| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 85.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1395 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 6.81% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1395 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "could feel" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "sentinel" | | 12 | "wavering" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.36% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 18 | | totalWords | 1410 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "Heartstone responds at the old standing stones." | | 1 | "Meet me where the stones stand," | | 2 | "Come alone. Bring the Heartstone." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1315 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.84 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Three | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Chelsea | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "roots that seemed to twist themselves into her path" | | 1 | "seemed impossibly large and close" | | 2 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn’t looking directly at them" | | 3 | "not quite too angular, too sharp, with eyes that reflected light like polished obsidian" | | 4 | "something like sorrow" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1410 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 39.17 | | std | 23.98 | | cv | 0.612 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 74 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 83 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 45 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 44 | | 28 | 62 | | 29 | 36 | | 30 | 70 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 58 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 14 |
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| 83.06% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "been written" | | 1 | "being drawn" | | 2 | "was accompanied" | | 3 | "being pulled" | | 4 | "being placed" | | 5 | "was connected" |
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| 75.97% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 215 | | matches | | 0 | "was delivering" | | 1 | "was beginning" | | 2 | "wasn’t looking" | | 3 | "was only beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.159 | | matches | | 0 | "Three hours ago, the GPS had shown her exactly where to go — a coordinates pin dropped in the dead center of Richmond Park, marked only with the cryptic note: *Heartstone responds at the old standing stones.* Now, standing in the actual darkness of the park at midnight, the joke felt less funny." | | 1 | "She’d grown up walking home through Cardiff’s backstreets after late shifts at the pub, had learned to read the subtle signs of danger — the way shadows pooled too thickly in doorways, the sound of footsteps that didn’t match the rhythm of the street." | | 2 | "The air had changed since she’d left the main road — thicker somehow, carrying the scent of damp earth and something else she couldn’t name, something sweet and metallic that made her throat dry." | | 3 | "Not an animal sound — too deliberate, too rhythmic." | | 4 | "Supernatural nonsense, but the pendant’s warmth had been undeniable, and the note that had appeared on her doorstep that morning — slipped under the door while she was delivering dumplings to the lawyer in Chelsea — had been written in handwriting she somehow recognized as her own." | | 5 | "Not heavy — too light for a human, too deliberate for an animal." | | 6 | "The air grew colder despite the warmth radiating from her chest, and she realized with a jolt that her breath was beginning to mist — impossible, given the heat of the stone, but unmistakable all the same." | | 7 | "No answer came, but the feeling of being watched intensified, until she could swear she felt breath on the back of her neck — warm and sweet and utterly inhuman." | | 8 | "Something moved in the corner of her vision — a flicker of movement, too fast for any animal she knew." | | 9 | "Its form solidified slightly, revealing features that were almost human but not quite — too angular, too sharp, with eyes that reflected light like polished obsidian." | | 10 | "Images flooded her mind — fragments of memories that weren’t her own, glimpses of a life lived in shadows and secrets." | | 11 | "The note on her doorstep, the warmth in her chest, the way the park seemed to shift and breathe around her — all of it was connected to this moment, to this choice." | | 12 | "The wind carried the scent of wildflowers blooming year-round, and somewhere in the distance, she thought she heard the sound of children laughing — children who shouldn’t exist, playing games in a realm that existed between heartbeats." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 518 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.02895752895752896 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009652509652509652 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 17.2 | | std | 10.77 | | cv | 0.626 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 32 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 67.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.45121951219512196 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she walked faster, her" | | 1 | "Somewhere ahead, she could make" | | 2 | "Just the stones, standing sentinel" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the tree" | | 1 | "she muttered, shoving the dead" | | 2 | "She’d come here because the" | | 3 | "It had started when she’d" | | 4 | "She’d grown up walking home" | | 5 | "She’d been walking for twenty" | | 6 | "She told herself it was" | | 7 | "She quickened her pace." | | 8 | "She’d read somewhere that time" | | 9 | "She’d tried to retrace her" | | 10 | "She could feel eyes on" | | 11 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 12 | "She broke into a run." | | 13 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 14 | "she called out, her voice" | | 15 | "She turned her head sharply," | | 16 | "She could feel it calling" | | 17 | "Its form solidified slightly, revealing" | | 18 | "She saw herself standing in" | | 19 | "she whispered, but even as" |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 66.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The crunch of gravel under" | | 1 | "She paused at the tree" | | 2 | "she muttered, shoving the dead" | | 3 | "She’d come here because the" | | 4 | "It had started when she’d" | | 5 | "The path ahead disappeared into" | | 6 | "She’d grown up walking home" | | 7 | "This felt different, though." | | 8 | "She’d been walking for twenty" | | 9 | "The air had changed since" | | 10 | "The first sound came as" | | 11 | "A whisper, almost inaudible, like" | | 12 | "Aurora stopped and listened." | | 13 | "Silence answered her, heavy and" | | 14 | "She told herself it was" | | 15 | "She quickened her pace." | | 16 | "The trees seemed to close" | | 17 | "She’d read somewhere that time" | | 18 | "She’d tried to retrace her" | | 19 | "This time it was definitely" |
| | ratio | 0.787 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, standing at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the tree line, hand hovering over her phone’s screen, watching the battery indicator blink red at 3% before the display went black entirely." | | 1 | "She’d grown up walking home through Cardiff’s backstreets after late shifts at the pub, had learned to read the subtle signs of danger — the way shadows pooled …" | | 2 | "Supernatural nonsense, but the pendant’s warmth had been undeniable, and the note that had appeared on her doorstep that morning — slipped under the door while …" | | 3 | "Instead, she walked faster, her boots finding purchase on roots that seemed to twist themselves into her path." | | 4 | "The clearing opened up ahead, bathed in silver light from a moon that seemed impossibly large and close." | | 5 | "In its center, four massive oak stones stood arranged in a rough circle, their surfaces covered in moss and strange symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn’t…" | | 6 | "Each step forward was accompanied by the sensation of being pulled, as if invisible threads connected her to the stone at her throat." | | 7 | "Just the stones, standing sentinel in the moonlight, their carved faces twisted into expressions that might have been smiles." | | 8 | "The figure that emerged was tall and impossibly thin, its outline shifting and wavering like heat distortion on a summer road." | | 9 | "Its form solidified slightly, revealing features that were almost human but not quite — too angular, too sharp, with eyes that reflected light like polished obs…" | | 10 | "Images flooded her mind — fragments of memories that weren’t her own, glimpses of a life lived in shadows and secrets." | | 11 | "Aurora looked from the offered stone to the one burning against her chest, feeling the weight of destiny pressing down on her shoulders." | | 12 | "The wind carried the scent of wildflowers blooming year-round, and somewhere in the distance, she thought she heard the sound of children laughing — children wh…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice cracking slightly" | | 1 | "the figure continued, its voice carrying an undercurrent of something like sorrow" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she called out (call out)" | | 2 | "the figure continued (continue)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "it urged (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.714 | | effectiveRatio | 0.714 | |