| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 89.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1381 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1381 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flawless" | | 4 | "resonated" | | 5 | "profound" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "palpable" | | 9 | "complex" | | 10 | "streaming" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "down her spine" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "could feel" | | 15 | "throb" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.07% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1376 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 6 | | wordCount | 1376 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.07 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0 | | worstWindowName | (null) | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 47.26% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a physical weight pressing do" | | 1 | "looked like a complex pattern of spirals" | | 2 | "looked like a darker, more viscous substa" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.634 | | wordCount | 1376 | | matches | | 0 | "not from any motion but from the sheer impossibility of their forms" | | 1 | "not a thought in her mind but a truth" | | 2 | "Not in a natural, wind-swept way, but with a slow, deliberate, vegetative intent" | | 3 | "not heard but felt, pressed against the inside of her skull" | | 4 | "not a language she could name, but its meaning was as clear as a knife's edge in the moonlight" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 62.55 | | std | 40.36 | | cv | 0.645 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 132 | | 1 | 116 | | 2 | 125 | | 3 | 110 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 100 | | 6 | 100 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 66 | | 9 | 103 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 2 |
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| 94.06% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "been lifted" | | 1 | "was covered" | | 2 | "being watched" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | 0 | "was humming" | | 1 | "was asking" | | 2 | "was trying" | | 3 | "was not using" | | 4 | "was coming" | | 5 | "wasn't approaching" | | 6 | "was waiting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "The paper had been blank, but the stone—the size of a thumbnail, warm to the touch as if it had just been lifted from a body—had drawn her here." | | 1 | "She froze, her hand instinctively going to the small, utilitarian knife she kept clipped to her waistband—a habit from a past life in the city that had taught her that alleys could hide anything." | | 2 | "They didn't just grow here; they flourished in a great, creamy tide that reeked of life and sweetness, a stark and sickening contrast to the chill in the air." | | 3 | "It was a shape that was there for a second, then gone, leaving only a lingering impression of wrongness—a bend in the light that didn't obey the physics of the world she knew." | | 4 | "The blank slip of paper, the anonymous pendant, the path that deviated from the map—it had all been a trail, and she had been the eager hound, following the scent straight into its den." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1391 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "flawless, blood-red stone." | | 1 | "natural, wind-swept way," | | 2 | "slow, deliberate, vegetative intent." |
| | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.03666427030913012 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009345794392523364 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 14.64 | | std | 10.16 | | cv | 0.694 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 26.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.26595744680851063 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the park." | | 1 | "Just the paranoia of a" | | 2 | "Too large for a fox," |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 53.71% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "It showed a neat grid" | | 1 | "It did not show the" | | 2 | "It did not show the" | | 3 | "She’d found it three days" | | 4 | "It was humming." | | 5 | "It had been a subtle" | | 6 | "She pushed off from the" | | 7 | "They twisted in ways that" | | 8 | "She froze, her hand instinctively" | | 9 | "She saw nothing." | | 10 | "She let out a breath" | | 11 | "It wasn't fear, she told" | | 12 | "It was just the night." | | 13 | "She was here for a" | | 14 | "She’d always been good at" | | 15 | "They didn't just grow here;" | | 16 | "It was unlike the others," | | 17 | "She took a step into" | | 18 | "It was the wrongness she’d" | | 19 | "She saw a woman, her" |
| | ratio | 0.416 | |
| 38.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove wasn't on any" | | 1 | "The A-Z she’d pulled from" | | 2 | "It showed a neat grid" | | 3 | "It did not show the" | | 4 | "It did not show the" | | 5 | "The last of the sun" | | 6 | "The air was thick and" | | 7 | "The streetlights were distant, their" | | 8 | "The city’s constant, thrumming hum" | | 9 | "The pendant lay against her" | | 10 | "She’d found it three days" | | 11 | "The paper had been blank," | | 12 | "It was humming." | | 13 | "A faint, sub-audible thrum that" | | 14 | "It had been a subtle" | | 15 | "She pushed off from the" | | 16 | "The stones were closer together" | | 17 | "They twisted in ways that" | | 18 | "A rustling sound skittered through" | | 19 | "She froze, her hand instinctively" |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It did not show the path she’d taken, a ribbon of charcoal-dark earth that wound between them, veering from the official route with an insistence that felt less…" | | 1 | "A faint, sub-audible thrum that she felt rather than heard, a vibration that resonated deep in her sternum." | | 2 | "The stones were closer together now, and she had to step carefully over their exposed roots, which seemed to writhe in the dark, not from any motion but from th…" | | 3 | "They twisted in ways that defied the simple, solid geometry of wood, looping back on themselves in tight, painful-looking knots." | | 4 | "She froze, her hand instinctively going to the small, utilitarian knife she kept clipped to her waistband—a habit from a past life in the city that had taught h…" | | 5 | "The moon, a waxing gibbous, had finally crested the canopy, casting a pale, silver light that washed the color from everything." | | 6 | "They didn't just grow here; they flourished in a great, creamy tide that reeked of life and sweetness, a stark and sickening contrast to the chill in the air." | | 7 | "It was the wrongness she’d felt from the moment her boot had left the tarmac of the footpath, but concentrated here, palpable, like a skin that had grown over t…" | | 8 | "A pressure of attention, a weight of gaze that was trying to find her." | | 9 | "Their scent was overwhelming now, a wall of perfume that made her head throb." | | 10 | "It was a shape that was there for a second, then gone, leaving only a lingering impression of wrongness—a bend in the light that didn't obey the physics of the …" | | 11 | "The blank slip of paper, the anonymous pendant, the path that deviated from the map—it had all been a trail, and she had been the eager hound, following the sce…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |