| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 71.33% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1221 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quickly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "utterly" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1221 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 85.14% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 99 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1236 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1217 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.49 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 4 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 6 | | November | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Laila" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Carter" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "November" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an invitation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1236 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 42.62 | | std | 28.08 | | cv | 0.659 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 85 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 88 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 73 | | 20 | 69 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 53 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 72 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 13 |
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| 98.17% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 228 | | matches | | 0 | "was seeing" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was listing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "Not colder, not warmer — changed, the way a room changes when someone has just stopped arguing in it." | | 1 | "The handwriting had been Eva's — the looped E's, the impatient slash of the t's — but the ink had dried a strange bruised color, and the paper smelled faintly of river water." | | 2 | "In the center was a flat slab of rock, waist-high, and on the slab —" | | 3 | "Not once in the three weeks since it arrived in the post, no note, no return address, wrapped in brown paper and addressed to Laila — a name no one used, a name she had used for exactly four months when she first ran from Evan and didn't want to be found." | | 4 | "She saw that it had moved — a gap between two oaks that had been empty was now occupied by a shape, pale, vertical, roughly the height of a person." | | 5 | "It was simply present, folded into the night the way the scent of the flowers was folded in — slow, patient, wet around the edges, the breathing of something that had never once needed to hurry." | | 6 | "She hissed and nearly dropped it, and in that instant — the half-second her attention was on the stone — every flower in the clearing turned." | | 7 | "Between one step and the next, the distance changed — the stones that had been ten paces away were suddenly forty, the treeline receding like something politely withdrawing from a conversation." | | 8 | "In the silence that followed — a silence so complete she could hear her own blood — a voice answered from the center of the clearing, from the empty slab, in tones that were almost Eva's the way the handwriting had been almost Eva's." | | 9 | "Utterly, instantly cold, like a coal dropped in snow, and somehow that frightened her more than the voice — the sense that whatever had been guiding her here, warming her here, had now stepped aside to let something else look at her." | | 10 | "She kept her eyes on the stones, eleven of them, then twelve — no, eleven, her vision swimming — and she began, very carefully, to walk." |
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| 93.64% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1206 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.0472636815920398 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014925373134328358 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 12.24 | | std | 11.81 | | cv | 0.965 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 52 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 31 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 47.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.36633663366336633 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 78.43% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she heard breathing." | | 1 | "Utterly, instantly cold, like a" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 50.59% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped at the boundary" | | 1 | "She'd been to Richmond Park" | | 2 | "You don't find it." | | 3 | "she muttered, because saying something" | | 4 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 5 | "She crushed one beneath her" | | 6 | "She had told herself that" | | 7 | "She didn't know why that" | | 8 | "She didn't know what she'd" | | 9 | "Her voice came out smaller" | | 10 | "She checked her phone." | | 11 | "She put it away." | | 12 | "It had never glowed before." | | 13 | "She didn't see it move." | | 14 | "She saw that it had" | | 15 | "She knew it had not" | | 16 | "She was listing facts the" | | 17 | "She walked the perimeter instead" | | 18 | "She counted the standing stones" | | 19 | "She remembered eleven from the" |
| | ratio | 0.424 | |
| 65.88% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks were wrong before" | | 1 | "She stopped at the boundary" | | 2 | "The stones leaned inward, all" | | 3 | "She'd been to Richmond Park" | | 4 | "That was the point, Eva" | | 5 | "You don't find it." | | 6 | "The pendant under her collar" | | 7 | "she muttered, because saying something" | | 8 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 9 | "The air changed." | | 10 | "That was the only way" | | 11 | "Wildflowers starred the grass underfoot," | | 12 | "She crushed one beneath her" | | 13 | "Eva's note had been specific." | | 14 | "The handwriting had been Eva's" | | 15 | "Rory had told herself she" | | 16 | "She had told herself that" | | 17 | "The clearing opened ahead of" | | 18 | "The slab was bare." | | 19 | "She didn't know why that" |
| | ratio | 0.788 | |
| 58.82% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, at the stones, it" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 17.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, at the stones, it gave a slow, deliberate pulse against her sternum, like a heartbeat that wasn't hers." | | 1 | "The clearing opened ahead of her, moonlit, circular, ringed by those ancient oaks whose stones stood at their roots like guardians who had fallen asleep standin…" | | 2 | "No signal, of course, but the clock read 12:04, and as she watched, it flickered to 12:41, then back to 11:58, then died entirely, the screen going black as tho…" | | 3 | "It was simply present, folded into the night the way the scent of the flowers was folded in — slow, patient, wet around the edges, the breathing of something th…" | | 4 | "Between one step and the next, the distance changed — the stones that had been ten paces away were suddenly forty, the treeline receding like something politely…" | | 5 | "In the silence that followed — a silence so complete she could hear her own blood — a voice answered from the center of the clearing, from the empty slab, in to…" | | 6 | "Utterly, instantly cold, like a coal dropped in snow, and somehow that frightened her more than the voice — the sense that whatever had been guiding her here, w…" |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |