"Their faces — and they had faces, or the idea of faces, pale discs that tracked — followed her the way sunflowers followed light."
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"She could still see the park beyond — frost, distant trunks, the idea of a path — but the view had the quality of a painting hung too far back in a room."
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"The tread was wrong for boots and wrong for bare feet; it had a slight drag, a wetness, as if the walker moved through a depth of leaves that were not there."
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"Aurora’s bright blue eyes had always been good in the dark; she used them now and saw, at last, a figure standing between two of the oaks."
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"It only matched her, always delayed, always wrong, and as she moved she understood that there were more than one — no, not more."
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"It had arrived, and it was keeping step, and the grove — Isolde’s grove, Richmond grove, the pocket that was not quite Earth — had decided she was not a visitor after all."
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"By the time Aurora reached the southern edge of Richmond Park, it burned against her sternum like a held coal, pulsing in a rhythm that was not quite her own he…"
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"The pendant’s faint inner glow leaked through the wool of her jumper, a deep crimson thumbnail that made the dark around it look thicker, as if the light were d…"
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"She kept one hand over it as she walked, not for comfort, exactly, but because the warmth had a direction now, a tug that pulled her northwest, away from the pa…"
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"They bent and sprang back, and the smell of them was sweet in a way that caught at the back of her throat, green and overripe at once."
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"She waited, counting again, and the movement came once more, farther out, a pale suggestion of height that was gone when her gaze arrived."
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"A thin, high note, as if someone were drawing a wet finger around the rim of a glass, far off and then closer, with no sense of travel in between."
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"The pendant’s glow brightened, then dimmed, then brightened again, out of time with the music, as if two clocks were arguing."
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"For a fragment of a second there was a shape between two trees: the suggestion of shoulders, of hair as dark as her own, of a face that was not a face so much a…"
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"The pendant had gone from warm to hot to a temperature that was almost cold, a confusion of sensation that made her want to tear it off."
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"The walking continued, one full circuit, then a second that was tighter, as if the thing had stepped inside the ring without crossing any space she could see."
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"The place where a face should have been was smooth and faintly luminous, the colour of the wildflowers, and as she stared the luminosity gathered into the idea …"
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"The same one, occupying the edge of vision in three places at once, a stutter of herself stationed at the boundary as if the grove were trying on her shape to s…"
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"The scar on her wrist had gone from an itch to a thin, precise ache, as if something were pressing on the memory of the cut."
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"The wood swelled and eased against her arm, a slow inhale, and from somewhere above her head, from the place a mouth would be if the grain were a face, came a s…"
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"Behind her the standing stones were still there, but when she looked at the clearing the flowers had closed, every one of them, and the figure that was not her …"
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"Somewhere far off, or very near, a child laughed once, bright and brief, and was cut off as if a hand had closed over a mouth that was not a child’s."