| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 73.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1498 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "completely" | | 5 | "suddenly" | | 6 | "carefully" | | 7 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1498 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "raced" | | 12 | "chill" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "fractured" | | 15 | "tracing" | | 16 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 180 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 180 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 1493 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "You didn’t come here to deliver dinner," | | 1 | "You came because it called you." | | 2 | "Because it called you." | | 3 | "Think," | | 4 | "Observe. Adapt." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1479 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Richmond" | | discoveredNames | | November | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Welsh | 2 | | English | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Putney | 1 | | Common | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Welsh" | | 3 | "English" | | 4 | "Putney" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1493 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 55.3 | | std | 29.29 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 116 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 122 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 77 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 73 | | 17 | 63 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 52 | | 25 | 89 | | 26 | 19 |
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| 97.47% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "been open" | | 1 | "was held" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "been gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 256 | | matches | | 0 | "was waking" | | 1 | "was already mapping" |
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| 63.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 180 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers pushed through the leaf litter—night-blooming jasmine, pale foxglove, clusters of something violet that hadn’t been there when she entered." | | 1 | "It wasn’t empty; it was held breath." | | 2 | "And the flowers—dozens of them, impossibly vibrant, arranged in concentric circles around her boots." | | 3 | "But the grammar, the cadence—it lived in her blood." | | 4 | "A sound rose from the deep center of the clearing—a dry, rhythmic breathing, like lungs filling with earth." |
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| 87.74% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1489 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay warm against her" | | 1 | "cold faded beneath her" |
| | adverbCount | 60 | | adverbRatio | 0.040295500335795834 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012760241773002015 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 180 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 180 | | mean | 8.29 | | std | 6.23 | | cv | 0.751 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 59.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 23 | | diversityRatio | 0.43333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 180 | | uniqueOpeners | 78 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "Just swallowed syllables." | | 1 | "Pale, fractured, moving through the" | | 2 | "Instead, Aurora lowered herself into" | | 3 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 63.24% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "They shouldn’t have been open" | | 1 | "It was well past midnight," | | 2 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "It had begun humming an" | | 4 | "She told herself to stay" | | 5 | "It wasn’t empty; it was" | | 6 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 7 | "Her eyes caught on a" | | 8 | "She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar" | | 9 | "She was telling herself now" | | 10 | "Her voice sounded flat, absorbed" | | 11 | "She angled her shoulders, shifting" | | 12 | "She counted her breaths." | | 13 | "Their petals trembled without breeze." | | 14 | "She wasn’t lost." | | 15 | "She’d mapped this route twice." | | 16 | "Her watch had stopped ticking" | | 17 | "She hadn’t noticed until the" | | 18 | "She whirled, hand flying to" | | 19 | "She clicked it on." |
| | ratio | 0.392 | |
| 91.76% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 109 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside the circle" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped past the threshold" | | 2 | "Wildflowers pushed through the leaf" | | 3 | "They shouldn’t have been open" | | 4 | "It was well past midnight," | | 5 | "Here, the grove breathed in" | | 6 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "The job had been simple" | | 8 | "The heartstone pendant lay warm" | | 9 | "It had begun humming an" | | 10 | "She told herself to stay" | | 11 | "Years of pre-law seminars and" | | 12 | "The oaks formed a rough" | | 13 | "It wasn’t empty; it was" | | 14 | "A branch cracked somewhere to" | | 15 | "She turned her head slowly," | | 16 | "Shadows pooled like spilled ink," | | 17 | "Her eyes caught on a" | | 18 | "She rubbed the crescent-shaped scar" | | 19 | "The skin there always felt" |
| | ratio | 0.736 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, pressed flat against her" | | 1 | "*Because it called you.* The" | | 2 | "Because fear, she knew now," |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers pushed through the leaf litter—night-blooming jasmine, pale foxglove, clusters of something violet that hadn’t been there when she entered." | | 1 | "It had begun humming an hour ago, a low, rhythmic thrum that matched the cadence of her own pulse before settling into its own deliberate tempo." | | 2 | "The crimson stone glowed from within, casting faint red shadows that danced along the trunk behind her." | | 3 | "She felt the weight of watching eyes retreating into the dark, folding into the roots, waiting for the next heartbeat that dared to trespass." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |