Run: 2026-09-02-01M1H5KHBGV1SJQS3GCG90ZTMC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.000494
Provider:
Z.AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had followed Rory all the way from Berwick Street, shepherding her toward the green neon glow of the Raven's Nest like a sheepdog that wouldn't quit. By the time she pushed through the door, her jacket was dark at the shoulders and her hair clung in wet threads to her neck. She shook the water off the way a dog shakes off a bath, and the bar's familiar warmth closed around her—wood polish, spilled lager, the faint char of Silas's ever-present bowl of roasted almonds going cold on the counter. The Nest was quiet for a Thursday. A couple of regulars hunched at the far end like crows on a wire, and the old maps on the walls seemed to listen in the way they always did, their borders drawn and redrawn by hands long dead. Silas was behind the bar, wiping a glass that was already clean, his silver signet ring catching the low amber light. "Carter," he said, without looking up. "You're dripping on my floor." "Your floor's survived worse." "It has. That's not the point." He set the glass down and nodded toward the corner booth. "You've got company." She turned, expecting one of Silas's odd assortment of hangers-on, someone with a parcel or a question or a job that paid in cash and favours. Instead, sitting in the booth beneath the photograph of the Berlin Wall coming down, was a woman she hadn't seen in eight years. Eva. For a moment Rory's mind refused the arithmetic. The last time she'd seen Eva, they'd been twenty and twenty-one, crammed into a Cardiff flat that smelled of burnt toast and cheap wine, planning a future that had made sense then. The woman in the booth was composed of the same bones, but everything laid over them had changed. Her hair was cropped close to her skull, almost severe. She wore a charcoal coat that probably cost more than Rory's rent, and she sat very still, hands folded on the table, like someone who had learned that stillness was a kind of armour. There was a thin white line, small and precise, cutting through her left eyebrow. "Rory," Eva said. Not a question. A confirmation, as if she'd been checking off a list. "How did you—" Rory stopped. She knew how. Silas's world and Eva's world had apparently been circling each other for longer than she'd realized. "You look different." "So do you." Eva gestured at the seat opposite. "Sit. I'll buy you a drink, although I suspect you get a staff discount." Rory sat. She didn't take off her coat. Silas appeared with two whiskies without being asked, set them down, and withdrew with the discretion of a man who had spent thirty years pretending not to hear things. His limp was bad tonight; she noticed he favoured the left leg on the turn. "I looked for you," Eva said, after the silence had stretched long enough to hurt. "After you left Cardiff. You just—vanished. One day your number didn't work." "You know why I left." "Evan. Yes." Eva said the name flatly, without pity, which was one of the reasons Rory had loved her. "I knew before you told anyone. I used to see the way you flinched when his key hit the lock. I should have said something. I didn't." She picked up her whisky but didn't drink. "I've had time to think about that." Rory stared at her. This was not the Eva she remembered—Eva who talked over the endings of films, who once climbed the fire escape of the students' union at three in the morning to steal a plant. This Eva measured her words like a surgeon measuring incisions. "Who are you?" Rory asked. "Honestly. What do you do?" "I'm a solicitor," Eva said. "Garrick & Howe. We handle things that never make the papers." A small, dry smile. "You went into law too. Your father must be insufferably pleased." "He's retired. Pleased anyway, for once." Rory turned her glass in a slow circle. "I deliver Thai food, Eva. I live above a bar. My big legal accomplishment is a tenancy dispute I won on behalf of my downstairs neighbour." "And you're happier." It wasn't a question either. Rory wanted to laugh. "How would you know that?" "Because you used to talk about getting out. Out of Cardiff, out of law, out of his flat. You got out of everything. You're sitting in a bar in Soho at nine at night, dripping wet, and there's nothing strung tight in your face." Eva's voice stayed level. "I got everything I wanted, and I haven't slept properly since 2019." The rain kept its drumbeat against the window. At the far end of the bar, one of the regulars laughed at something in his pint glass. The photograph of the Wall coming down held its frozen celebration above them, all those faces lifted toward a future they couldn't have imagined would take forty more years to arrive. "What happened to your eyebrow?" Rory asked quietly. "Prague," Eva said, and beside the bar, Silas's cloth stopped moving for half a second before resuming its slow orbit. "My fault for thinking the work was one kind of thing when it was another." She finally drank, a small measured sip. "I keep the plant, by the way. From the union fire escape. It's a monstera now. Enormous. It's the only thing I've kept alive longer than five years." Rory laughed despite herself, and the sound cracked something open in the room. "You stole that. We both did. You did the climbing, I did the lookout." "You took the blame when it went wrong, too. You always did." Eva set down her glass. Her hands were steady, but her eyes had gone somewhere older. "That's what I came to say, I think. All those years I was becoming this—" she touched her collar, the line of her close-cropped hair, the small white scar like an afterthought through her brow, "—I kept the version of you from that flat in Cardiff in my head. Rory with the paint on her fingers. Rory who thought a plant counted as a felony. Every decision I've made since, I've half-made against you. What would she think. What would she have done." "Eva—" "I'm not asking for anything. I know what it looks like when someone wants something, and I don't." For the first time, the composure slipped, just at the edges, like a coat an inch too small. "I'm saying I found you, and I wanted to see you before the version in my head hardened permanently. That's all. That's the whole mission." Rory looked at her whisky, then at the woman who had replaced her friend the way a city replaces itself, street by street, until only the street names remain. Time, she thought, doesn't pass. It accumulates. Every unsent letter, every year of silence, all of it sitting in the room now between two glasses of whisky. "I used to be afraid of you seeing me like this," Rory said. "Delivery girl. Barely making rent." "I'm not." "I know. That's the strange part." She reached across the table and, with the crescent scar on her left wrist catching the light, touched Eva's folded hand. "The plant. Does it have a name?" "Margaret." "You named it Margaret." "It deserved dignity." Rory laughed, properly this time, and somewhere behind the bar Silas turned down the music by a degree, the way he did when a conversation was beginning to matter. Outside, the rain softened. Neither of them moved to leave. "Stay," Rory said. "Tell me everything. Not the version for solicitors. The real one." Eva looked at her for a long moment—the old friend and the new stranger occupying the same face—and then, slowly, she took off her coat.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory asked quietly [quietly]"
1"the composure slipped just [just]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.447
leniency0.894
rawRatio0.095
effectiveRatio0.085
92.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count2
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"measured"
count2
highlights
0"familiar"
1"warmth"
2"eyebrow"
3"silence"
4"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
97.51% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen86
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1307
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount881
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Berwick1
Street1
Raven1
Nest2
Silas7
Thursday1
Berlin1
Wall2
Eva16
Cardiff2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Silas"
4"Wall"
5"Eva"
places
0"Berwick"
1"Street"
2"Berlin"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.478
windowScore0
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"va's world had apparently been circling each"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1307
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"learned that stillness"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean33.51
std29.88
cv0.892
sampleLengths
092
167
211
34
420
549
61
7116
816
927
1023
1152
1227
135
1461
1547
1610
1731
1840
198
209
2160
2257
238
2470
2527
26111
271
2861
2956
3018
312
3234
331
344
353
3639
3714
3825
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"was composed"
1"was cropped"
2"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences87
ratio0.057
matches
0"She shook the water off the way a dog shakes off a bath, and the bar's familiar warmth closed around her—wood polish, spilled lager, the faint char of Silas's ever-present bowl of roasted almonds going cold on the counter."
1"His limp was bad tonight; she noticed he favoured the left leg on the turn."
2"This was not the Eva she remembered—Eva who talked over the endings of films, who once climbed the fire escape of the students' union at three in the morning to steal a plant."
3"\"That's what I came to say, I think. All those years I was becoming this—\" she touched her collar, the line of her close-cropped hair, the small white scar like an afterthought through her brow, \"—I kept the version of you from that flat in Cardiff in my head. Rory with the paint on her fingers. Rory who thought a plant counted as a felony. Every decision I've made since, I've half-made against you. What would she think. What would she have done.\""
4"Eva looked at her for a long moment—the old friend and the new stranger occupying the same face—and then, slowly, she took off her coat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount851
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.03525264394829612
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010575793184488837
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean15.02
std13.23
cv0.88
sampleLengths
028
125
239
37
439
521
66
75
84
917
103
1126
1223
131
148
1532
1618
1710
1834
1914
203
213
2210
235
243
2516
263
279
2814
292
306
3129
3215
3315
3412
355
3619
3735
387
394
4033
4110
425
435
445
4515
4611
4714
4826
498
75.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4942528735632184
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners43
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Instead, sitting in the booth"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences54
matches
0"She shook the water off"
1"he said, without looking up"
2"He set the glass down"
3"She turned, expecting one of"
4"Her hair was cropped close"
5"She wore a charcoal coat"
6"She knew how."
7"She didn't take off her"
8"His limp was bad tonight;"
9"She picked up her whisky"
10"It wasn't a question either"
11"She finally drank, a small"
12"Her hands were steady, but"
13"she touched her collar, the"
14"She reached across the table"
ratio0.278
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences54
matches
0"The rain had followed Rory"
1"She shook the water off"
2"The Nest was quiet for"
3"A couple of regulars hunched"
4"Silas was behind the bar,"
5"he said, without looking up"
6"He set the glass down"
7"She turned, expecting one of"
8"The last time she'd seen"
9"The woman in the booth"
10"Her hair was cropped close"
11"She wore a charcoal coat"
12"A confirmation, as if she'd"
13"She knew how."
14"Silas's world and Eva's world"
15"Eva gestured at the seat"
16"She didn't take off her"
17"Silas appeared with two whiskies"
18"His limp was bad tonight;"
19"Eva said, after the silence"
ratio0.833
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"By the time she pushed"
ratio0.019
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain had followed Rory all the way from Berwick Street, shepherding her toward the green neon glow of the Raven's Nest like a sheepdog that wouldn't quit."
1"Silas was behind the bar, wiping a glass that was already clean, his silver signet ring catching the low amber light."
2"She turned, expecting one of Silas's odd assortment of hangers-on, someone with a parcel or a question or a job that paid in cash and favours."
3"The last time she'd seen Eva, they'd been twenty and twenty-one, crammed into a Cardiff flat that smelled of burnt toast and cheap wine, planning a future that …"
4"Rory looked at her whisky, then at the woman who had replaced her friend the way a city replaces itself, street by street, until only the street names remain."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, without looking up"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.213
leniency0.426
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.7196%