| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 86.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1467 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.20% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1467 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "aligned" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "measured" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "rhythmic" | | 12 | "gloom" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "predator" | | 16 | "stomach" | | 17 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 160 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 160 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1467 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1467 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.41 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Past" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 6 | | Past | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1467 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 11 | | mean | 133.36 | | std | 18.03 | | cv | 0.135 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 120 | | 1 | 150 | | 2 | 133 | | 3 | 126 | | 4 | 121 | | 5 | 168 | | 6 | 106 | | 7 | 129 | | 8 | 153 | | 9 | 147 | | 10 | 114 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "been frozen" | | 1 | "been ignored" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 258 | | matches | | 0 | "was tracking" | | 1 | "was pointing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 160 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1473 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "own long, warped shadow" | | 1 | "smooth, water-worn stone" | | 2 | "same quiet, unbroken composure" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.03326544467073999 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010183299389002037 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 160 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 160 | | mean | 9.17 | | std | 8.68 | | cv | 0.947 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 45.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 31 | | diversityRatio | 0.3875 | | totalSentences | 160 | | uniqueOpeners | 62 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, they thrived, unfurling in" | | 1 | "Then it dissolved into the" | | 2 | "Just the stones." | | 3 | "Just the flowers swaying without" | | 4 | "Just the click-clack, click-clack, continuing" | | 5 | "Already occupying it." | | 6 | "Only choice mattered." | | 7 | "Somewhere far above, London hummed" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 56.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not grow colder." | | 1 | "It grew heavier, viscous as" | | 2 | "She checked her watch." | | 3 | "She had stepped past the" | | 4 | "It kept what little it" | | 5 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 6 | "It had arrived in her" | | 7 | "She had almost thrown it" | | 8 | "Her father would have called" | | 9 | "Her mother would have called" | | 10 | "They should have died months" | | 11 | "She kept her breathing shallow," | | 12 | "It was a dry drag," | | 13 | "Her bright blue eyes caught" | | 14 | "She did not blink." | | 15 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 16 | "She glanced down." | | 17 | "It was pointing deeper into" | | 18 | "She followed it, her movements" | | 19 | "She let the noise wash" |
| | ratio | 0.409 | |
| 70.24% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "It did not grow colder." | | 2 | "It grew heavier, viscous as" | | 3 | "Aurora Carter paused on the" | | 4 | "She checked her watch." | | 5 | "She had stepped past the" | | 6 | "Time did not march in" | | 7 | "It kept what little it" | | 8 | "She pressed two fingers to" | | 9 | "The Heartstone rested against her" | | 10 | "It had arrived in her" | | 11 | "She had almost thrown it" | | 12 | "A Hel portal." | | 13 | "Her father would have called" | | 14 | "Her mother would have called" | | 15 | "Aurora just called it a" | | 16 | "The clearing opened around her" | | 17 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their" | | 18 | "They should have died months" | | 19 | "Static electricity clinging to her" |
| | ratio | 0.78 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter paused on the worn dirt path, her boots sinking fractionally into loam that should have been frozen solid for midwinter." | | 1 | "But the first time it had warmed against her skin, a low and insistent thrum that aligned perfectly with the migraine throbbing behind her right eye, she had kn…" | | 2 | "Instead, they thrived, unfurling in a riot of color that smelled of rain, sweet clover, and something sharper underneath." | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes caught the low ambient light filtering through the canopy, picking out shapes and shadows that refused to hold still." | | 4 | "The earth gave beneath her soles with an unnatural give, leaving clear imprints that filled with water moments after she stepped away." | | 5 | "The beam cut through the gloom, illuminating floating spores that glowed faintly green in the air." | | 6 | "A low rustle built beneath her boots, rising up through the soles, vibrating in her calves." | | 7 | "Her trained eyes tracked the periphery, noting the way shadows detached themselves from tree trunks, pooling and stretching, reforming into silhouettes that las…" | | 8 | "She knew, with the cold certainty of a woman who had read clauses in contracts she never wanted to sign, that the isolation was an illusion." | | 9 | "She saw it stretch and twist, elongating, gaining angles that did not belong to a human frame, reaching upward until the fingertips nearly touched the lowest ha…" | | 10 | "She thought of Silas pouring whiskey below her flat, of Eva pacing the floorboards, of her mother singing Welsh lullabies in a kitchen that smelled of yeast and…" | | 11 | "The flowers parted in her wake, revealing a path of smooth, water-worn stone that spiraled downward into the earth." | | 12 | "She simply walked, feeling the wrongness settle into her marrow, welcoming the debt owed, preparing to meet whatever waited in the dark with the same quiet, unb…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |