| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.714 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 85.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1421 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1421 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "tenderness" | | 5 | "resolve" | | 6 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 63 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1447 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1405 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.14 | | worstName | "Park" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Pen | 1 | | Ponds | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | London | 1 | | December | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Dymas" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "circle that seemed to stop three feet from her face, as if the light itself gave up" | | 1 | "felt like holding her breath" | | 2 | "quite resolve" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.691 | | wordCount | 1447 | | matches | | 0 | "not gradually but in steps, like descending staircases of cold" |
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| 98.64% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "recognise — that the" | | 1 | "said that name" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 49.9 | | std | 28.2 | | cv | 0.565 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 93 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 73 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 84 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 81 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 72 | | 15 | 87 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 69 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 103 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 45 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 48 |
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| 79.68% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been taken" | | 2 | "were shaped" | | 3 | "been told " | | 4 | "being looked" | | 5 | "being placed" | | 6 | "was supposed" |
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| 85.55% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 233 | | matches | | 0 | "was failing" | | 1 | "was doing" | | 2 | "was making" | | 3 | "was moving " |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.204 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas had drawn it on the same scrap of paper Eva had used: a rough circle of stones, a boundary of ancient oaks, and a warning underlined twice — do not cross after midnight unless you mean it." | | 1 | "It had become so much a part of her — that faint pulse of warmth, like a second heartbeat two inches lower and to the left — that its silence now felt like holding her breath." | | 2 | "She heard them — the snap of twigs, the soft industrial chuff of their breathing — and then she didn't, all at once, like a door closing." | | 3 | "Richmond Park sat inside London, inside the M25's endless hum; even at midnight there should be traffic, distant, a tide you stopped hearing only when you listened for it." | | 4 | "Not silence exactly — silence had edges, had the shape of the sounds it was failing to contain." | | 5 | "Wildflowers appeared at the edge of the torchlight — she crouched once to look at them, confused, because it was December, and these were cow parsley and red campion, opened wide and dewy, blooming like it was midsummer." | | 6 | "Not scattered, not natural — a line, running off to her right into the dark, like a path marked for someone." | | 7 | "The alternative was to cut across it, and something under her ribs — not the pendant, something older and more superstitious — said don't break it either." | | 8 | "The crescent scar on her wrist ached — it always ached in cold, an old souvenir of a fall from a garden wall when she was nine — but this was a different ache, a pulling sensation, as if the scar were a seam and something behind it wanted out." | | 9 | "One moment there were trees, and the next the trees ended in a clean arc, and the standing oaks rose ahead of her — huge, black, wrong." | | 10 | "Inside the ring of oaks, the grove proper opened up: a clearing of deep grass, silvered faintly by a light that came from nowhere — no moon broke the canopy, no stars, and yet the wildflowers glowed like a spilled box of jewels." | | 11 | "She had been told — by Silas, by the note folded inside the map, in handwriting she didn't recognise — that the Heartstone would warm near a Hel portal." | | 12 | "Not brightened — leaned." | | 13 | "Tall, narrow, upright — but when she turned her head it was a tree again, rooted, inert, exactly a tree." | | 14 | "She could feel that without seeing — a rustle of presence around the circle's rim, like people taking seats in a dark theatre." | | 15 | "That was the horror of it — the tenderness, the absolute patience." | | 16 | "One long, continuous vibration, not a message — a vibration like a struck bell, like the phone was a tuning fork someone had touched to the wrong frequency." | | 17 | "The crimson gem had gone glassy and dark, and inside it, deep down, something was moving — a slow red stirring, like blood in water, like a thing turning over in its sleep." | | 18 | "When she tried to break it — deliberately, gasping — her heart continued without her, patient, in time with the stone." | | 19 | "And somewhere behind the ring of oaks, past the boundary that was supposed to keep things out — or in — a second heartbeat started up, matching hers, a half-step behind, like an echo that had learned to walk." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1380 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slow red stirring, like" |
| | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.03768115942028986 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009420289855072464 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 14.77 | | std | 13.44 | | cv | 0.911 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 44 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 43 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 49.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.38144329896907214 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere out here, past the" | | 1 | "Slowly, with a dry creak" | | 2 | "Then 11:59, and the numbers" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 64.44% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her phone." | | 1 | "She meant it." | | 2 | "It had become so much" | | 3 | "She kept touching it through" | | 4 | "She heard them — the" | | 5 | "She stopped walking." | | 6 | "she said, and her voice" | | 7 | "She walked on." | | 8 | "They grew in a line." | | 9 | "She didn't follow the line." | | 10 | "Her breath started fogging when" | | 11 | "She zipped the jacket to" | | 12 | "They had been oaks once," | | 13 | "Her phone said 11:52." | | 14 | "she murmured to it" | | 15 | "It touched her face like" | | 16 | "She had been told —" | | 17 | "It was doing the opposite." | | 18 | "She didn't have a rule" | | 19 | "She was making the rules" |
| | ratio | 0.389 | |
| 87.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park closed its gates" | | 1 | "Rory had come in through" | | 2 | "She checked her phone." | | 3 | "The beam of the torch" | | 4 | "Silas had drawn it on" | | 5 | "She meant it." | | 6 | "That was the whole problem." | | 7 | "The pendant sat cold against" | | 8 | "The Heartstone had not gone" | | 9 | "It had become so much" | | 10 | "She kept touching it through" | | 11 | "Deer moved somewhere to her" | | 12 | "She heard them — the" | | 13 | "She stopped walking." | | 14 | "The park should have sound." | | 15 | "Richmond Park sat inside London," | | 16 | "This was more like the" | | 17 | "she said, and her voice" | | 18 | "She walked on." | | 19 | "The bracken whispered against her" |
| | ratio | 0.744 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The crescent scar on her wrist ached — it always ached in cold, an old souvenir of a fall from a garden wall when she was nine — but this was a different ache, …" | | 1 | "Inside the ring of oaks, the grove proper opened up: a clearing of deep grass, silvered faintly by a light that came from nowhere — no moon broke the canopy, no…" | | 2 | "She understood, all at once and completely, that she had walked into something that had been waiting much longer than it had needed to, that had arranged the fl…" | | 3 | "And somewhere behind the ring of oaks, past the boundary that was supposed to keep things out — or in — a second heartbeat started up, matching hers, a half-ste…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |