| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "it said again — [again ]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 82.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1705 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "tenderly" | | 4 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1705 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 36 | | totalWords | 1728 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "awareness" | | 1 | "gone" | | 2 | "Tok." | | 3 | "against" | | 4 | "between" | | 5 | "knew" | | 6 | "Mum?" | | 7 | "\"Roooor-eee. Come and see.\"" | | 8 | "it pulses when it nears a door to the old dark" | | 9 | "Tok. Tok. Tok." | | 10 | "this way, quickly, don't look back." | | 11 | "leave now" | | 12 | "tok, tok, tok" |
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| 97.22% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The night air smelled of wet grass and distant woodsmoke, and somewhere behind her, London breathed its endless orange b…" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 1697 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "London" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Robin | 1 | | Hood | 1 | | Gate | 1 | | London | 4 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Rory | 8 | | November | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Jennifer | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Robin" | | 1 | "Hood" | | 2 | "Gate" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "Carter" | | 6 | "Silas" | | 7 | "Jennifer" | | 8 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like someone else's" | | 1 | "quite looking" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1728 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 32.6 | | std | 27.13 | | cv | 0.832 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 92 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 69 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 86 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 61 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 57 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 92 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 57 | | 41 | 67 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 54 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 75 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 45 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 97.74% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "gets stuck" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been folded" | | 3 | "being unfolded" |
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| 44.96% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 258 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was glowing" | | 2 | "wasn't guiding" | | 3 | "was warning" | | 4 | "were bending" | | 5 | "wasn't quite looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 23 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.117 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd been to the grove twice before — both times in daylight, both times with company — and even then it had felt less like a place and more like a held breath." | | 1 | "She noticed it the way you'd notice a hand on your shoulder in an empty room — a slow, delayed wrongness." | | 2 | "The pendant had pulled at her all evening — not physically, nothing so dramatic, just a persistent, intrusive *awareness* of the grove, the way a song you hate gets stuck behind your eyes." | | 3 | "Not muffled — *gone*, as cleanly as if someone had closed a door." | | 4 | "It came from beyond the far stones — a sound like knuckles rapped once against a hollow trunk." | | 5 | "The whispering continued for a half-second after she stopped — a soft shiver of sound moving away from her, out toward the stones, as though something low and patient had been crawling alongside her and had only just noticed she'd halted." | | 6 | "It was glowing brighter now, no question — a deep arterial red that threw faint color onto her palm." | | 7 | "Movement at the edge of her vision — left side, near the stones." | | 8 | "That was the thing about her that Evan had never understood, the thing that had infuriated him most — fear went through her like weather, but her hands stayed steady." | | 9 | "And then, from her right — the opposite side, the far side, a direction that made no spatial sense — she heard her own name." | | 10 | "\"Rory,\" it said again — closer now, and wronger." | | 11 | "And Yu-Fei's words came back to her — *it pulses when it nears a door to the old dark* — and she understood, with the clean terrible clarity of a door closing behind her, that the pendant wasn't guiding her toward something." | | 12 | "Tok.* Not from one place now — from the stones themselves, all around, a slow knocking circle like something testing each door of the house in turn." | | 13 | "Its heat bloomed against her chest, and under it, or through it, she felt something else — a pull, low in her gut, toward the eastern boundary." | | 14 | "The knocking followed her, stone to stone, pacing her stride — *tok, tok, tok* — and at the corner of her vision the tall shapes kept step, never ahead of her, never behind, always exactly where she wasn't quite looking." | | 15 | "The gap between them stood narrow and dark, and beyond it — impossibly, because she had come in on a bike over open parkland — she could hear traffic." | | 16 | "And at the center of the clearing, just for a moment, a single point of crimson light pulsed — matching the rhythm of the pendant on her chest beat for beat — before it winked out like an eye closing." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1683 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 67 | | adverbRatio | 0.0398098633392751 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010101010101010102 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 11.92 | | std | 11.55 | | cv | 0.969 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 1 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 33 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 47.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.35172413793103446 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 28.49% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the grove: wind in" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 83.25% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd vaulted the low stone" | | 1 | "She leaned the bike against" | | 2 | "She'd been to the grove" | | 3 | "She noticed it the way" | | 4 | "She lifted it away from" | | 5 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 6 | "She'd come here for a" | | 7 | "She stepped between the standing" | | 8 | "she called, and immediately felt" | | 9 | "It came from beyond the" | | 10 | "She counted twenty heartbeats, matching" | | 11 | "She turned the headlamp toward" | | 12 | "she said, and the grove" | | 13 | "It made her feel fractionally" | | 14 | "She pulled the pendant over" | | 15 | "It was glowing brighter now," | | 16 | "It should have been uncomfortable." | | 17 | "she said to it" | | 18 | "She snapped her head around." | | 19 | "Her hands were steady." |
| | ratio | 0.342 | |
| 49.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory killed the bike's engine" | | 1 | "The gates had closed hours" | | 2 | "She'd vaulted the low stone" | | 3 | "The night air smelled of" | | 4 | "Here the dark was real." | | 5 | "She leaned the bike against" | | 6 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 7 | "She'd been to the grove" | | 8 | "Tonight, alone, the breath felt" | | 9 | "The pendant lay warm against" | | 10 | "She noticed it the way" | | 11 | "The Heartstone was always cool." | | 12 | "A thumbnail of deep crimson" | | 13 | "She lifted it away from" | | 14 | "A slow red heartbeat under" | | 15 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 16 | "She'd come here for a" | | 17 | "The pendant had pulled at" | | 18 | "Yu-Fei had mentioned, offhand, over" | | 19 | "That if the stone wanted" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 37.04% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "No traffic hum, no distant sirens, none of the city's low electrical thrum that lived under everything." | | 1 | "The whispering continued for a half-second after she stopped — a soft shiver of sound moving away from her, out toward the stones, as though something low and p…" | | 2 | "That was the thing about her that Evan had never understood, the thing that had infuriated him most — fear went through her like weather, but her hands stayed s…" | | 3 | "And then, from her right — the opposite side, the far side, a direction that made no spatial sense — she heard her own name." | | 4 | "Jennifer Carter was alive and well and asleep in Cardiff, two hundred miles away, and Rory knew this, she *knew* it, and none of that knowledge did anything to …" | | 5 | "The pendant had gone from warm to hot in her fist, its glow pulsing fast now, urgent, the red light strobing faintly between her fingers." | | 6 | "Rory had spent two years learning to trust the small cold voice that said *leave now* and one terrible night learning the cost of ignoring it." | | 7 | "Distant, blessedly ordinary London traffic, as though the world outside the grove had been folded up and put away and was only now being unfolded again." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, and the grove offered no opinion" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |