Run: 2026-07-25-01KYD81NRCNNYPZBF88TBMSWKS

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24.4s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The rain had followed her home. Rory shook it off at the door to The Raven's Nest, pushing through the heavy oak with her shoulder, her delivery bag still slung across her chest from the last Golden Empress run. The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed and flickered against the wet Soho pavement behind her, painting the puddles in brief, sickly light. Inside, it was warm and low and close the way it always was, the air smelling of lemon polish and old beer. Silas was behind the bar. He hadn't looked up yet. He was wiping down a glass with methodical care, his silver signet ring catching the low light on his right hand, his grey-streaked auburn hair combed back from his face. Rory could see the slight unevenness in his stance, the weight he kept off his left leg, that old Prague injury that never quite let him stand straight for long. "You missed last call," he said without raising his eyes. "You're late." "Yu-Fei had a double order to Camden," she said. "Someone really wanted their sweet and sour pork at eleven pm in a thunderstorm." He grunted. That was his way of saying he heard her. He set the glass down. "There's soup on." Rory tugged the strap of the delivery bag over her head and let it thump onto the stool next to her. Her black hair was stuck to her neck in straight, wet ribbons, cut blunt at her shoulders. She pushed it back with her right hand, and as she did, the sleeve of her thin jacket rode up and bared the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, pale against her skin. She pulled the sleeve down quickly. Old habit. It was then she noticed there was someone else at the bar. The woman was at the far end, where the wall was covered in old maps of places that no longer existed in quite the same way. She was sitting with her back very straight on a bar stool that seemed too low for her. A good coat hung over the back of it, expensive wool, dark camel. Her blonde hair was pulled back into something sleek and severe. She was holding a gin and tonic that she had not drunk. Rory froze with her hand still in her hair. The woman turned her head at the same moment. Bright was not the right word. Her eyes were tired, lined at the corners where they hadn't been before, but Rory knew that face down to the gap between the front teeth that you only saw when she laughed hard. "Eva?" Eva Davies stood up too fast and the stool scraped hard against the floorboards. Silas looked up then, his hazel eyes moving between them, reading everything in an instant. "Rory," Eva said. "Oh my god." She didn't look like Eva. That was the first, stupid, obvious thought that took up all the space in Rory's head. The last time she had seen her, Eva had been nineteen, with half her head shaved and the other half dyed bottled green, wearing Rory's father's old suit jacket to her A-levels because she said it made her look like a barrister. They had sat on the roof of the school bike shed and smoked rolled cigarettes that made them cough and promised they would both get out of Cardiff if it killed them. This woman was in pressed trousers. Her nails were neat. She had a small, expensive watch on. She looked like someone who worked in an office with glass walls. "What are you doing here?" Rory said, and immediately wanted to take it back because it sounded like an accusation. "I was looking for you," Eva said. She laughed, a short, nervous sound. "I mean, I was in London for work. I'm here for three days. Legal conference. I'm with a firm in Manchester now. And I remembered you said — well, you said you were above a bar in Soho. Silas's place. The Raven's Nest. I didn't think you'd actually still be — I didn't think I'd find it." Rory's mouth was dry. Cool-headed, her flatmates at university used to call her, the one who kept her head when everyone else was spiraling, who could think her way out of a locked room. She felt no such thing now. Her heart was beating very fast against her ribs. "You're looking well," Eva said. "You changed your hair," Rory said. Eva's hand went up self-consciously. "Yeah. Had to. You can't show up to client meetings looking like a bad Billie Joe Armstrong impression. Office dress code." "You always said you'd rather die than work in an office." "It's not that bad," Eva said quickly. Too quickly. "It's actually — it's good money. It's stable. They put me on track for partner. It was — I needed stable, after everything." After everything meant after Rory left. After the shouting and the police and the night Rory had called her at three in the morning from a service station outside Bristol, her voice shredded to nothing, saying Evan wouldn't let her go home. After Eva had said, come to London, just come, my cousin knows someone with a flat, you can stay with me. Rory had come. Eva had met her at Victoria with a suitcase and bought her chips and they had sat on the floor of a flat that smelled of damp and Rory had cried until she threw up. And then Eva had gotten that job in Manchester, and Rory had gotten the part-time delivery job, and then the flat above Silas's bar, and the calls had gotten shorter, and farther apart. "I tried to call," Rory said. "I know," Eva said. "I was shit. I was really shit at keeping in touch. I got — immersed. That's what Mum calls it. Immersed." Silas moved quietly down the bar. His limp was more pronounced tonight, weather in the knee. He set a bowl of soup down in front of Rory's usual stool without her having to ask, and a fresh glass of water beside it. He didn't look at Eva, gave them privacy in the way of men who had spent their lives listening at doors. "You didn't have to look for me," Rory said. She sat down finally, because standing made her feel too tall, too visible at five foot six in her wet delivery clothes. She wrapped her hands around the water glass. Her fingers were cold. "I wanted to," Eva said. She didn't sit. She stood with her hands clenched around the strap of her bag. That bag was leather. Real leather. "I kept thinking about Cardiff. You remember Mr. Hughes's history class? When you argued that the Treaty of Versailles was technically illegal? You were fifteen. God, you were terrifying. You were going to be an actual barrister, Rory. Like your dad." "Pre-law was a long time ago." "Brendan must have been gutted when you dropped out." The name landed badly. Rory felt her jaw lock. "He got over it," she said. Silence fell. The old photographs on the wall watched them, men in flat caps and women with waved hair who had probably also had arguments in this bar, years before it was called The Raven's Nest. Eva exhaled. "I saw Jennifer. Your mum. Last month. In the market. She told me you'd gone off law completely. Delivery work?" It wasn't judgmental, not exactly. It was worse. It was concerned, in that practical Welsh teacher voice that Rory knew from her childhood, from parents' evenings. Rory looked down at her scar. "It's part-time. It pays rent. And I like it. I like knowing where I'm going. Yu-Fei's good to me." "It's just—" Eva stopped herself, then started again. "You were the smartest person I knew. You still are. You could do anything. You don't have to be stuck." Rory felt something hot and familiar flare behind her sternum. Quick out-of-the-box thinking, that was what the codex of her old life had said. Not stuck. Not trapped. "I'm not stuck," she said, her voice level, cool-headed even when she didn't feel it. "I live upstairs. I work downstairs sometimes for Silas when he's short. I'm not in a flat with a man who checks my phone, Eva. That's not stuck. That's a fucking improvement." Eva flinched. The expensive watch caught the light. "I know," she whispered. "I know that. I'm sorry. I didn't mean—" "I know what you meant." Silas coughed, a low sound that seemed to come from deep in his chest. He leaned against the bar, his right hand with the signet ring flat on the wood. "Rory," he said, not unkindly, "the bookshelf's sticking again. Cold's warped it. You want to give it a shove for me before you go up?" It was a lie. The secret door behind the bookshelf never stuck. He was giving her an out, a minute to breathe in the hidden back room where he held his quiet meetings, where no one could see her. Rory shook her head. "No. It's fine." She looked at Eva properly then. Not the coat, not the hair, but her friend. The line between her eyebrows that hadn't been there at eighteen. The way she held herself like she was bracing. "You look good," Rory said, and this time she meant it. "Stable looks good on you, Ev." Eva's eyes filled, quick. "Christ. Don't." "What?" "Don't be nice. I came here feeling guilty and you're being nice and I can't — I left you here. I told you to come to London and then I just left you here to figure it out." "You didn't leave me," Rory said. The words were small, precise. "You got a job. That's what we were supposed to do. Get out." "I was supposed to get out with you." They looked at each other across the bar that was too dim and too full of maps. The rain hit the windows in bursts. Somewhere above them, in the flat where Rory lived alone and liked it, a pipe clanged. Eva reached out, hesitant, and touched the edge of Rory's sleeve, right above where the scar was. A brush. Nothing more. "Can I — are you around tomorrow? For coffee? Actual coffee, not this —" She gestured at her untouched gin. Rory thought about the delivery route tomorrow. She thought about the exam prep books she had started buying again, second-hand, not telling anyone, not even Silas, with her father's old notes in the margins. Brendan Carter's cramped barrister handwriting. She thought about how tired Eva looked, and how expensive her coat was, and how both things could be true at once. "Yeah," she said. "I'm around. Come at ten. Before the lunch rush. Silas does terrible instant coffee but he pretends it's fancy." Eva laughed then, really laughed, and Rory saw the gap between her teeth. "Ten," Eva said. "Okay. Ten." She picked up her good coat, her leather bag. At the door, she paused, her hand on the frame, and looked back at the bar, at the green neon bleeding light onto the wet street, at Rory on her stool with her soup going cold. "I missed you," she said. Rory nodded. The weight of time sat between them, heavy and unmoving, but not unkind. "I missed you too," she said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said quickly [quickly]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.038
76.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1899
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"quickly"
count3
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"quickly"
2"very"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1899
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"methodical"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences125
matches(empty)
97.14% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences125
filterMatches
0"look"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1906
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions33
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions78
wordCount1379
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Golden1
Empress1
Soho1
Prague1
Rory31
Davies1
Eva23
Cardiff1
Bristol1
Evan1
London1
Victoria1
Manchester1
Silas6
Silence1
Welsh1
Carter1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Davies"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
6"Victoria"
7"Silas"
8"Silence"
9"Carter"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Cardiff"
3"Bristol"
4"London"
5"Manchester"
globalScore0.376
windowScore0.333
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like someone who worked in an offi"
1"sounded like an accusation"
2"sound that seemed to come from deep in his chest"
95.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.049
wordCount1906
matches
0"Not the coat, not the hair, but her friend"
1"not the hair, but her friend"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences154
matches
0"knew that face"
1"thought that took"
2"gotten that job"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean28.88
std23.87
cv0.827
sampleLengths
06
179
270
312
423
519
680
712
880
99
1049
111
1229
136
1495
1529
1620
1770
1849
195
206
2126
2211
2332
2463
2571
266
2725
2863
2943
3067
316
329
339
346
3536
3622
3726
3825
3928
4028
4147
428
4312
445
4555
4639
477
4835
4917
88.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences125
matches
0"was stuck"
1"was covered"
2"was pulled"
3"been nineteen"
4"was called"
5"was concerned"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was wiping"
1"was sitting"
2"was holding"
3"was spiraling"
4"was beating"
5"was giving"
6"was bracing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences154
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1305
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.038314176245210725
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.00996168582375479
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean12.38
std10.65
cv0.861
sampleLengths
06
133
224
322
45
55
630
730
810
92
109
1114
122
139
145
153
1621
1717
1834
196
202
2112
2226
2318
2413
2511
2612
279
289
296
3034
311
3214
3315
343
353
365
3716
3842
3932
406
414
427
4312
4420
457
466
4757
484
4930
36.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners44
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Somewhere above them, in the"
ratio0.01
50.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences97
matches
0"He hadn't looked up yet."
1"He was wiping down a"
2"he said without raising his"
3"He set the glass down."
4"Her black hair was stuck"
5"She pushed it back with"
6"She pulled the sleeve down"
7"It was then she noticed"
8"She was sitting with her"
9"Her blonde hair was pulled"
10"She was holding a gin"
11"Her eyes were tired, lined"
12"She didn't look like Eva."
13"They had sat on the"
14"Her nails were neat."
15"She had a small, expensive"
16"She looked like someone who"
17"She laughed, a short, nervous"
18"She felt no such thing"
19"Her heart was beating very"
ratio0.423
16.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences97
matches
0"The rain had followed her"
1"Rory shook it off at"
2"The green neon sign above"
3"Silas was behind the bar."
4"He hadn't looked up yet."
5"He was wiping down a"
6"Rory could see the slight"
7"he said without raising his"
8"That was his way of"
9"He set the glass down."
10"Rory tugged the strap of"
11"Her black hair was stuck"
12"She pushed it back with"
13"She pulled the sleeve down"
14"It was then she noticed"
15"The woman was at the"
16"She was sitting with her"
17"A good coat hung over"
18"Her blonde hair was pulled"
19"She was holding a gin"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.27% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"They had sat on the roof of the school bike shed and smoked rolled cigarettes that made them cough and promised they would both get out of Cardiff if it killed …"
1"The old photographs on the wall watched them, men in flat caps and women with waved hair who had probably also had arguments in this bar, years before it was ca…"
2"At the door, she paused, her hand on the frame, and looked back at the bar, at the green neon bleeding light onto the wet street, at Rory on her stool with her …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, not unkindly,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags22
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.423
leniency0.846
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.038
78.4367%