Run: 2026-09-03-01M1K5X59AC6YG3C8QG2GJEECJ

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Duration:
31.9s
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$0.019214
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Meta

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The green neon sign buzzed against the wet Soho night, bleeding color onto the pavement below. Rory stood under it for a second too long, keys in hand, delivery bag slung over her shoulder and empty now except for the faint smell of chili oil and fried rice. Yu-Fei would be closing up the Golden Empress by now, counting the till with her reading glasses low on her nose. Rory's shift was done. She pushed open the door to The Raven's Nest and the warm, yeasty air hit her face. It was a Tuesday, which meant it was quiet. The Nest never got truly loud until Thursday, but even quiet it had its own kind of density — low light, the amber from the bar, the walls crowded with old maps, their sea monsters curling at the edges, and black-and-white photographs that Silas never explained but never took down either. Someone had put on an old record, something with brushed drums and a piano. Silas was behind the bar, wiping down a glass with a white towel. He didn't look up right away. His hair, grey-streaked auburn, caught the bar light, and his beard was as neatly trimmed as always. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked faintly against the glass when he set it down. "You've got rain on you, Rory," he said. "Hardly," she said, shrugging off her jacket. Her straight black hair, cut straight to her shoulders, was damp at the ends. She draped the jacket over the back of a stool and took her usual seat at the far end of the bar, where she could see the door and the long row of maps. She lived upstairs, but she still liked sitting here like a customer. It made the boundary feel real. Silas favored his left leg as he came down the bar toward her, the slight limp he never complained about but never hid either. His hazel eyes took her in, quick and assessing, the way he always did, not unkindly. "Long route?" he asked. "Clapham and back. Guy tipped me in scratch-offs." She showed him her left wrist where her sleeve had ridden up, the small crescent-shaped scar there catching the light for a second before she tugged the cuff down. "Lost on all three." He made a low noise in his throat, half laugh, and poured her a half-pint without being asked. "Eva would tell you that's a fool's tax." The name landed strange in the air, and Rory's hand tightened around the glass before she had decided to pick it up. The door opened and the bell over it jingled, letting in a gust of damp air and street noise. Rory didn't turn at first. She heard Silas shift his weight, his attention moving. Then a voice said, "God, is that map still crooked?" Rory turned. The woman standing just inside the doorway was shaking water off a navy wool coat. She was holding a leather satchel against her hip, her hair — lighter than Rory remembered, cut into a neat bob that brushed her jaw — tucked behind one ear. She wore a white button-up shirt under the coat, a thin gold chain at her throat. She looked put together in a way that made Rory suddenly aware of her own damp trainers, the faint grease spot on her jeans from the delivery bag. For a half second Rory didn't place her, which was absurd, and then all at once she did. "Eva?" Eva Davies looked up. Her face did something complicated — surprise, then a wide, open smile that didn't quite reach her eyes the way it used to. "Rory Carter," she said. "No way." Rory was already standing. She hadn't realized she had stood. The stool scraped. Eva crossed the short distance between them and then there was that awful, wonderful hesitation where neither of them knew whether to hug. Eva solved it by stepping in and wrapping her arms around Rory's shoulders, hard and quick. She smelled like perfume, something clean and expensive, and underneath it like rain. Rory hugged her back, feeling the sharp edge of Eva's shoulder blade under her coat, feeling how much smaller Eva felt than she remembered, or how much heavier Rory had become. "Look at you," Eva said, holding her at arm's length. Her eyes flicked over Rory's face, her hair. "Your hair's so long. I thought you'd have — I don't know, I thought you'd look different." "You do," Rory said before she could make it sound kinder. Eva did look different. The last time Rory had seen her properly, Eva had been nineteen, hair dyed a bright, uneven pink for a dare, wearing a Cardiff University rugby shirt that swallowed her thighs, laughing with her whole body. This Eva's makeup was precise, her nails short and manicured, a watch with a dark face on her wrist. There was a crease between her eyebrows that hadn't been there before. "What are you doing here?" Rory asked. "In London? In — here?" "Conference," Eva said, gesturing vaguely with the satchel. "Near Covent Garden. Legal tech. Mind-numbingly boring. I walked past and saw the sign, the green one, and I thought, that looks like the place Rory said she was crashing above. The Nest, right? I didn't think you'd still — I mean, I didn't know if you'd still be here." Rory felt a small, familiar click in her chest, the quick recalibration she did when information didn't line up. Eva had been the one who told her to come to London in the first place. Leave Evan. Leave Cardiff. Come stay, just until you get on your feet, she'd said, over the phone at two in the morning while Rory sat on the floor of her bathroom with her wrist stinging. And Rory had. She had taken the train with a duffel bag and slept on Eva's cousin's sofa for three weeks until Silas, through a friend of a friend, offered her the flat above the bar for cheap in exchange for helping out and staying quiet about the back room behind the bookshelf. And then Eva had moved to Bristol for a graduate scheme and stopped answering texts for weeks at a time. "I'm still here," Rory said. She tried to make it light. "Flat upstairs. Very glamorous. You can hear the ice machine at night." "That's very you," Eva said, and laughed, but the laugh was tight. Silas had drifted down to the other end of the bar to give them space, polishing another glass with deliberate care. "Are you — are you staying?" Eva asked. "Can I buy you a drink? Properly? Not a half-pint, Rory, a real drink. You still drink like an old man." "I drink like someone who doesn't want a hangover on a bike," Rory said, but she sat back down and Eva took the stool next to her, shrugging out of her coat and hanging it over the back. Her shirt was crisp. Rory could see the faint outline of an undershirt beneath it. Silas came back, his limp barely audible on the old wood. "What can I get you?" he asked Eva, his voice even. "White wine," Eva said. "Whatever's open." He nodded once and poured it, his signet ring catching the amber light. He set it down in front of her without a clink and then moved away again. Eva took a sip and made a face. "Okay, not wine country," she said. "Silas will be devastated," Rory said. They both laughed, and for a second it was easy, the record crackling, the bar warm around them. Then the ease thinned. "So you're still doing the pre-law thing?" Eva asked, too casually. "Or — are you still at Cardiff?" Rory shook her head. "No. I deferred and then I just... didn't go back. Brendan wasn't thrilled." She said her father's name the way she always had, a little flat, a little formal, the barrister's daughter. "Jennifer keeps sending me prospectuses, like they'll guilt me back. I'm doing the deliveries, some shifts here. It's fine. It's money." Eva's fingers tightened around the stem of her wine glass. "Right. Right, of course. I just remember you were so — you were going to be the one who actually did it properly. All that out-of-the-box thinking Professor Lloyd was obsessed with. He said you'd be a terror in court." "I was good at arguing," Rory said. "Turns out you can do that without a degree." "That was always your line," Eva said softly. "That you didn't need the degree to prove you were the smartest person in the room." It wasn't an insult, exactly, but it landed like a pebble dropped in still water. Rory felt her cool-headedness do its old trick, the way it folded over her like a sheet of glass. She picked up her pint, took a measured sip. "What about you?" Rory asked. "Legal tech sounds..." "Profitable," Eva finished, and smiled without showing teeth. "It's profitable. It's a lot of emails. I wear blazers now. Can you believe it? Me, in a blazer." Rory could, actually. The blazer was probably in the satchel. Eva had always been quick too, but in a different way — restless, bright, the kind of quick that needed to be moving, to be liked. Rory had been the one who sat quiet and found the side door. "You look good in it," Rory said, and meant it. Eva looked down at her wine. "I saw Evan last year," she said suddenly, very quietly, so Silas wouldn't hear. "In Cardiff. At St David's. He was with someone else. He didn't see me." Rory's hand found the edge of the bar. The scar on her wrist gave a faint, psychosomatic ache. "Okay." "I didn't tell him I'd seen you," Eva said quickly. "I didn't say anything. I just... I wanted you to know I didn't — I haven't talked to him. Ever. Since." "I know," Rory said. Eva's eyes flicked up, bright blue and suddenly very young. "Do you? Because I feel like I left you hanging. After you came up here. You were in that flat and I was in Bristol and I kept telling myself you'd call if you needed something, and you never called, and I told myself that meant you were fine." Rory had a dozen cool-headed answers lined up. That she was fine. That she was used to not calling. That Eva had her own life and Rory had never expected otherwise. None of them made it past her teeth. "I did need something," she said at last, her voice even and low. "I just got used to not asking." Eva stared at her. The crease between her eyebrows deepened. "Rory —" "I know," Rory said again, and this time she reached out and put her hand over Eva's where it rested on the bar. Her fingers were cold from the glass. Eva's were warm. "We were kids. We did what kids do. We ran." The record ended with a soft hiss. Silas flipped it without looking at them. The maps on the wall stared down, coastlines and trade routes drawn by hands long dead. Eva let out a breath she seemed to have been holding for years. She turned her hand over under Rory's and squeezed. "I missed you," she whispered. "I thought you'd be angry." "I was," Rory admitted, and the honesty surprised her with how steady it sounded. "For a while. Then I was just busy. Yu-Fei's family adopted me, more or less. Silas lets me hide behind the bookshelf when I want to mope." At that, Eva laughed for real, a sound that startled both of them. "God, you still live above a secret spy bar. That's the most Rory Carter thing I've ever heard. Of course you do." "Retired spy," Rory corrected, and felt Silas's faint, amused hmph from down the bar without looking. Eva drank her wine, pulling a face again, and set the glass down with more force than necessary. "Do you want to get out of here? Get actual good wine? Or chips? I want chips from that place on Old Compton Street that puts vinegar that burns your nose." Rory glanced at the window, at the green neon buzzing steadily through the rain, at Silas behind the bar with his hazel eyes quiet and his ring glinting. She thought about the flat upstairs, the stack of unopened prospectuses on her desk, the delivery bag by her feet that still smelled faintly like someone else's dinner. She thought about time, how it didn't really pass so much as accumulate, layer by layer, until you couldn't move without feeling the weight of it. "Yeah," she said. "I want chips." Eva's smile this time reached her eyes. She grabbed her coat, and Rory grabbed her jacket, and they left together into the rain, the bell jingling behind them, the maps keeping watch over the empty stools.
created_at"2026-09-03T08:24:29.748Z" 9/3/2026, 8:24:29 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags34
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
1"she said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"Eva said quickly [quickly]"
3"Rory said again [again]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.54
leniency1
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.118
74.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2160
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count3
2
adverb"very"
count4
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"softly"
4"quickly"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2160
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"flicked"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"familiar"
3"measured"
4"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences129
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2172
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"At that, Eva laughed for real, a sound that startled both of them."
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions101
wordCount1601
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Raven1
Nest2
Tuesday1
Thursday1
Silas11
Rory40
Davies1
Eva35
Cardiff2
University1
London1
Evan1
Bristol1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Davies"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
4"Bristol"
globalScore0.251
windowScore0
96.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite reach her eyes the way it used to"
1"smelled like perfume, something clean and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2172
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean33.42
std24.86
cv0.744
sampleLengths
090
174
254
38
473
540
64
741
826
922
1033
1110
122
1389
1418
151
1627
176
1813
1983
2035
2182
2212
2358
24124
2520
2623
2733
2829
2953
3022
316
3229
3314
346
3522
3618
3757
3850
3916
4024
4143
428
4327
4449
4510
4634
4719
4831
494
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences129
matches
0"being asked"
1"been nineteen"
2"was used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs286
matches
0"was shaking"
1"was holding"
2"was already standing"
70.52% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences158
ratio0.025
matches
0"The Nest never got truly loud until Thursday, but even quiet it had its own kind of density — low light, the amber from the bar, the walls crowded with old maps, their sea monsters curling at the edges, and black-and-white photographs that Silas never explained but never took down either."
1"She was holding a leather satchel against her hip, her hair — lighter than Rory remembered, cut into a neat bob that brushed her jaw — tucked behind one ear."
2"Her face did something complicated — surprise, then a wide, open smile that didn't quite reach her eyes the way it used to."
3"Eva had always been quick too, but in a different way — restless, bright, the kind of quick that needed to be moving, to be liked."
92.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1431
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount69
adverbRatio0.04821802935010482
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.012578616352201259
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean13.75
std10.57
cv0.769
sampleLengths
016
132
221
34
417
59
651
714
813
96
1017
1118
128
137
1414
1534
1612
176
1824
1916
204
2137
224
2318
248
2522
2619
275
289
2910
302
3115
3230
3316
3428
3518
361
374
3823
394
402
414
426
433
4423
4516
4613
4731
4810
498
45.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.33544303797468356
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners53
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences112
matches
0"Then a voice said,"
1"Then the ease thinned."
ratio0.018
87.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences112
matches
0"She pushed open the door"
1"It was a Tuesday, which"
2"He didn't look up right"
3"His hair, grey-streaked auburn, caught"
4"she said, shrugging off her"
5"Her straight black hair, cut"
6"She draped the jacket over"
7"She lived upstairs, but she"
8"It made the boundary feel"
9"His hazel eyes took her"
10"She showed him her left"
11"He made a low noise"
12"She heard Silas shift his"
13"She was holding a leather"
14"She wore a white button-up"
15"She looked put together in"
16"Her face did something complicated"
17"She hadn't realized she had"
18"She smelled like perfume, something"
19"Her eyes flicked over Rory's"
ratio0.33
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences112
matches
0"The green neon sign buzzed"
1"Rory stood under it for"
2"Yu-Fei would be closing up"
3"Rory's shift was done."
4"She pushed open the door"
5"It was a Tuesday, which"
6"The Nest never got truly"
7"Someone had put on an"
8"Silas was behind the bar,"
9"He didn't look up right"
10"His hair, grey-streaked auburn, caught"
11"The silver signet ring on"
12"she said, shrugging off her"
13"Her straight black hair, cut"
14"She draped the jacket over"
15"She lived upstairs, but she"
16"It made the boundary feel"
17"Silas favored his left leg"
18"His hazel eyes took her"
19"She showed him her left"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She was holding a leather satchel against her hip, her hair — lighter than Rory remembered, cut into a neat bob that brushed her jaw — tucked behind one ear."
1"She looked put together in a way that made Rory suddenly aware of her own damp trainers, the faint grease spot on her jeans from the delivery bag."
2"Her face did something complicated — surprise, then a wide, open smile that didn't quite reach her eyes the way it used to."
3"Rory hugged her back, feeling the sharp edge of Eva's shoulder blade under her coat, feeling how much smaller Eva felt than she remembered, or how much heavier …"
4"The last time Rory had seen her properly, Eva had been nineteen, hair dyed a bright, uneven pink for a dare, wearing a Cardiff University rugby shirt that swall…"
5"Rory glanced at the window, at the green neon buzzing steadily through the rain, at Silas behind the bar with his hazel eyes quiet and his ring glinting."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags34
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory admitted, and the honesty surprised her with how steady it sounded"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags32
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory admitted (admit)"
2"Rory corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.508
leniency1
rawRatio0.094
effectiveRatio0.094
81.9186%