| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "said a voice from directly behind her [directly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 85.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1371 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 78.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1371 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1385 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "Evidence," | | 1 | "Stick to the evidence, cariad." | | 2 | "You're being watched," |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 1345 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.3 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "November" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 4 | | Petersham | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | London | 2 | | November | 2 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evans | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Welsh | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed closer and whiter than the moon had any right to be" | | 1 | "felt like falling" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1385 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 43.28 | | std | 32.67 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 90 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 71 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 83 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 64 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 88 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 117 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 75 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 61 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 53 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 71 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 11 |
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| 83.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was fixed" | | 2 | "were nailed" | | 3 | "was allowed" | | 4 | "is shaped" | | 5 | "being counted" |
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| 45.68% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "was locking" | | 1 | "was telling" | | 2 | "wasn't watching" | | 3 | "was playing" | | 4 | "were walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "Not even wind — the air had the held-breath quality of a room where someone has just stopped talking." | | 1 | "They rose out of a clearing ahead of her like the ribs of something buried — ancient oaks gone grey and mineral, trunks swollen into monolith shapes, bark fused hard as poured wax." | | 2 | "Inside, the clearing was thick with wildflowers — poppies, cornflowers, things she had no names for — open and vivid and utterly untouched by frost, in November, at midnight, under a moon that seemed closer and whiter than the moon had any right to be." | | 3 | "Her breath fogged; the flowers kept blooming." | | 4 | "Her mother had taught her the birds off the back step in Cardiff, and blackbirds sang at dawn and dusk, rich and looping, and never — never — at midnight in a frost with no streetlight to confuse them." | | 5 | "She didn't see it appear; it was simply there the way a word is there once you've noticed it in a sentence." | | 6 | "She turned her head to look directly and the space between the stones was empty, and her shadow — cast thin and blue by that too-close moon — lagged a half-second behind her arm as it moved, catching up with a little skitter she felt in her teeth rather than saw." | | 7 | "Her footprints crossed the frost inside the ring — she'd left them when she entered, and there they were — and beside them, from a point halfway across the clearing where her own prints simply began, ran a second line." | | 8 | "The poppies and the cornflowers and the nameless blue things, every face in the clearing angled toward her, patient as sunflowers — except there was no sun, and they had been facing the moon when she arrived." | | 9 | "Then, at her ear — inside the curtain of her hair, breath stirring it, close enough that she felt the warmth of it on her skin — a voice said the third name." | | 10 | "Not cool — cold, dead cold, a stone on a chain, and Rory stood very still while the truth arrived with a calm that felt like falling." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 128 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 4 | | adverbRatio | 0.03125 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 14.28 | | std | 12.84 | | cv | 0.899 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 58.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.422680412371134 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it bolted, dead silent," | | 1 | "Slightly longer stride." | | 2 | "Then, at her ear —" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 63.68% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She was locking the chain" | | 1 | "It had been doing that" | | 2 | "She should have gone home." | | 3 | "She had a flat above" | | 4 | "She stopped on the path" | | 5 | "Its gaze was fixed on" | | 6 | "She had lived in London" | | 7 | "They rose out of a" | | 8 | "They ringed the clearing with" | | 9 | "It was November." | | 10 | "Her phone said 23:14." | | 11 | "She remembered because she'd checked" | | 12 | "Her breath fogged; the flowers" | | 13 | "She tucked the phone away," | | 14 | "She took one step toward" | | 15 | "She'd walk the boundary, keep" | | 16 | "Her fingers touched bark that" | | 17 | "It was faintly, horribly warm," | | 18 | "She knew blackbirds." | | 19 | "Her mother had taught her" |
| | ratio | 0.391 | |
| 92.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "The last order of the" | | 1 | "She was locking the chain" | | 2 | "It had been doing that" | | 3 | "Tonight it was hot enough" | | 4 | "She should have gone home." | | 5 | "She had a flat above" | | 6 | "The pendant had come to" | | 7 | "Tonight it was telling her" | | 8 | "The park at night was" | | 9 | "Deer drifted through the bracken" | | 10 | "The city hummed somewhere behind" | | 11 | "She stopped on the path" | | 12 | "A hind stood thirty feet" | | 13 | "Its gaze was fixed on" | | 14 | "The pendant burned." | | 15 | "She had lived in London" | | 16 | "They rose out of a" | | 17 | "They ringed the clearing with" | | 18 | "That was the first thing" | | 19 | "The grass outside the ring" |
| | ratio | 0.736 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Whenever her route bent toward" | | 1 | "Whoever left it had known" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 57.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The last order of the night took Rory to a house on the Petersham side of the park, a bag of butter chicken and garlic naan that earned her a two-pound tip and …" | | 1 | "Inside, the clearing was thick with wildflowers — poppies, cornflowers, things she had no names for — open and vivid and utterly untouched by frost, in November…" | | 2 | "She took one step toward it and her feet angled inward instead, carrying her along the ring of stones as if the boundary were a groove cut for her." | | 3 | "It kept pace with her breathing and came a half-beat late, an echo that had learned to walk on its own." | | 4 | "Not cool — cold, dead cold, a stone on a chain, and Rory stood very still while the truth arrived with a calm that felt like falling." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |