Run: 2026-09-02-01M1HAM233SZ1WR6DG2N5YZJEJ

Run Details

Duration:
6m 9s
Cost:
$0.080274
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest hummed above the door like a patient insect. Aurora Carter leaned her delivery bike against the wall, the insulated Golden Empress bag still warm against her spine, and noticed first that the light inside had changed. It was the same dim amber it had been for the two years she had lived in the flat upstairs, but there was a new shape at the bar, a woman sitting straight enough to be waiting for someone or running from someone. Rory shook rain from her hair. Straight, black, shoulder-length, it always took weather personally. She pushed in. The smell reached her before the sound: wet wool, old wood, lemon polish, the faint iron breath of the maps Silas kept pinned to the walls. The Raven’s Nest was never loud. It conversed in low voices, glasses set down carefully, secrets folded into the upholstery. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood wiped a tumbler with a cloth and did not look up. His silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand, made a small click against the glass. The sound found Rory like a finger against her sternum. “You’re late,” Silas said. “Yu-Fei kept me.” “Yu-Fei always keeps you.” She was about to answer, about to ask whether the bar was busy enough for her to sneak past and go up to her flat, when the woman at the bar turned. Rory stopped. The insulated bag slipped a little down her shoulder. She did not catch it. The woman’s face was older, leaner, framed by a cut so precise it looked expensive, but the eyes were the same: quick, warm, a little too hopeful. Rory knew those eyes from school corridors, from library whispering, from the last bad winter in Cardiff when everything had begun to fall away. “Eva,” she said. The name came out too easily, as if it had been waiting under her tongue all these years. Eva stood. Her coat was dark and well made. There was no rain on it, which meant she had been inside long enough to dry. She had a glass of white wine in front of her, untouched. That was also old Eva: ordering something because it looked adult and then letting it sit there. “It is you,” Eva said. “I thought I was losing my mind on Wardour Street. I saw you on the bicycle. I nearly shouted.” Rory forced herself to breathe. Cool-headed, she told herself. The old command came back, but thinner. “You followed me?” “I walked fast. There’s a difference.” Eva’s mouth curved, but it did not become a smile. “You still ride like you’re being chased.” Behind the bar, Silas set the tumbler down. He looked from one woman to the other with the unhurried attention of a man who had learned that entrances mattered more than exits. His hazel eyes took in Rory’s wet hair, the delivery bag, the way her left hand had curled at her side. The low light caught the grey in his neatly trimmed beard. “Rory?” he said quietly. She nodded. She did not know what else to say. Her name in his mouth was current, practical. In Eva’s mouth it was a door she had shut and forgotten to lock. “I’ll leave you to it,” Silas said. “Don’t,” Rory said, too quickly. Eva glanced at him, then at the maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs, the bookshelf at the rear that looked as if it had never been moved even though Rory knew it could be. She had learned early that The Raven’s Nest wore its secrets like wallpaper. “Is this a bad time?” Eva asked. “I was working,” Rory said. “You still do that?” Eva nodded toward the Golden Empress bag. “Deliveries?” “I still do that.” Eva had the grace to look embarrassed. “I didn’t mean it like that.” “You meant it exactly like that.” A beat passed. Somewhere in the back room, a glass clinked against a bottle. Silas did not move. The bar kept its low murmur around them. Then Eva laughed, soft and surprised. “Christ. You’re still impossible.” Rory felt something loosen in her chest. “You’re still rude.” “You’re still quick.” “No,” Rory said. “I’m tired. It looks similar.” Silas chose that moment to take the insulated bag from her shoulder. He did it with the casual authority of a man who had spent decades moving people away from danger without seeming to touch them. He set the bag on an empty stool. “Sit,” he told Rory. “Both of you.” “I can’t pay for wine,” Rory said. “You can’t pay for anything upstairs,” Silas said. “The sink’s backed up again.” “That’s because you told me to fix it and then disappeared.” “I was here.” “In spirit.” He gave her the ghost of a smile. “Whisky?” “Tea.” He raised an eyebrow. “Whisky,” she said. When he turned to pour, Rory sat on the stool beside Eva but left a little distance between them. The distance felt honest. Eva looked at her hands, then at Rory’s. Rory saw her gaze snag on the small crescent scar at the wrist, the old one from childhood, not the one Evan had made in her life in other ways. Rory pulled her sleeve down without thinking. “You look—” Eva began. “Don’t.” “I wasn’t going to say tired.” “You were going to say different.” Eva’s face changed, not much, just enough. “Yes.” Rory took the whisky Silas set in front of her. He put a glass of water beside it too, because he knew her better than she wanted. She drank the water first. Eva watched her do it. “So,” Eva said. “London.” “London.” “You live here?” “Above.” “Above the bar?” “It’s quieter than it sounds.” Silas, who had been pretending to arrange bottles, made a low noise of disagreement. Rory glanced at him. “You snore through the floorboards.” “I do not snore. I strategize aloud.” Eva’s laugh came out more naturally this time. It landed in Rory somewhere low and old. She hated how much she wanted to hear it again. “I came for a conference,” Eva said. “Family law. I qualified last year.” Rory kept her voice careful. “Congratulations.” “Don’t say it like that.” “Like what?” “Like I’ve committed a crime.” “You became a lawyer. My father will want to frame you.” “Your father wanted you to become a lawyer.” “My father wanted me to become him.” Rory lifted her whisky, then set it down again. “You did it instead.” Eva’s eyes flashed. “That’s not fair.” “No,” Rory said. “It isn’t.” Silence opened between them. A couple near the door left, murmuring thanks to Silas. The green neon pulsed once and steadied. Rory watched the reflection of it tremble in Eva’s wine. “I kept your notes,” Eva said at last. Rory almost laughed. “You kept my notes?” “Constitutional law. Torts. That awful jurisprudence module. I used them more than mine.” “I dropped out.” “I know.” “I didn’t just take a break, Eva. I left.” “I know that too.” Eva turned the stem of her glass between her fingers. “I used to think if I worked hard enough, I’d find you again somewhere respectable. Courts, chambers, some awful library with bad heating. Then I saw you with a thermal box on your back and I thought, of course. Of course she’s delivering noodles.” “It was sweet and sour chicken,” Rory said, and hated the shake in her voice. Eva looked stricken. “I’m sorry. I’m sorry. That came out wrong.” “It came out exactly how you thought it.” “No. It came out because I’m shocked. I’ve been looking for you.” Rory went still. “Looking for me?” “Not like this. Not today. I mean, I used to check. Facebook, LinkedIn, whatever. You vanished.” “I didn’t vanish.” “You stopped answering.” Rory heard the accusation under the softness. She wanted to answer with the easy lie she had perfected: phone broke, lost my number, got busy. The words were there, smooth and ready. But Silas was still behind the bar, polishing the same glass with no interest in it, and Eva was sitting in the amber light of the place where Rory now lived, and the lie tasted old before she spoke it. “I couldn’t,” she said. Eva looked up. “After Evan,” Rory said. The name was easier than she expected. Not easy, but easier. “After I left, I couldn’t be the person who answered you.” Eva’s face softened, and Rory hated that too, because pity was a kind of distance. “You didn’t have to be anyone for me,” Eva said. “Yes, I did. You were the one who told me to go.” “Because he was hurting you.” “And you were right.” Rory looked at her then, really looked. “But being right didn’t make me brave. It just made me alone.” Eva’s hand moved across the bar, then stopped halfway. Rory did not take it. Not yet. The space between them held. “I thought you’d be angry,” Eva said. “I was.” “At me?” “At everyone.” Rory took a breath. “At my father for thinking a degree could protect me. At my mother for pretending politeness was the same as safety. At Evan for making me small. At myself for letting him.” Silas set down the glass he had been polishing. He moved down the bar a little, his left leg stiff from the old injury, and gave them the privacy of his back. Rory understood, with the quick gratitude she often felt for him, that he was not leaving. He was simply adjusting the room around her. “I should have come after you,” Eva said. “I should have let you.” Eva’s eyes filled. She did not let the tears spill. Rory remembered that about her too: Eva had always been the one who cried in private and argued in public. “I used to imagine finding you,” Eva said. “I’d say something perfect. I’d fix it.” “There isn’t a perfect thing to say.” “I know.” Eva swallowed. “I just wanted you to know I remember who you were.” Rory looked down at the whisky. The liquid held the light in small gold shards. She thought of the girl she had been in Cardiff: sharp-tongued, certain, full of borrowed confidence and real intelligence. She had argued with lecturers, mocked bad statutes, believed that if you could parse a sentence carefully enough, the world would keep its promises. That girl had not known how to leave a locked room without breaking something. “I remember her,” Rory said. “She was exhausting.” “She was brilliant.” “She was lucky.” Eva’s hand still rested on the bar, palm up. Rory could feel the offer in it, patient and terrifying. “You’re not lucky now?” Eva asked. Rory considered the question. She thought of the flat upstairs, small and drafty, the hum of the neon sign at night, the smell of old maps and spilled stout. She thought of Yu-Fei shouting orders over the fryers, of the weight of the delivery bag, of Silas leaving tea outside her door when she had nightmares and never mentioning it afterward. She thought of the bookshelf that hid a room where people came to speak in low voices about things that could not be said in daylight. The Raven’s Nest was not a safe place, exactly. It was a place that had learned how to survive danger by keeping its doors where they could be found. “I’m here,” she said. Eva nodded slowly. “That’s not an answer.” “It’s the one I’ve got.” For a moment Eva looked as if she might argue. Then she picked up her wine, drank a little, and made a face. “Still terrible,” she said. “The wine here is terrible,” Silas confirmed without turning around. “It builds character.” “I came in for character,” Eva said. “You came in for the sign,” Silas said. “They all do.” Rory felt the corner of her mouth lift. Eva saw it and steadied. “I saw the green sign,” Eva admitted. “And I thought, that looks like a place where no one will ask me why I’m alone.” “You chose well,” Silas said. Rory looked at him, surprised by the gentleness under the dryness. He gave her a single nod, as if passing something back to her. She turned to Eva. “I finish deliveries at eleven,” she said. “Usually.” “Usually?” “Sometimes Yu-Fei decides the kitchen needs moral support until midnight.” Eva smiled. “You have a delivery life now.” “I have a life.” Rory let the words stand without apology. “It’s smaller than I thought it would be. But it’s mine.” Eva looked at her for a long moment. When she spoke, her voice was lower. “I missed you.” Rory’s throat tightened. She took the whisky this time. It burned cleanly all the way down. She set the glass beside the water and looked at Eva’s hand on the bar. Then she lifted her own hand, slowly, and let her fingers rest a few centimeters away. Not quite touching. Enough for now. “I missed you too,” Rory said. Outside, London moved on in wet tires and late voices. Inside, the maps kept their old routes, the photographs kept their old silences, and the neon sign threw its green light over them like something living. Silas returned to wiping glasses. Eva turned her wineglass in the light. Rory stayed on the stool between the life she had made and the life she had lost, and for the first time in years, did not feel wholly invisible in either.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags44
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences124
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.023
effectiveRatio0.016
86.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2253
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"really"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2253
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count2
4
word"could feel"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"silence"
2"pulsed"
3"perfect"
4"could feel"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences172
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences252
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2253
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions45
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Cool-headed, she told herself."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions130
wordCount1605
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven4
Nest4
Carter1
Golden2
Empress2
Silas18
Blackwood1
Rory46
Cardiff2
Eva46
Evan1
Silence1
Yu-Fei1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
6"Eva"
7"Evan"
8"Silence"
places
0"Golden"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.067
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if passing something back to her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.444
wordCount2253
matches
0"Not easy, but easier"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences252
matches
0"learned that entrances"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs137
mean16.45
std20.21
cv1.229
sampleLengths
087
117
289
34
43
54
632
72
814
951
103
1118
1254
1324
1419
1523
1664
174
1832
197
205
2148
227
235
2412
254
2613
276
2826
2910
3010
313
328
3344
347
357
3613
3711
383
392
409
411
424
433
4468
454
461
476
486
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences172
matches
0"been moved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs313
matches
0"was sitting"
1"was not leaving"
2"was simply adjusting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences252
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1611
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.038485412787088766
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.009931719428926133
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences252
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences252
mean8.94
std7.74
cv0.865
sampleLengths
016
128
243
36
48
53
626
76
814
916
1017
1110
124
133
144
1532
162
179
185
1927
2024
213
2218
232
247
2516
2612
2717
285
2919
305
314
327
333
3416
357
368
3724
3821
3911
404
412
428
438
4414
457
465
4735
4813
497
40.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.23015873015873015
totalSentences252
uniqueOpeners58
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences136
matches
0"Somewhere in the back room,"
1"Then Eva laughed, soft and"
2"Then she picked up her"
3"Then she lifted her own"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences136
matches
0"It was the same dim"
1"She pushed in."
2"It conversed in low voices,"
3"His silver signet ring, always"
4"She was about to answer,"
5"She did not catch it."
6"Her coat was dark and"
7"She had a glass of"
8"He looked from one woman"
9"His hazel eyes took in"
10"he said quietly"
11"She did not know what"
12"Her name in his mouth"
13"She had learned early that"
14"He did it with the"
15"He set the bag on"
16"he told Rory"
17"He gave her the ghost"
18"He raised an eyebrow."
19"He put a glass of"
ratio0.279
29.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences136
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter leaned her delivery"
2"It was the same dim"
3"Rory shook rain from her"
4"She pushed in."
5"The smell reached her before"
6"The Raven’s Nest was never"
7"It conversed in low voices,"
8"His silver signet ring, always"
9"The sound found Rory like"
10"She was about to answer,"
11"The insulated bag slipped a"
12"She did not catch it."
13"The woman’s face was older,"
14"Rory knew those eyes from"
15"The name came out too"
16"Her coat was dark and"
17"She had a glass of"
18"That was also old Eva:"
19"Rory forced herself to breathe."
ratio0.86
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He looked from one woman to the other with the unhurried attention of a man who had learned that entrances mattered more than exits."
1"Eva glanced at him, then at the maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs, the bookshelf at the rear that looked as if it had never been moved even tho…"
2"Silas, who had been pretending to arrange bottles, made a low noise of disagreement."
3"He gave her a single nod, as if passing something back to her."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags44
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags35
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Silas confirmed (confirm)"
1"Eva admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences124
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.565
rawRatio0.057
effectiveRatio0.032
87.6677%