Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5P1NYSAZGFTV7F6D47YM0

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Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.020047
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain found Soho after midnight and stayed, turning Greek Street slick and black under the streetlamps. Rory Carter stood for a moment with her duffel cutting into her shoulder and water running off the hood of a coat that had never been meant for London weather, staring up at the sign because Eva had said look for the green, you can't miss it, and the green was there, buzzing and spitting in the wet. The Raven's Nest. Neon the color of bottle glass humming above a narrow black door. She had imagined something else. Something with ferns. She pushed inside with her hip and the smell hit her first, beer and lemon oil and old wood, and the low mutter of a Tuesday crowd trying to wait out the weather. It was dim in the way that felt deliberate, not neglected. Small amber lamps pooled on tables. The walls were crowded with things that did not match and therefore matched perfectly, framed maps with their coastlines gone soft, black and white photographs of men in too-big suits outside places she did not recognize, a woman laughing outside a cafe in what looked like Naples. Rory let the door swing shut behind her and stood dripping onto the mat, twenty-five and trying not to look as lost as she felt, her straight black hair plastered to her neck where it fell to her shoulders, her eyes too bright in her pale face. The man behind the bar looked up. For a second her brain refused it. He was taller than the back bar made him look, long in the spine even as he leaned his weight casually to one side, his auburn hair gone mostly grey at the temples and streaked through, his beard trimmed close and the same metallic mix. Hazel eyes. He wiped a glass with a white cloth, unhurried, and then he stopped wiping. Rory, he said. It was not a question. Her stomach dropped straight through the wet floorboards. Silas, she said, and her voice came out smaller than she wanted. Oh, Christ. Silas Blackwood. He came out from behind the bar and she saw it then, the careful way he favored his right side, the slight drag in his left leg that he tried to smooth out of his walk. He was still a big man, six foot and more, still moved like someone who expected a room to make space for him, but the limp changed everything. He crossed to her in three uneven strides and then hesitated, his hands full of nothing, and then he pulled her into a hug that smelled of soap and peat smoke, one strong arm around her shoulders, careful of the duffel. She laughed before she could stop it, a short wet sound. You own a bar. I own a bar, Silas said. He held her by the elbows to look at her, his gaze quick and total in a way she remembered and had forgotten to remember. You are soaked through, cariad. Come here. Sit down. Eva sent me, she said, following him, trying to keep up with the new rhythm of his walk without staring at it. She said she knew a place in Soho where they would not ask questions. She did not say it was yours. Eva always did like her little dramas, he said. He sat her on a stool at the far end where the light was lower and the crowd thinned, took her coat without asking and hung it on a hook where it dripped onto dark wood. Behind him the shelf of bottles glowed. He poured her a whiskey without asking if she wanted it and set it down, and when his right hand left the glass Rory caught the dull flash of the silver signet ring he always wore, worn smooth at the edges now. She wrapped both hands around the glass to stop them shaking and the sleeve of her jumper rode up. On her left wrist, pale against the blue of her veins, the small crescent-shaped scar from when she was nine and went through the greenhouse pane at her nain's house. She saw his eyes flick to it and then away, politely, and something in her chest loosened and then tightened again. You look, he said carefully, like Cardiff. She snorted. Thanks. I mean it as a compliment. You have your mother's look when she was marking essays at the kitchen table and pretending not to listen. Jennifer Ellis, red pen, terrible tea. Rory smiled despite herself. Jennifer Carter now. She corrects people. How is she. Fine. Tired. Dad's still, you know. Dad. Brendan Carter, barrister, voice like a courtroom even when he was asking for the salt. Rory could see him suddenly, ten years gone in a blink, her father at the head of the table in the house in Pontcanna, sleeves rolled, arguing with Silas Blackwood about Europe while fifteen-year-old Rory interjected with case law she had read ahead to impress them both. Back then Silas had been different, or maybe she had been different enough that he seemed different. He had been the friend who turned up twice a year with foreign cigarettes and stories that stopped right before the interesting part, who called her Rory before anyone else did and told her she thought like a chess player, cool-headed, two moves ahead. He had stood straight then. No limp. No bar towel over his shoulder. You disappeared, she said. After, I think I was seventeen. Dad said you were in Prague. Something crossed his face, too quick to name. Prague, he repeated. Aye. Prague was the end of that version of me. She waited. He did not elaborate, but he shifted his weight and she understood the knee was hurting him, that the damp got into it. An old injury, left to ache. He caught her looking and smiled, crooked. Knee's gone to bureaucracy, he said. It files complaints when it rains. So you, she gestured at the maps, the photographs, the low ceiling that made the place feel like the inside of a ship. You retired to this. Someone had to pour bad pints for spies with sore feet, he said. It keeps me in gossip. There was a beat where the bar noise swelled around them, glass on wood, a laugh from the corner, rain needling the windows. Rory drank. The whiskey burned clean down her throat and pooled warm in her empty stomach. She had rehearsed this part on the train from Paddington, what to say to strangers, how much to give away. I left Cardiff Uni, she heard herself say. I didn't finish. Pre-Law, Silas said. Your father was fit to burst when you got in. I was fit to burst when I got out. She turned the glass in a slow circle. The silver ring on his hand clinked faintly against the bar as he steadied it for her. It wasn't, it wasn't me, Si. All that arguing for the sake of arguing. I wanted, I don't know. Something useful. And Evan, Silas said. Not unkindly. Her head jerked up. Eva told you. Eva tells me what she thinks I need to know to keep people alive, he said. He said it flatly, without performance, with that quiet authority that had always made men twice Rory's father's age listen to him. Are you safe. It was not really a question either. She nodded anyway, because her throat had closed. She thought of Evan's flat with the blinds always half-down, the way he could make sorry sound like a threat, the night she had finally understood that being quick and clever did not matter if you were too tired to think two moves ahead. She thought of getting on the train with forty pounds and Eva's text glowing on her phone. Go to the Nest. Ask for Silas. Trust me. I'm safe now, she said. I'm just, I'm starting from less than zero. I need work. Somewhere to sleep a night or two until I sort it. Silas studied her. In the lamplight the lines around his eyes were deeper than she remembered, cut in. He had been a man who vanished into other countries. Now he was a man who remembered everyone's drink and mopped his own floor. The change should have made him smaller. It didn't. It made her feel, acutely, how much time had passed since that kitchen in Pontcanna, how she had gone from a girl who quoted dissenting opinions for fun to a woman who flinched at her own phone buzzing. And he had gone from whatever he had been to this, pouring whiskey for her with a bad leg and a steady hand. He reached under the bar and came up with a key on a plain brass tag. Flat above, he said. One bedroom. It smells of damp and the boiler is temperamental, but the lock works and the rent is laughable if you will pull the occasional shift and not steal the good gin. You can have it as long as you need it. Rory stared at the key. You can't just, Silas. You haven't seen me in eight years. I've seen you every year, he said. Your mother sends the Christmas photo. You always look like you want to be somewhere else. She laughed and it turned, embarrassingly, into something close to tears. She pressed the heel of her hand to her bright blue eyes and hated herself for it. Sorry. God. Long day. No apologies in my bar, he said gently. House rule. He slid the key closer. There's a girl I know over on Gerrard Street, Yu-Fei Cheung, runs the Golden Empress. Always needs a delivery rider with a cool head. Pays cash nightly. I can ring her in the morning if you like. She looked at him then, really looked, at the grey in his beard and the way he held himself still to spare the knee, at the ring, at the maps behind him marking places he would never go back to. You were supposed to be, she said before she could stop herself. I don't know. In an embassy somewhere. Not, not wiping glasses. Aye, well, he said. And you were supposed to be terrorizing the Court of Appeal by now. He lifted his own glass, half full of water. To the plans. To the plans, she echoed, and they drank. Upstairs, later, after he had shown her up the narrow stairs at the back, past the bookshelf that swung open on silent hinges into a small windowless room with a table and four chairs and no dust, which she pretended not to notice because she was learning again how to notice without asking, he left her with a towel and the key and instructions for the boiler. The flat was small and cold and perfect, a window looking down onto the wet street where the green neon bled across the pavement. Rory stood there in borrowed dry socks, whiskey warm in her blood, listening to the muffled clink and murmur of the bar below, to Silas's uneven tread moving behind the wood. Eight years. She touched the little crescent on her wrist with her thumb, feeling the raised edge. Downstairs a chair scraped. Someone laughed. She had not known, getting on that train, that rescue could look so ordinary, a bad knee and a spare key and a man who remembered her mother's maiden name. She stayed at the window a long time, watching the rain wash the green light down the gutters and away.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:20:36.677Z" 9/3/2026, 8:20:36 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
84.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1942
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"carefully"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
4"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1942
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"stomach"
2"echoed"
3"perfect"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences163
matches(empty)
55.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount9
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences163
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
3"feel"
4"listen"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences163
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1942
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions15
matches
0"Rory, he said."
1"Silas, she said, and her voice came out smaller than she wanted."
2"I own a bar, Silas said."
3"Eva sent me, she said, following him, trying to keep up with the new rhythm of his walk without staring at it."
4"Eva always did like her little dramas, he said."
5"You look, he said carefully, like Cardiff."
6"You disappeared, she said."
7"Someone had to pour bad pints for spies with sore feet, he said."
8"Pre-Law, Silas said."
9"And Evan, Silas said."
10"Eva tells me what she thinks I need to know to keep people alive, he said."
11"Flat above, he said."
12"No apologies in my bar, he said gently."
13"You were supposed to be, she said before she could stop herself."
14"Aye, well, he said."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount1942
uniqueNames33
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Greek1
Street2
Carter3
London1
Eva6
Raven1
Nest2
Tuesday1
Naples1
Christ1
Blackwood2
Silas11
Rory12
Cardiff2
Ellis1
Pontcanna2
Europe1
Prague3
Paddington1
Uni1
Si1
Evan2
Christmas1
Gerrard1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Court1
Appeal1
You11
Dad3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Raven"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Rory"
6"Ellis"
7"Evan"
8"Yu-Fei"
9"Cheung"
10"You"
11"Dad"
places
0"Soho"
1"Greek"
2"Street"
3"London"
4"Nest"
5"Naples"
6"Cardiff"
7"Pontcanna"
8"Europe"
9"Prague"
10"Paddington"
11"Gerrard"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
73.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences98
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like Naples"
1"seemed different"
2"something close to tears"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.515
wordCount1942
matches
0"not elaborate, but he shifted his weight"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences163
matches
0"on that train"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean42.22
std42.65
cv1.01
sampleLengths
090
18
2144
37
468
53
613
716
8105
915
1040
1143
129
1385
1470
157
163
1731
1810
193
207
21136
2216
2321
2438
2512
2627
2718
2870
2913
3055
316
327
3341
3485
3527
36112
3763
3816
3923
4032
4152
4263
4329
448
45195
98.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences163
matches
0"been meant"
1"were supposed"
2"were supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs356
matches
0"was marking"
1"was asking"
2"was hurting"
3"was learning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences163
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1951
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.03485392106611994
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.008200922603792926
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences163
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences163
mean11.91
std12.66
cv1.063
sampleLengths
017
158
23
312
45
53
633
711
86
947
1047
117
127
1345
142
1514
163
175
188
1912
202
212
2236
2328
2441
2511
264
276
2825
295
302
312
3222
3314
347
359
3636
377
3842
3919
4030
4121
427
432
441
456
4619
476
484
493
51.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.37423312883435583
totalSentences163
uniqueOpeners61
96.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences138
matches
0"All that arguing for the"
1"Somewhere to sleep a night"
2"Flat above, he said."
3"Always needs a delivery rider"
ratio0.029
14.20% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences138
matches
0"She had imagined something else."
1"She pushed inside with her"
2"It was dim in the"
3"He was taller than the"
4"He wiped a glass with"
5"It was not a question."
6"Her stomach dropped straight through"
7"He came out from behind"
8"He was still a big"
9"He crossed to her in"
10"She laughed before she could"
11"You own a bar."
12"I own a bar, Silas"
13"He held her by the"
14"You are soaked through, cariad."
15"She said she knew a"
16"She did not say it"
17"He sat her on a"
18"He poured her a whiskey"
19"She wrapped both hands around"
ratio0.514
72.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences138
matches
0"The rain found Soho after"
1"Rory Carter stood for a"
2"The Raven's Nest."
3"Neon the color of bottle"
4"She had imagined something else."
5"Something with ferns."
6"She pushed inside with her"
7"It was dim in the"
8"The walls were crowded with"
9"Rory let the door swing"
10"The man behind the bar"
11"He was taller than the"
12"He wiped a glass with"
13"Rory, he said."
14"It was not a question."
15"Her stomach dropped straight through"
16"Silas, she said, and her"
17"He came out from behind"
18"He was still a big"
19"He crossed to her in"
ratio0.775
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences138
matches
0"Now he was a man"
1"To the plans."
2"To the plans, she echoed,"
ratio0.022
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Rory Carter stood for a moment with her duffel cutting into her shoulder and water running off the hood of a coat that had never been meant for London weather, …"
1"It was dim in the way that felt deliberate, not neglected."
2"The walls were crowded with things that did not match and therefore matched perfectly, framed maps with their coastlines gone soft, black and white photographs …"
3"He was still a big man, six foot and more, still moved like someone who expected a room to make space for him, but the limp changed everything."
4"He crossed to her in three uneven strides and then hesitated, his hands full of nothing, and then he pulled her into a hug that smelled of soap and peat smoke, …"
5"He had been the friend who turned up twice a year with foreign cigarettes and stories that stopped right before the interesting part, who called her Rory before…"
6"Now he was a man who remembered everyone's drink and mopped his own floor."
7"It made her feel, acutely, how much time had passed since that kitchen in Pontcanna, how she had gone from a girl who quoted dissenting opinions for fun to a wo…"
8"Upstairs, later, after he had shown her up the narrow stairs at the back, past the bookshelf that swung open on silent hinges into a small windowless room with …"
9"She had not known, getting on that train, that rescue could look so ordinary, a bad knee and a spare key and a man who remembered her mother's maiden name."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.5553%