| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the circle huffed once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 89.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1946 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "really" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1946 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "throb" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "churning" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 166 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 166 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1956 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "you left your keys at mine again" | | 1 | "you okay? you went quiet." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Think, she told herself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1925 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Hel" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | Park | 2 | | Roehampton | 1 | | November | 2 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 5 | | Eva | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Richmond | 3 | | Grove | 6 | | June | 3 | | Fae-touched | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | June-warmth | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Earth" | | 4 | "June-warmth" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Heathrow" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "Tube" | | 4 | "Richmond" | | 5 | "June" | | 6 | "Fae-touched" | | 7 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.91% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like what any sensible person woul" | | 1 | "felt like an hour it might say 11:48, o" | | 2 | "felt like being told the floor might fa" | | 3 | "as if tasting the air for something warm and bright-eyed and" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 6 | | per1kWords | 3.067 | | wordCount | 1956 | | matches | | 0 | "not pulsing, not the throb it gave near a Hel portal, but a steady, low heat like a coin held too long in a palm" | | 1 | "not the throb it gave near a Hel portal, but a steady, low heat like a coin held too long in a palm" | | 2 | "not bark but weathered rock veined with lichen" | | 3 | "no light but" | | 4 | "not buttercup at all but something metallic" | | 5 | "not park-dark but the dark between realms, something shifted its weight" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 34.32 | | std | 31.59 | | cv | 0.921 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 84 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 109 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 104 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 87 | | 12 | 88 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 84 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 52 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 66 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 72 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 92 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 76 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 47 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 77 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 28 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 66 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 92.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "being told" | | 2 | "was supposed" | | 3 | "been allowed" | | 4 | "was gone" | | 5 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 309 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't standing" | | 1 | "was trying" | | 2 | "was only holding" |
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| 5.16% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 166 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had texted at nine — *you left your keys at mine again* — and then, an hour later, *you okay?" | | 1 | "She'd only ever seen them in daylight, when they looked like what any sensible person would call trees — ancient oaks with bark like fissured stone, grown in a rough circle." | | 2 | "That was why she'd come — because it was supposed to be empty, and quiet, and hers for a little while." | | 3 | "Hel portals didn't open in Fae-touched places like this; the two magics grated." | | 4 | "It was faint — a single, slow throb of heat against her skin that made her jerk her hand to it." | | 5 | "Not toward the moon — there was no moon here — but toward the bare circle in the center." | | 6 | "From it came a breath of air that was winter-cold, utterly unlike the June-warmth of the Grove, and it carried a smell she knew from the worst nights of her delivery runs through half-closed alleys — cold stone, and old water, and something left too long without air." | | 7 | "Then the standing stones groaned — a low, arboreal, lithic sound — and slammed together with a thud that shook pollen from the flowers." |
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| 92.89% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 315 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "low, arboreal, lithic sound —" |
| | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.04126984126984127 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009523809523809525 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 166 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 166 | | mean | 11.78 | | std | 9.95 | | cv | 0.845 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 31 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 45.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.3373493975903614 | | totalSentences | 166 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, ten steps past the" | | 1 | "Somewhere she could think without" | | 2 | "Just a degree more than" | | 3 | "Just the dark between the" | | 4 | "Then, on the opposite side," | | 5 | "Then, at the edge of" | | 6 | "Then the standing stones groaned" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 98.62% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have been able" | | 1 | "She'd slipped through with her" | | 2 | "She tugged her jacket tighter" | | 3 | "It had been cool when" | | 4 | "Its inner glow was barely" | | 5 | "She hadn't meant to come." | | 6 | "you went quiet.* Rory had" | | 7 | "She'd told Eva she was" | | 8 | "She'd told herself she was" | | 9 | "It wanted her tonight." | | 10 | "She stepped forward and the" | | 11 | "She'd only ever seen them" | | 12 | "Her jacket brushed the left-hand" | | 13 | "They were open in the" | | 14 | "She knew, with a sudden," | | 15 | "She'd always treated that as" | | 16 | "Her voice didn't carry." | | 17 | "It fell flat, as if" | | 18 | "She winced at how small" | | 19 | "She wasn't sure why she'd" |
| | ratio | 0.303 | |
| 66.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 114 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn't have been able" | | 1 | "That was Rory's first thought" | | 2 | "Richmond Park after dark was" | | 3 | "She'd slipped through with her" | | 4 | "The air in November should" | | 5 | "The cold thinned." | | 6 | "The smell changed." | | 7 | "Rory stopped at the edge" | | 8 | "London was still there behind" | | 9 | "She tugged her jacket tighter" | | 10 | "The Heartstone hung just under" | | 11 | "It had been cool when" | | 12 | "Its inner glow was barely" | | 13 | "She hadn't meant to come." | | 14 | "Eva had texted at nine" | | 15 | "you went quiet.* Rory had" | | 16 | "She'd told Eva she was" | | 17 | "She'd told herself she was" | | 18 | "The place that wasn't supposed" | | 19 | "It wanted her tonight." |
| | ratio | 0.786 | |
| 68.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it held a faint" | | 1 | "Now in the middle of" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 22.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd slipped through with her phone torch off, her breath fogging, shoulder-length black hair catching on the wire." | | 1 | "In front of her the dark between the oaks was deeper than it should have been, as if the park had folded over on itself." | | 2 | "you went quiet.* Rory had been at the kitchen counter, turning the pendant over and over in her fingers, watching that faint light catch." | | 3 | "Now in the middle of November they were everywhere, a low carpet of white stitchwort and pale blue speedwell and yellow buttercups that should have been dead mo…" | | 4 | "This made no noise except the displacement of flowers, and when she stared straight at the spot where the flowers rippled, there was nothing to see except flowe…" | | 5 | "It was faint — a single, slow throb of heat against her skin that made her jerk her hand to it." | | 6 | "A circle of dark earth perhaps two feet wide, perfectly round, as if something had pressed down and killed everything beneath it." | | 7 | "From it came a breath of air that was winter-cold, utterly unlike the June-warmth of the Grove, and it carried a smell she knew from the worst nights of her del…" | | 8 | "Beyond the stones, in the dark that was not park-dark but the dark between realms, something shifted its weight and took a step closer to the narrowing gap." | | 9 | "She threw herself flat into the wildflowers at the base of the standing stone, crushing them, making herself small in the shadow of the rock that was also a tre…" | | 10 | "Then, at the edge of her vision, low to the ground, she saw the flowers part in a line, as if parted by feet that left no prints, moving straight from the shrin…" | | 11 | "Then the standing stones groaned — a low, arboreal, lithic sound — and slammed together with a thud that shook pollen from the flowers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |