| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.65% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1345 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "mechanical" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "tinged" | | 10 | "scanning" | | 11 | "lilt" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "looming" | | 16 | "anticipating" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.38% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 103 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 18 | | totalWords | 1339 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove. Midnight." | | 1 | "Hel," | | 2 | "Tock. Tock. Tock." | | 3 | "Time moves differently," | | 4 | "An hour inside can be minutes or days." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1303 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heathrow | 1 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Isolde | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Like | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heathrow" | | 2 | "November" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Heartstone" | | 7 | "Isolde" | | 8 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like holding a feverish creature a" | | 1 | "as if retreating into their sepals" | | 2 | "as if listening intently to the frantic, rabbit-fast thud of her pulse" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.747 | | wordCount | 1339 | | matches | | 0 | "no longer a faint pulse but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "chill that bit" | | 1 | "say that panic" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 27.9 | | std | 22.18 | | cv | 0.795 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 88 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 63 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 58 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 56 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 51 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 50 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 64 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 47 | | 45 | 40 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 8 |
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| 95.04% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "being tapped" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was rooted" |
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| 73.62% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | | 0 | "were blooming" | | 1 | "were not nodding" | | 2 | "were quivering" | | 3 | "was opening" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "One step, the sole of Aurora’s boot crushed wet, rotting plane leaves on the bridleway of Richmond Park; the next, her heel sank into spring moss, deep and yielding, spongy with subterranean water." | | 1 | "Foxgloves stood tall and turgid; clusters of wood anemone and pale dog-violets opened their throats to the sky, impossibly vibrant, defying the late November chill that bit at Rory’s cheeks." | | 2 | "Her father used to say that panic was an indulgence the court never rewarded; you gathered the facts, cross-examined the evidence, and maintained your ground." | | 3 | "A phantom ache twinged there—an old reflex from an older violence." | | 4 | "The crimson gem was no longer dull; an ember had caught inside its heart, casting a bruised, blood-colored glow over her knuckles." | | 5 | "But she felt the pressure wave in the atmosphere—the sudden vacuum that pulled the loose black strands of her hair toward the center of the grove." | | 6 | "From its sleeve—or what she prayed was a sleeve—a long, jointed limb unfolded." | | 7 | "The space between them did not diminish by a stride; it halved." | | 8 | "One moment it was thirty paces off; the next, it was fifteen, looming over the stunted shrubs, its featureless face turned directly down toward her blue, wide eyes." | | 9 | "Her lungs seized, locking the terror inside her ribs, but her mind—sharpened by years of anticipating the blow before it landed—cut through the paralysis." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 83 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.024096385542168676 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012048192771084338 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 12.88 | | std | 8.14 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 49.68% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.38461538461538464 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 66.67% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, at the very edge" | | 1 | "Then came the sound." |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 92.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled her collar tighter" | | 1 | "She tapped the glass with" | | 2 | "She had come because of" | | 3 | "She had spent the last" | | 4 | "She touched the center of" | | 5 | "It was lukewarm." | | 6 | "It felt like holding a" | | 7 | "It pulsed when a portal" | | 8 | "she called out" | | 9 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 10 | "It dropped like a stone" | | 11 | "Her father used to say" | | 12 | "It wasn't the fresh, dewy" | | 13 | "It smelled sweet, violently so," | | 14 | "She turned slowly on her" | | 15 | "It wasn't a sudden dash." | | 16 | "It was a fluid, sickening" | | 17 | "she said, louder this time," | | 18 | "It was small, faint, and" | | 19 | "It didn't come from the" |
| | ratio | 0.32 | |
| 95.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was always seamless," | | 1 | "Rory stopped, her breath clouding" | | 2 | "The silence hit her first." | | 3 | "London was never quiet." | | 4 | "A night bus shifting gears" | | 5 | "The eternal, thrumming whisper of" | | 6 | "Here, there was nothing." | | 7 | "The oak standing stones ringed" | | 8 | "Foxgloves stood tall and turgid;" | | 9 | "She pulled her collar tighter" | | 10 | "The second hand ticked forward" | | 11 | "She tapped the glass with" | | 12 | "She had come because of" | | 13 | "Midnight.* Rory had told herself" | | 14 | "She had spent the last" | | 15 | "She touched the center of" | | 16 | "It was lukewarm." | | 17 | "Rory froze, her fingers tightening" | | 18 | "The pendant, hung on its" | | 19 | "It felt like holding a" |
| | ratio | 0.73 | |
| 50.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Even in the dead hours," |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 30.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stopped, her breath clouding faintly in the air before vanishing." | | 1 | "She had spent the last two years running from things that cornered her, running from Evan’s heavy footsteps on the stairs, running until she crossed the border …" | | 2 | "It smelled sweet, violently so, like lilies that had sat too long in stagnant vase water, tinged with a sharp metallic reek that coated the back of her tongue." | | 3 | "Yet the stems were quivering, their petals closing tight, pulling inward as if retreating into their sepals." | | 4 | "The heat against her chest spiked, no longer a faint pulse but an urgent, throbbing burn that seared through her shirt." | | 5 | "But she felt the pressure wave in the atmosphere—the sudden vacuum that pulled the loose black strands of her hair toward the center of the grove." | | 6 | "It had no face, only a smooth, pale suggestion of a skull tilted sharply to one side, as if listening intently to the frantic, rabbit-fast thud of her pulse." | | 7 | "The gray skin looked drawn tight over an anatomy that had never known sunlight, terminating in fingers that scraped the earth with that same wet, calcified clic…" | | 8 | "The Heartstone burned in Rory’s fist, scorching her palm, demanding she run." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |