| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1351 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "sweetly" | | 2 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1351 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "crystal" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "navigating" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "abyssal" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 13 | | totalWords | 1344 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "A Hel portal." | | 1 | "Think," | | 2 | "Panic is useless. Panic is noise." | | 3 | "Tck. Tck. Tck." |
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| 41.67% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "It was an optical twitch, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1303 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Grove | 3 | | November | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Heathrow | 1 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | London | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Circular" | | 3 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "November" | | 4 | "London" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed dense crowded at the edges of her vision" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.976 | | wordCount | 1344 | | matches | | 0 | "not dragging across the grass, but through the canopy above her head" | | 1 | "not like wood, but like jointed limbs" | | 2 | "not the rot of autumn, but the suffocating, sterile reek of an open kiln, accompanied b" | | 3 | "not away from the shape, but toward the single standing stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 35.37 | | std | 23.2 | | cv | 0.656 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 89 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 87 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 76 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 75 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 70 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 53 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 15 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "were supposed" | | 1 | "was accompanied" | | 2 | "were gone" | | 3 | "was swallowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "was heating" | | 1 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter had come looking for answers—a scrap of parchment left under the door of her flat above Silas’ bar had given specific coordinates and a time just past midnight—but as she cleared the third petrified oak trunk, the cool composure she normally relied upon began to fray." | | 1 | "No night bird called; no deer broke through the underbrush." | | 2 | "The moment she looked directly at the gap, there was nothing there—only gnarls of wood and patches of clover." | | 3 | "It was accompanied by the sound of dragging weight—not dragging across the grass, but through the canopy above her head." | | 4 | "The grove hadn't simply shrunk; the geometry had turned in on itself." | | 5 | "It wasn't dead; it was fresh green, but its edges were black, curled and smoking as if dipped in acid." | | 6 | "A smell followed it down—not the rot of autumn, but the suffocating, sterile reek of an open kiln, accompanied by something sweetly rancid." | | 7 | "It was cold air now—colder than the London frost she had left behind, a dead, empty chill that sucked the heat from her skin even as the Heartstone burned against her ribs." | | 8 | "Instead, Rory lowered her hands slowly, feeling the rough weave of her coat, grounding herself in the physical reality of her body: five feet, six inches; twenty-five years old; living in a drafty flat above a pub; surviving day by day through stubborn refusal to be broken." | | 9 | "For a fraction of a second, the silence broke completely, replaced by a sound she felt in the enamel of her teeth—a low, grinding vibration like two tectonic plates sliding against one another beneath the turf." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 94 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.010638297872340425 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 14 | | std | 10.16 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 52.43% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.3958333333333333 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a sudden warmth flared" | | 1 | "Slowly, without making a sound," | | 2 | "Instead, Rory lowered her hands" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her wristwatch." | | 1 | "Her left thumb found the" | | 2 | "She wasn't jittery." | | 3 | "She was careful." | | 4 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 5 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 6 | "They were supposed to keep" | | 7 | "It wasn't the dry snap" | | 8 | "It sounded wet and deliberate," | | 9 | "She blinked, focusing her bright" | | 10 | "It was an optical twitch," | | 11 | "She took a slow, even" | | 12 | "Her stomach dropped, the bottom" | | 13 | "It didn't react to ghosts," | | 14 | "It only warmed for one" | | 15 | "It was accompanied by the" | | 16 | "She kept her chin level," | | 17 | "It wasn't dead; it was" | | 18 | "It landed on the toe" | | 19 | "It fell from the high" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 54.44% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The autumn fog clung to" | | 1 | "The air inside the Grove" | | 2 | "Wildflowers grew here in November," | | 3 | "Aurora Carter had come looking" | | 4 | "She checked her wristwatch." | | 5 | "The second hand ticked once," | | 6 | "Rory tapped the crystal face" | | 7 | "Her left thumb found the" | | 8 | "Evan used to hate when" | | 9 | "She wasn't jittery." | | 10 | "She was careful." | | 11 | "Her voice fell flat, absorbed" | | 12 | "That was the first true" | | 13 | "Richmond was never silent." | | 14 | "Here, the silence was total," | | 15 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 16 | "The massive oak pillars, bark" | | 17 | "They were supposed to keep" | | 18 | "A click sounded behind her." | | 19 | "It wasn't the dry snap" |
| | ratio | 0.811 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dead hours," | | 1 | "Yet, as she stared into" | | 2 | "If she ran, the space" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 75.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't dead; it was fresh green, but its edges were black, curled and smoking as if dipped in acid." | | 1 | "Rory clamped a hand over the Heartstone, its crimson glow seeping through the gaps between her fingers, casting long, fractured shadows across the pale grass." | | 2 | "It was cold air now—colder than the London frost she had left behind, a dead, empty chill that sucked the heat from her skin even as the Heartstone burned again…" | | 3 | "Whatever had crossed through didn't have lungs, but she could hear it shifting, adjusting itself, folding limbs that were too long into an imitation of stillnes…" | | 4 | "Instead, Rory lowered her hands slowly, feeling the rough weave of her coat, grounding herself in the physical reality of her body: five feet, six inches; twent…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |