Run: 2026-09-02-01M1GS12Y2GXJNBX71SZPJ4FPX

Run Details

Duration:
14m 4s
Cost:
$0.077131
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had owned Soho since four o'clock, and by half past nine the street outside had emptied of everyone but the umbrella-less and the determined. Rory came down the narrow stairs behind the bar with her hair still damp from her shift and her jacket smelling of sesame and star anise, the smell of the Golden Empress's kitchen that followed her home whether she wanted it or not. In her hand was a plastic tub of dumplings Yu-Fei had refused to let her refuse. House rule: last delivery of the night eats. She could hear the green sign buzzing above the door even through the wall, a sound she'd stopped noticing months ago and suddenly heard again, the way you hear your own name in a foreign city. Inside, the Nest was empty but for Silas. The lamps were low, gilding the brass rail and the maps that papered the walls, and he stood behind the bar rolling a glass in his cloth, sleeves turned up, the silver signet catching the light each time his hand went round. She set the tub on the bar. "The Empress sends her regards." "They'd be better spent on someone who'd pay for them." But he fetched two forks, and watched with the particular attention he paid to her eating, which she pretended not to notice. "Window couple," he said. "How much did they leave?" "Gone before I came down. Twelve pounds and an apology on a napkin." "You read it?" "I'm a snoop. You encourage it." He almost smiled, which for a Tuesday was a sort of festival, and then the bell over the door went and the cold came in with it. The man stood in the doorway the way she had been taught to stand in doorways — feet set, eyes moving left to right, doors first. He was tall in the way of men who had once been bigger; his coat was a size too large for him now, and Rory understood, without being told, that it had once fit. His hair had gone white and thin. His right hand, hanging at his side, trembled in a small private argument with itself. He looked at the maps on the wall for a long moment. "You kept the maps," he said. Not to the room. To Silas. The cloth stopped moving. "Marcus," Silas said. "Hello, Si." They shook hands across the bar and held on, two men doing arithmetic with the years, and Rory looked at her dumplings and made herself small. "Sit down before you drown," Silas said. "You're dripping on 1587." Marcus sat. He settled onto the stool with the care of a man negotiating with his own bones. "If that bottle's still down there — the Czech one you walked through customs in a sock —" Silas reached below the bar and came up with a bottle whose shoulders wore a fine grey fur of dust. Rory had worked, eaten, and occasionally wept in this bar for two years, and she had never once seen that bottle. He poured two measures without asking and did not ask her if she wanted anything, which was its own message. She gathered her plate and moved to the far end, and after that she watched them in the back-bar mirror, between the bottles, the way he had taught her. Marcus glanced along the bookshelves that filled the wall behind the corner table. "Kipling still there?" "Auden now." "Auden." A small breath through his nose. "Very you." Rory had no idea what they were discussing, and understood perfectly that she wasn't meant to. "How'd you find me?" Silas said. "A death notice. Old Prentice, last spring. 'He is survived by his wife, his daughters, and his former colleagues, one of whom keeps a public house in Soho.'" Marcus turned his glass a quarter turn. "I cut it out. It's in the workshop, under a clock I've never finished." "You have a workshop." "I mend clocks, Si. Thirty years. Grandmothers' mantelpieces, mostly. People bring me their dead grandmothers' clocks and I make them tick again, and they cry, and I charge them forty quid." He smiled, and the smile had a crack in it. "A bar, though. I told Anna. She said good, he always poured better than he talked." "How is Anna?" "Stubborn. She knits now. Aggressively." He lifted his glass with his left hand, keeping the right flat on the bar, and Rory saw Silas see it. "Your hand," Silas said. "You spend thirty years training hands to be still, they file a grievance." Marcus looked at his own knuckles a moment, then said, plainly, "It's the pancreas, if we're saying words. Every third Tuesday I come up so they can weigh what's left of me. I was early today. Soho's still here." "How long?" "They said spring. I've told them I'm appealing." Silas turned his ring once, all the way round, thumb against silver. Rory knew that gesture. It was the one he made when he had decided the world was not ready for a sentence. "How long have you known where I was?" he asked. "Two years." Marcus looked at the rain on the window. "I've stood outside twice. It was never raining hard enough." The sign buzzed through the wall. Neither of them said anything, and the silence had a shape to it, like furniture under a dust sheet. Then Marcus rose, slowly, and walked the wall of maps, reading them the way other men read a room. He stopped at one and put his finger just short of the glass. "This one was in the flat. Malá Strana. There was a water stain shaped like a duck." "Still is." "You kept everything." "Paper keeps." "People don't." He came back to his stool and finished his drink, and when he spoke again it was quieter, and Rory pressed her thumb over the small crescent scar on her left wrist, an old habit for weather like this. "I do the corner at night," Marcus said. "That alley off the river. I get to twenty-nine, and the phone rings, and I wake up in King's Lynn with my heart going like a dropped clock." "You drove," Silas said. "That was the job." "You were in the road. Your leg on backwards. Danny still on the corner. And I counted thirty and put the car in gear because a voice told me to, and I've been driving ever since, one way or another. Thirty years, Si. You can drive a long way in thirty years and never once arrive." "I never blamed you. Not for one second of them." "I know." Marcus looked at him, and his face was mild and ruined. "That's the worst of it. If you'd hated me, there'd have been somewhere to put it." Silas laid his thumb flat on the ring, holding it still. "It was a night with a wrong shape. It took the boy, and my knee, and your sleep, and there was never a version where you stayed and everyone lived. You can drive it a thousand times. The corner doesn't move." Marcus breathed out, long, like a man setting down something he had carried up stairs. "Say it again nearer the time. I might hear it then." Silas reached across the bar and took Marcus's right hand, the shaking one, and pressed it flat to the wood, steady, the way a man steadies a clock. "Tuesday after next," he said. "If they'll have me. Keep the bottle." "It'll be here." "I know." Marcus stood, and worked his coat back on, and put a twenty under his glass, and Silas, who in Rory's memory had never once let anyone pay, let him. At the door the old man paused and looked at her, blue eyes meeting hers with unexpected directness. "Look after him, love. He's rarer than he lets on." Then the bell, and the cold, and the green light lying on the wet pavement with no one standing in it. For a long while Silas didn't clear the glasses. He stood with his hands flat on the bar, and the limp, when he finally moved, was the one he usually kept out of his walk. Rory said nothing. She slid the tub of dumplings down the bar to him. "Eat. You're not a guest, you're the management." He ate a few, mechanically, and rubbed his beard once, slowly. Her eye went, as it had gone a hundred times, to the photograph at the end of the wall — three young men squinting into low sun on a bridge, one of them cut off at the elbow mid-laugh, and the second one dark-auburn and lean and already standing like a man who owned the ground under him. She had dusted that frame for two years and never asked. Silas followed her look. In the lamplight his eyes were the flat hazel of old bottle glass. "Prague," he said. Which was not an answer, and she let it be one. On the bar her phone lit, face up this time, and the screen said Dad, the second call this evening; the first she had turned over and silenced while two old men failed to say what they'd come all this way not to say. She picked it up and typed with her thumb. Hi Dad. You free Sunday? I'll cook. She pressed send before she could count to thirty.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.741
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1573
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"perfectly"
3"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1573
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"determined"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"determined"
1"trembled"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"see"
2"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1576
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1076
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Marcus"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Nest1
Silas15
Tuesday1
Rory10
Marcus11
Which1
Dad2
Sunday1
persons
0"Empress"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Marcus"
places
0"Soho"
1"Nest"
globalScore0.803
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1576
matches(empty)
43.21% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences108
matches
0"told, that it"
1"seen that bottle"
2"knew that gesture"
3"dusted that frame"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean24.63
std24.31
cv0.987
sampleLengths
093
136
257
35
432
59
613
73
86
927
1094
1112
124
133
142
1526
1611
1736
1890
1916
202
219
2216
236
2449
254
2657
273
2826
294
3052
312
328
3334
3410
3520
3625
3749
382
393
402
4141
4236
438
4456
4510
4629
4752
4826
4928
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"been taught"
1"being told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"were discussing"
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences108
ratio0.037
matches
0"The man stood in the doorway the way she had been taught to stand in doorways — feet set, eyes moving left to right, doors first."
1"He was tall in the way of men who had once been bigger; his coat was a size too large for him now, and Rory understood, without being told, that it had once fit."
2"Her eye went, as it had gone a hundred times, to the photograph at the end of the wall — three young men squinting into low sun on a bridge, one of them cut off at the elbow mid-laugh, and the second one dark-auburn and lean and already standing like a man who owned the ground under him."
3"On the bar her phone lit, face up this time, and the screen said Dad, the second call this evening; the first she had turned over and silenced while two old men failed to say what they'd come all this way not to say."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount959
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.029197080291970802
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0072992700729927005
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean14.59
std12.99
cv0.89
sampleLengths
026
143
216
38
436
58
642
77
85
932
104
115
1213
133
146
1527
1626
1734
187
1915
2012
216
224
232
244
253
262
2726
287
294
302
3116
3218
3320
3421
3520
3629
3713
383
392
407
412
4216
436
4435
4514
464
4741
4816
493
69.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4351851851851852
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then Marcus rose, slowly, and"
1"Then the bell, and the"
ratio0.033
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences60
matches
0"She could hear the green"
1"She set the tub on"
2"He almost smiled, which for"
3"He was tall in the"
4"His hair had gone white"
5"His right hand, hanging at"
6"He looked at the maps"
7"They shook hands across the"
8"He settled onto the stool"
9"He poured two measures without"
10"She gathered her plate and"
11"He smiled, and the smile"
12"He lifted his glass with"
13"It was the one he"
14"He stopped at one and"
15"He came back to his"
16"He stood with his hands"
17"She slid the tub of"
18"He ate a few, mechanically,"
19"Her eye went, as it"
ratio0.4
51.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences60
matches
0"The rain had owned Soho"
1"Rory came down the narrow"
2"House rule: last delivery of"
3"She could hear the green"
4"The lamps were low, gilding"
5"She set the tub on"
6"He almost smiled, which for"
7"The man stood in the"
8"He was tall in the"
9"His hair had gone white"
10"His right hand, hanging at"
11"He looked at the maps"
12"The cloth stopped moving."
13"They shook hands across the"
14"He settled onto the stool"
15"Silas reached below the bar"
16"Rory had worked, eaten, and"
17"He poured two measures without"
18"She gathered her plate and"
19"Marcus glanced along the bookshelves"
ratio0.817
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory came down the narrow stairs behind the bar with her hair still damp from her shift and her jacket smelling of sesame and star anise, the smell of the Golde…"
1"The lamps were low, gilding the brass rail and the maps that papered the walls, and he stood behind the bar rolling a glass in his cloth, sleeves turned up, the…"
2"He was tall in the way of men who had once been bigger; his coat was a size too large for him now, and Rory understood, without being told, that it had once fit…"
3"Her eye went, as it had gone a hundred times, to the photograph at the end of the wall — three young men squinting into low sun on a bridge, one of them cut off…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He smiled, and the smile had a crack in it"
1"Marcus looked, and his face was mild and ruined"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.204
leniency0.407
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.8783%