Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
63
glossingSentenceCount
8
matches
0
"glow that seemed to pool at Aurora Carter’s ankles as she pushed through the door"
1
"looked like it had been carved from somet"
2
"as if testing the weight of her name against the years that had passed"
3
"ring that seemed to hold some secret the way only his kind of secret could be held"
4
"not quite disappointment but something older, more patient, the expression of a mentor who had watched too many of his people walk away and had never found the right words to keep them"
"The air inside was older than she remembered—thick with the scent of bourbon and old paper, of wood that had absorbed decades of conversation."
1
"His eyes—hazel, still sharp, still capable of seeing through the lies people told themselves—fixed on her."
2
"He moved with quiet authority, the posture of a retired intelligence operative who had once carried himself like a blade and now carried himself like a sheath—still dangerous, but concealed."
3
"He had changed—of course he had."
4
"The nickname—Rory—brought something loose in her chest, a key turning in a lock she thought she had rusted shut."
5
"He was a retired MI6 field agent who had survived Prague; he knew how to read silence, how to let it do the work of accusation."
6
"She noticed the maps—Cartagena, Vienna, Prague, a city she did not want to visit again even in memory."
7
"He reached out—not to touch her wrist, but to rest his hand on the bar between them."
8
"The weight of time settled over her—not just the years since they had last spoken, but the years since she had been the girl in Cardiff, since she had fled, since she had decided that survival meant becoming invisible, a delivery person with a scar and a secret."
9
"She looked at Silas—at his grey-streaked auburn hair, his trimmed beard, his slight limp, the silver signet ring that spoke of loyalty she had never fully understood, the quiet authority of a man who had spent his life in the shadows and had chosen, in the end, to stay in the light of a bar that was also a front for things he could not explain."
10
"She pushed through the entrance, and the London air hit her like a new language—something she could learn if she was brave enough to speak it aloud, if she was willing to admit that running was not the same as ending, and that a man she had once needed more than she had admitted was still here, still waiting, still wearing the scars of his own long war."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
51
technicalSentenceCount
18
matches
0
"The green neon sign above the entrance to The Raven’s Nest hummed like a dying insect, painting the doorway in a sickly emerald glow that seemed to pool at Auro…"
1
"She lived above the bar, in the flat that smelled of damp plaster and Silas Blackwood’s lingering pipe tobacco, yet for three years she had kept to the stairs, …"
2
"The air inside was older than she remembered—thick with the scent of bourbon and old paper, of wood that had absorbed decades of conversation."
3
"His hair, once a richer auburn, was now threaded with silver, and his beard was trimmed to match, neat and austere, framing a jaw that looked like it had been c…"
4
"He was fifty-eight now, older by nearly two decades than the man who had first met her at this same bar when she was twenty-two and trembling with the aftershoc…"
5
"The delivery bag was marked with the Golden Empress logo, a red and gold dragon that reminded her of the only life she had managed to assemble since she had fle…"
6
"The limp in his left leg was visible only when he turned, a small betrayal of the old knee injury that had ended his field career."
7
"The grey-streaked auburn hair, the trimmed beard, the limp, the ring that seemed to hold some secret the way only his kind of secret could be held."
8
"She touched her wrist, the crescent scar, feeling its ridged edge against her palm, remembering how she had once believed that scars were the only honest things…"
9
"Silas’s face settled into something that was not quite disappointment but something older, more patient, the expression of a mentor who had watched too many of …"
10
"The black-and-white photographs lined the walls: faces of people Silas had once worked with, some dead, some ghosts, all of them holding secrets that had never …"
11
"Behind him, the bookshelf looked ordinary, but she knew it was a door, a hidden back room accessible through wood and latch, used for clandestine meetings that …"
12
"It was small, pale, the legacy of a childhood accident that had happened long before Evan, long before London, long before she had learned to hide."
13
"She had been smart, intelligent, quick with out-of-the-box thinking, but she had been a child who thought running was the same as healing, who believed that if …"
14
"Silas’s limp seemed to ache as he shifted, leaning against the bar with a weariness that spoke of old injuries and older regrets."
15
"The hidden back room behind him was dark, silent, a reminder of the secrets he still kept, the network he still maintained, the life of clandestine meetings tha…"
16
"She looked at Silas—at his grey-streaked auburn hair, his trimmed beard, his slight limp, the silver signet ring that spoke of loyalty she had never fully under…"
17
"The green neon hummed behind her, a bright, unyielding light that had guided her back when she had not known she was lost."