976744186046513
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners55
28.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Then he limped, slight and"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences116
matches
0"She was perched on the"
1"Her shift was over, her"
2"His auburn hair was more"
3"He favored his left leg"
4"he said without looking at"
5"It took Rory a full"
6"Her face was thinner."
7"Her eyes, lined dark, went"
8"Her coat was damp."
9"Her hug was hard and"
10"It made her whole face"
11"Her nails were short and"
12"He watched them with his"
13"she said, and offered a"
14"His signet flashed as he"
15"She ordered edamame once, Rory"
16"Her eyes flicked to the"
17"she said, quieter"
18"Her voice was even."
19"It was a different thing"
ratio0.284
24.66% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount101
totalSentences116
matches
0"The bell over the door"
1"Rory didn't look up at"
2"She was perched on the"
3"Her shift was over, her"
4"The Nest was quiet for"
5"The green neon outside buzzed"
6"The maps on the walls"
7"Someone had turned the old"
8"Silas was behind the bar,"
9"His auburn hair was more"
10"He favored his left leg"
11"The silver signet on his"
12"he said without looking at"
13"Rory lifted the mug slightly,"
14"The small crescent-shaped mark on"
15"The bell jingled again, and"
16"A woman stood in the"
17"A good coat in the"
18"Wool, cut clean, belted."
19"It took Rory a full"
ratio0.871
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"Now it was cropped short,"
1"Now she looked like someone"
ratio0.017
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She was perched on the far end of the bar on a stool that wobbled, her delivery bag dumped at her feet, the red Golden Empress logo smeared with rain."
1"Silas was behind the bar, polishing a glass with a cloth that had seen better decades."
2"The bell rang again, two men coming in loud and cold, shaking snow that wasn't there yet off their shoulders."
3"About the flat upstairs that was too cold in winter and had a view of the fire escape where pigeons held endless, pointless meetings."
80.88% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva said, affectionate"
1"she said, quieter"
2"he asked, mild"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags29
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.408
leniency0.817
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.2989%