Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GRPTRBHZ23E2WQYJVBRVHD

Run Details

Duration:
9m 9s
Cost:
$0.003691
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had arrived in Soho around four o'clock and settled in like a tenant, and by half past eleven the Raven's Nest had emptied to its bones: Silas at the far end with the ledger, a radiator ticking somewhere beneath the old maps, and the green neon above the door bleeding its color into the wet glass until the whole street looked drowned in it. Rory sat three stools from the till with a mug of tea gone cold at her elbow, still in her work jacket, the Golden Empress bag slumped by her feet and exhaling chili oil into the room. Nobody came in on Tuesdays. That was what Tuesdays were for. The woman who came in out of the rain was wearing a veil. Plastic diamonds on wire, elastic digging into her chin, a white sash crushed in one manicured fist as though she had been strangling it for some distance. Through the door she'd let swing shut, faintly, came a shriek of women's laughter up the street. "I'm not stopping," the woman said. "My friends are two doors up. I just needed a minute where nobody's—" "Everybody says that," Silas said, without looking up from the ledger. "Sit anyway." She sat. Her eyes crossed Rory once, twice, the way you cross a room you believe is empty. She asked, in the apologetic voice of a person sheepish about her own joke, whether they had anything Welsh. Silas's gaze traveled the bottles, unhurried. "Penderyn," he said. "Madeira cask. Kept for emergencies." The woman laughed, and the laugh reached Rory before the face did, coming down a long corridor the way it always had, ahead of its owner, announcing her. Rory kept still. She had gotten good at still. Four years of making yourself unremarkable will do that. The woman asked after a phone charger. Silas said, "Carter," and Rory reached the tin up from under the bar, and her sleeve rode back, and the light caught the small crescent on her wrist. Bike chain, age nine, a road outside Splott, a girl on a pink bike pedaling for help faster than the emergency services would have believed. The woman's eyes stopped on it the way a bird stops on glass. "Rory?" The name fell down a well. She heard it land a long while after. "Hello, Evie." "Nobody's called me that in years." "Nobody's called me the other thing either. We'll manage." Silas came around the bar without being asked, set a second glass beside the first, and withdrew to the far end with the ledger, moving with the small sideways care of his bad knee. The signet ring ticked once against the glass edge. A regular drained his pint, read the room the way regulars do, and let himself out into the rain. Then it was just the two of them and the maps and the black-and-white photographs and the green light coming in off the street. "You cut all your hair," Eva said. "It was down your back. You looked like a witch. The good way." She touched her own jaw. "You've still the eyes. God. Penarth in July." "Yours are the same," Rory said, and they weren't. They were the same shape, set in a different face, a face that had learned to apologize to furniture. When the stool scraped, Eva said sorry to it. The old Eva had sworn like a docker and once lifted a bottle of Sunset from the off-licence on City Road with the calm of a woman selecting pears. The woman in the veil kept checking the door without appearing to, the way Rory herself checked exits, and that was when Rory understood the change had gone all the way through, like rot or grain. "So," Eva said. "What are you doing? Are you—you'll have done the bar, by now. Called to something?" "I deliver food. Mostly for a restaurant. I live upstairs." Eva heard what there was to hear. To her credit she only let it move through her face once. "I'm a solicitor," she said. "Chancery Lane. Two years qualified. There's underfloor heating. I mention it because I still don't believe it myself." "You were going to stand up in court like your dad," Rory said. "That was the joke. I was going to do it like mine." "And instead." Eva turned her glass a quarter turn. "Do you know why I came in? The sign. I saw the green from the corner and I thought, that's the door. Mam-gu's door. I haven't let myself think about that door in—" She stopped, recalibrated. "I've thought about it every day, apparently." "The green survived," Rory said. "Most things didn't." "Mam-gu's funeral," Eva said, all at once, as if she'd been carrying it up Frith Street and had put it down too hard. "I saw your coat. Four rows down. I left before the hymns. I told Oliver I couldn't breathe in there." "I went out the side," Rory said. "Before the hymns." "Five rows." "Four." They had each counted the distance often enough to be sure of it, and neither corrected the other, because grief keeps its own arithmetic and it isn't improved by auditing. "I bought you the ticket," Eva said. "I stood at Central and watched the train go and told you a month. One month and I'd follow. Then it was assessments, and then it was Christmas, and every week I didn't ring, ringing got harder. Nobody tells you that's the trick. That it compounds. Like interest on something you already couldn't afford." "I know," Rory said. "I know." Three knocks landed on the street door, spaced like punctuation. Silas closed the ledger, limped past them to the shelves at the back of the room, and swung a whole bookcase inward; a man in a wet overcoat stepped through the gap with a nod, and the bookcase closed over him the way water closes over a stone. Neither of them had been introduced to him and neither would be. "Was that a—" "Storage," Rory said, and heard how easily the lie sat in her mouth, smooth as a pebble worn in a pocket. The girl Eva had grown up with couldn't have lied her way out of a paper bag. The woman in the veil only nodded, and that was its own small grief: the new Eva didn't pick at things. The old one would have had the lock off with questions in under a minute. "I was so angry at you," Rory said, because it was that hour of the night now, and the tea was cold, and some doors only open in the dark. "You got me out and then the door shut. I know it wasn't like that. That's just how it lived in me. And by the time I could have rung, I'd become somebody I didn't want you meeting." Eva looked at her wrist, at the sleeve that wasn't pulled down over her hand, and Rory saw her notice the not-pulling. "You used to stand at the bus stop like that," Eva said quietly. "Sleeve over your fingers. Like you were cold. In June." "I used to be cold," Rory said, which was as near as the truth got these days. "Is he—" "No." "Good." One word, and a whole corridor closed behind it, and neither of them walked down it. Eva turned the glass another quarter. "Do you know what I do all day? I do yours. Clauses. Chambers. I stood in the Royal Courts of Justice in October and thought, this is hers. I've stolen her life." "It wouldn't have fit," Rory said. "I've got broader in the shoulders than my dad." The laugh came out of Eva sideways, half a sob in a borrowed coat. "You were the one with the plan. I was going to be dead in a ditch by twenty-three, by my own estimate." "We swapped, then," Rory said. "It's not theft if it's a swap." Eva's phone lit on the bar, buzzing itself toward the edge, and a reminder chimed beneath the missed calls, small and unanswerable: hydrate + lip balm. She looked at it the way you look at weather. "They'll send someone in." "Let them." "I can't." And she took the veil out of her bag and fitted it back on like a helmet, tucking the elastic, squaring the little diamonds, and the gesture was so practiced that Rory had to look at the bottles for a moment. "Say you'll come," Eva said. "The wedding. It's in June. Say you'll come." "Send me the date." They both heard what that was. It was the politest lie either of them had told in years, and they let it stand between them like a coat hung on a hook, theirs if either of them ever wanted to reach for it. At the door, half in the green light, Eva turned. "You were the bravest person I ever knew." "You got me out, Evie," Rory said. "The rest I did myself." Eva's face did something it had probably been trained out of doing in boardrooms, and then the door swung and the plastic diamonds threw little lights across the ceiling of the doorway, and she was gone into the rain and the shrieking up the street. Silas wound the wireless up a notch and studied the ledger as though it had said something requiring thought. "Friend of yours?" "We grew up together." "She didn't finish her whisky." "She never does. I used to finish them for her." "Some things keep," Silas said, and turned the page. Rory lifted Eva's glass and drained it, her thumb resting on the crescent at her wrist, the one part of her that had never once needed introducing. It tasted, briefly, of rain on a green door in Splott.
created_at"2026-09-02T09:55:22.004Z" 9/2/2026, 9:55:22 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.418
leniency0.836
rawRatio0.036
effectiveRatio0.03
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1641
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1641
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"notice"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1640
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"When the stool scraped, Eva said sorry to it."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount1130
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Silas8
Golden1
Empress1
Tuesdays2
Rory21
Welsh1
Splott2
Eva19
Sunset1
City1
Road1
Frith1
Street1
Three1
One1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Three"
6"One"
places
0"Soho"
1"Splott"
2"City"
3"Road"
4"Frith"
5"Street"
globalScore0.571
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1640
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences116
matches
0"was that hour"
1"practiced that Rory"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean28.77
std26.87
cv0.934
sampleLengths
0114
157
219
313
451
546
660
713
81
914
102
116
129
1386
1433
15102
1618
1710
1842
1925
2052
218
2243
2310
242
251
2630
2761
286
2970
303
3174
3268
3345
3417
352
361
3717
3838
3915
4036
4112
4236
434
442
4556
464
4743
4818
4912
91.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"being asked"
1"been introduced"
2"been trained"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was wearing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences116
ratio0.009
matches
0"Silas closed the ledger, limped past them to the shelves at the back of the room, and swung a whole bookcase inward; a man in a wet overcoat stepped through the gap with a nod, and the bookcase closed over him the way water closes over a stone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1134
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.025573192239858905
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007054673721340388
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean14.14
std12.38
cv0.876
sampleLengths
066
137
25
36
413
527
617
76
813
911
102
112
1216
1319
146
153
165
1728
183
196
209
217
2228
2325
2413
251
266
278
282
296
309
3134
329
3319
3424
357
3618
378
389
3919
409
4129
4236
433
4415
4510
467
4712
485
4918
64.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4396551724137931
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners51
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Then it was just the"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences63
matches
0"Her eyes crossed Rory once,"
1"She asked, in the apologetic"
2"She had gotten good at"
3"She heard it land a"
4"She touched her own jaw"
5"They were the same shape,"
6"She stopped, recalibrated"
7"They had each counted the"
8"She looked at it the"
9"They both heard what that"
10"It was the politest lie"
11"It tasted, briefly, of rain"
ratio0.19
39.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences63
matches
0"The rain had arrived in"
1"Rory sat three stools from"
2"Nobody came in on Tuesdays."
3"That was what Tuesdays were"
4"The woman who came in"
5"the woman said"
6"Silas said, without looking up"
7"Her eyes crossed Rory once,"
8"She asked, in the apologetic"
9"Silas's gaze traveled the bottles,"
10"The woman laughed, and the"
11"Rory kept still."
12"She had gotten good at"
13"The woman asked after a"
14"Silas said, and Rory reached"
15"Bike chain, age nine, a"
16"The woman's eyes stopped on"
17"The name fell down a"
18"She heard it land a"
19"Silas came around the bar"
ratio0.841
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"To her credit she only"
ratio0.016
16.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Plastic diamonds on wire, elastic digging into her chin, a white sash crushed in one manicured fist as though she had been strangling it for some distance."
1"The woman laughed, and the laugh reached Rory before the face did, coming down a long corridor the way it always had, ahead of its owner, announcing her."
2"They were the same shape, set in a different face, a face that had learned to apologize to furniture."
3"Eva looked at her wrist, at the sleeve that wasn't pulled down over her hand, and Rory saw her notice the not-pulling."
4"Silas wound the wireless up a notch and studied the ledger as though it had said something requiring thought."
5"Rory lifted Eva's glass and drained it, her thumb resting on the crescent at her wrist, the one part of her that had never once needed introducing."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas said, without looking up from the ledger"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.687
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.1660%