| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1226 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1226 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "echo" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.41% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1238 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 24 | | wordCount | 1174 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.6 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 2 | | Isolde | 4 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.45% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.616 | | wordCount | 1238 | | matches | | 0 | "not in words, not in sound she could hear, but in the pendant" | | 1 | "not in sound she could hear, but in the pendant" |
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| 97.94% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "chose that moment" | | 1 | "found that she" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 36.41 | | std | 27.06 | | cv | 0.743 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 84 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 79 | | 10 | 31 | | 11 | 75 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 65 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 91 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 87 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was breathing " | | 2 | "was breathing" | | 3 | "was pulsing" | | 4 | "was beating" | | 5 | "was holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been to the Grove a dozen times now, and she knew the boundary oaks the way she knew her own front door — the gnarled sentinels with their bark like frozen thunder, the wildflowers that bloomed stubborn and bright no matter the month." | | 1 | "It was warm — warmer than her skin, which it shouldn't have been, with the wind cutting off the lake the way it was." | | 2 | "The clearing opened around her as it always did — the pocket of eternal spring, the meadow grass silvered even in darkness, wildflowers nodding in a breeze that didn't reach her face." | | 3 | "The grove was maybe thirty metres across, ringed by the ancient oaks, and beyond them — she'd never really looked before, never had reason to — there was darkness past the boundary that wasn't the same darkness as the park." | | 4 | "She'd give it five minutes, and then —" | | 5 | "Something behind the boundary stones was breathing — if it was breathing, if it was anything at all except her own nerves dressing up the wind." | | 6 | "Just a sense that somewhere along the ring, the density of the blackness had changed — a pooling, a settling, the way deep water looks different from shallow even when it's all the same colour." | | 7 | "She found that she could stop looking; it was almost a physical relief, like releasing a breath." | | 8 | "She saw that gradually, in the corner of her vision — the whole clearing's grass still moving in that impossible gentle wind, and then a wedge of stillness at the northern edge where the flowers stood rigid as though painted." | | 9 | "Behind her — she didn't look, she would not look — the pooled darkness at the boundary made a sound like very old cloth tearing, one thread at a time." | | 10 | "Something answered — not in words, not in sound she could hear, but in the pendant, which pulsed once, hard, like a struck bell, and went still." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 468 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.03418803418803419 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00641025641025641 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 12.76 | | std | 12.06 | | cv | 0.945 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 4 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 67.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4536082474226804 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 87.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere behind the oaks, something" | | 1 | "Just a sense that somewhere" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood at the edge" | | 1 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 2 | "It was warm — warmer" | | 3 | "She clocked that immediately, because" | | 4 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 5 | "It was beautiful and it" | | 6 | "It didn't echo." | | 7 | "She turned in a slow" | | 8 | "She checked her phone." | | 9 | "She'd give it five minutes," | | 10 | "It wasn't loud." | | 11 | "It was the kind of" | | 12 | "She made herself breathe out," | | 13 | "She'd noticed that already." | | 14 | "Her eyes tried to pull" | | 15 | "She stopped looking." | | 16 | "She found that she could" | | 17 | "She saw that gradually, in" | | 18 | "It had been walking toward" | | 19 | "She rose from the stone" |
| | ratio | 0.263 | |
| 91.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones were wrong." | | 1 | "Rory had been to the" | | 2 | "Tonight she'd come at half" | | 3 | "She stood at the edge" | | 4 | "Parks at night were supposed" | | 5 | "That was biology, not omen." | | 6 | "She touched the pendant through" | | 7 | "It was warm — warmer" | | 8 | "The walk in took longer" | | 9 | "She clocked that immediately, because" | | 10 | "This was the approach, not" | | 11 | "That was the first real" | | 12 | "Richmond Park after midnight should" | | 13 | "The silence had texture, like" | | 14 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 15 | "The clearing opened around her" | | 16 | "It was beautiful and it" | | 17 | "Isolde wasn't there." | | 18 | "Isolde was always there, seated" | | 19 | "Rory's voice fell flat and" |
| | ratio | 0.737 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory had been to the Grove a dozen times now, and she knew the boundary oaks the way she knew her own front door — the gnarled sentinels with their bark like fr…" | | 1 | "Ten minutes of walking between lampposts that she remembered being much closer together, her phone torch carving a tunnel out of the black, and the trees on eit…" | | 2 | "She saw that gradually, in the corner of her vision — the whole clearing's grass still moving in that impossible gentle wind, and then a wedge of stillness at t…" | | 3 | "The silence deepened around it, and Rory understood, with the terrible clarity that arrives too late to be useful, that whatever the Heartstone was beating for …" | | 4 | "Rory ran for the southern oaks, for the way she'd come in, and the Heartstone against her chest went suddenly, horribly cold, as if it had realised something sh…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |